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PREVIOUS CHAPTER REVIEWS/COMMENTS
AO3 JustTed(Chapter 5): So 1-A is extra fucked and they probably gonna find a comboluted way to blame Iruku for it, gotcha...
:)
Response: Grammer aside, you were not wrong and will continue to not be wrong about this.
AO3 JustTed(Chapter 7): And now we know why the title is what it is...
:3c
Response: When I read this I burst out laughing making my family wonder what the hell I was watching at the time. I imagine almost everyone reading this chapter had that same thought or reaction as well.
AO3 JustTed(Chapter 8): :3
Response: I love your profile pic and how you type that same sideways smiley face every chapter. It is also nice to see a comment here and there added to it as well. I appreciate the love for my story never change on me!
AO3 P3r937u41Wh1593r1ngW116F1r3(Chapter 1): Thanks for the chapter.
It feels like an interesting premise, and I appreciate paving over some of the obvious plot holes.
I have no idea on the title though.
Not to be rude, but how likely are you in continuing this?
Because I would read it, just don't wanna put emotional investment in it if you're not gonna publish much more.
Regardless of your answers, have a nice day.
Response: As you can tell I have obviously continued this story and intend to do so till I reach a point where I feel it is complete. I am glad to read it when people acknowledge the obvious plot holes and lack of logic in the cannon. It seems that people nowadays mix up acknowledge the flaws in something you love with hating it too quickly. So it was refreshing to see someone comment on the plot holes instead of ignoring them.
FFN shirkahn(Chapter 9/10): Nice update. Also, how much longer will Izuku have a female uniform?/Nice update! Also, was Toru spying on Izuku and Itsuka's match before or after her match? Eager to see this story continue.
Response: I appreciate your positive reviews and curiosity as to where the story is always heading. Especially when there are always people who cannot understand the subtly of a joke or gag and instantly hate on a story because of it. To answer your most recent question it is yes, as for chapter 9… well that uniform still has some final missions to fulfill before it hangs it heroic femboy cape up for good and that is all I can say for now.
FFN 94blake(Chapter 1): Every character feels like a bad caricature of themselves. Izuku is an absolute mess he's written so ridiculously. I was hoping it'd improve but should have known better with the stupid cross dressing inclusion.
Response: Obviously if certain things about someone perception of an another changes then it can affect how they interact as a whole. Stuff Ochaco crushing on Izuku is what made her work out the bad/shallow parts of her personality. That is why I do not complain when people write her with Bakugo and she becomes a total jerk. Cause that is a believable shift in personality. As for the crossdressing part… well clearly despite this being a review for chapter you read up to at least chapters 2 or 3. If you did not like crossing dressing or have a thing against that kind of lifestyle or classic anime gag then you should have left immediately after chapter 1. If small stuff like that ruins the overarching narrative and one of the themes of the story of not judging a person without getting to know them. Then clearly you made a mistake.
FFN LaUgHiNgmaN (Chapter 4): Can't wait to see the ball drop on Class 1-A.
Aizawa is in deep shit for seemingly and most likely vaguely explain and not explain the situation.
Aizawa should've said Bakugo is a bully and tormented Izuku and Izuku just recently had awaken his quirk on the Exam day. Done deal, simple as that but since this happened showed he didn't do that... Such "irrational" and "illogical" way of doing things in his terms.
He should've also considered the possibility of people being law abiding citizens and not use their quirks if they're either powerful or dangerous to train without specialize facilities like UA should have.
Give us more awesome chapters Kouji17!
Response: Oh if 1-A is disappointing you now just wait till you see how bad they can really get. As for the explanation, as I'm sure you have read by now, he was extremely limited in what he could reveal to the students. As for people being law abiding citizens. Yeah I also thought it was odd how no one question why Bakugo with a destructive quirk like his that came from a middle class family had such good control over his quirk. It is almost as if he was using it in places where he legally could not do cause of public safety reasons… but yeah he was always a jackass from day one with his approach tragic backstory or not. As always I appreciate the support when you post reviews for my stories.
FFN LaUgHiNgmaN (Chapter 6): Eeew. Kaminari going commando, really man? In a school where teaching how to use their Quirks would occasionally has a possibility of wardrobe malfunction or wrecked in training.
*Facepalm* I can see Kaminari doing that and considered it "cool" if ya take in account who are his immediate friend is. Well bad rumors will get spread around about him along with his racist comment and him going commando. Remember most Quirks are a dime a dozen, pretty sure a good amount of fellow students around heard what he said.
No one would want to associate themselves with a racist. It tends to tell people what kind of a person you could be even if it very untrue.
And Aizawa being the lazy teacher if Izuku wasn't there in his class... God the only reason I can see why any of his previous students graduating from his class is because of the other teachers' efforts in making up for Aizawa's lackluster "performance" as a teacher.
I wouldn't be surprise if in off scenes of MHA Canon the students went to other teachers for help on lessons Aizawa only mentioned and not explain or properly teach.
Response: I agree that quirks like his are easily replaceable, especially since he seemed to never really try to control it. I had the same thoughts about the students going to the other teachers for help and just laughed at the idea of Midnight getting asked to stay late by the students so she could help them.
FFN LaUgHiNgmaN (Chapter 7): Da~mn! Did not see that one coming... Pun not intended.
Also while those who didn't hear but saw the beating of Denki, what about those who heard what he said?
It'll be rumors clashing with each other and people might get out of hand on what really happened. Oh the small chaos it'll cause might be fun.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response: Well my pun was fully intended and remember when it comes to a high school it takes less than a day for gossip to go around the whole school.
FFN LaUgHiNgmaN (Chapter 8): LOL Like father like son I guess.
Surprise that the Midoriya family is upper middle class/low high class wealth family... So Izuku is the Yaoyorozu of class 1-B? Only more down to earth kind of rich kid.
LOL Well Nejire will be in for a surprise to find out Izuku's gender and situations... Knowing her, she'll help out if she can whenever a similar situation happens.
Looking forward to more future chapters.
Response: Considering how Izuku mother never did anything about Bakugo attacking him on a daily basis in cannon. I figured she was one being purposely neglectful like a two faced you know what. Or two he was so good at hiding it and had an allowance big enough to buy a new school uniform every time Bakugo destroyed his uniform without having to ask her for the money for the new uniform. I figured to get an allowance that high his family would have to be fairly well off due to his father 'Overseas' business in 'America'. But Yeah, I figured he got that obsessions for quirk from his dad in cannon given his mother personality. As for Nejire… well the sports bra will come back and an explanation to go with it when she tries to give it to him I assure of that. Just not when I will do it.
AUTHORS NOTE
I HAVE CALCULATED Jurota Shishida HEIGHT IN HIS TRANSFROMED STATE BY COMPARING HITOSHI SHINSHO HEIGHT IN A SCREEN SHOT OF THE JOINT TRAINING ARC. THOUGH IT STILL HAS SOME GUESS WORK INVOLVED SO IT MAY STILL BE A BIT WRONG BUT I FEEL I AM CLOSE ENOUGH. I COULD NOT FIND CANNON CONFORMATION OF HIS CONFIRMED HEIGHT IN HIS TRANSFORMED STATE SO IF SOMEONE HAS GIVE ME THE LINK TO THE SOURCE. THIS IS THE FOLLOWING FORMULA I USED GOING WITH THE SCULPTURE RULE OF THE HEAD IS 1/8 AND I AM USING SHINSHO HEIGHT OF 70 INCHES. I ALSO ADDED HALF AN INCH AT THE END TO ACCOUNT FOR THE SLIGHT DIFFERENCE IN THEIR FORHEADS BASED ON THE PHOTO I USED. A IS HEIGHT AND B IS AMOUNT HEADS TALLER SHISHIDA IS COMPARED TO SHINSO. FOR ANYONE WONDERING I DID THIS BECAUSE IT IS SIMPLY EASIER FOR ME TO WRITE HIM IN FIGHT SCENES IF HE HAS A DEFINITIVE HEIGHT AND I WILL BE USING HIM IN MORE FIGHT SCENES AS THIS STORY WILL HAVE 1-B AS THE MAIN CHARACTERS NOT 1-A.
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IZUKU MIDORIYA POV
Surrounded by enemies I stood shoulder to shoulder with Tetsu and Kendo as we were at the forefront of the pack with my only friend who transferred from 1-A to 1-B with me at my back. Even so I saw no reason to worry for once in my life as I had my classmates, my friends by my side. Giving a subtle nod to Tetsu and Kendo after locking eyes with each of them by means of a sideways glance getting nods and smiles from both of them. "All right everyone… let show them that we are heroes, NOT THEIR PREY!" I told everyone as we ran into the fight before us in groups.
UA TRAINING GROUND ALPHA
THIRD PERSON POV
FAKE APARTMENT BUILDING
Shishida had to rush up the staircase to get to them in the upper floors before time ran out on him, especially if they were on the top floor like he was beginning to suspect. Passing Kamakiri on the stairs he had to leave his partner tied up, even when they managed to bite through the duct tape to yell at him to untie them. 'Even though I am pretty sure I have them beat when it comes to raw power, it is still a two on one. And most likely they both will rely more on techniques than raw strength to make up their small but lean physiques.' Shishida thought to himself as he tried to recall anything specific Kendo mentioned about her martial arts. However, no information was being recalled, since it has just been a few days since class started it only made sense since the school year just started. "Oh well, looks like I will find out when I meet them up at the very top of this place." He said to himself as he was one flight of stairs away from the penthouse.
Deciding to abandon any stealth, he went with shocking them with an over-the-top outburst upon entering hoping to eliminate Kendo first as she seemed to be the stronger one of the two. Transforming to his full size, Shishida smashed the wooden door to pieces after rearing his fist back while he ran. However, despite jumping to add a little extra impact to the blow it did instantly break open as his had got stuck in some sort of desk on the other side. A half second later he then got a low powered shock, so no serious damage but enough to make his right arm that he punched the door with go numb for what he expected to be the next few minutes. Fortunately, it was not completely numb so he could still move it enough to block but that was about it. The next strike broke through as he smashed it with a roundhouse kick stomping in to exaggerate his presence while looking around the room.
Spotting the broken lamp on the floor that he suspected Midoriya rigged to shock him earlier when he tried to punch through the door. Noticing Midoriya hiding behind Kendo he assumed Midoriya was more of a strategist than an actual fighter, so he decided to disregard him for the moment and take down the seemingly bigger threat in Kendo. "YOUR GOING DOWN!" He said using his left arm to deal a haymaker that Kendo easily dodged before jabbing his under his ribs.
Kendo was shocked that he did not seem to feel it rolling away just in time to avoid getting swatted by him. Using her enlarged hands, she diverted one punch with her left while uppercutting him with her right. However, that too did very little to actually damage him, it still did a lot more damage than her earlier jabs, but his bulkier form shielded him from most of the damage. Not expecting his full powered form he had told them about earlier to pack this much of a punch, Kendo was unsure of what to do till Izuku punched them from behind sending Shishida stumbling forward.
As much as the fur covered teen wanted to think it was just a lucky punch, he felt considerable muscle behind that hit. Turning around going over them both he now realized when he looked closely at the small part of Midoriya arm that was exposed that the muscle on it he saw was impressive. Unsure of whether or not Izuku could match his strength he decided to focus on Kendo still as he still wanted to at least tie the match.
"When I grab his punch run around him, I will try to hold him down while you try to knock him out with your chopping technique." Izuku whispered to Kendo to the point where even she barely heard it even though she was right beside him.
"Ok, whenever you're ready." She whispered back, getting a nod in response to what she said.
OBSERVATION AREA
Everyone except for Vlad King, Rin, and Kamakiri were surprised to see Izuku was so strong despite his small size as well as his gentle looking face. The three who were not surprised have already seen him fight up close and knew in terms of physical strength he was up there with low tier strength enhancement quirk users already.
"Sir, what exactly was his score on the physical fitness tests when his other classmates were using their quirks?" Sen Kaibara asked confused by what he was seeing for someone the class 1-A somehow tried to justify expelling.
"He got eighth place, though the students who came in ninth and tenth came close to his scores." He told his students recalling the video of it Nezu showed him to show how strong the young man was compared to the other students. This revelation clearly shocked his students, not that he could blame them as he was surprised himself when he found out how high they placed. 'Damn All Might, I think you may have given him a little too much muscle before getting into UA.' Vlad King could not help but think to himself that this much was a bit extreme for someone as young as them. After all it was not like they were expected to carry the weight of the entire world or something else ridiculous like the fate of humanity, right? The entire class, including himself winced at the counterattack when they saw the body shaped indent it left in the floor.
FAKE APARTMENT BUILDING
Izuku moved in without hesitation dashing at Shishida ducking beneath and aiming for his solar plexus, this was to make sure Kendo had the time to go around. However, he then saw a right punch coming his way, unable to dodge or block Izuku did the only thing he knew he could do. Grabbing the arm Izuku spun around kicking Shishida right foot from behind with his own to try and get it off the ground. He managed it throwing the beastly teen over his shoulder into the ground hard, leaving an actual indent in the ground shaped like them. Though it was only a centimeter or two deep it was still impressive considering the height difference between the two at the moment.
However, it was not enough as Shishida after a mere two seconds had already recovered rolling onto his stomach before pushing himself back up. Due to the flip Izuku and Kendo were still in front of him, this changed position of hers where she was now behind where he was a moment ago made him realize their plan. "Distracting me so she could knock me out from behind? Good plan, but unfortunately for you I have full use of my arm back now." He said stretching his arm lightly before rushing in for his own attack on the pair. They both had jumped to different sides to avoid his two balled up fists as they smashed a hole through the floor, luckily for them he knew they could easily dodge that. Hence the reason he used enough floor to break through the floor to the floor below them, despite it being enough to cause significant injury.
Though Vlad King still warned Shishida over the PA to hold back to be on the safe side even though he was sure they predicted that outcome as well.
Turning to face Midoriya as he felt confident his collar and his muscles would be enough to block any chopping attack she could do while he took out Midoriya with one hit. Moving in with a right hook he expected Midoriya to be thrown into the wall due to the impact of his punch. But to his surprise the green-haired classmate had caught his arm, holding it down with both hands so he could not pull away. Kendo enlarged her hands and grabbed his other arm to prevent him from using it to pry himself free from her partner.
"You can't hold me back for-" Shishida began to say before the alarm went off again.
"Shishida had been eliminated! The winners are Midoriya and Kendo." Vlad King said causing the beastly teen to turn to Midoriya. Seeing now he did not feel the tape Izuku wrapped around his arm his arm they were holding realized if he did not take his eyes off of them he would have seen them doing it right away. Mentally he acknowledged that he deserved the lost for underestimating Midoriya like he did just because they appeared to be too gentle.
OBSERVATION AREA
Izuku and Kendo received a lot of praise when they got back to the others over their performance against the acknowledged two best fighters in class at this point. Shishida was acknowledged as one of their top three fighters due to his raw strength while Kamakiri gave off the feeling of having been in more fights than any of them. Though they still needed to see him fight in actual one on one combat to see his depth of fighting ability to confirm this since he got taken down by a sneak attack by two people.
"All right so would you say was the MVP of that fight?" Vlad King asked his students already knowing the obvious answer. As he expected everyone said Midoriya was the most valuable person for the fight and began listing off his incredible feats during the match. All were surprised to find out he could carry almost six hundred pounds for a good few minutes before inevitable fatigue caught up to him. Keep in mind they also praised Shishida and Kamakiri for their efforts. But the second one was too disgruntled to be approached right now as he was embarrassed about his defeat. It was during all this landslide of questions and compliments that Izuku was the first to notice the floating pair of gloves and a pair of boots.
"Hagakure?" Izuku asked aloud as everyone turned to where he was staring to finally notice her.
"Hey Midoriya, your fight was really impressive… a lot more than mine was that's for sure." She said dejectedly now making the 1-B teacher realize why Nezu sent him the footage during Midoriya and Kendo fight. The footage being of her fight as well as the security camera footage in the monitoring room after the fight had occurred for some reason.
"Oh, come on now it could not have been that bad." He said seeing the gloves slump a bit. "Would you like our opinion on the matter?" Vlad King asked the students who responded with a halfhearted reply about how the criticism cannot get any worse. This made red flags go off in both the teacher and the students' heads but decided to wait till after they saw it as none of them had anything important to do after school today. That and the fact that the 1-A student had wandered their way after the first training exercise was something odd.
Vlad King was to put in the simplest way possible to describe… upset with Aizawa students. Ignoring your teammate's suggestion? Disregarding a fellow hero as helpless or in their way just because their quirk was not specifically suited for combat? Ignoring the constant danger of the bomb in scenario? The last one was based off the reckless attacks they launched at the villain team standing beside the bomb and in his eyes was one of the worst mistakes they made in the exercise. His students were not much better as they began yelling about how her teammates treated her.
Turning to Hagakure he told what he felt like she needed to hear, not to mention also use this to explain collateral damage to his class. "You did a good job considering the power difference you faced, and you attempt at teamwork shows you understand an important part of hero work." He said as he heard her sniffle assuming it was from barely avoiding crying due to getting acknowledged here. Deciding to prevent more friction between his class and 1-A, he would review the video of the observation room later. This was a smart move as after telling them how she got into a fight with the remainder of the class after they berated her for in their opinions getting in the way of her two teammates.
Fortunately, when she told him All Might and a few of them backed up her decision supporting her, he was relieved the new teacher was not making any serious mistakes like Aizawa had. Unfortunately, this also got his class riled up even without watching the video of the observations room themselves, so at this point since they were likely to find out anyway, he figured a more objective view of it would be better. Getting her permission, he played it on the tv for the class to see reminding them to not cause trouble by picking a fight with them afterwards.
TODOROKI HOUSEHOLD
(ENDEAVOR TRAINING DOJO)
THIRD PERSON POV
"DAMN IT!" He exclaimed punching the punching bag for the several dozenth time in a row with his fiery fist since he began. Luckily all of the equipment as well as the walls themselves where treated to be fire proof in case he ever lost his temper like he was doing today. For the flame hero it was bad enough when his son entered his rebellious phase before entering UA, but then his information network sent him a photo they scrounged up from the internet. Normally he would toss it aside as a fan edit, but there were several and his people have confirmed none showed any signs of being doctored in anyway.
The photos themselves showed All Might training and showing an almost paternal familiarity to a kid with dark green hair. However, he did not recognize the face, this and finding absolutely nothing on them not even a name meant one of two things. First is that this kid was just some random brat that All Might took under his care. But that seemed highly unlikely to him as he was sure the number one hero would never waste his time with a complete stranger instead of fighting crime. His dedication to fighting evil was why he respected the man enough to consider him a rival.
His second idea was that All Might had a secret family and the coward was hiding them instead of ensuring the peace by showing they had a child to take his mantle like he did with Shoto. The reason he would normally consider was that their quirk was weak, but then logically they should not bother training them if that was the case. In other words, while he created Shoto to surpass All Might his rival had a child of their own to surpass them creating a new obstacle for him to overcome. It was after his son's first day at UA that he struck gold, as a child he described that was expelled matched the description of the photo he had. From what his son told him about the first day was that they were a girl, and that fool Eraserhead kicked her out of class due to jealousy of superior quirks like his and All Might.
Normally he would not care if that roadblock got removed by someone else… if they were a boy that is. But a girl meant that he had lost out on so many possibilities to beat All Might. If she and Shoto had a child in the future then the combination of All Might strength and his own would guarantee the ultimate hero would be born. On top of that, if that did occur then he could, no he would force her to cut all connections to All Might as they say 'rub salt in the wound' for all the trouble All Might made him go through.
"I will have to ask Shoto if she was really expelled or just demoted, knowing that rat they probably just moved them over to general studies to continue collection tuition money from them. After all, if All Might is trying to hide his family I doubt even he would be dumb enough to exert pressure on them for a random student." Endeavor said sighing in mild frustration as the physical training calmed him down enough to think straight… well his version of thinking straight.
Chugging a water bottle till it was empty he crushed it in his hand throwing it aside to a corner of the room for now. "If she is anything like her father I cannot force her and Shoto to get together. Instead I will have to offer her work at my agency as a secretary as a part timer on the weekends for now and a full time position after she graduates. That way I can give the fool the illusion of slowly falling in love with Shoto before I propose a marriage between them." He thought aloud his simple plan delivering one last punch knocking the punching bag loose off it chain before walking out of the room collecting his water bottle he tossed aside before. Sneering all the way to his office, the thought of finally being able to beat All Might was too much for him to contain his joy. Not noticing the terrified face of his daughter on the other end of the hallway hiding behind the wall where could not see her when he walked out.
