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I have decided not to post the smut here in fanfiction due to some direct messages telling me that they would prefer not to read smut in fanfiction and the website is apparently against that? Instead I will post all the smut in AO3. Yes, ALL THE SMUT! Even the ones that I was just gonna write in my free time and keep in my p a treon. It has been voted in by my patrons and I to open the smut to the public. I will be posting it there first, and it will be posted in AO3 about a week or so after posting.
For those who will no longer be reading this story, I am sad that you will no longer be reading this...I mean just a bit, cause I just write this for fun and if you want to donate or not that is your decision. Still, I am sad that you will no longer be reading the next chapters which would actually hopefully answer you concerns.
One thing you need to understand about me is that the way I want to write, I don't want to spoonfeed you the whole problem-solution-aftermath in one chapter, I plan to draw it out to multiple chapters just to flesh out the characters.
Replies to reviews
Nudu13 -
1st. Have you ever seen the quiet kid in class suddenly become an extrovert and talk to the first person he sees when it turns out that person just has the same hobbies as him? The concept is similar here, Blake isn't interested in Jaune yet romantically, but to have someone suddenly acknowledge one of her own hobbies that she could indulge in her life of stress makes life just a bit more enjoyable. Think of it as them having a bookclub. No deep secrets being shared, just Jaune and Blake hanging out of their shared hobby.
2nd. Just because your brain knows what to do doesn't mean your body does. You said it yourself that Pineapple Jaune has 1 year of memories, meaning he trained for a year to develop his body. This Jaune is just V1 Jaune, it hasn't been a semester since Initiation. Meaning his body doesn't have the muscles and flexibility to move that way. Dancing is just my own addition to the story.
3rd. While I'm sad that you don't like the drama, I believe it is something inevitable, are you telling me that Pyrrha Nikos won't have admirers that would be jealous if she got with Jaune? I'm just doing the same concept here. Have you never felt flattered when someone told you honestly that you're amazing, good-looking, or smart? That's the blush, not out of any romantic feelings.
Malekari125 -
Have you ever written a story? English is not my native language but I try my best. Sorry for not spending time to fix narrative tenses.
Megakdre100 -
You actually just pointed out one of the plot bunnies I have regarding this fic. Don't worry, that will be pointed out to Jaune in the later chapters.
Random and Guest-
It is my prerogative to keep content to myself or not, just as it is yours to drop this fic or not. No hard feelings from me dude, you do you. I hope you at least enjoyed some of my story.
Arrow in Knee:
No Sun/Pyrrha pairing dont worry. As for Jaune, I actually plan on multiple girls being interested in him. Sorry about that.
Kaiser Umbra:
Thanks for pointing it out man, I knew Sun was originally from Vacuo so my mind automatically went "Shade!". Forgot for a moment that the team was actually from Haven first.
As for the rest, thanks for reading my story! I hope to give you more content soon.