Hey everyone! So I was writing chapter 14, and realized I don't like how chapter 13 ended that much, and where it got. I've been considering doing a rewrite of chapter 13 and I just wanted to see who would like to see another version? I was extremely unsure of it, and I didn't really like how it introduced the arc for Ba Sing Se. I would do something similar of course, to follow my vague story plan, but it feels a bit odd and out of place.
It's the only chapter so far that I'm genuinely not sure about, so I thought asking you guy's opinions would be a great idea!
So yes or no for the rewrite?
Thanks for all the support!
Vic
