Here we go again, but this time it is based off of "Archetypal" chapter 41, changed to where Power Woman/Lori Loud will be betrayed by the guy whom she is helping with his used car commercial, and we also know where she got the idea for her attire. Enjoy reading this guys.

"Twitsed Archetypal."
"Flip's Plan."


"Aaaand CUT!"

Lori sighed as she allowed her aching arm to droop. Lifting the car wasn't the difficult part, it was the fact that they'd been shooting this bit over, and over, and over again, and her arm was cramping up fiercely as a result. To say nothing of the ache in her jaw from the constant smiling. Remembering the heavy load attached to her arm, Lori arrested her movement before fully letting it go slack, and she gently placed the car on the ground again. If she'd dropped the vehicle, she'd never hear the end of it from—

"What the heck are you doin' out there!?"...Speak of the devil.

Pulling herself upright, and trying to discretely work the kinks out of her back in the process, Lori turned around just in time to see the portly proprietor of the business to which Lori shackled herself, waddling over to her in a huff, his patchwork business suit and ratty, disheveled hat covered in a fine sheen from some combination of his perpetual outrage, and the sweltering, unrelenting heat that assaulted the car lot.

"Hey, Flip." Lori greeted him, trying to sound only half as tired as she felt, but failing miserably.

"That's Mister Flip to you, girlie," snapped the older man, jabbing one finger that looked remarkably like an overcooked sausage in her direction. "And I repeat, what are you doin' to me? Do you know how much it costs to shoot these things? This was supposed to be a one-day shoot, and now we're on day three!"

"I'm just following the script...sir," Lori replied, tersely, her fingers inadvertently clenching into a fist as she did so.

"You're not smiling enough!" Flip replied, grabbing his own jowls and yanking on them for emphasis. "Happy girls make the customers happy! And happy customers come down to buy my cars. This ain't rocket science kid!"

Lori inhaled sharply and she tries not to snap at the man. "I'm...trying, my best. Honest."

"You said that two days ago. And now I'm starting to believe you." Flip crossed his arms with an annoyed huff and glared at the eldest Loud.

Lori closed her eyes and steeled herself for the tirade that was certain to come. Such was the routine they'd fallen into since they'd started filming this commercial. Lori would try her best to perform the thirty-odd seconds of material that was called for, Flip would berate her for one perceived slip up or another, and then they'd try it again. It was proving to be a very trying experience, particularly when the critiques from one take directly contradicted another, and not for the first time Lori found herself desperately wishing she'd been hired for something a little more life-threatening. Anything to get her away from this obnoxious little man and his awful commercial.

And yet, the verbal tirade never came. Hesitantly opening her eyes, Lori found the older man staring off into the distance, stroking his chin. An oddly contemplative affectation for the normally bombastic business owner.

"Maybe I'm just expecting too much of ya," he said, at last, shaking his head in frustration. Lori desperately wanted to hope that this might represent some kind of turning point. But cynicism built up over time, much like a callus, and three days into this, Lori wasn't anywhere near naive enough to seriously entertain that possibility.

"I mean, you were the cheapest person I could get for this gig. You've got no experience and no marketable skills. Which seemed like a great deal for me, 'cause I could justify paying you next to nothing. But you can't even read the dang lines convincingly!"

Lori twitched in irritation but held her tongue. It was an unfair...but not entirely untrue assessment of her abilities. Though, in her defense, she'd never claimed to be an actor, something that Flip had been oddly unconcerned about during the hiring process.

"There's only two reasons I'm not cutting you loose here and now!" Flip held up two fingers, demonstratively. "One: you being able to lift the car all by yourself is saving me to spend on special effects. And two: you just so happen to fit into the only costume I was able to get for this thing."

He gave her an appraising look."And even then, it's a pretty close thing." He corrected himself. "Might need to switch out that prop car for something bigger. Maybe it'll make you look smaller by comparison.

That was crossing a line. The "costume" was Lori's biggest problem with this whole ordeal, if you could even call it that!

The outfit, in its entirety, consisted solely of dark blue thigh-high boots showing off the sexy upper part of her legs, dark blue elbow length gloves and a skin-tight almost whitish leotard seemingly designed for the sole purpose of showing off the occupants bust with the round cleavage cutout or boob window. That she would wear the damn thing at all, let alone make it look as good as she did, was nothing short of a miracle!

Lori sighs and she goes to another part of the area. She makes sure she is out of ear shot and….

"RAAAAAARGH!" Lori screamed, slamming her fist into one of the many brick walls common to that area of the city. The blow pulverized the area of impact, leaving a fist-sized hole in its wake, but moments later the surrounding bricks exploded inward, resulting in a hole that was several Lori's high and wide.

Lori calms down and sighs. 'Just relax Lori. Possibly one more and then I am done here, and never ever coming back.' She then pinches the bridge of her nose. 'Why the heck am I literally doing this again?'

Lori then looks to her outfit again and she sighs. But she does look to her reflection on one of the mirrors and she does a sexy pose.

'But I gotta say. I make this look good and literally hot as hell.' She does look to her breasts and the boob window, she then blushes and smiles. 'I don't even know how Lincoln would feel…. Seeing me like this, perhaps… he'll notice.'

Meanwhile, Flip brings over the new prop car. Afterwards he goes to his RV which he rented and possibly didn't "borrow" and he looks to the footage and sees what might be edited out.

As Flip goes through footage he keeps noticing Lori in her attire and how young and yet mature she has grown. "Heh, the boob window on her suit is gonna be the reason why folks will be coming to my place. Perhaps I can make card board cutouts and have them around my store."

Flip then sees the other business he owns, selling knock off items on the dark web and this gives him an idea. 'Perhaps Loud here could be useful. I think it's time to put my new gizmo and plan, into motion.' He continues to watch the footage and grins. 'Gotta say, she knows how to pack up a supermodel body for an idiot with no acting talent.'

(Later.)

After another round of shooting the commercial and also a small visit from Lincoln and Leni. Lori is done for the day and she seems tired. 'Literally at last. This has been a nightmare for me. At least I can…'

"Hey, Loud!"

Lori sighs and she doesn't wanna deal with him. Lori then turns around with her hands on her hips. "Yes? What's wrong Flip? I have to do this again tomorrow or something?"

"No, not that. The whole thing worked out well and I'll edit some stuff and make sure the footage makes TV. Will help my new business" replied Flip. He then smiles. "Also, you've done a lot of hard work. So, I have something for ya in the RV, a little treat from my store which is a reward. It's supposed to be my dinner, but I can let ya take it."

Lori is surprised to hear this. "Literally what? For reals?"

Flip nods. "Darn tootin'. Flip isn't always the kinda guy who makes bad deals and other junk. Plus, you did a good job and the whole thing is going to work out great. Go on ahead kid, also since you are becoming a big time hero with this, out of curiosity what the heck are you even naming yourself?"

Lori then recalls the whole hero name for herself. "Well, literally had a meeting like that days ago, some names sound kinda dumb and weird. But my little brother came up with another name for me… Power Woman." She then realizes. "You wanna make card board cutouts of me with the name, aren't you?"

Flip smirks. "That part is right. Helps with the advertisement. Go on and get your reward kid. You earned it." Flip then heads off to clean up the prop car.

Lori nods and she heads over to the RV and doesn't even notice Flip smirking and she enters the RV. Lori does notice how messy it is in here. "This isn't as worse as Lynn."

Lori then sees the bag with the words "Flip's Dinner" so she goes over and she opens the bag, but instead she is sprayed by something orange and green. Lori stumbles a bit and it smells like rotten cheese and farts. Lori leaves the RV and coughs. "WHAT THE LITERAL HECK WAS THAT?!"

But before she can try and catch her breath, a white small ball hits her face and blows up into a gas and she coughs some more. Lori feels her mind getting woozy, she stumbles and realizes what this is. But someone else speaks.

"Nothing beats good old Chloroform, right kid?" asked Flip as he has another ball in his hand. "Sorry to say this kid, but after seeing you on footage and how ya look, I had a better idea that you ain't done yet. I think we could do another commercial shoot, a dark one."

Lori is confused hearing this, and she tries to go after Flip. "Y-You… You literal… Bastard." She then collapses to the ground, and Lori Loud is knocked out.

Flip goes over to her and he grins. "Worked like a charm. Flip, you sir are one good and sneaky business man and those dorks in jail said I wouldn't make it big time." He then picks up Power Lori and carries her over his shoulder.

"But you sweet cheeks…" Flip then slaps Power Lori's ass. "You're gonna help me make it bigger." Flip then has another idea. "Hmmm, before I do put you into new work…. It wouldn't hurt to test the goods." He then heads to his RV, ready to begin the rest of his heinous plan.

(Flip's Food n' Fuel.)

The night has arrived and we see the place is closed, for renovations which is kinda odd. But then again Flip has closed the place before and everyone always believes it. Whether it involves a tornado watch, storm or fishing season.

Flip's RV is parked in the back with his Car and he is inside, and he made sure nobody knows what is about to go down tonight.

Flip managed to make a fake text message using Lori's cellphone and confirming that she's helping Flip with several other commercial shooting and also going on patrol later and coming back home tomorrow… and the Louds fell for it!

We head to the camera room which is also where Flip sleeps and the place is filled with lustful sounds of flesh slapping against flesh.

"Ugh… Ugh… Ugh… Ugh… Agh… Agh… Agh… Agh… Oh…"

We see Lori Loud/Power Woman and she is in tears and she moans, as her naked super sexy body is getting fucking pounded by Flip. The man drugged her, and now her powers aren't working, making her vulnerable and at the moment, getting raped by the guy she helped.

Power Woman/Loriis on her knees and her breasts shaking and jiggling as her ass and pussy are getting fucked hard, by Flip and his… two long and large meaty cocks.

Apparently Flip is an odd person from Lisa's previous studies about his odd organ locations, but nobody would've expected Flip to have two manhoods!

Flip is having the time of his life. "Oh! Sweet Cheese and Crackers, you sure are the best thing to have ever happened to old Flip and I had this High School… sweetheart I loved back then, but this… this sure to heck beats it! You got some tight cheese holes Power Woman!"

Power Woman/Lori continues to shed teats and moans from each thrusting into her pussy and ass. "Ugh… Ugh… Ugh… Agh… Agh… Agh… Oh… Oh… Oh… Nhn…"

Hearing this makes Flip smile and he pulls on the arms of Power Lori and she cries and wants him to stop. But her ass and pussy want him to go in harder and she feels her mind breaking from this.

Flip then yells. "Oh, here comes my cheese cream, Power Whore!"

Flip cums into both the ass and pussy of Power Woman/Lori and this makes her cry and moan, She sticks her tongue out and she feels exhausted all over her body.

Flip's warm cum is now filling her pussy and ass, this makes Power Woman/Lori shed some tears as her body is now getting defiled.

Flip then calms down, but then he grins and then Power Woman/Lori feels Flip fucking her pussy and ass again and all the while Flip's warm semen is still going inside her ass and pussy. This makes Power Woman/Lori cry.

"N-No, ugh… please-Please! STOP... Agh… Ugh…"

But Flip keeps fucking the ass and pussy of Power Woman/Lori. "Stop? Stop?! Kid, we just started to make it good and I got some big for you, Power Woman!" he then thrusts faster and harder. "I'm gonna keep fuckin' ya good, till that acting talentless mind of yours is an obedient little bitch! I'm gonna break ya like how I manhandle my cheese machines!"

Flip continues to fuck faster and harder into the pussy and ass of Power Woman/Lori, and all she can do is shed some tears and moan as her body is going to be shattered and broken by this man. She fears that her sanity won't hold out much longer.

(Flip's Fuck Montage!)

Flip continues to fuck the pussy and ass of Power Woman/Lori, for the next two hours and he doesn't stop cumming into her body as well. Yet Power Woman/Lori tries to hold her own.

But it gets worse when Flip shoves both his cocks into the pussy of Power Woman/Lori, causing her so much pain and yet her body is loving this abuse.

Flip then shoves both his cocks into the ass of Power Woman/Lori, and once again she hates what is happening to her as her belly gets bloated from Flip's semen coming through, almost like her body wants to be dominated.

Afterwards, Flip forces Power Woman/ on her knees and to suck either of his cocks, she feels disgusted doing this but it gets horrific when both cocks are rammed into her mouth and she feels like she can't breath and her eyes rolling to the back of her head, and it just gets worse when she is forced to drink the semen from both cocks.

Flip then has the chance to fuck Power Woman/Lori all over his place of establishment. By the register, the restrooms and even have her fucked in a shopping cart. He even sucks and drinks from her breasts.

Flip then does some heinous things to break and punish Power Woman/Lori. Hand cuffing her arms to the ceiling and whipping her back and ass with his belt, making her cry and begging him to stop.

Flip even proceeds to shove a hose into Power Woman/Lori's ass and pussy where she is overwhelmed by the hot cheese going inside of her and even chocolate and water to hose it all off.

In the end, Flip continues to once again fuck Power Woman/Lori and it seems like she's not resisting or even realizing what is happening.

(End of Montage!)

We now see Power Woman/Lori on the ground, all dazed and tired. Her sexy body has been abused and fucked up and now warm semen lands on her stomach and she just moans and looks at nothing, almost like her will has been broken.

Flip smiles seeing this. "Looks like I did it. You seem as broken as an old scooter." But then Flip grabs something from his drawers. "But, this'll make you an obedient pet, Power Woman."

Flip has this small injection gun. He then grabs Power Lori and he aims it to her head and then injects something inside, this stuns Power Woman/Lori and she is dropped to the ground and in pain.

Power Woman/Lori blinks and she tries to get up, almost like her mind is back and she feels pissed off at what she had to deal with. "Y-You… you literal… piece of shit!" Power Woman charges at Flip ready to rip his head off.

But Flip doesn't even look scared and he pushes the button to his remote and this stuns Power Woman and she stops and then stays still. She feels her mind is now blank and she doesn't say anything.

Flip snickers seeing this and he slaps Power Woman/Lori's breasts and she doesn't even respond. "And my plan is working better than I ever imagined. That little tech bug thing in your head will stay hidden in your brain and nobody will even know, and no matter where you are you will obey me. Now, on your knees."

Power Woman nods. "Yes master." She does down to her knees.

"Perfect." Flip grins. "Now pleasure me!"

"I shall my master." Power Woman proceeds to suck both cock of Flip into her mouth and she's not complaining.

Flip grins wickedly seeing this. "And now to finish off the plan!"

(Later.)

We head to one of the old warehouses that Flip owns. Stage lights are on and the cameras are focused on the prop cars and the sexy ass babe on top of it.

Power Woman/Lori Loud –wearing only a dark blue thigh high boots, dark blue elbow length gloves and a red cape. She is completely naked and she is wearing some light blue eye shadow and red lipstick.

Power Woman poses on the prop car and she goes to her knees and she fondles and presses her tits and the camera zooms in closer.

Power Woman then bends over and she fingers her pussy and moans.

The man behind the camera is Flip and he grins seeing this. 'That's it Power Babe, keep doing that! When I am done here, folks who see this from personal dark web accounts will wanna download you doing this stuff! I am gonna be rich!'

Flip then looks to Power Woman/Lori as she shows off her breasts to the camera and she moans and be recalls the sexual time he had with her. 'Gotta say, those milk jugs she has sure tasted good and…' Suddenly he has an idea and grins.

(An hour later.)

We head back to Flip's and in the camera room. We see Power Woman moan and grunt as she is fucked in her pussy and ass by her master, Flip.

"Ugh… Ugh… Oh… Oh… Ah… Ah… Yeah… Ha…"

But that's not all, Power Woman has two suction cups attached to her breasts and she us being milked. Power Woman's body apparently can generate quickly returning her breasts to their luscious and milk filled form.

Flip smiles and laughs from this. "Yeah, that's it Power Lori! Keep doing this! Fill up more of those jugs, pleasure me and make me filthy stinkin' rich bitch!"

Power Woman moans. "Y-Yes, yes… oh... ah! Master… I, ugh! I… Power Lori, obey! Ugh, Oh!"

And so they continue this for the rest of the night. Flip fucking Power Lori and at the same time milking her.

(One week later.)

Somewhere above Royal Woods, Power Woman is flying high and feeling happy with herself for the good she did.

Recently, she stopped five bank robberies across Royal Woods all the way to Beaverton and she signed some autographs and tried to keep her cool to the fact folks have been more focused on her boobs.

Power Woman sighs and calms down. "Alright, just need to finish my patrol and then I can head back home. I wonder what Lincoln has been doing lately. Perhaps I can bring him along on one of my patrols, perhaps tomorrow."

Then something else comes to her mind, the reason of her attire as it is now, and this makes her smirk. 'It feels weird that I got inspired after that dumb commercial Flip wanted me to do, and yet I don't even recall what happened after that, and yet I still make this outfit looks dang good. I guess I'm more than just the strongest superheroine in town, I am literally the hottest thing going around-'

But then she stops and her eyes look towards nothing. Power Woman as if her mind has gone blank, then changes her course and she heads for Flip's Food n' Fuel. Power Woman lands at the back and she opens the back door.

Power Lori then sees Flip sitting on his chair in the camera room. He closes the place for the day to restock on his new Flip branded Milk.

Flip has his clothes off and the milk machine nearby. "Alright Power Lori, come over here and pleasure your master."

"Yes my master. I, Power Lori obey."

Power Woman goes closer and she moves aside a portion of her suit, and she sits on the cocks of Flip. She moans feeling his cocks inside her pussy and ass and she slowly rides them.

Flip grins and moans from this. "From this day forward. You're going to be my sex slave forever!" he then proceeds to drink Power Lori's breasts.

Power Lori moans. "Yes… oh, ugh. I will obey… I am, ugh, yours… Forever, my master…"

And so Flip continues to fuck and milk his new sex toy, a mind controlled Power Woman/Lori Loud.

The end.


A whole different and twisted side from the chapter based off from the story Archetypal and Flip has gotten what he wanted, Power Woman/Lori under his control. I hope you all enjoyed reading this everyone.

Date made: 10/06/23.