Okay welcome backkk...chapter 2 !!
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Tall dark trees and bushy hedges towered over the trio as they were dragged along the winding path towards the building. The mansion was huge.
Hermione had recognised the dark damp outline of the exterior along with the wealthy designs she could just about picture in the distance. She struggled against Greyback, who remained stable, but she could tell he was weakening from her persistence.
Ron and Harry were held in a much firmer position as if they had given up before even trying to escape, and they thought Hermione was supposed to be the clever one...they had no chance of escaping their fate anymore.
No matter how hard Hermione struggled she didn't have the strength within her to overcome Greyback.
Her mind had time to wonder, as she often did, was there anything that she had learnt from her time at hogwarts that could save her from this peril demise the trio were slowly approaching.
A sudden thought invaded the mind of Hermione granger. But no, she couldn't, I mean she had barely ever practiced it before let alone perform it upon a death eater who had her and her friends lives in his hand, quite literally.
Hermione looked over at Harry and Ron, Harry the wizarding worlds supposed saviour at the hands of his inevitable doom, and Ron, the boy she loved more than anyone on the planet. She had to do something.
She began muttering a hex under her breath, Greyback simply looked down at her at first until he was swept off his feet and slammed into a hedge next to them.
Ron and Harry couldn't have looked more shocked, not as shocked as Hermione of course she'd never have expected to succeed in her first attempt. She looked over to the fallen death eater almost admiring her work.
Before she had time to even process her surroundings, Hermione was struck across the face by a furious Scabior, as if he was intimidated by the young witches magical ability. She hit the floor with a thud, causing her head to knock the ground violently.
"HERMIONE!" Screamed Ron, as the large snatcher covered his mouth to prevent anymore noise.
Greyback got back onto his feet and walked over to a injured Hermione on the floor, embarrassed by what the girl had done to him. He kicked her in the stomach and drove his heal into her head, spilling more of her blood onto the damp floor as it trickled down her face like a waterfall.
Scabior signalled Greyback before he continued his assault to prevent any injuries that could cause less reward for the pair.
Harry and Ron shared worried looks as they glanced at Hermione's limp body being picked up aggressively by Greyback once again. They couldn't talk, scream or even cry for help...this was it.
A sudden voice broke the silent and rather awkward atmosphere. I don't think anyone had realised quite how close the group had become to the gate of the manor.
"WHAT is the meaning of this," said a shadowy figure behind the gate. The figure came into view. The blonde glistening hair and proud but irritable voice gave him away almost instantly.
"Lucius," said Scabior preparing himself, "I've caught 'arry Potter, and his friends I believe."
The snatchers brought the trio closer to the gate, pushing Harry against it revealing the stretched scar upon his forehead. Lucius took one look at Harry, unsure that it was the boy due to his deformed face, but could vaguely recognise Ron as Arthur Weasleys son and an injured Hermione slumped in Greybacks arms, Draco had mentioned her a bit. He looked back to Scabior and turned his back, almost strutting back into the manor.
A few seconds had passed before the huge gates started to move, opening the pathway for the snatchers to drag the captives towards their fate.
They had reached the dark gloomy doors of the manor, the place was silent.
Scabior led the way, followed by Greyback still holding a limp and obviously hurt Hermione in his arms, and Harry and Ron who were being dragged through the double doors by two of the largest snatchers they had ever seen.
The room was huge. A bright moon like chandelier hung from the centre of the ceiling along with dozens of candles surrounding the room providing just enough light. The designs on the floors and walls were all very modern and dark, and so clean it were as if no one lives here. Four tall pillars grew from the floor to the ceiling, providing structure and security throughout the room.
Hermione began to regain consciousness as she was thrown onto the cold floor, she had slowly backed herself up against one of the pillars in the centre of the room. Greyback didn't bother tying her up or holding her down as they could see she was delirious and rather out of it.
Harry and Ron however were not so lucky.
They were jolted to an upright position and tied together back to back, before being shoved into the centre of the room next to Hermione, who still leaned against the pillar hopelessly.
The doors of the room swung open swiftly revealing the whole of the Malfoy family, accompanied by wormtail who scurried behind them.
"Over here," ordered Lucius to his son, "Is this him Draco?"
Draco walked hesitantly across the room. Each step he took, more was revealed to him. He stopped suddenly when he saw her, piled on the floor all bloody and bruised. Her eyes flickered at the sound of his deep concerning breath that echoed the room.
Their eyes met.
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