So looking back at this story there are some things I want to re-do. I feel like I could do the execution a whole lot better and so I'm going to rewrite this story and change some things especially Ash's background.

So looking back at this story there are some things I want to re-do. I feel like I could do the execution a whole lot better and so I'm going to rewrite this story and change some things especially Ash's background.
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