Superman, Son of Hippolyta - A T-Rexcellent Reviews Fanfiction
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Chapter 13: Troubling Confessions
On the Island of Themyscira, inside the Gardens of Persephone…
The moment Persephone saw the boy, she knew... something was definitely going on here on this island.
The Queen of Dread might not have been one of the patron Goddesses the Amazons worshipped to regularly to like her mother Demeter, but she was still a Greek Goddess and a member of the Olympian Pantheon, despite leaving the floating mountain so long ago to rule over the Underworld with her husband Hades.
She knew one of Hera's sordid schemes when she saw one, and the boy, as innocent as he appeared in all this, and she had no doubt that he truly was, still stunk of the Queen of the Heavens meddling like a Catoblepas Buffalo on a hot Summer's day, the two emerald encrusted silver bands around his wrists were proof enough of that…
… but still, she had to learn more…
"So, tell me Prince Kal, how long have you lived on this island?" The Goddess of Spring asked politely enough as she and the prince walked through the Royal Gardens together with the boys Wolfdog trailing not far behind them, the sun was just starting to fall in the sky above as evening approached, but it was still more than light enough for them to appreciate the beauty of the island paradise all around.
The boy she was walking with, having been busy observing with great fascination how Persephone's mere presence in the garden seem to give the flowers and plants around them renewed life, glowing like gemstones in afternoon light, was briefly taken aback by the forwardness of the Goddess question, but still managed to respond in a timely manner.
"All my life, I mean, I was born here after all." He answered a little awkwardly, still feeling more than a little, uncomfortable being alone with a Greek Goddess, especially such a powerful and beautiful one as the Queen of Dread herself, though it had lessoned considerably once they had reached the gardens and Persephone had decided to unlink his arm from his own.
At this expected answer, Persephone just smiled and chuckled good humouredly. "Of course, forgive me, what I meant to ask is how do you enjoy living here on Themyscira?" She clarified as they reached an orchard of Hesperides Apples, the tall trees full of gorgeous golden fruits that glinted in the setting sun.
Persephone watched with interest as the boy quickly climbed up the fruit tree with all the dexterity of a Cercopes Monkey and plucked two golden apples from its branches before jumping back down beside her and offered her one. "For you, Lady Persephone."
"Why, thank you Prince Kal." The Goddess said gratefully as she took a bite and moaned in pleasure at the heavenly taste. "I had forgotten how good Hesperides Apples were." She said after swallowing her mouthful and then taking another bite, moaning again afterwards as the pair of Persephone and the prince took a seat on the garden bench.
Kal however, did not take a bite out of his apple right away, only staring at his own reflection in it as he thought of an answer to Persephone's original question. "It's okay, I guess, I mean its home and I love living here and all, but sometimes I just…" He stopped fiddling with apple in his hands and sighed, looking down.
The boy's noticeable pause got the Goddesses attention after swallowing another mouthful of the juicy fruit. "Yes?" She asked curiously.
The boy sighed again before finally taking a slow bite of his apple, but unlike the Goddess beside him, the heavenly taste of divine fruit did little to improve the prince's suddenly somber mood, after swallowing down the mouthful, the boy looked up at her and Persephone was stunned by the conflicting emotions she saw behind the boy's eyes.
Pain. Anger. Frustration. Confusion and Sorrow.
Persephone numbly took another bite of her golden fruit, but the Hesperides Apple suddenly didn't taste as good in her mouth anymore.
"Sometimes I just… I don't… feel like I belong here, Persephone." Kal said absently before suddenly realising he had just possibly made a grave mistake by speaking to a Goddess without using her honorific title, his face becoming panicked. "I'm sorry, I mean Lady Perse-."
"It's quite alright, young prince." The Lady of the Underworld dismissed the boy's fears of harsh reprisal with a warm smile that seemed to light up the flowering bushes behind her. "You may refer to me just as Persephone if you like, though I hope you'll grant me the same privilege and allow me to call you by your name, no need for titles like Prince or Lady between fellow royals is there, Kal."
Relieved and more than a little stunned by this Queen and Goddess's rather laid-back attitude towards the formalities of royal titles, Kal simply nodded and gave his best bright-eyed smile. "Yes of course you my lady- I mean Persephone."
Persephone couldn't help but smile at the boy's rather endearing nature, he was so polite and yet so awkward as well, it was strangely adorable to watch. "Now that we've gotten that out of the way, please tell me Kal, what could possibly trouble you about living on Themyscira, I mean it's basically Paradise Island?"
Feeling more comfortable around the Goddess of Spring than before, Kal spoke with an honesty that he would never dare with an Amazon woman, even his mother. "Maybe for Amazons, but I'm the only boy on this whole island and someday, I'll be the only man as well, I don't really have any friends who besides my sister Diana and Krypto." At hearing these disheartened words, Krypto padded over to them and placed his large furry head in his boy's lap to comfort him.
"Most of the other young Amazons don't want to be around me because they all think boys are weird." Kal said despondently while stroking his Wolfdog's head long ears. "Not that they've actually met any beside me, of course."
He still remembered the first time he had tried to hang out with his sister's friends, how many of the girls had just looked at him weirdly until he had finally left, particularly Artemis and Nubia who had outright glared at him and mockingly called him Wolf Boy as he walked away with his head down.
Diana had called out to him to come back and had chastised her friends for making fun of her brother, but he had just run faster and fled into the jungle to be alone, like always did when he was feeling upset.
"I just… I just feel so alone and out of place here sometimes." The boy said with another depressed sigh that would make any loving mothers heartache, like the heart of the Goddess sitting right beside him who put her arm around his shoulders, which the boy barely noticed.
Persephone, for her part suddenly felt surprisingly guilty for prying into the boy's personal life in the first place and bringing up this adoscelent anguish he hid so well behind boyish smiles and bright blue eyes.
It was becoming clear to the Goddess that the boy was shockingly good at putting on a positive appearance for the Amazons on the island, never letting it be known just how out of place he really felt on Themyscira at times and to her surprise
But still, she couldn't stop now…
"Have you ever tried talking to your mother about how you've been feeling, Kal?" The Lady of the Underworld asked softly, wanting to know more about what kind of divine plotting was going on here on this island, but having no desire to upset the boy she found herself quickly growing very fond of.
"No, my mother's the queen of our tribe and the ruler of this whole island." He told her with his head still down as Krypto looked up at his master with a sympathetic whimper, nuzzling his chest. "She doesn't need any more things on her mind, much less worrying about how I'm feeling."
"She's your mother, it's her job to be concerned with how you're feeling." Persephone told him. "But your loneliness and out of placeness are not the only things that are bothering you, are they, Kal?"
"No." The boy said looking up at her with conflicted eyes. "There are just still so many things I don't understand about my purpose being here, like, why was my birth so special? Or what am I even being trained for? I keep looking for answers and the ones I get… just… don't satisfy me, sometimes... it feels like I'm missing a big chunk of who I am."
"You seek answers to questions no one around you seems to know, you have thoughts you don't think anyone would understand if you told them, you feel out of place in your own home and you wish to know your reason for even being here on this all-female island." Persephone said, not in a questioning manner, but more as a stating of facts, which they were.
The boys single nod said more than any number of words.
"I see, it would seem you and I have more in common than just our love of dogs, Kal." The Goddess said simply.
Surprised, Kal looked up Persephone with curious eyes that sought an answer and unlike most ones he usually received on Themyscira, this one was a surprisingly truthful one.
"When I first eloped to get married to my husband Hades, I became the Lady of the Underworld overnight and had to leave my mother and the rest of my family on Mount Olympus to rule the Underworld by my love's side." Persephone explained, smiling sympathetically at the boy before her beautiful face formed into a frown. "It was a difficult transition for me, I found it very hard to enjoy ruling over a place so different from my home, I was also missing my mother, despite the fact she can be a bit smothering at times, I still love her, and I missed her greatly every day I was down there."
At these words, Kal suddenly felt a great a sympathy for the Goddess he had just met, despite the prince's own personal problems with living in an all-female society, he still couldn't imagine having to forced to leave his island home to rule over somewhere else, much less having to leave his mother and sister behind him.
"But in time, I found my place and came into my own as the Queen of Dread, keeping order on both sides of the River Styx, maintaining the Ethereal Houses, helping poor unfortunate souls finally achieve peace and doing my best to make sure that all the evil monsters imprisoned down in the darkest depths stay there."
"Really?" Kal asked eagerly, looking at the Goddess with great interest.
"Indeed, it wasn't easy, not by any means, but with the help of my friends, my pets and the love of my life, I found many reasons to fall in love my new home, but even more so, I found my purpose and then I was finally able to reunite with my mother." Persephone said smiling in fondness at boy and the memories flashing before her eyes.
"You did?" The boy asked again in that same adorably curious manner as before, his beautiful blue eyes shining in low light as he listened intently.
"Yes, she was so glad to have me back, but she also finally understood it was time for her to let me go, that I needed to follow my own path, the one I had chosen for myself, not the one she planned for me, though we had to part ways, I still see her regularly now and she visits me often in the Underworld."
Kal's boyish face broke into a genuine smile as this supposedly dreaded queen finished telling him the tale of her immortal life, happy that she had found what he was still looking for. "That's great Persephone, I'm really happy you found your place and got to reunite with your mother again."
"Thank you Kal, but the point of what I'm telling you is as hard as it may seem, you must also find things to love about your home here on Themyscira, only then will you find your purpose and maybe even the others answers you seek." The Goddess said offering the boy another warm smile that lit up the darkening garden around them as she pulled something out from with her regal attire and othered it to him. "As for your loneliness though, here, I have something for you that might help you with that."
In the Goddess's hand was what looked a combination of a horn and a flute as it had a one mouthpiece, but three different openings, all carved into the shape of a snarling Hellhound head, the boy picked it up turned it over curiously in his hands before looking up at the Goddess again. "What this? An instrument?"
"It's a Hellhound Horn, think of it as a specialised dog whistle." Persephone explained with a smile. "This horn will allow you to summon Cerberus, Notch and Spot from the Underworld once a week, getting my boys out of the house for a while and allowing you and Krypto to have some new friends to play with."
Eyes growing wide, Kal looked down at the intricate and beautifully designed horn in his hands with newfound interest. "Woah, really?"
"Yes, you also have my permission to use it to call upon my pets if you feel that you are in danger and need a fearsome attack beast to help you, I'm trusting you to use this gift responsibly and sparingly Kal, only when circumstances demand, do not make me regret this decision." The Goddess said pointedly, but still warmly.
Kal looked up at the Queen of Dread with a surprisingly amount of seriousness in his eyes as he said. "Thank you, Persephone, I promise you, I will prove myself worthy of this great honour."
Once again, Persephone found herself smiling at the boy's sheer sincerity. "You already have Kal, anyway, it's starting to get late, and I believe its time for us to return to the palace, your mother will no doubt want you back in time for dinner and I'm sure my three boys are getting very hungry now too."
With that said, Kal, Persephone and Krypto all left the gardens together, never noticing hidden high above in the branches of the apple tree Kal had collected the Golden Apples from, a tall young man laid out, relaxing against a long branch casually, his bright teal eyes were alight with mischievous interest as he watched the trio walk away.
The young God was dressed in a white toga with a hooded amethyst cape which shimmered from between light violet and dark purple behind him, he was muscular yet very lean at the same, his face was handsome in a roguish looking way with light brown hair that had a long pony tail like braid, his body was adorned with multiple gold accessories, but of particularly note was the golden winged tortoise shell helmet on his head and the pair of golden winged boots on his feet, attached to his waist was a gold lined satchel and on his left wrist was gold bracelet with a sapphire gem inside it.
Plucking a golden apple from another branch, Hermes took a big bite out of the divine fruit and after swallowing it, grinned to himself at the taste as well as the truly delicious information he had just overheard.
"Well, well, well, this an unexpected development, isn't it?" The resident spymaster of the Greek Pantheon said to himself before taking another bite out of the apple and swallowing it down. "I simply must know more about this Son of Hippolyta's."
Tossing the rest of the golden apple away, Hermes pulled his hood over his head and in a moment, the young Olympian vanished completely from sight as he became invisible to the rest of the world around him, his presence only given away by the slight fluttering sound of his Winged Boots as he hovered after his cousin and the little Demigodling she had befriended.
A few minutes later, back at the Palace Courtyard…
As evening fell and night started to settle over Themyscira, Hippolyta remained waiting in the palace courtyard for Kal, Krypto and Lady Persephone to return from their walk in the royal gardens, she had dismissed most of the other Amazons a while ago, with only Phillippus insisting on waiting with her, as the warrior queen had long since decided on staying out here until her son came back to her.
As the sky got darker and darker though, Hippolyta started to worry, leading to her trying to walk into the royal gardens after them, only for her path to be blocked by a gigantic Three Headed Hellhound as Cerberus and his brothers obeyed their mistresses command to the letter, not allowing any living thing past the area their adoptive mother had ordered them to guard, growling at the Queen of the Amazons to not come any closer.
Luckily for Hippolyta though, the threatening growls of the giant demonic looking dogs subsided as a very familiar howl was heard coming out of the gardens as Krypto reappeared and immediately rushed over to Three Headed Hellhound, barking excitedly at them, and wagging his furry tail from side to side, which Cerberus, Notch and Spot all responded to in kind, wagging their long scaly tail high in the air, knocking over a few trees in the process.
Not long after, Kal and Persephone also reappeared, the pair laughing at their pets' playful antics as they walked out of the garden together, Hippolyta could still barely believe it when her son walked up to all three of the Hellhounds huge heads without fear and individually stroked each of their snouts, causing the colossal canines to growl in pleasure.
After both Kal and Krypto had said their respective goodbyes to the Cerberus, Notch and Spot, with Persephone promising her three pets they would get to play with their news friends another day, which surprised Hippolyta even more to hear that the Lady of the Underworld had basically entrusted her son to look after the Guardians of the Underworld once a week.
This day was just full of surprises.
So, with a couple of parting howls, the giant Three Headed Hellhound skulked off into the jungle through the opening they made, heading back towards the tunnel they originally dug to reach Themyscira in first place to return to the Underworld.
This was followed by Kal and Krypto saying farewell to Lady Persephone who thanked them for bringing her dogs back to her, before Phillippus escorted the prince and his pet back inside the palace, leaving Hippolyta alone with Lady of the Underworld.
"The prince is a good boy." Persephone said to Hippolyta as they watched the prince and his loyal Wolfdog follow Phillippus back into the palace. "He's friendly and very polite, especially for a Demigod and I like said earlier, Cerberus and his brothers rarely warm up to most strangers, your son seems to be a special case in that regard."
"Thank you, my lady, but I already know he's special." Hippolyta said, as a loving smile found its way onto the queen's face, speaking as much to herself as to Persephone in that moment. "I raised him."
"Yes, it's just a pity he had to end up on this island of all places."
Surprised and more than a little alarmed, Hippolyta turned to see Persephone had one of her dreaded glares fixed directly right at her and in that moment, Hippolyta would have almost preferred to face down the giant Three Headed Hellhound instead.
"My lady?" The Queen of the Amazons asked hesitantly, afraid this conversation had just taken a turn for the worst.
"Do you think I am a fool, Hippolyta?" The Spring Goddess asked rhetorically with a growl in her voice that wouldn't have been out of place coming from her three headed pets. "I might have left Mount Olympus a long time ago, but I can still recognise one of my aunt's plots when I see one, I knew exactly what that poor boy's purpose being here really was the moment you said he was your son, there's only one reason Hera would ever allow a Son of Hippolyta's to live on Themyscira."
At these damming words, Hippolyta said nothing, until finally, she sighed sadly and looked the glaring Goddess in the eye. "The night Kal… arrived… on the island, Queen Hera came to us with a warning, she told us that Hercules and his horde would return someday, to finish what he started back in Ancient Greece." Hippolyta then looked at her fellow queen with a troubled gaze. "Persephone, is it true?"
Persephone kept up her dreadful glare for a few moments longer before sighing herself and nodded, her face losing some of its harshness as she spoke. "It's true Hippolyta." The Lady of the Underworld confirmed to the Amazon Queens obvious fear. "Hercules and his barbaric followers all remain locked up for now, but their restraints are weakening by the year and Zeus has long since refused to do anything about it, he wants his beloved bastard to roam free in the mortal realm again, to conqueror and rule in his name."
It took all of Hippolyta's will power not to scream her undying hatred of the King of the Greek Gods all the way to Mount Olympus in that moment, but she forced herself to calm down and take a deep breath instead. "Then you should understand why I have no choice and why I must do this now, my lady."
"I do understand Hippolyta, and you of all people should know, that for almost any warrior, no matter how skilled they are, taking on Hercules in direct combat is almost certainly going to be a suicide mission." Persephone stated with her still notoriously dreaded gaze that would make a Gorgon shudder in fear. "My cousin Perseus proved that when he originally took down Hercules before he and his horde could chase after you and your sisters as you fled from the Fall of Ancient Greece."
The Amazon Queen said nothing at first, only giving a great sigh as she took her golden crown off her head and starred at her own reflection in it, through the pristine shine, Hippolyta could see the resigned sadness in her eyes, the wear and tear of her queenly mask as it started to slip from her beautiful face revealing the conflicted emotions of a desperate mother underneath it all.
"I never asked for this crown, Persephone, you know that." Hippolyta said staring at her own regal reflection in the decorated ornament, her saddened gaze becoming hard as she placed the crown back on her head, the gold feeling colder and heavier than before as she turned back to face the Greek Goddess. "But as long as I wear it. I am Queen of the Amazon's and the Ruler of Themyscira, I have a duty to my tribe, to my family, to my Goddess."
"If I have to sacrifice a hundred boys to prevent my sisters from being enslaved again, to save my daughter from having to know the same living nightmare I've had to endure." Hippolyta declared with iron certainty. "Then that is exactly what I will do."
"What if it's just one boy though?" Persephone asked pointedly. "The boy you call your son, the boy you love?"
"Sacrifice is never supposed to easy Persephone." Was all the Queen of the Amazons could say to that near impossible question to answer. "Or otherwise, it is no true sacrifice at all."
"I suppose that's true." The Lady of the Underworld said simply in response to that uncomfortable answer as Hippolyta turned to walk back to the palace, decidedly done with this whole conversation at this point, talking to a Goddess or not.
It was Persephone's unexpected response that made Hippolyta halt in her step though.
"But then again, this isn't the first son you've killed, is it Hippolyta? Though back then, you did it with your own hands, so I suppose it will be even easier this time around for you, wont it?"
At hearing these particular words, Hippolyta spun back around to say… something, to do… something, but Persephone was already gone in a flash of wild tangling vines, slithering back down into the earth, returning to the Underworld, leaving Hippolyta alone with her troubled thoughts and a heavier crown.
Hermes, meanwhile, had been watching the whole conversation with great interest from his perch atop a tree, right up to the point where a conflicted Hippolyta had walked back into the island's palace with a more aching heart than before
"Well, it would appear we've entered a new era on Themyscira then." Hermes muttered quietly to himself as he decloaked and became visible again to mortal eyes.
"Future progression of this little princely plot should prove very interesting indeed." With that said, the God of Speed backflipped off the top of the tree just as his Winged Boots began flapping, allowing him to hover safely to the ground before heading towards his home of Mount Olympus at lighting fast speed, all the while thinking to himself just who he was going to share all this wonderfully secret information with.
Or rather, who he wasn't going to share it with.
Greetings to all my fellow fanfic readers and writers, I hope you all enjoyed Superman, Son of Hippolyta Chapter 13: Troubling Confessions, well guys, the cat has just officially jumped out of the bag, both a Goddess from below and a God from above now know about 'Prince' Kal's presence on Themyscira, word will spread whether the Amazons like it or not, soon other beings from Greek Myth will take an interest in the boy's existence and not all of their intentions will be simple curiosity…
Hermes is right about one thing guys, we have entered a new era in this story now and as the God of Messages himself said, future progression should prove very interesting indeed.
One of the main themes of this story I've been trying to convey lately guys is the idea of these characters not being who they appear to be, such examples include the following.
1. Kal is not really a Demigod Prince of the Amazons, he's the Last Son of Krypton being used for ulterior motives.
2. Hippolyta is not really his birth mother even though she looks like it, she's a vengeful warrior queen carrying a heavy crown on her head.
3. Alkyone is not really a loyal, model Amazon warrior, she's a hypocritical, jealous, and petty sociopath.
4. Cerberus and his brothers aren't vicious, monstrous beasts, they're just a trio of good guard dogs doing their duty.
5. Persephone isn't an evil queen of darkness, she's a clever, kind women who also happens to be the Lady of the Underworld.
6. Themyscira isn't the perfect paradise it appears to be… at least for boys anyway…
So, before you go freaking out about Persephone last words to Hippolyta, just keep that in mind, nothing is as it seems in this story…
There are mysterious and secrets hiding in plain sight, lies and illusions the characters convince themselves are real, ominous foreshadowing in almost every chapter and the sense that seeking answers may be a more dangerous than you might originally think…
… anyway, I hope you all enjoyed these lighter chapters, as Shakespeare taught us, you need to balance the dark with light and vice versa, so please enjoy these light-hearted moments but also prepare yourselves for things to get darker as we go on guys, because there are far worse things than a Three Headed Hellhound coming for Kal in the future from the Underworld… far, far worse things…
Also, the designs for Hermes, Hera and later on many other members of the Greek Pantheon in this story come from the excellent Netflix Original Series Blood of Zeus, a show I highly recommend watching.
Now onto answering some more fan questions from all of you guys…
1. To my latest guest reader Dak, yes, there was indeed an update recently, a new chapter five titled The Wolf and the Lioness has taken the original's place, pushing it and every other chapter after it, up a number, sorry if I caused any confusion, but the story needed that particular chapter in that particular spot and I can't promise it won't happen again, but I promise to make it clearer when I do.
2. Daka, I appreciate your enjoyment of the longer chapters, I really worked hard on those ones and I promise there will be more of them in the future, but the truth is, that the chapters are as long as they need to be, sometimes it's easier to write shorter chapters with only one scene in them, it also allows me to get out to you guys sooner, but rest assured, longer chapters will return.
3. Erika Lopes, Persephone reasons are both simple curiosity and courtly concern, she knows boys are not allowed on Themyscira, so Kal's mere presence raises some serious red flags for her on some kind of scheme going on the island, the Amazons trying to skirt around the whole issue certainly didn't help in that regard either, but at the same time, her Three Headed Hellhound clearly likes the boy and even so soon after meeting him, the Queen of Dread is beginning to warm to him as well… she'll be on his side… Persephone is like the original Poison Ivy guys…
4. evolution-500, thank you for your complements and helpful points concerning my punctuation, they are much appreciated, I suppose its time I tell you all that I actually have Aspergerus Syndrome and it unfortunately effects my writing in this regard, I'll try and work on my dialogue punctuation more, but it's honestly a very hard habit to break.
5. MoonKnight030, first let thank you personally for your beautiful comment concerning the flow of this story, I really try to make it grow naturally, rather than forcefully, but concerning the universe this story is set in, its my own with bits and pieces of others, the whole premise of this story sort of throws the rest of the DC alternate universes out of the window.
6. Now as for Zatanna, all I'll say is that Kal will have more than one potential romantic partner as this story progresses, I want to surprise and intrigue my readers with the romantic part of this story as much as any other part of it, though I will say right now that the usual Lois Lane romance and the pairing of Batman and Wonder Women will not happen here, sorry to disappoint any who hoped that would be the case in this story, I wont sue anyone for likening these pairings, but I want to try some new ones with this story, now that's not to say both Lois and Bruce won't appear at all, but their roles will not be major ones, these two DC characters get plenty of screen time, I want to give other lesser known DC characters a chance to shine as well, also please don't stop your ranting, I like reading rants.
7. Yeye anaawangazia, I'm glad you're enjoying the story and rest assured the Man of Steel speech will be appearing in this story, though not for a good while and not in the way you'd think either, but it will appear, that's a promise.
As always, a shout out to my amazingly supportive friend and fantastic fellow fanfic writer Ricardo753 for supporting my work, go check out his own stories, their T-Rexcellent as well as my new creative consultant and Greek mythology expert Luke5921, proud to have you onboard as an advisor as I write this story mate.
Important note, there's been some slight rearrangement of the story's chapters and names, the order is still mostly the same but a new chapter 5 called The Wolf and the Lioness has been inserted, pushing all previous chapters before it up a number.
Now please allow me to thank all of you who have followed, favourited and especially reviewed this story.
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