AN:1(Aadarm) had said i had meant to spell Aayla Secura instead of my own OC "aala", even though I know about her I just thought that it would be easier to not do the math to figure out when she even would be a youngling. Now I think it would be easier to simply say fuck cannon, she is a youngling comparable in age to zet (I'm just lazy at math)
Just an update nothing has changed story wise
AN:2 I changed the rarity of The Ebbon Hawk to SR and upgraded ant queen to xenomorph queen. xenomorphs are weak to robotic threats but are highly dangerous to organic threats.
AN:3 someone wanted to use a race change coin to just change zet into superman. zet is a highly unmotivated to change character. If you wanted superman in starwars then go ahead and write it and i just think that a stronger foundation in the long term would be better for a higher growth. Anyway im sidetracked it's a joke item race change like turning a dragon into a busty dragon maid sure do try and think what you could use such a thing for zet probably wont even use it normally either.
Anyway star wars trilogy and characters belong to george Lucas and Disney I own nothing except my own oc's.
Added more disclaimers to the bottom
Light shown through the window cover some hitting Zet directly in the face. Today felt nice, there was the calm temple and sunny morning birds had woken him and the feelings i had of the force gave me nothing but being welcome in the temple. Birds were everywhere outside making a massive amount of chirpy noise.
I woke up on my bed with nothing on my mind, I think, i almost fell asleep really i was just meditating while i had my eyes closed. Waking up would bother me too much today. I felt like a sleeping krayt dragon on the sand. I was simply enjoying myself on my bed occasionally turning myself back into an comfortable position. When next i heard thumping progressively getting louder outside of my door. Sighing again for the fiftyfourth time as someone ran inside my opened door jumping on the bed i was in.
Aayla rushed into the room giving me a heel kick to my stomach. "Wake up" she shouted "today we're going to get kyber crystals, that leaves no room for laziness" she told me. She read me like a book cause I would have liked to stay sleeping all day "I want you to leave your laziness here in the temple today - zet!" She told me. Even though i wanted to keep on sleeping, I woke up and gotten dressed to met up with Aayla in the hallway in order for us to meet up with the other younglings.
Lunch was packed very full of every choice to start the day healthy from tasty Zork meat to Filtered green water. I could tell they had put in effort arranging the spread from fruits to fresh produce everything about the meal had substance for every growing Jedis needs. It also came in every size and shapes from stars to cones. From fish dishes to organic food the temple had spent a little extra for today's meal preparation everything except popped soda or fizzy water.
Prospective padawans had seated themselves to enjoy today. It was a time of celebration just like Christmas were every jedi renowned or not knew about the importance of owning a kyber crystal. How it shaped there career. It was this special time of in our life that was filled with focus and commitment to our Jedi ideals. After every one had gotten an extra pepperbread brisket man they all decided start heading on over to where the class was told to wait. Since today was the day we were giong to receive kyber crystals almost the entire class for today were stuck waiting in hanger nine where class was about to begin. It wasn't like people signed off on what we were going to be doing today. Apparently it was the very same hanger that the ship that was taking us offworld was going to dock into. In order to properly showcase the landing we were left watching without any thing to do at the time.
The ship arriving was a CR90 Corvette It was huge and looked like it could smash through two small asteroids and keep on going. The two masters that were planning on accompanying us to ilum was actually Yoda and another younger Mirialan jedi whose name was Luminara Unduli. "Hello my name is Luminara Unduli" she spoke "today we will be traveling to illum, so we can complete the next step of your jedi training" she spoke up atop the ramp leading into the vessel. After introducing herself to us. "Whether or not you idle can be the key to the success of todays mission" Luminara said. Today was either do or die those whose lives were lost were those who got lost in the caves they were going to explore. It was after every youngling boarded on the ship that the ships door closed behind us as we made our trip to ilum.
Today was our big day, the inside of the CR 90 Corvette looked very futuristic to anything I've seen before today, it was probably up to date with everything being sold on the market. It made me think twice about pushing on control paneling in order to not break anything expensive. Soon my ship would surely outclass this ship with speed, once I had a chance to go over it's internals. I'll see it once i pull it out of my inventory space and modify it to meet my expectations later.
Nothing else happened on the ship besides getting to great the other younglings again. In reality it was a long way to Illum and i had hardly had any conversation with any of them before. I actually asked if i could view the captain drive the vessel. Permission to go into the cockpit was granted and i even was given a small lesson about the ship. I had found a glove compartment and stored a user manual in my inventory to study later.
The planet we were coming up on was very light blue and covered with ice amazing but not ideal to release my Xenomorph Queen. The xenomorph race probably needed food and water actually now that I think about it. Now that i thought about it i never seen them eat anything in the movies but they would need hosts not ice in order to reproduce here. The captain of the ship was just finishing his lesson on landing a vessel such as this. We were about to land as I noticed the planet getting bigger, since we were landing i was just about to head back when the door to the room opened with a hiss. Luminara Unduli had noticed that I wasn't with the other younglings. It was very stupid getting outed for not staying with the group of younglings.
But really it was just lecture after lecture within the temple hall's. It should be nobody's business if I wanted to learn more about piloting a spacecraft. It was just something I had to get better at by myself.
The planet was nice to look at coming off the ramp huge mountains the color blue was everywhere it must of just been the atmosphere reflecting itself on the ice to turn up such colors. Blue white and black ravines covered this planet as far as the eye could see.
As we traveled further up the mountain the snow fall grew more fierce and our steps sunk deeper. The force on the planet was different than what it felt like on Corusant it felt like a strong connection but there was no taint of foreign force presence intruding in on it. The temple had a strong connection with every single person who meditated within the temple and to the planet it stood on. It just felt like everyone within the temple held onto the same vision of what the force could do and say and felt. It felt like i was using someone's leftovers to meditate every time I was inside the temple.
Eventually we had made it inside the giant structure Yoda was using reflected sunlight to advance further along into the ice temple. There were multiple puzzles that he solved before we made our way to a giant golden gate holding what appears to be a frozen waterfall inside. After Yoda moved a giant crystal in place that forced the sunlight into a focused beam. When the focused sun beam hit the ice it melted the entire frozen waterfall that formed down into a puddle on the bottom freezing instantly. What appeared to be a tunnel was built with stone that was shown on the other side.
"Once you have found your crystals do not idle inside, once daylight ends the door will freeze over again and no one can really help you" Luminara said. "You will be trapped for one rotation around the sun or nineteen galactic standard days at thst point there can be nothing anyone can do for you". "Before you join those who were lost, you must return before Dawn" yoda said solemnly of the ones that were lost
Entering into the cave network there was a section dedicated to the temple "why anyone would build here was anyone's guess" Zetsaid to himself. Further down the corridor he looked around and all that was around were many more caves that just led to nowhere. Ice spread and covered every surface he traveled down.
There had been more dead ends than he would care to count. The thing was that the force wasn't really telling him to go anywhere. Every winding way split into many other paths in this fortress of ice. Soon enough he stumbled on another youngling going for a crystal.
Aayla jumped lashing out at a ledge just out of her reach. The walls were made out a clear ice any damage done to them had no effect. Aayla had landed on her butt trying to reach any higher up.
I would help, but I found myself quickly running out of time trying to find my crystal. I saw her on her knees frustrated at her inability to make the first jump. Walking up to her I said "have you found your crystal yet?" "not yet but I see that it's up there " she said while pointing at it. Whistling at the climb ahead of her I said good luck walking past her. That crystal was located in the center of the room connected to an ice spike stuck to the ceiling.
"Wait could you, help me" spoke Aayla. I had to actually look up at it again to make sure it was where she said it was. The path to her cyber crystal was not going to be an easy one. looking towards her i said "what's in it for me" She stared in shock she had nothing to offer me it was like someone asking a jedi to spot them money. She had nothing to offer but "I never kissed an alien before" telling her that. "I want to kiss you Aayla anytime I want to" she looked at me in disbelief in how a Jedi be so selfish. I was taking advantage of her and we both knew it. How I could ask such a thing from her but she needed help nodding in agreement "fine".
If any master were to catch us kissing she would blame Zet for being the instigator in all of this. It was a lose lose situation for her if she was going to make it or not. Zet was going to waste precious time finding his own crystal she was practically sentencing him up for failure by helping her with this task.
Later her take
I helped her with the first jump, she made it easily now that I helped her by boosting her jump. I had to do a running jump as well to get up but she grabbed me by the arm so I could climb up alongside, the extra challenging feats were building as we got further up. There were many different higher jumps that we couldn't do by ourselves even if we wanted to. After being subjected to hard athletic stunts for over a couple hours. Eventually it all lead it up to a final jump on top of the highest rock we could find she needed to clear a wide gap with a huge drop in order for her to receive a crystal.
I boosted her jump she hung on the rock holding her crystal. She was hanging on shouting "i got it" until I got to a ledge closer to the ground in order to catch her. I shouted "let go!" As i made a jump to catch her as she fell on a ledge closer to the floor. My momentum stopped us falling as fast as we could. We landed on a ledge further down safely.
Her face was already a dark shade of blue due to the cold her blood rushing towards her cheeks. The exercise we did coloring them even darker shade just that she looked really good in the color blue. I was really going to have fun with her at her expense.
I pushed her against the wall of the cave pushing my lips against hers as i began. She wanted to put up a resistance but accepted it anyway. Many Jedi fell into the trap since it was just that jedi mindset to believe in honor before a thief could come along and steal something like this. She was putting up a noble resistance from trying to enjoy this pushing past her lips I felt her trying to stop me from traveling deeper licking at her pointed teeth. She must have never felt anything like it cause it was foreign and new she tried to take as little pleasure from it as she possibly could. While i continued exploring her mouth as much as I wanted we had very little time remaining in the test. If nothing else my death or failure was all but guaranteed. I actually did have backup plans in order to not die here but i planned to take advantage of this moment for a while longer. She was resistant to all the kissing but I was only getting better at it as I had gotten a new kissing skill from this experience.
"I know you felt like celebrating but you shouldn't had wasted soo much time kissing me." She said, "It was hard not too, I wanted to make sure you held up your end of the deal" i replied. "Return to the group with me you allready failed" she said to me "I can't!" I said "you don't have enough time, Zet stop being childish you'll freeze to death out here, return with me I'll tell one of the masters that you helped me retrieve my crystal!!" She said desperately. I didn't want to return, today had helped me realize how open world my life could be "I could probably survive the night" I replied "Don't linger here if you passed already if you got trapped in here as well i would need to take care of you as well Aayla" i told her. "Think about this Aayla you could become a Jedi master saving people a Jedi of the people" her emotional state was going wild I could sort of feel it but as she settled down against me. I never thought somebody would actually make the choice to get stuck in here with me.
My old plan had been to just find a big enough room and level my cold resistance for a while until I had almost died pull out Ebbon Hawk and sleep doing it again until I was resistant to the cold. To put it simply i would have grinded until i was resistant enough to the cold waited until i was declared dead or missing and left on the Ebon Hawk getting to live my own life. But now since she stayed i could have fun with this. She had started to get hungry after hours of looking for my kyber crystal i could tell we both spent a lot of energy throughout the day today. I threw her a snack a pastry i had kept inside of my inventory from the feast we had back the morning. I stored a whole lot of things from that feast enough to keep us fed throughout the coming months if it turns out we couldbe trapped here that long. Along the way on trying to find my crystal we stopped multiple times where I would explore her mouth more. She started protesting that we had very little time to waste at first. But as the hours went on and on the more it seemed clear that it would be a longer amount of time before we would leave. At first she seemed a bit reluctant but as more time passed my level in kissing got better it seemed that the possibility of us escaping had gotten smaller. I had been getting more and more bold as we continued walking.
It seemed like the lingering thought of freezing to death pushed us to go further in this. It pushed me to grope her tits and ass. Sharing body warmth was simple and another added benefit to this. Spreading her legs I started rubbing her pussy through the fabric of her clothes she looked up at me in surprise.
Jedi as they grow older started to wear cloaks to better embrace tradition but she was wearing a sort of Eskimo styled wardrobe with wraps covering her lekku the amount of sensation she could feel was dulled but I think she orgasmed by the look and blush on her face when i started petting her cloth covered lekku.
Eventually she started to actually cry and whimper since it was now clearly becoming night time. It actually felt like nighttime here was going to be hell. It looked like the crystals surrounding this place had started glowing dimmer now. Everything was getting colder I even was starting to lose health by how cold it became.
I gave her a headpat trying to comfort her she was not amused and she was clearly not in the mood for foreplay. I think I pushed this as far as i could could go but I'm no expert "I'm going to scout ahead" she didn't give a reply too busy sulking blaming my name for not finding a crystal yet. Arriving in a rather large room I went into my inventory and summoned my Ebbon Hawk. Traveling back down the corridor where I left her. I put on my best excited voice. "Hey Aayla guess what I found". She was staring at her knees it can't really be to many things "your crystal" she replied. "Nope, come over here look" I told her to follow me. She sighed as she got back up her feet hurt and her lekku were cold she could hardly believe anything zet found on this planet would be other than ice.
A starship had somehow gotten trapped inside the ice cave. It looked soo old almost ancient but it was still better than freezing out in the caves they were in. "Do you think other younglings were able to find this shelter" Aayla questioned zet "we will see if they left any signs" i told her. Aayla was confused about the ship asking so many questions left unanswered like how it got here. So many questions surrounding the ship but it was going to be saving their lives.
Aayla reasoned that Zet couldn't have the answers to why it was trapped in ice. She thought to herself if it could still fly did it even have power. Who could have left this here and many more questions like what's was left inside. It just left her excited like trying to guess if a cat was inside a box or not". I just shrugged in response having no clue. "Come on let's get inside before we freeze" Aayla said. Relief passed through her system as the ramp leading inside had opened automatically for them.
The doors opened with an automatic hissing probably due to the displacement of oxygen that was going on. Entering inside the ship Aayla noticed that everything looked to be working with no issues at all. There was zero dust to be seen anywhere. It was odd since there were no cleaning droids onboard anywhere none that she could see. Matter of fact there were no droids that could be seen working around or broken in plain sight anywhere on board in any of the rooms. Entering inside the cockpit there was absolutely nothing to suggest that people had been here recently. The two rooms on each end of the ship were connected to the main hold and that room was connected to the cockpit respectfully. Both room's were cabins presumably to house crew. Zet combed through the ship for a bathroom but there wasn't one. "Two rooms for crew but not a single bathroom what!" He said. There was a medical room in the back near the storage area. But the main attraction had been the huge room in the center housing the flight records it was all under encryption.
She was smart but I don't think she'll be able to crack it. It was an old system but it still required a password to unlock. It was likely the birth date of someone important to Revan he was a rather important person forgotten to history after all Zet thought.
Entering the cockpit she checked on the fuel and gas they were both at max capacity. "Zet the fuel is topped off and the ship is fully charged, you don't think someone lives here do you?". "The chances of something living here become slimmer as the night progressively gets longer, but no i don't think we will be bothered here if we haven't found anything yet" Zet replied.
Let her make her own assumptions on why there could be a ship trapped inside a cave system on a Jedi controlled planet.
Aayla was very curious who this ship belonged to it was ancient that much was very obvious. The people who owned this ship were bound to be dead by now. Solar power could explain why it had battery but the fuel in the ship had no explanation to it, it was topped off and there was no space ship fuel anywhere on this frozen planet.
Lemon warning Alien lemons ahead skip to the next chapter if you don't want to read
More disclaimers
I deleted the ecchi parts
I still think the real world is terrible place for children. But the starwars world still has slavery. Arguably it's worse
It is what it is - idk aliens. Although i liked movies that showed terrible living situations and the universe just being a dark space as usual.
Clan of the cave bear, Teeth, 10,000BC, Apocalypto, these are some great movies to watch.
I am simply a dark person with dark experiences like the dark my first kiss 6 recieved a second kiss 9 and by the time access to internet services and x x R rated movies became unhinged grown out of it.
My time in school was terrible and that is what some of the order was based off of. I don't mind children on the internet i won't step in to ban them but i like information being kept exclusive and hard to reach. Just a reminder there is no need to read ahead.
But don't worry couples always stay the same, that's just terrible. learning about darkness is a simple step. Also Aayla is an alien from inside a fiction novel , so no animal's were harmed.
He had to distract her somehow she was becoming more and more curious about how the ship even gotten all the way down here. Whispering in her ear "Aayla" she turned around with a blush. Right then Xet captured her lips in a full kiss making her blush. Her cheeks turned into a deeper shade of blue. Xet carried her into one of the rooms and away from the terminals carrying useful information. Like how there were more important things to do like kneading her ass cheeks together setting her on the bed he started on her thighs an wormed his way up her shirt. Here on ilum they weren't getting their necks breathe down upon and he was just going to follow her lead when it came to going further into this.
Why was he like this their kissing had been going on for a while. She just had to accept that dumb deal about kissing whenever he wanted cause he was getting better. He was groping a lot more than they had promised she thought to herself. "I thought the deal only involved kissing" she thought to herself. "Xet let go" She tried to say. They had been going at it for what seemed like hours during this time Xet had been getting progressively better and better by watching Aayla squirm and blush under him.
Since he allready released the a.i. to secure the ship he no longerhad to worry about information getting into the wrong hands. He wasn't going to let her explore anywhere but inside the ship after they were done. There was literally no way out since the doors would act like they were jammed. Lock down every door that led outside for now Ordis he commanded him.
Tasting her on the double bed I started playing with her tits more. Exploring every inch of her mouth he went to undo her fastens on her eskimo clothes. Undoing the ones strapped to her head her lekku popped out very suddenly and springy. She was underneath him looking back with a very sudden and dark blue blush. Every belt undone revealed more of her body hidden underneath of her layers and layers of warm clothes. I touched her lekku rubbing them gently as I could started gaining levels in massage.
Aayla with her tongue out cursing Zet why he like this!. Delving deeper inside her mouth I started to grope her chest now without any clothes in the way. I started tossing things off her body and onto the floor she had almost nothing on her besides her pantsu and bra both were very plain just as i was expecting since they were probably very standard among woman at the temple.
It went on for quite a while i wanted her first night to adjust to this life style and i will later be pushing her too do more for me later on the line. We did other things as well like eating and playing games on the holotable. Since i had Ordis lockdown communications. It had been three whole days of constant stimulation before she summited to my stipulations.
She started protesting that we should stop before things got too out of hand. utterly ridiculous as I went forward anyway gripping her underwear she was too tired to stop me from eating her out. Opening her legs I dove in sucking on her slit. She was tired but she knew what was happening at the moment. She came on his face struggling within herself she tried her best to suppress her emotions but they were coming out. She became a whirlwind of emotions slightly leaking and combining with the force. "How could anything that felt like this not be acceptable within the order" Aayla had said
Zet was surprised at the sounds she had made here they both were breaking they're promise to the order the jedi lifestyle. Plenty of Jedi throughout the Order had broken and sought company within the opposite gender it was frowned upon and those that were caught were stopped. Plenty of other cases of sweethearts staying together for years while serving as a jedi Xet speculated. He was enjoying this entirely too much to not milk it. To not try and suck milk from her going higher taking her bra tossing it on the floor he started on her left breast switching between them every so often. Sucking her tits trying to make them give him some milk.
Eventually she came again this time on his boxers. Then she began pushing them down showing his huge cock. Running it along her length. He started pushing in until he was fully sheathed in her. Aayla had let out a moan of pure pleasure at her first time. Did twi'lek even have a hymen Zet thought to himself.
He slowly started pushing within her moist walls as she held on to him. Goddam she was tight Xet thought to himself pushing his seven inches inside. She started moaning at his direct action of pushing into her she instantly orgasmed because this was the first time she ever felt this way before. Sucking tossing and turning and humping they didn't stop in the middle of love makeing.
Aayla had gotten pounded from every angle and every counter within the ship. Her legs were spread like the hands of a clock cause of how flexible she was Xet got to pounding her sweet blue tweelik ass. Since they began their stamina didn't allow them to stop for quite a while.
Since they started they had rarely left the other side while rthey were together within the ship. Constantly feeling something for the other, Force above that they felt each other and it was addictive to say the least sharing like a whole giving one another great access to each other's vulnerabilities.
It had been many days that had passed within the ship but it all had to end somewhere. Later they were laying down on some of the beds that were placed together with almost every blanket on the ship placed around them. They were laying together cuddling having exhausted all the energy they had on hand.
Galactic days of merciless fucking lasted well throughout the night. Everything inside the ship was unlocked and we had around a whole nineteen days to get to know one another, it was better to start early.
Meanwhile Yoda had returned to the ship to make a report on what happened. Two younglings had most certainly died today, not just any two. The two who were top of the class in every category he needed to report back to the council it was just something in the Force that "most certainly fucked, he really felt".
New An: sorry about the first draft post im the on doing everything from writing to editing the entire thing in actuality i just place down ideas and string them together. There are alot of deleted scenes that I was simply not working on completing yet cause of story constraints but they are there.
If it makes you feel better about yourself everybody is a hundred years old and no one is going to die of old age within this story.
An: The ship ebbon hawk, the reason I chose that ship was because there are literally three dimensional renderings for it. I'm a lazy writer I need an actual tour of the ship if I'm going to write about it. Ebbon hawk has a lot of that and a detailed look inside on a map. Other ships have maps but that's like having to choose a ship based on what it could look like inside. Also other ships are huge Aayla could have just hid within a larger ship from Xet until time was up we don't want that.
Also should I have the jedi come back to check if they are alive or should I leave them to their own devices for a while. Bye I'll be back if it gets positive reviews..