Heya guys, up and try I go, for I have the official first Chapter of this fanfic! It's an introduction to one of the characters so it may feel rushed. Thank you very much for the suggestions you made! I will try to give them as much fanfare as I can.
I'm not fully sure when everyone will show up. But for now, I'll have it like this.
Orange Town arc: (Shana, Nami)
Syrup Village arc: (Seryu, Usopp)
Baratie Arc (Po, Sanji)
Arlong Park (Ben, Nami {indefinitely}
this is what I'm doing right now. I shall warn you that I will try my fullest to make this different from raptor10's version.
So you can imagine some characters from this arc get in differently of this character from this arc.
And if your character is OOC. Please PM me!
It's doesn't matter if it's slightly. Just PM me.
Anyway, Have a look.
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In a vast ocean, where it looked like the world had been drenched in water, a small boat was seen sailing alone on the sea. In this boat, there were two individuals, two very important men for our narrative.
Monkey D. Luffy, the future king of the pirates, had his body and head leaning on the end of the boat in an tiresome way.
And, Roronoa Zoro, The man who would become the strongest swordsman in the world was sitting next to his captain.
"I'm hungry." Luffy said dully.
"When the hell are we gonna land?!" Zoro asked.
"I don't know, we're just going with the wind and the waves after all," Luffy replied with the same tone as before. "Maybe we'll land soon enough. I think so at least..."
"You know, I find it very strange that the 'Pirate King' decided to go to sea without any navigation skills." Zoro pointed a little irritated.
"No, it's weird. I just drifted around." Luffy replied. "Weren't you also a bounty hunter traveling the seven seas?"
"I don't remember calling myself a bounty hunter," Zoro answers before looking at the sun. "I went out in search of a certain man. But I couldn't get back to my village. I had no choice so I decided to go after pirate ships to earn a living."
"Oh. So you got lost?" Luffy honestly asked which angered Zoro.
"Don't put it like that!!" Zoro snapped before slamming both his hands on the boat's floor causing it to shake. This resulted in Luffy's Straw Hat flying overhead. Time slowed down in Luffy's mind.
"Gah!" Luffy saw his hat near the boat's sail.
"Shanks!" He yelled which confused Zoro.
More before anything happens. The screen is distorted.
SOMEWHERE IN JAPAN.
It felt like we jumped several years into the future. In the other side of the world. There was a quiet part of the world where the so-called 'Asians' lived. One of those parts that we were in now was Japan.
A beautiful place where the base language was Japanese. There were several huge buildings and a beautiful light that illuminated the streets. It was night.
While it looked like a normal town. Something a little more sinister occurred at random.
Humans had their 'existence' devoured by creatures called Denizens. They turn into 'torch's when their existences go down and minimize. where they wait for death to arrive.
But on that same side there are Flame hazes. People who have made pacts with powerful entities and fight these creatures.
We came here to experience one of those flame hazes. Who was in one of the houses playing guest.
SAKAI RESIDENCE.
It was a small house. One in which possibly only a mother and her child lived. Who were often visited by a girl.
Sitting on a sofa waiting for her friend to come out of the bathroom, was a girl with long brown hair wearing a black cloth, and below her head was a luminous pendant.
Shana, The flame-eyed crimson hunter can be seen.
A flame haze whose primary purpose is to maintain balance between the real world and the crimson world the Denizens came from.
Once, an icy selfish girl with no sympathy for any humans and wandered the world alone. Thanks to a boy named Yuji Sakai, she became kinder and more heroic, even hating solidarity. A better person she became. she also ended up falling under a curse caused by the boy.
Love.
She was in love with the boy. it's like you've never felt it. She didn't know what to do.
But, what was she doing now? Well...
While waiting for the boy to come out of the bathroom maybe to start an activity. She forced herself to watch a movie about. Pirates? What a coincidence, no?
The pirates she watched looked pretty weird. She didn't know anything about the topic. That had been her introduction. And without Yuji by her side. Things were going to get tough...
She saw the movie pirates discovering various places. The search for treasure. They visited various islands, fought other pirate gangs. And they also drank together.
"Yar!! Cheers to cayman for saving us from that darned cave that was about to explode. Cheers!"
Shana watches quietly. Puzzled it seems.
'It appears you are taking your attention very sharply to the tv, shana.' The pendant that was the lock for the being Alastor glowed.
"Its. that…" Shana stopped midway through. "I'm not sure. It's strange. Instead of living a normal life, they. decide to risk their lives for treasure. Why? There's no easier way to get rich. What's all this for. And still drag a bunch more people into your head. This all seems very silly. Like a joke taken seriously for no reason."
"I imagine that in the world they live in, this would be the single easiest way to get rich." Alastor glowed.
"More like this. They aren't afraid to die. Are they that confident? I still don't understand why anyone would sacrifice themselves for money. If you for someone i would get it. But. That sounds like veganism. I don't understand why anyone would want to become a pirate. The risk of dying is too grand. Because someone would waste their own lives for something they may not get. Why not live like all the others."
"Perhaps... there could be something deeper in this. As if. they were looking for something far more important than anything in the world..."
"Like what?"
"...I don't really know that anymore. Maybe a secret ambition."
"An ambition..." Shana said taken back.
'Maybe I'll ask Yuji's mom.' Therefore. Shana got off the couch and followed the sakai lady.
Until...
"Ah!" Shana felt the presence of someone very powerful. Taking note of this she immediately drew her sword and ran outside. But that's when she noticed something strange. When a Denizen attacks the real world. Time stops completely with the exception of Flame hazes. But in this case Shana felt something different. Stronger.
"What...!?" Shana yells.
"I can fell it too. Its not a denizen. It's something. More..."
"But. How? I've never seen this before. Nor did i felt it. What's wrong with me!?"
"Calm down, Shana. Stay on you guard for the time being. We'll figure this out later."
"Right. Thanks Alastor." Shana then began to look around. "Its not somewhere in the city. Its appearance is specifically here. I know that much."
"Shouldn't we call Yuji?" Alastor suggested. Shana then blushed after remembering that he was taking a shower. a few seconds later she quickly turns her head and says. "I don't want to bother you. We can handle this."
She began to quickly move around the house. In search of the sigh. This took 2 minutes. Eventually she climbed the stairs and found herself on the roof where the energy was stronger.
"It's here!"
A figure in black with no face, no facial expressions, no eyes was seen.
Shana suddenly felt a chill down her spine, after seeing it. Something began to organize itself and fill her head. Something heavy.
'Huh? What feeling is that? What is he doing with my body?!'
"Shana! What is it?" Alastor glowed in worry.
"I...I...I don't know. it...did... something to my body..." Shana struggled to fight against the feeling. "My head is heavier... What kind of technique is this?"
"Not this one..."
"Huh? What do you mean? Alastor, do you know?"
"I think so. if I'm wrong. It's called 3am's fog. And a dark cloud with unknown origins that only certain Denizens can make. This fog will insert itself into a flame haze's head and take up some of the space making it heavy and thus weaker. A weapon against Flame haze's if you must. "
"What... I haven't heard that before... why don't you ever notice me about Alastor?"
"I'm sorry, Shana. i couldn't remind myself."
Shana then began to slowly fight the weight on her head. "It doesn't matter. A fog won't defeat me so easily." Shana said before running towards the monster and swung her sword towards it. "HAH!" But she felt nothing. "!?" It was like a ghost. Shana couldn't feel the animal's flesh. And before she could do anything... The figure appeared behind her... Then. He sent out a hand as black as coal.
Which seemed to be going to Shana's stomach. The hand was very fast. She quickly went to Shana's stomach. And before she could say anything.
The screen went dark. And a grotesque sound is heard.
Splash*
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I had too much fun writing this.
Here's the deal.
have you ever read 'the best crew to find the one piece' by raptor10?
well its basically that. but i'm gonna try to spice things up to differentiate this story from the original work.
starting I'm skipping two arcs ahead. We'll start off with Buggy.
More changes are coming but for now.
I wanna open something up. I'll open a character request SYOC thing. Kinda like total drama fanfics.
You can send me characters from Anime and manga media or video games that you would like to see via this fix's comment section or PM and maybe they show up. If your character makes it. I'll add him in the story's cover.
Of course I prepared some rules to keep things in balance.
1. No ocs. (I wanna work with existing characters)
2. Defenseless characters from that one visual novel or slice of life or humor anime are okay. (I know that sounds like a shitty idea but I can make it work. I just need some devil fruits. If your character generally can't fight add the devil fruit you think he should eat. You have to create your own or take a fan-made one obviously.)
3. No Touhou. (I already have a touhou x OP story. If you wanna see touhou characters on the one piece universe go read that.)
4. Villains are fine. (if you want me to redeem someone from allowed media just say the word!)
5. No super OP characters. (and example is Goku or saitama. I don't know how to nerf people so Saitama is banned. Please suggest characters in the same or slightly stronger language me of power of Luffy. Even tho I included Goku you can still request characters like him if you request a certain version of him. Say like, kid buu saga Goku.)
(PS: After thinking about it i decided to remove the western show characters restricted rules after a certain PM came to me. You can request those now if you want to.)
You don't have to give me info about that character. I am look up. You can also request another character from an implemented media.
Okay. I'm gonna show you the first xover character that will show up. You can take that as a sort of example.
Orange town.
NUMBER 1:THE FLAME HAIRED HUNTER SHANA
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And now must recently from a PM of Ultimate gax the fifth emperor who is also responsible for changing my mind on rule 2.
Arlong Park
NUMBER 2: OMINIDIRECTIONAL WATCHED CHILD, BEN TENNYSON. (10 YEAR OLD VERSION)
(Medias: Shakugan no Shana, Ben 10,Akame Ga Kill,Kung Fu Panda,?,?,?,?,?,?,?,?)
I'll be waiting for you requests...
Next chapter will be the real chapter.
Feel free to say whatever you like about this. So I can see where to improve!