Hello fellow one piece fans. welcome to bro onboard.
for this storyline, i'm going to write this story on my laptop. i'm still publishing it on my iPhone like the others today, i just felt like writing it on my laptop, ok?.
before i start making chapter 1 of this storyline. i have bad news...
i've lost my motivation to keep writing thunder Luffy on this site...
don't worry it won't die. i just need to rewrite it on quotev, that's all, really.
i'll try to think up an replacement for it on Sunday, ok?.
until then, please try to enjoy my other story's, ok?.
let's get to the chapter... ok?.
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it's a nice sunny day in the east blue. the sun is shining. the birds are singing. everything is going peacefully...
until, BOOOOM!.
Sabo's boat gets shot at by a world noble. as the boat explodes, Sabo sinks to the ocean.
seeing this, Dadan tells her men to keep Luffy and Ace on land. just like that, she jumps into the water to try and save Sabo.
as young Luffy and Ace wait on in fear of losing their brother. Dadan came back up for air, along with Sabo in her arms.
is he...? asked Ace in fear. he's alive. but he's badly hurt, we need a doctor, asap said Dadan. i'll go get one, you head back to home, i'll bring the doctor there said Makino before running to find a doctor.
just like that, Dadan ran as fast as she can back to her place with Sabo in her arms.
[later that night]
as everyone was waiting, just like that the doctor came out of the boys room. how is he doc? asked Ace.
he's got a burnt scar around his left eye. has a few broken rips and an head injury. other then that, he'll live said the doctor. thank you doctor said Makino. don't thank me. it's a Miracal he survived all that. it's as if some higher being saved him from death said the doctor before leaving.
as Dadan went to sleep. Luffy cried himself to sleep in Makino's arms. as for Ace...
he just stands there, looking at the door to the room Sabo is in.
[3 weeks later]
as the gang began having breakfast. the door to the boys room opened, to reveal a bandaged up Sabo.
hey... how's everyone doing? asked Sabo trying to sound better. everyone was speechless. everyone was silent, until.
SABO! screamed Luffy as he quickly ran and hugged his big brother with tears in his eyes.
hey, sorry to worry you so much... little bro said Sabo as he pats Luffy's head.
Ace walked up and stared at Sabo with hatred in his eyes. Sabo see's this and knows what this means.
so what now?. you and i are done? asked Sabo to Ace. you could have stayed and fight for your freedom. but instead you do this. running from your problems and not staying to fight back said Ace.
i did it to protect you... both of you. is that not enough? asked Sabo. well now thanks to that world noble guy, your family thinks your dead. so you don't need to run away anymore Sabo. your free now, so now what will you do with it? asked Ace.
i know what to do. Luffy, allow me to join you on your journey to find one piece. with me as your quartermaster, you'll find it with me at your side. what say you, king of the pirates? asked Sabo to Luffy.
ok said Luffy still crying. that ok with ya Ace? asked Sabo. yeah, sure. he needs one of us to help him out said Ace.
thanks bro, i'll try to get better in time to join your crew Luffy said Sabo with a smile.
sisisi, ok. please get well so Sabo said Luffy smiling with tears still in his eyes.
as time went on, Sabo got better. after a full recovery. Sabo thought of how to find a new way to fight. he decided to become a gunslinger.
at the age of 11, Sabo stole a pair of six shooter revolvers. when Ace turned 17 he left to be his own pirate.
17 year old Sabo and 14 year old Luffy said their goodbyes and hope to meet him again someday.
[3 years later]
Luffy is wearing a red sleeveless vest. a pair of black pants. some sandals, and his treasured straw hat Shanks gave him all those years ago.
ya look dumb said Sabo. he was wearing a white button up shirt. a black coat. a pair of black pants. some black boots. a pair of brown gloves. and a black top hat.
around his body is two revolvers around his hips. and a pack of ammo for his six shooters.
what's wrong with my outfit choice? asked Luffy confused. red none sleeved vest?. sandals, really Luffy, what pirate wears sandals? asked Sabo.
i think they look cool said Luffy. your going to be laughed at a lot, i just know it said Sabo. i'm wearing the pants you decided for me. ain't that enough? asked Luffy.
i still say you need real shoes Luffy. ok, is that so hard to ask for? asked Sabo. look, we can yell at each other all day, or we can finally set sail. your choice said Luffy as he walked to the boat.
he's going to be a laughing stock with them sandals said Sabo to himself as he walks to the boat.
as they set sail away from their home island. Sabo feels something under the boat. what was that? asked Sabo. what was what? asked Luffy.
just like that, a giant sea king shows up out of the water. the beast looked at the two with hunger in it's eyes.
oh... crap. i thought it was asleep said Sabo. i got this said Luffy as he got up. Luffy? asked Sabo confused. the sea king looking at Luffy now.
[gum gum... pistol!] yelled Luffy as he used his left rubber fist to sent said sea king flying away, never to return. Luffy then sat back down. he then saw Sabo looking at him confused.
what? asked Luffy. the hell you been that strong?. there's no why your that strong, you couldn't even beat the giant Tiger a few weeks ago, without my help said Sabo.
i've just been getting stronger said Luffy smiling. yeah... sure ya have said Sabo as he grabbed the paddles to row the boat.
look out world here we come. i'm going to be king of the pirates! said Luffy out loud. so how big are we going to be Luffy? asked Sabo.
i'm thinking 10 people said Luffy. since when do you know how to think? asked Sabo laughing at his own joke.
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A/N: hope y'all liked the chapter, it's the best i could come up with so far.
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