Author Note:

First I would like to thank those who like my story and left a review, it mean a lot to me that people are interested in my story. I would like to say, i will try and make sure this story turns out well.

Before I get into the review that I read, I would like to say is, I originally had Nibiru set in the star wars galaxy, and if you look it up, you would see that Nibiru is a named world in star war, and that name will still have meaning, but as I thought about it on what I planned to do, I decided to nix that had it set in the Warhammer 40k universe, but where and what time is this taking place I've yet to decide. maybe somewhere around 999M41.

Also I change chapter 1 a little not by much, but enough to make in more in line what im doing now.

Now onto the question by Lord Metallex, the colony is only about one system, situation on one world Nibiru, the system of the same name, has only 7 worlds with most either being uninhabitable for human life, or just right for habitation with only two out of the 7 being gas giants, there is also two asteroid fields thats separate the four inner worlds from the three outer worlds, which themselves are separated by another field.

Though this doesn't mean, they only on Nibiru, they do have several colonies on the two moons of Nibiru and several on the worlds and there moons in the system, along with several space stations throughout the system.

As for how the system and its people had not been attack by demons, orks, or how long they been in the milky way galaxy, well im going to save that little detail for later, to find that out, your going to have to keep reading.

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John licked his lips as he made his way through the field of dead greenskins, his eyes scanning the bodies to see if any would try and get back up, none did, his comrades at the line were watching him making sure he didn't get attacked from this new group or any of the bodies of orks.

His eyes then turn from the field towards the strange ship, it look like it carried several troops like there own transports as several more in yellow armor came out, they took up a perimeter around the ship and the person in robs, several of them face him including what he hope to be there leader, there weapons were thankfully not drawn as they kept them pointed towards the ground as he did the same with his weapon.

"Me and my big mouth," said John as he made his way to them, as he got closer he was able to make out little details, the troops wore helmets, where he could see a small red dot, "They must have only one eye, or thats all they needed to see," he thought as he was now at lest 5 meters from them, but as he move to step over what he believe to be a dead ork, he quickly found it to be still be alive as it jump up and grab his ankle, causing him to scream out as he fell foward.

He tasted dirt as he quickly spit it out and turn his body so that he was facing the greenskin, moving his rifle to face the monster, it roars as he smacks the rifle from his hands, he didn't see were it landed as he was more focused on the monster now charging him.

It raise it's large muscular arms, as it held a massive club, it was just about to turn him into paste, when there was a loud burst as suddenly the greenskin head was gone, its body follow soon after. he turn to where the shot came only to see of the yellow troopers standing behind him, weapon raised.

A smile grace his face as he stood up and went to thank the trooper. "Thanks for that man, if you didn't kill it, I would have been a gonner," John said as the trooper look to him, he then spotted his blaster on his back, noticing to where he was looking the trooper move to take the weapon and handed it back to him, taking the rifle in his hand he smiled again as he turn back to thank the trooper.

But as his eyes went to there face he notice that the trooper had removed there helmet, reveling to him there face, he quickly found out that they were not male and were not of the same species as the robe figure, but human and female.

She had dark midnight black hair, and tan skin, her skyblue eyes were shining in the mid day afternoon as she gave him a small smile. pulling back her hair as she did so.

"You may want to close your mouth, don't want to catch any bugs," she said as John quickly shut his mouth and rub the back of his neck, hoping he didn't look silly.

Clearing his throat he smiled again, gaining some of his confidence as he turn to face her. "The names Private John Booker, but my squadmates call me Ripper," John said, hoping it gave her a good impression of him as he gave her his hand to shake.

She gave another smile, which he was beginning to like as she nodded, taking his hand she spoke. "Gue'vesa'ui Selene Anders," she said as John gave her a confused looked.

"Was... was that your rank, or something?" he said as Selene nodded sheeply.

"Yes, it has a translation in low gothic but for time restraints, I think its best we forgo that, for later, all you need to know is 'ui is Hero or the equivalent to Lieutenant in the Tau ranks," said Selene as John nodded, choseing to accept her words as he turn towards the rob figure once more.

"So is he your Captain or something," said John as Selene nodded.

"In a way yes, come over and follow me, I'll introduce you to him,"

Momments later he was now standing before the rob figure, Selene stood by his side as she introduced him.

"Private John Booker, I would like to introduce you to Aun'el'Dy'aketh'Tzu, he's the leader of the Tau forces that are on board the Brightsun," said Selene as John nodded and gave Aun'Tzu his hand to shake, it took a moment before the man would take it as he look at him, but it didn't take him long before he took it, his towering body guards stood by him as both men smiled.

"Well mister Aun, I would like to introduce you to Sentinel city, wish it was under better circumstance, but with these monsters attack, I swear, there worst then those barbarians to the north and the Beastmen that stalk the forest," said John as the man nodded and for the first time spoke.

"It's understandable, Private John, but with the technology and skills that we have, hopefully we can slay these Orks that assault your city," said Aun'Tzu as John smile happily as he nodded, as he did, a sound was heard, turning they all look to see a shuttle coming towards them.

'It looks like the Kings transport," said John as the group watch the shuttle land, moments later the transport ramp open, revealing a medium build brown rob woman, her arms, chest, and lefs were covered by gray armor as she was flank by two shock troopers, the group decented down the ramp and made there way towards them.

Stopping only 5 feet away the woman spoke. "I welcome you all to Sentinel City, I hope the private been civil with you," said the woman as John stood at attention as both Tau officers nodded and smile gratefully.

"Yes, he's been great," said Selene as John smiled.

"Good, my name is Knight-Lieutenant Nicole Rangefield, I with the Order of the Emerald Blade, part of the defenders of Sentinel city and the Kings family and of his people," said Nicole as the two new commers nodded, John already knew this as hr listen.

"If you come as Allis, I think it best you speak with the King," said Nicole as Aun'Tzu nodded.

"Yes, we must begin a plan to deal with theses Orks, before they have a chance to build up there numbers," said Aun'Tzu as Nicole nodded.

"Yes, do you have any suggestions then?" asked Nicole as they nodded.

"Firstly, you should start by buring the bodies, you may not know this, but Orks are known to release seeds when they die, if you leave them, they will begin to breed more Orks," said Selene as both Nibiruians looks shock.

"Are you sure?" asked Nicole as she looked to the bodies around her, sensing that fhere words spoke true. "Yes, if you don't, they will give you trouble in do time," said Selene as Nicole gave a nod and spoke into her arms comms.

"This is Knight-lieutenant Nicole Rangefield, I need flamers and crew teams out on the field to get this bodies removed and burn," said Nicole as she quickly got a reply as both Tau officer was looking at the tech she was using.

When she was done, she turn back to the group and smiled. "Thank you for the information, but for now we need to talk with the King and the General, we must plan are next move, if you wish we can use my transport," said Nicole as Aun'Tzu nodded, they then turn and headed towards the shuttle as Aun'Tzu nodded for his men to get back into there shuttle and follow them as they followed Nicole into the transport.

What would happen next, John didn't know, but as he watch the bodyguard head back into its shuttle he knew it was going to change Nibiru forever.

End of Chapter 2

Hope you guys like all the changes i did to Chapter 1, i'm trying to build the lore as i go, i findings things i like and then trying to incorporate them into the story, as you read on, you will see more of Nibiru and of its people, and the worlds beyond it, more threats will began to reveal themselves as fhe people of Nibiru begin to build up there force back these fhrest ans hopefully remove these threats.

Well thats all for now hope you guys enjoy this chapter, see you guys next time and see you all later.