AN: Come on, people. Throw me a bone. Until they fixed this problem to allow us to check out the number of views, I need to know how well this story is really doing. Let's try to get those reviews going. I'll even take story ideas. I just need a character and a plot.
"My name is Koji. This happened to me and my brother."
"This happened when I was eighteen. My twin brother, Koichi, was dating this girl named Lily. I met her once and she seemed like a nice person. Koichi liked her and I trusted my brother."
Koji finally met Koichi's new girlfriend. She had wavy black hair with part of it tied back. Lily seemed harmless and Koichi really liked her, so Koji gave her a chance.
"Everything seemed normal, but as the relationship between those two continued, something happened with my brother. She managed to convince Koichi to dye his hair black, like imagine the darkest shade of black that you could. Koichi was always a nice guy, so he never really argued with her about it. He probably didn't see a problem with it. On top of that, every time I saw him, Koichi was getting more and more pale. Koichi looked terrible and I knew Lily had something to do with it."
As time went on, Koichi began to change in appearance. He was beginning to look terrible and it was unsettling. Koji didn't like what was happening to his brother and he knew it was all because of Lily. He had to do something.
"After not seeing my own twin for months, I started to get worried about him. I decided to go confront Lily about this. I went over to where she lived and knocked on the door, but it was Koichi that opened the door. When he did, I barely recognized him anymore. He almost looked like the living dead, almost like a vampire or a zombie."
Worried for his brother, Koji went to confront Lily. When he arrived at her place, Koichi opened the door. Koji was shocked to see him. Koichi had dark black hair and looked pale like Koji said, but he looked like a walking corpse. His face looked creepy with how he was smiling and had bloodshot eyes.
"I tried to talk to him that I don't think his girlfriend is bad for him, but it was like he wasn't listening. When I left him alone and had a look around the place, I spotted a door that just gave off this weird feeling. I thought I should look at it. I opened the door, but it was dark room lit with candles, but the creepiest thing was that there was a pentagram on the floor."
When Koji failed to reason with his brother, he had a look around the house and found a room that was strange. He took a look inside and saw a weird room with a pentagram on the floor. This didn't look right at all.
"I turned around to leave, but Koichi was standing right in front of me. He tackled me to the floor and tried to strangle me. I couldn't believe it. Was own my own brother trying to kill me? I knew I had to fight back, so I actually punched my brother right in the face and knocked him off. When I did that, I managed to swing my leg and kicked him right in the head and knocked him out."
Koichi seemed like he was trying to actually kill his own brother. Koji had to fight back and that's what he did as he was able to knock out his own brother.
"I was just going to leave and get the heck out of there, but that was when I saw Lily standing at the door with a knife in her hand and she had a sinister-look in her eyes."
Koji was all set to get out of there, but he spotted Lily at the door and she looked like a killer with her holding a knife and an evil face.
"How dare you interfere with me and my love." Lily said as she held the knife out and it seemed like she was going to kill him. Koji backed away and wasn't sure what to do now.
"I was beginning to think how I could get out of there when Koichi turned the tables and pushed her to the ground."
Koichi surprised Koji as he managed to get back up and shoved Lily to the ground.
"Koji, let's get out of here!" Koichi said.
"For a moment, it seemed like Koichi was acting like himself again. We tried locking Lily in the room and just ran out of there."
Koji didn't understand what was going on, but he didn't question it. He locked that crazy girl in the room and the two of them ran out of there.
"When we finally got out of there, Koichi and I finally talked, but he said he doesn't really remember anything. He said the last thing he remembered was having dinner date with Lily. When he finally came to his senses, he saw I was in danger and helped me out. We got Koichi tested, called the police, and even got Koichi an exorcise. It turns out Lily has been drugging Koichi for days. It seems that when I knocked him on the head, it snapped him to his senses. Lily was actually trying to prepare him for some sort of satanic ritual. The police never found her, but they found something bizarre about her. They're claiming her name isn't Lily...it's Lilith. I hope I never see that crazy girl again, and I'm glad I managed to get my brother before it was too late."