(Clarifications:
1: There will be several things that are not in the original game, so if you see something you don't remember from undertale, it's probably originally mine.
2: I will write both the pacifist and genocide route
3: I relied on some fangames like "undertale green" for some things, since they have many elements that I think should be taken advantage of
4: Frisk's narration will be in the second person.
5: All of the designs will be on my DeviantArt and i will indicate when they'll appear
6: The underlined text in the battles describes what would ACTUALLY appear if this ever got turned into a game, since, of course, the text describing how you dodge things wouldn't be in a game
Now, let's go to the story)
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[You get up after the big fall]
(Insert Frisk's design)
[You look around with worried eyes]
[You see a small branch and you grab it]
[You got Stick (ATK 0). Better than nothing]
[You equip the stick]
[You cautiously move into the next room]
?: Well, well...What do we have here?
[You look in front of where you are to see who is speaking]
(Insert Flowey's design)
?: A human! What a curious coincidence! Let me introduce myself
Flowey: I'm Flowey! Flowey the flower!
Flowey: Hmmm...you're new to the underground, right? Golly, you must be confused!...oh, who am I kidding? We both know what my intentions are. But it would be very boring if I do it now, so I'll say the basics first.
(Undertale battle intro)
Flowey: See that heart? That is your soul. The mere culmination of your being, etc, etc. Everyone already knows what the hell is a soul
Flowey: In this world, you won't survive with a soul as weak as the one you have now. To get stronger, you will need EXP. What's EXP? Easy. It's an acronym. It means "extermination points". When you have enough EXP, you will get LV. What is LV? Simple. It's another acronym. It stands for "Level of Violence." For example...
[Flowey pulls two roots out of the ground and catches the battle box, leaving you with no room to move, as he surrounds him with thorns]
Flowey: I'M ABOUT GETTING A LOT OF EXP RIGHT NOW!
[The thorns start to get closer as Flowey laughs]
[When the thorns are about to touch you, footsteps are heard in the distance]
[The thorns stop]
Flowey: Oh...HER
[Flowey removes the thorns and removes the roots from the battle box]
Flowey: Well, tough luck, human. I was going to kill you quickly, but she is usually much slower with her victims, as you will be in a few seconds
[Flowey hides underground]
[You see someone come out of the shadows]
(Insert Toriel design)
?: Ooh. What is a small human like you doing here? Don't worry, I won't hurt you
Toriel: I am Toriel, Caretaker of the Ruins. Follow me, i will guide you
[Toriel leaves in the direction of the door]
[You step back, a bit afraid]
[She turns around]
Toriel: . . . Why aren't you following me? There is nothing to fear, I just want to help you
[You back up a bit more]
Toriel:...I SAID FOLLOW ME
[She tries to grab your arm, but you move to the side and run out the door]
Toriel: HEY! COME BACK HERE, YOU SPOILED BRAT!
[She chases you]
[There are 6 plates on the ground. It looks like a puzzle]
[You quickly step on the tiles and open the door. There's no time to slow down]
[You go into the next room and jump over the spikes that are blocking the way]
[Toriel pauses for a moment to activate the levers to remove the spikes]
[You see a mannequin]
[This is no time to admire it's lack of fashion sense]
[You advance until you come to a spiked bridge. You could swim through the water around]
[...it also has spikes]
Toriel: KID! COME BACK HERE!
[You decide to take the risk and zigzag across the bridge. You survive miraculously]
[Toriel slows down a bit so she doesn't accidentally step wrong]
[Toriel reaches the next room, but she doesn't see you]
Toriel: Where did that human go?! When i find it, they'll see!
[Toriel continues to the next room]
[...]
[You come out from behind the pillar where you hid. That was close]
[You see a yellow star near you. You touch it]
[Frisk LV1
Hall of the Ruins
❤️Save Back]
[Game saved]
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[You make sure that Toriel isn't around. She seems to have gone away]
[You advance to the next room]
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(Undertale battle intro and Froggit design)
[Froggit attacks you!]
[You're noticeably scared, so you see what you can do]
[ATTACK] [ACT] [OBJECTS] [MERCY]
[❤️ACT]
[Check] [Threat] [Compliment]
[❤️Check]
[Froggit - ATK 8 DEF 10
Life is hard for it's enemies]
Froggit: Ribbitt!
[Froggit tries to hit you with his tongue, managing to make a cut on your arm]
[-3 HP]
[❤️Compliment]
[You tell Froggit that the color gray looks good on him]
[Froggit doesn't seem to understand you, but he senses that you were friendly]
Froggit: Ribbit...
[Froggit attacks with flies and dodges]
[❤️Compliment]
[You tell Froggit that he's the coolest frog you've ever seen]
[Froggit looks praised]
Froggit:...ribbit
[Froggit seems to be calmer]
[❤️MERCY]
[❤️Spare]
[You won! You got 0 EXP and 2 G]
[Froggit looks at the floor.
Froggit:...ribbit (Thank you)
[Froggit leaves]
[You see a candy machine and cautiously approach it]
[There is a sign on the machine that says "take ONLY one"]
[Take one?
❤️Yes No]
[❤️Yes]
[Obtained the Monster Toothbreaker]
[Toothbreaker: Recovers 30 HP, but takes one turn to eat]
[You keep walking to the next room, but-]
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(Battle intro and Whimsun design)
[Whimsun tries not to look harmless]
[❤️ACT]
[Check] [Comfort] [Terrify]
[❤️Check]
[Whimsun - 10 ATK 1 DEF
Tries not to appear harmless. He's still working on it]
Whimsun: I-I'm very dangerous!
[It attacks you with butterflies. They don't seem to point towards you]
[Whimsun doesn't seem too sure of his own words]
[❤️ACT]
[Check] [Comfort] [Terrify]
[❤️Comfort]
[You tell Whimsun that he doesn't need to fool himself if he needs to be happy]
[Whimsun seems to think about your words]
Whimsun: W-we don't have any other choice...
[Whimsun surrounds you with slowly approaching butterflies]
[❤️ACT]
[Check] [Comfort] [Terrify]
[❤️Comfort]
[You tell Whimsun not to let others tell him what he should do with his life if he doesn't think it's the right thing to do]
[It seems to be motivated]
Whimsun: I-I...I'll try
[The butterflies disappear]
[Whimsun seems reluctant to fight]
[❤️MERCY]
[❤️Spare]
[You won! You got 0 EXP and 2 G]
[You move very quickly into the next room, but fall down a brittle rock to the floor below]
[-3 HP]
[That hurted]
[You continue to quickly advance to the next room]
[You admire the cute stone you found. A superb detail]
[You look at the spiked floor]
[Another person would possibly skip the spikes to avoid the problem, but you're not another person]
[You see the stone]
[You try to push the stone. The stone push is 0%]
[Better try to jump]
[You run to jump the spikes, but the spikes are lowered]
?
[You see a sign and read it]
[[Change the permanent spikes! It's exhausting having to jump over them all the time!
Atte: Hater of the spikes]]
[Seems like they listened to him. You advance to the next room]
[You reached the room with the brittle floor. It's a little broken]
[You grab hold of the wall to get into the other room. Better safe than sorry]
[You found an architectural magnificence. Wait, it's only 3 stones]
[There is no time to push the stones, the spikes are not permanent. The clientele thinks that those skewers are not recommended]
[You reached the save point]
[There is a cheese here. That determines you to continue]
[HP restored]
[Frisk LV1
Cheese room
❤️Save Return]
[Game saved]
[You approach the cheese]
[This cheese is just painted wood]
[You keep moving forward. Something dark blocks the way]
[It looks like you can go through it. Pass through that?]
[❤️Yes] [No]
[You walk a bit]
?: HEY! WHO GAVE YOU PERMISSION TO PASS THROUGH ME?! INCREDIBLE, ONE TRIES TO TAKE A NAP AND AN IDIOT COMES TO CROSS OVER!
(Battle intro and Napstablook design)
[Here comes Napstablook!]
[❤️ACT]
[Check] [Flirt] [Encourage] [Threat]
[❤️Check]
[Napstablook - 20 ATK 20 DEF
Doesn't seem to be in the mood]
Napstablook: Come on. Run. I dare you
[Napstablook shoots red liquid from his eye]
[❤️ACT]
[Check] [Flirt] [Encourage] [Threat]
[❤️Threat]
[You threaten Napstablook to let you through]
Napstablook: Or else what? Are you going to kill me? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. From what? A laugh? HAHAHA! I'm laughing so much i think i'm gonna cough!
[Napstablook continues to shoot red liquid from his eye]
[❤️ACT]
[Check] [Flirt] [Encourage] [Threat]
[❤️Cheer]
[You tell Napstablook that the rhyme he just made was clever]
Napstablook: Huh?!...wait, you're trying to distract me right?!
[Napstablook continues attacking]
[❤️ACT]
[Check] [Flirt] [Encourage] [Threat]
[❤️Cheer]
[You tell Napstablook you're serious]
Napstablook: Huh-what? Um...thank you?
[Napstablook continues attacking]
[❤️ACT]
[Check] [Flirt] [Encourage] [Threat]
[❤️Cheer]
[You ask Napstablook if he can do other rhymes]
Napstablook:…you're the first person to be interested in my rhymes...I haven't practiced many for that reason
[Napstablook seems a bit calmer]
[❤️ACT]
[Check] [Flirt] [Encourage] [Threat]
[❤️Cheer]
[You tell Napstablook that you can help him with his rhymes if he lets you in]
Napstablook:...Ugh, i shouldn't be doing this...but I guess you're not like the rest
[You won! You got 0 EXP and 0 G]
Napstablook:...let's not talk about this. They can't know i spared a human
[Napstablook disappears]
[You decide to go back and save]
[Frisk LV1
Cheese room
❤️Save Return]
[Game saved]
