Hello. It seems a little strange that there's something more after the epilogue. This is not a chapter, sorry, I just want to tell you some things and know your opinions. Criticism, whether negative or positive. Also questions.
And I want to apologize for not having put as much violence as I said at the beginning. Most of the graphic violence hasn't been here, but I do plan on it being in the next parts. In any case, the fact that there was no graphic violence does not mean that there were no injuries.
I don't know how to make names, sorry. You may think my names are bad. You are right.
Thank you for reading it despite the bad name, the bad cover and the first chapter with all the mistakes that a beginner can make and that I found out about later.
I have been making several references throughout the fanfic and you haven't told me (or you haven't realized). Among them is a joke that was Vicav's idea, in the Horrifikator chapter, and that I forgot to say.
I started making this fanfic because I saw that there was none that fulfilled everything I would like to see. Most of them have Marinette as the protagonist or relevant, in all of them they consider her good, either from people who want to correct her or from fans. That makes me not want to read them because I can't stand her. The few fanfics that don't have her are about ships and romance (mostly about ships that I don't like or that I don't care about). I thought that if this happened to me, it had to happen to someone else.
I have tried to change many things about the series, starting with the protagonist and putting more charismatic and interesting characters in her place, and giving them a little more depth (or at least I have tried). Tell me if there is any aspect of the original series that you criticize and would like me to change. I have read several reviews of the series and I have tried not to make the same mistakes.
Say everything you have to say: Positive reviews (It's good to know which parts you liked the most). Negative criticism (to improve in the next part. For example, if you think that the boys have appear little. I do believe that). Questions (any doubts you have, anything you think I haven't explained well or haven't explained directly. I may have left something out).
I will answer with comments, since there will be no more chapters in this first part.
For my part, I ask you if you want me to use the miracles with the powers that are in the canon or if I make them up. I say this because the ones in canon are: some very similar to each other, others useless and meaningless and others that are too powerful (like Alix's that I had to change a little or Marc's). Besides, I invented the rule of the existence of miracles before we were told what powers they had and many of them do not fit this rule.
Also, I have more fanfic ideas for this fandom. Fanfics that do not include Marinette, or if she is, she is not a protagonist or good character. In these ideas attention is given to other characters. At least half have the trio or Adrien as protagonists, but not all have them as the only protagonists. If you want to know what those ideas are, I can do them in a separate story or in a forum and we'll talk about them.
Finally, I want to apologize for taking so long to do this first part, but if you want to continue reading, I will continue writing.
As always, thanks to Katherine for helping me through much of this time.
Bye bye. (hearts should go here, but they cannot be put in this app).
