Snowflake on the Sand
Update
Hey there! Long time no see, I'm back from a small break and while on the break I read your comments and after I re-read the story I do agree with you.
Some of the writing was not clear and dialogues sometimes feel weird/incomplete, so I will be fixing the grammar and reworking some of the chapters so they have more information, more dialogue and expanding the last battle of Hoover Dam as some requested. So no new chapters for this story for some time but I do thank you for commenting and making me aware of this issues!
Thank you for reading as always and see you soon.
