Author note:The first 8 chapters of this story are not written by me, tho I will make some slight changes in order to fit my version of the story beyond the original 8, the first 8 are written by Revan Shan 2077,
In there story The New Dark Lord, it's either they are taking a really long break, or have stopped updating it altogether. Either way, I'm just gonna be expanding this story to what I want, hope you will enjoy.
Author Note2: This chapter has more prominently different changes compared to the first 3 that don't appear in the original story.
The Cauldron burned away leaving a human like being standing in its place, Lucius ran forward and placed black robes on him before handing him his wand then joining harry.
"You have both done well my friends at last I have returned to my true Propper form, Lucius summon my inner circle let us see how many answer the call".
Neville could only watch as Malfoy summoned his brethren who quickly came to their masters call bowing as soon as they saw him standing before them. "Welcome my friends 13 years it's been and yet here you stand before me as if it was only yesterday, yet I confess myself to be disappointed the moment I fell you all turned on me claiming to be under my control".
Voldemort turned to the still kneeling form of his most loyal follower. "Not one of you tried to find me it took the son of my most loyal follower as well as your fellow brother Lucius to plan my return".
"You have served me well my boy you do your mother proud, hold out your arm you are my 2nd in command so your mark will be different from the others". With that he placed his wand on Harry's arm muttering an incantation, soon a red and black snake tattoo formed their tails starting at his wrist then twisting up and around his arm their heads meeting at the middle section of his upper arm with two crossed wands and a skull above them.
"Thank you my Lord I will continue to serve you in making our world a better place this I swear most willingly". This Neville could see made the Dark Lord very happy it made him angry that he burst out calling him a traitor to Dumbledore, this only caused the Dark Lord to remember he was there at all.
"Ah Young Mr Longbottom I had almost forgotten you were hear, standing on the bones of my father". He turned to his gathered followers with a small smile as he raised his arms towards him as if he was offering him for sale in a market.
"Behold my friends the great Neville Longbottom the replacement Saviour of the Great Albus Dumbledore, how completely disappointing he truly expected you to stop me when you barely survived the tournament".
With that he waved his wand and the statue that was holding him suddenly let him go letting fall painfully to the ground. "Give him his wand". As Neville stood, he saw harry toss him his wand before moving back to join he fellow Death Eaters.
"You've been taught how to duel I presume first we bow to each other". Voldemort gave an exaggerated bow but saw Neville didn't, making the Dark Lord give him a mock look of disappointment. "Come now Neville the niceties must be observed, Dumbledore wouldn't want you to forget your manners now would he. I said bow."
Neville still refused, so harry made him. Whispering "Demetre" With a wave of his wand he forced Neville to bow, making voldemort smile gleefully. "There, now that's much better, that wasn't so hard now was it, now let us begin shall we".
(This portion of the story is exclusively written by me)
1 hour later
Neville was exhausted. He had been dodging voldemort's attacks and fighting for what felt like forever, but no matter what spell he threw out, the dark lord would simply deflect or just absorb all together. He had run out of spells to attack with and was now furiously trying to dodge, but his tiredness caught up to him. And Harry, tired of waiting, took out his wand yelled. "Katchin!".
Neville turned to see a dark bolt of lightning heading towards him at extreme speeds, before it hit him straight in the chest and causing him extreme shock and pain, pain like being struck with Thousands of lightning bolts at the same time. It felt like Neville had just angered Zeus himself, before he finally gave in and fell to his knees.
"Congratulations Longbottom, you managed to survive my half power, even the normal wizarding sheep couldn't do such a thing for long. But, you weren't wary of surprise attacks, and now I will be handing you to your once savior while a plan for my return, come along men we have plans to do, Harry, do what you want." Voldemort said, and with that everyone held on to their marks as they followed voldemort out of the graveyard, only Harry, Neville, Cedric, Krum (Who was brought there by Cedric on orders of harry), and Fleur (Who harry ordered to come here to make his plan believable) remained.
"What are you going to do Harry?" Neville said, using the last of his confidence "Kill me? You didn't have the guts to attack me head on and had to do a surprise attack just to subdue me you coward!" He yelled before being grabbed by his shirt and punch straight in the face by him, causing his eye to turn purple.
"Why, Longbottom, would I kill you when there's so much more I could do with you. No, here's what were going to do. You will now help me with the destruction of the light and my rise to power." Harry said while pointing his wand straight at Neville's head.
"I WILL NEVER DO THAT!" Yelled Neville "MY WHOLE FAMILY HAS BEEN IN THE LIGHT, I WON'T DO IT, I WILL TELL EVERYONE WHAT YOUR TRUELY DOING, YOU WILL FALL POTTER!?" And with that, he stood with all his remaining strength and ran towards the triwizard cup, which was unfortunately placed on the other side of the graveyard, Giving harry the upperhand of time.
"Subdue him?!" Harry yelled, and as soon as he said it, Cedric immediately pounced on Neville as his weight and speed quickly overpowered him while Fleur subdued him with ropes and levitating him back to harry "I didn't pose it as a question Longbottom, rather a order, and order you will complete." He said as he whipped out his wand, pointing directly at his heart. Neville tried to get out of the binds but was held down by Cedric and Fleur.
"Heptahlon?!" Harry casted, and once it hit, Neville Longbottom was no more, his body went limp, the bindings going loose. Then he rose, or rather, his body rose, in the place of the former gryffindor was a much darker version of him that had now been created thanks to Harry.
"Kneel, you are hensforth known as... Nicholas Poyser" Harry said, and the body of Neville, Now known as Nicolas, knelt down.
"Now that that's over, we can start phase 2 of the plan" Harry said "Now, Where's Krum?"
( end of my portion, Now back to the original story with the changes I've made)
Hogwarts maze entrance
2 hours after the 3 champions left for graveyard
The 3 schools and visiting dignitaries waited and waited wondering where champions were. Albus was near panicking, the Ministry was still breathing down his neck over the missing student, complaining about the expense of wiping the girl's muggle parents memories to say she was studying abroad.
The scream of Fleur Delacour and others caused his head to snap up to see they had returned however something was wrong, 1st of, there were only the original 3 champions, Longbottom was nowhere to be seen. 2nd off, Krum was injured, running from the stand pushing his way past the gathered crowd he fell to his knees in shock.
Viktor Krum was barely recognisable he had been so horribly mutilated that the only way they could tell he was the Famous Bulgarian seeker was the fact that he was holding the tri-Wizard cup, the Dark Mark had been roughly stabbed into the boys chest.
The screams of Stefan Krum at the sight of his son was the last thing he said before collapsing from the sheer shock at the sight of his son, the students were sent back to there dormitory's while Krum's remains were carried away to the Hospital Wing.
The news spread across the Magical world like fire the people demanded the Ministry do something about it, this had become a international incident due to Viktor's fame as the Bulgarian seeker. Albus believed it had to be Harry but he had not left his Family home since the Yule Ball, however he managed to convince one of his followers without breaking the oath in truth the man a Lord Ogden had expected Albus to say something but once he realised he wouldn't he did it himself.
27th June 1995
Wizengamot Chambers
It had been two days since Viktor's death and it was now the day they would get justice well that's what Albus believed as he watched the boy in question walk in dressed in the finery of a Lord.
"Lord Potter I thank you for attending this summons, we have called you hear to answer for the Death of Heir Viktor Krum." The Wizengamot watched as the young Lord closed his eyes as if he was holding back pain as he took a slow breath.
"Of course, Director Bones, please forgive me but when I was told of the horrible things done to the man, it makes me feel very uneasy, I shall do my best to answer your questions."
Albus watched as many of the Lords bought the boys cover, believing he was indeed in shock at the horrific murder.
"Lord Potter where were you on the night in question."
"I was at the beginning of the evening at my home in Potter Castle before taking The Eurostar to Paris".
That even confused Albus, why would he do something like that Amelia Bones asked him that very Question.
"Forgive me Lord Potter but why would you take The Eurostar to Paris".
"Well to tell you the truth Director when I decided to go on the train, I had no real plan I was just bored and decided to go on the train and see if any of the stops would look interesting enough to get off anywhere".
"And did you get off anywhere in Paris Lord Potter?".
"Yes, Director I got off at the city of Edinburgh and spent the night in the Hotel Saint-Germain, you can ask them I also have a copy of my Bank statement showing I used my Gringotts Card to purchase and check into the room".
For the next 20 mins the reviewed the details seeing nothing out of the ordinary they apologised and said he was free to go, the Wizengamot was dismissed for the day shortly after and despite Albus walking fast to see if he could catch up to the boy he watched as he vanished via the Portkey on his Lordship Ring.
Hogwarts Great Hall
Last day of term
Albus had a rough few days he found that his best friend Alastor was intact Barty Crouch Jr who upon seeing he was captured smiled his eyes so wide just like his grin it freaked some of the staff out
He yelled at the top of his lungs "long live the Dark Lord" before jumping out the window of his office where he died on impact with the ground with a sinking crunch.
But now here he was standing before the students who sat in shock, his memorial to Viktor turned to publicly say that he had been Murdered by Lord Voldemort, who he claimed also kidnapped Neville Longbottom, and the ministry was trying to cover it up.
This was quickly passed by the children of Death Eaters or those Loyal to Harry who quickly passed it on to Voldemort who smiled informing Lucius and Harry to use their influence to discredit Albus and any who supported him.
It would be a long summer for Albus and it was only going to get worse.
(Original) Authors note: well Voldemort's back this should be fun until next time.
(Mine) Authors note: This was the first chapter where I changed alot of aspects from the original story, including that whole fight with Neville and voldemort, Neville's conversion, Cedric Fleur and Krum's presence at the graveyard at all, and Krum's death being the most prominent difference. Some people will be confused about the spells I used so I will tell the meaning behind them. They were created by my friend, who is currently writing his own version of Salazar's Descendant (A story of mine that no one seems to read) as it was his idea in the first place and wanted to expand it. He gave me these spells and there effects as well as some others that I may or may not be using depending on plot.
Spells effect:
Katchin
Effect: shoots a dark lightning to the target causing untold levels of shock
Heptathlon
Effect: makes you emotionless and evil
Demetre
Effect: Bends the target's will and makes them an army of the user of this spell (Sort of like a different and more powerful version of the Imperius curse, which I don't think is intentional. As I don't think he even knows of the curses existence. But yeah pretty much a imperius, I used this instead of imperius because, as Harry stated, it would have been to obvious and cliche, and this was a way to spice it up a bit.
Anyway, see you next update