Hey guys, I'm finally updating this story after so long. This is basically going to be a rewrite of the eight chapters as I will move this story forwards. But let me know what you all think of the big changes I made as I was less experienced back then when I wrote this.
Warning: I do not own these shows such as Young Justice, Danny Phantom, Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug and Cat Noir, American Dragon: Jake Long, Randy Cunningham: 9th Grade Ninja, Ben 10, and some Marvel characters/events series. Fictional events that I make are mine as well as my OC's.
Outer Space:
January 10, 12:26 EST
Year: 2010
In the vastness of space, lies a big orbiting station. Since it was heavily guarded both inside and outside, that station was a prison for some of the Plumbers' most dangerous criminals. Most notably one very dangerous criminal who stood above all others.
That criminal happened to be an alien named Detritus along with his captured army. He was originally the ruler and king of his home planet as he and his siblings rules it with an iron fist. Their home planet was called Zompyriate as they have ruled their world for hundreds of years.
But a long time ago they were at war with the Plumbers, Galvans, Kryptonians, and Asgardians as they had a powerful ally that helped captured them once and for all. That ally happens to be the three sibling's youngest sibling who was against what they stand for. Together the Plumbers and their youngest sibling managed to beat Detritus and his other siblings as they were apart across the universe.
The Plumbers decided that having them together in prison would be a bad idea, so in order to have peace, they split each sibling across the universe, far away from each other. With that in mind, Detritus is currently locked in an unpenetrable prison as he is strapped in place. Another sibling was currently locked up in the Null Void, deep in the dimension as she is locked up in solitary confinement. And last but not least, the last sibling is currently locked up on Asgard, where he is imprisoned in the dungeons while chained up.
The Zompyrian siblings, their species name, are all also able to command powerful faction armies. This means that each sibling can command their own faction army that helped them rule their world as they tried to take over worlds. Each sibling wears different color armor as each faction wears the same one their leaders wear.
But currently, deep inside the prison space station lies a prison cell that is heavily guarded and unpenetrable as it was made with some of the strongest metals in the universe. That creature in that prison cell happens to be the leader of the Zympyrians Detritus. He is bound in the air by bonds that are preventing him from using his powers. But even if he did try it won't work as any moment will cause an electric shock powerful enough to hurt him as it won't stop until he passes out.
Detritus looks almost entirely human as he stands at least seven tall with long ginger-red hair as it was unkempt and messy. With having a very long red and brown beard that was also unkempt as it goes low by his chest. His skin was unnatural, but most aliens are, he has gray skin with black patches all over his body. In spite of his hazel eyes and razor-sharp vampire teeth, Detritus seems to have a hazel complexion. But most of all he looks to be a mix of vampires and zombies.
He wears pieces of his damaged armor suit from the war years ago. The only thing remaining is a sleeveless armor torso that bit and pieces were torn off, especially the sleeves. He also wore pants that were torn off from the knee as that too was torn off The armor he wears is a mix of black and brown scattered all over in a unique design.
Suddenly a Plumber in her white body armor suit walks up to Detritus as she passed by his army locked up with a tablet in her hands. They try to grab her but she ignores them as they can't reach her. She looks to be human with Caucasian skin, dark blond hair, and green eyes.
But unlike his captured army, they look entirely different. They are rather short at 5 feet tall, but they should never be underestimated at all. They have bat-like head shapes, with large ears, bald, hazel eyes, sharp feet, and with sharp teeth.
They too have unusual gray skin like their leader along with black marks all over as some are decaying from the looks of them. The only thing they wear is some ragged combat pants that are black and brown. In addition, they are also quite slim in bone structure but have toned bodies.
The Plumbers are an intergalactic law-enforcement organization that makes use of many high-tech gadgets and weapons to protect the planets in the universe from various alien threats and attacks.
Originally, they existed as an independent Earth-based secret government organization also called Plumbers. But years later it expanded throughout the galaxies as threats on Earth decreased making the Plumbers there retire until the next threat.
Looking up at Detritus, who had his head down, as she addressed the villain. "Well, Detritus another day, another miserable day for you." The Plumber agent says with a mock as she looks down at her tablet with some info as she taps a few buttons on it. "As far as I know, you will be stuck here forever."
"Well, that's when you are wrong, Usellna." Detritus looks up angrily as he speaks for the first in a hundred years with a growl in his voice as he uses the Plumber's name. His eyes open with a look of anger asit shows his bright hazel eyes. "When I get out of here, and when I do, I will tear you apart limb from limb until your dead."
Usellna just smirks. "And I'll be glad to let you do that. Oh, wait you can't." She begins to laugh so hard as the criminal growl at her for the mockery he is in.
He begin trying to move through his bonds and tries to break out with no vail as he immediately got electrocuted. "AAHHHH!" Detritus scream in pain for trying to break out. He immediately stops trying as he almost passes out from the amount of pain he was given.
Usellna stops laughing as she looks back up at the Zompyrian. "The only way you can break out of that bond of yours is if the sun is having a solar flare. Which makes this whole place shut down most of the powers including your prison." Usellna says with a smirk. "But the chances of that actually happening are zero…" She was immediately cut off as the power went out causing the lights to turn off in the room they are in.
She spoke too soon as the Plumber station that they are in has powered down due to an actual solar flare that is happening at this moment. It's unknown what causes it, but no one is worrying about it right now as they have trouble on their hands.
"Uh oh." Usllna says in fear of the criminal in front of her as she realizes what is about to happen to her.
"Uh oh, is right." Detritus says with a smirk as the emergency lights kick in. This was the moment he was waiting for as he is not missing this opportunity to escape and resume his plans.
He begins to tear the bonds apart with his super strength trying to free himself. It was tough at first, but eventually, he succeeds as he tears them apart as sparks fly by him. He lands on the ground causing a minor shake as Usellna stumbles a bit as he was looking down. Detritus looks back up at her with his sharp teeth on full display as he is ready to kill her. Usellna tries to run off but Detritus managed to run at super speed in front of her. Detritus has an angry look on his face as he grabs her neck and lifts her up in the air.
"Now what were you saying that I can tear you apart from limb to limb?" He asks the Plumber agent but she was too scared to say anything.
Detritus just smirks as he bites her neck, which made Usellna scream in pain as blood was splattered. Detritus didn't care at all as he continue to suck her blood. When he has enough of his strength, the Zompyriant instantly throws her to the wall. This causes cracks to form on the wall as she falls down from the other side of the room as she began to crawl away from the monster.
She didn't get far as he merely walk over to her and stops her in her tract. Detritus grabs Usellna by the arms, she tries to kick him but it was no use thanks to his powers coming back making him way stronger than her. As he lifted her in the air, he began to slowly tear her arms away from each other as blood was splattered and bone was coming out of her. Usellna screamed even more in pain as she cries out for help, anyone even.
But no one did as he drops her to the ground. Usellna lays there in her own blood almost drowning in it. That's when Detritus had enough of her screams as he steps on her head. After her brain and eyes were smushed together, she was put out for good with a cracking noise.
Soon after, he hears the door behind him as it opens up to his army there, and waiting for their command as they bow down before him.
"My Zompyrian army! It's been far too long since we have made chaos in the universe like before! But now, since we are free I want you all to kill the rest of the Plumbers on board! Then we will set a course to Earth and take over that backwater planet for what they did to us!" Detritus says with anger in his eye but with a smile that is a little psychotic.
I know this is still short, but I just rewrote it as this is a bit longer than it originally was when I made this a few years ago. Like before, the next chapters will be longer than this one.
But here is some more information about Detritus. As you all know his species is called Zompyrians, but they are also called Zompyres as they come from their home planet Zompyriate. Originally their planet was going to be called Zompyrocalypse but I figured it is a bit cheesy, to say the least. Now his powers are superhuman speed, super strength, superhuman healing, enhanced Senses, such as hearing, smelling, sight, touch, & taste, superhuman agility, super reflex, flight, fangs, turn anyone into his species, and razor-sharp nails. He does have weaknesses like any other species in this universe such as sunlight and fire. Anything else like any vampire or zombie weakness won't work on them.
But that's about it, let me know what you all thought about this rewrite in the comments. Make sure to follow/favorite this as well. UltraPhantom out, PEACE!
