AN: This is my first story so enjoy and tell me what you think and what I can do to make it better.

The prolog: The forest

As the silver moonlight shines on the black fur pelt as the creature steadies itself, its lightning blue eyes locked on it pray. As it lunges, catching it , sinking it fangs in its new meal as the crimson blood trickles down the side of its mouth.

"Really Jolt" said a black and white cat With blue and red eyes.

"What!" Jolt answers

"Why can't you be a normal house cat? You're only two moons old !" asked the black and wight cat.

"What do you mean Smudge." Jolt asked innocently

"What do I mean? You know what I mean! You're always going around killing mice for food when your owner puts food in a bowl for you." Answered Smudge

"That bland garbage? The taste of fresh kill is so much better" Jolt stated with pride.

"Where do you even get them? Do you go to the forest?" Smudge Questioned.

"God no! If I did that then I would be trespassing on Thunderclan territory." Jolt claimed.

"Hay guys" called out a fiery orange cat with amber eyes.

"Hay Rusty." jolt answered the orange cat, as he and Smudge jumped down to him.

Rusty layed down as he asked "So... Jolt, how are you, I heard that you got struck by lightning. And is it true?"

"Ya, but Starclan decided that it was not my time to go." Jolt answered Rusty

"Ok first Thunderclan then, this Starclan" Smudge said in annoyance "Who are they!?"

"Ya, who are they Jolt, you mentioned them every now and then?" Rusty asked curiously.

Jolt sighs as he answers them "Thunderclan is one of the four clans that live in the forest, and as for Starclan look up at the pelt of stars, that is starclan all clan cats who die go to star clan."

"So who are the other three clans?" asked Rusty

"Ya, who are they?" Smudge questions Jolt.

"Hahaha!" Jolt laughed as he prepared to answer them " While there's Riverclan who eat mostly fish and they are good swimmers then Windclan they are the fastest in open planes loyal and true, then Thunderclan brave and caring." Then Jolt's lightning blue eyes turned an icey blue as his tone turned sirius as he said, "Lastly Shadowclan cruel, and untrustworthy they would tear kittypets like us apart."

"W-wow Sh-shadowclan s-s-sounds scary." Rusty said fearfully

"Y-ya." stated a shocked Smudge

"I think that's enough, let's all just go home to the two legers." Jolt said as he jumped up to the fence and headed to his home.

"Ya we should go home." Smudge replied " Well goodnight Rusty"

"Ok goodnight Smudge." Rusty replied

As both of them also left and headed to their homes.


"What an interesting group of kittypets. The black one knows an awful lot about the clans, even starclan. Keep an eye on them, Lionheart." A blue she cat ordered.

"Okay Bluestar will do." Lionheart answered.

"Whitestorm when we get back, get Spottedleaf for me, ok." Bluestar ordered .

"Yes Bluestar, will do." A snow white cat known as Whitestorm answered.

As The three clan cats move out of view into the forest, Bluestar stops and turns her head to see two glowing lighting blue eyes staring at them.

"So he noticed us, interesting." Bluestar stated, as Lionheart and Whitestorm turn to see Jolt staring at them with his guard up.

Jolt narrowed his lightning blue eyes as he had noticed the three clan cats and sat up with pride in his eyes as he stated "Stay on your side of the border thunderclan." then he jumped off the fence .

On top of a rock there were two she-cats, as the she-cat with the dark tortoiseshell and white pelt and amber eyes spoke up saying "Blue you wanted to talk to me?"


"Yes I do Spottedleaf, have you received any word from starclan?" Bluestar asked Spottedleaf

"Sorry but no i ha-." she stops mid sentence as her head is overcome with pain.

"Spottedleaf are you ok?!" Bluestar questioned with a worried tone in her voice.

"I'm fine, I just got a vision from Starclan, they said fire and silent thunder would save the forest." Spottedleaf told Bluestar

"Hmm fire and silent thunder, how can those two be are salvation?" Bluestar questioned


There's the layout, for the beginning of the story. now what will happen next ?