BattleTech: Combat Evolved

by IX404

While fleeing from the Inner Sphere following the Amaris Coup, the Exodus Fleet discovers an object out in the inky blackness of space. Little does General Kerensky or his sons know is that they will soon be within the center of a conflict that will decide the fate of Humanity and place the Star League-in-Exile at the forefront of the conflict.

22. Notice

For those of you that have enjoyed this story, I have some news for you. Firstly, I would like to apologize for going silent on this story. Another one had my attention, and still has my attention, for a while. As for the other reason why I sent silent for a while, it's because I've noticed some deficiencies in terms of the plot and the way it is written.

That being said, I'm not going to create an entirely new story to compensate. Instead, I'm going to try something different. I'll be marking which chapters have been rewritten, and I'll be adding in new chapters to fill in some of the gaps in the plot. I'm also bringing in another beta-reader to help flesh things out and make them more consistent. Finally, I'll be combining chapters that happen in a similar time frame to help the plot flow better.

Either way, I appreciate the feedback that you've provided for this story, and I hope that all of you continue to enjoy it, even as it undergoes one final overhaul.