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Chapter 4: First High School Riot part 1
"Good job, it's done."
After listening to Onii-sama's words, I immediately stood up from the examination bed and put my velvet robe back on.
Currently we are in the CAD setup room in the basement of where we live.
I have asked Onii-sama to adjust my CAD, actually the last time my CAD was adjusted was three days ago and because my CAD is usually adjusted once a week, normally I ask Onii-sama to reset my CAD in three days.
But there is a special reason why I want Onii-sama to set up my CAD now.
After watching Onii-sama's previous match, I thought about adding a Binding Type Activation Sequence.
The reason I lay down in just my underwear was because it was to improve the accuracy of the scanning machine we had, however the CAD setup facilities in our house were far above existing standards.
But...
Sitting on a chair with a backrest that didn't even reach his back, Onii-sama didn't look at me at all and instead focused on the monitor screen.
Even though I was very embarrassed because I appeared like this, Onii-sama still didn't give any reaction...
Am I not beautiful enough to attract his attention?
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"Onii-sama is quite cunning."
"Miyuki..?" Tatsuya responded quickly.
Ah, is he nervous? Why do I flutter like this just because I heard him say my name nervously? I have to quickly calm myself down otherwise... otherwise... Otherwise...
With a velvet robe that just covers it
shoulders and not covering the front, Miyuki pressed her chest against Tatsuya's back, gently rubbed her face against Tatsuya's cheek, and continued to whisper softly into her brother's ear.
"Even though Miyuki felt very embarrassed, Onii-sama always acted as usual and didn't give any reaction at all."
"Eh, Miyuki, what's wrong with you...?"
"Or... do you not see me as someone of the opposite sex?"
"If I saw you like that, then we would be in serious trouble!"
"Is Onii-sama not interested in Miyuki? Is Onii-sama more interested in someone like Saegusa-senpai? Or, perhaps someone like Watanabe-senpai? Today, your conversation seemed full of love..."
"Did you hear my conversation?"
Actually, I didn't eavesdrop on the conversation between Onii-sama and Saegusa-senpai and Watanabe-senpai, because at that time Nakajou-senpai was teaching me how to use the computer system for my assignment on the student council later.
The question I said earlier was purely a trap for Onii-sama, but...
So they really are having a conversation full of love!!! How dare Onii-sama do that behind my back!!!
"Aha, just as I imagined! They are both beautiful women!"
"What's wrong, Miyuki? Aren't you mistaken understand something?"
"Onii-sama is being pulled by two beautiful senpais on both sides! This is your punishment!"
"Ah!"
Using the CAD I held in my left hand as a catalyst, I had released a Psion wave that made Onii-sama faint.
However, for some reason that I don't want to talk about, it didn't take long for Onii-sama to regain his senses.
"Onii-sama, good morning." I greeted with a smile.
"...Did I do something cause you displeasure?"
"I'm sorry, I went a little overboard with my joke."
Even though her voice was full of apology, Miyuki's face smiled once again. That smile capable of disarming even the fierce attitudes of adults, a sweet smile befitting her age that Miyuki rarely does.
In reality, this isn't exactly like a pair of siblings playing around. In the end, his sister wouldn't really be able to do anything that could hurt him.
"Please, don't be so hard on me..." Tatsuya muttered as he also smiled.
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Ding Dong.. Ding Dong.. Ding Dong.. Ding Dong.. Ding Dong.
"Aaah... Finally finished, I really don't like history lessons..." From his seat, Leo immediately fell onto the table as soon as the lunch break bell rang.
I couldn't help but smile from my seat seeing his behavior, but even though Leo complained about the lesson, he still struggled to learn it. Otherwise, he would have fallen asleep in class earlier.
After taking my lunch from my bag, I immediately got up from my seat to go to my lunch place today.
"Shirou, want to go to lunch?" Leo asked as he saw me heading towards the exit.
"Of course he's going to lunch, just look at the lunch he's carrying! You're an idiot, aren't you~"
"I didn't know that! I was just making small talk to start a conversation!"
As usual, Leo and Erika always argue about trivial things.
"Well as it seems, I'm going to go out for lunch like yesterday. Do you want to come along?"
"Sure! But can you wait for me to buy my lunch first?"
"Well, I guess I can wait for you."
"Good then-"
Unfortunately Leo couldn't finish his sentence because Erika had interrupted his sentence.
"Gosh, you're really an idiot, aren't you? Right now the school canteen or cafe must have become a battlefield. Do you want to make Shirou stand waiting for you until you get your lunch!? What kind of friend are you!?" And once again Erika attacked Leo again with her argument.
"W-what...? No, you're right. Sorry Shirou, I didn't think about that..." He said weakly.
I couldn't help but smile a little seeing him act like that and who knows
"No, it's okay. We can still have lunch together tomorrow."
"O oh! You're right, there's still tomorrow!" And he got his enthusiasm back.
"Can we also come to lunch with you tomorrow?" Asked a girl who represented her other friends.
"Sure, why not? Lunch will be more fun if it's filled with togetherness, right? So who else wants to come to lunch tomorrow?"
One by one his classmates began to declare themselves to join in the event which would cause a stir tomorrow.
After making a picnic appointment for tomorrow, Shirou immediately continued his way towards one of the shady trees which had become his favorite lunch spot now and would start eating his lunch.
Actually, there are several small pavilions not far from where he is now, but he prefers to sit directly on the grass and lean under a shady tree.
My lunch menu wasn't really anything special, it was just rice, fried sausage, eggs-? Hmm... for some reason now I see an apparition from one of the windows on the 4th floor, it's a girl who is looking at me while pressing her smiling face against the window?
What is a ghost?
Blink.
No, it's not a ghost but Seagusa-senpai. Ah, that's right, my current position is right opposite the window in the student council room.
Saegusa-senpai opened the window in her current room and waved excitedly at me.
She really is a very friendly student council president, isn't she? Even taking the time to greet one of her kouhai with such enthusiasm.
I waved back at her to respect her friendliness.
"Kouhai-kun! Are you having lunch!?"
"Yeah! I was just about to eat lunch!"
"Really!!? Then let's just have lunch here!!! There are Mari, Tatsuya, and Miyuki here too, come on, come here!!!"
"Eh, thanks for the offer but I'll just have lunch here!!!"
"Come on- Mari I just want to invite Kouhai-kun to lunch together, look at him so lonely!!! Come on Kouhai-kun you have to have lunch with us, after all you owe us a promise to have lunch together, remember!!!!??"
Promise..?
"Thanks, but I already have an appointment for lunch with the rest of my friends. Maybe another day."
"Kouhai-kun! I'll hold on to your words~."
Ah, that one...
"Look!! You remember that, right!!? I know that!!! Come on, don't be a naughty boy who likes to make false promises to an innocent girl like me!!!
But chatting while shouting at each other like this will soon attract a lot of attention and get me into trouble later... and it looks like Saegusa-senpai won't give up on inviting me to have lunch together, haaah...
"Come on, lunch will be more fun if it's filled with togetherness!! So let's get here quickly, while the lunch break is still long!!!"
I then closed my lunch box again and wrapped it again in a pink cloth that had a cute cat's head on it.
Lunch will be more fun if it's filled with togetherness..
Hee., I didn't expect that the sentence I said to my classmates would come back to me like this.
I then walked towards the main school building while chuckling a little because I was consumed by my own words.
"Okay Senpai, I'll have lunch with you so could you move away from the window!!"
"You're really coming here!?"
Hmm? Does that mean she was just playing a prank on me earlier...? But whatever, it's better that you don't regret it because it's Senpai..
Using Reinforcement on my legs, I jumped straight towards the window in the student council room and well my decision was probably the right one because it felt quite nice to see the surprised expressions of Saegusa-senpai and the others when they saw me who was now sitting at the window of the student council room.
"So... let's have lunch together!" I said while showing my best grin.
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Silence enveloped the room..
"Emm... this is very delicious~"
Ok, it's actually not silent.
There were currently five people in the student council room enjoying their lunch.
Tatsuya sat next to Miyuki and was eating lunch made by his sister while looking back and forth at the three people sitting in front of him. Miyuki, as mentioned earlier, was sitting eating her homemade lunch while staring intently at the young man sitting in front of her. Sitting across from the Shiba sibling was Mari who was eating her homemade lunch, while glancing at the two people sitting beside her. To Mari's right was Shirou, he was eating instant lunch at the student council quietly. Lastly, sitting next to Shirou on Shirou's right was Mayumi who was happily trying hard to slowly eat the lunch Shirou made.
Simply put, after seeing that Mayumi's lunch menu was instant food, Shirou immediately rebuked her because even though today's instant food was much healthier than in the past, in Shirou's opinion it would still have a bad influence on the body. That's why he exchanged his lunch for Mayumi's lunch, and of course Mayumi didn't mind that at all.
Well, of course she didn't mind.
"But well... I didn't expect that you would actually answer Mayumi's joke and jump right in here..." Mari finally decided to be the one to break the silence in the student council room which wasn't actually silent.
"That's the quickest way to get here and well, I do owe you a promise to have lunch here."
By the way Mari, Shirou, Tatsuya, and Miyuki have finished their lunch. And Mayumi...
"Octopus-kun please forgive me! You're so cute but you taste too good~ aeem..." Well just ignore her for now.
"Shirou, did you secretly carry a CAD with you?"
Hm? Ah right, Tatsuya is a member of the disciplinary committee now.
"No, I don't even have CAD."
This answer had taken the Shiba siblings by surprise.
It's actually not strange if a magician can use their magic without the help of CAD, because that is basically their original ability. But nowadays, the majority of magicians will use CAD as a catalyst to use their magic. The convenience and advantages of CAD have actually reduced the magicians' original ability to use magic directly.
So even though normally magicians can use magic without CAD, the quality of magic and quantity of spells they master will be lower when they use CAD.
Only highly specialized or truly well-trained people possess CADless magic of the same quality or quantity as those who normally use CAD.
"Hm, don't you know, Tatsuya? Muramasa-kun is a practitioner of Traditional Magic. Gosh Muramasa-kun, I thought you two were classmates?" Watanabe-senpai said that while showing her annoyingly sweet smile.
"Just because we're classmates doesn't mean we have to tell all our secrets, right? After all it's only our 4th day at this school, what do you expect from that, Senpai?"
"Tch, you got your point." She grumbled displeasedly.
Tatsuya looked back and forth between me and Watanabe-senpai, then made a movement with his eyes as if he had understood something.
I hope he doesn't think anything strange about us.
"Shirou, as far as I know, Traditional Strengthening Type Magic takes a few seconds longer to prepare than Modern Magic and from the Level of Strengthening Magic you did earlier, it has a very high level of difficulty and should take longer than that?"
Is this considered traditional magic again? Well... I think there's no harm in sharing a little, after all this is just Reinforcement.
"If it depends on the user's own skill, what I used earlier was Reinforcement. The way it works is that you only have to channel Psion into your feet in the right amount and use it to increase the quality of your feet such as muscles, flesh, skin and bones to their full potential you can achieved this moment as a human being, just like that." I casually answered the question, while omitting the most important point.
A mystery must remain a mystery.
"Wait a minute, doesn't that require a very high level of calculation?" Miyuki finally decides to join.
"Indeed, if I miscalculate my muscles could tear, or my flesh could tear, or bones could break into pieces, and the worst thing is that my legs could explode. But if you can do it correctly and practice often, using Reinforcement will be just as natural by the act of breathing or walking." ...Hm, why are they looking at me like that?
"Kouhai-kun, if you can pull off a feat like that you shouldn't have any trouble with the modern practical magic exam right?" Mayumi asked what was also on the other's minds. Oh, she's finished her lunch.
"Not really. Simply put it's like a person with a dominant right hand trying to write with the left, Do you understand Senpai?"
'What kind of explanation is that?' Is what Miyuki thought.
"A well, I understand now that makes sense too... okay since we've finished lunch and since lunch time is still about 15 minutes away, let's continue our discussion for next week's event."
Well, I guess it's time for me to go, if only it could be that easy.
When I stood up and was about to say goodbye, Saegusa-senpai grabbed my hand and forced me to sit down again, and said that I could also listen to the contents of this discussion, and it was clear that she didn't want to accept all of my rejection arguments.
Long story short, the topic of this discussion is about efforts to deal with riots, the peak of which will certainly occur next week, because next week is the final deadline for accepting new club members, that's why in this last week, the school makes it easy for clubs to promote themselves freely and clubs that do not have enough members will immediately be disbanded.
Because of this, all the clubs in the school will compete with each other for first year students to become their new members.
And the biggest threat of dispute was the rivalry between clubs related to Modern Magic as they were allowed to carry CADs for the purpose of demonstrating their club's activities.
"Well, that's our current situation. Starting from today, the Disciplinary Committee will go all out. Wow, I'm glad we were able to cover all our empty seats on the committee."
"I'm glad you were able to find someone so talented, Mari." Mayumi said with a frown which Mari only responded with a smile.
I myself chuckled a little when I heard that, somehow it felt funny.
"Come on, what are you laughing at Kouhai-kun!?" Mayumi demanded while making an angry expression.
"Well... I'm just wondering why you're jealous of Watanabe-senpai for getting Tatsuya. Even though you yourself already have a new student representative, it seems like you're not talented enough in Saegusa-senpai's eyes, Imoutou-chan." Mayumi's eyes widened after realizing that her joke could also be interpreted as dissatisfaction with Miyuki.
"What? Wait I didn't mean it like that!" Mayumi frantically tried to get her point across.
"That's only natural because compared to Onii-sama I'm nothing." Miyuki responded to the sarcasm (from Shirou) very calmly.
"Hey, listen to me first!!!"
Mari just laughed at her friend's misfortune. Finally Mayumi managed to say what she wanted to say, then apologized to Miyuki for her joking manner and it ended with Mayumi punching Shirou in his right arm.
The rest of the day went by without anything out of the ordinary, everything was normal, when I got home that was the same.
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"I'm going to my part-time job first, Kaa-san."
"Yes, be careful on the road and convey my greetings to Luna-chan, ok!"
After giving a nod to Kaa-san, I immediately pedaled my bicycle to where I worked part-time. I've been working part-time since my second year of middle school, at first my parents, especially Kaa-san, were against it, but in the end I managed to persuade them and finally gave me permission.
While passing through busy streets for thirty minutes, I finally arrived at the place where I worked part-time. It is a small two-story cafe that offers a classic and relaxed feel.
This cafe is also close to my school, it only takes ten minutes to walk to get here.
This cafe offers three different dining locations for customers. The first option is inside the cafe on the first floor, the second option is in the cafe courtyard, and the third option is on the second floor.
Klining klining... the bell rang on the door marking my arrival.
"O oh, Shirou-kun! You've finally come!" From the cashier's desk, a beautiful teenage girl with red eyes and long black hair tied into a ponytail greeted me cheerfully. She is the owner of this cafe, Luna Florin.
"Luna-nee, you have greetings from Kaa-san."
"Oh really? Ah, how nice it is to know that my future mother-in-laws remember me~" He said while holding his cheeks.
"Luna-sama, please don't act like that, you're just embarrassing yourself again." In a tired tone, a beautiful young woman in her early 20s with shoulder length silver hair who also had red eyes advised her even though in the end it was useless. She is one of the waitresses at this cafe, Anna Maier.
"Huh, just say you're jealous!" Luna started to act arrogant and Anna just sighed at her boss's actions.
"Tch, it's always Shirou who gets the girls' attention. Even though I'm there too. Ah, please, here's your order, ladies." The person who complained earlier was a handsome young man in his early 20s who had combed back black hair, a pair of blue eyes, and a pair of earrings in both ears. He was one of the waiters, Roberto Suarez.
"That's because Shirou is a kind man, unlike you!" A beautiful young woman in her early 20s, defended me while cleaning one of the tables that had been used by the customer earlier.
She has wavy brown hair reaching her back, a pair of reddish brown eyes and a mole near her left eye, she is one of the waitresses, Melinda Arshafin
Well... there's no need to take it seriously, things like this are commonplace in this cafe and are entertainment for cafe customers.
I then walked inside to change into my work uniform.
Short dark gray shirt, black pants, and black hat. On the back of my shirt is written the name of this cafe..
When I got to the kitchen I took my apron and didn't forget to wash my hands.
"Oh, it turns out you've arrived here. That's good then, we just got 2 orders of Caramelia Steak, you hurry up and do that." The person commanding was an old man with black hair with some parts of it white, he exuded the aura of a very strong leader. He is the head chef, Pieter Tanase.
"Yes Chef!" I immediately took two pieces of beef from the refrigerator and started processing them into a delicious dish.
There are still two more people in the kitchen.
First is an adult man in his 20s who has brown skin, short black hair, and dark gray eyes, he is currently cooking spaghetti, he is Zija Onur.
And lastly, a teenage girl who was the same age as me, she had waist-length black hair tied into a ponytail, wore glasses, and had a pair of brown eyes. She is the same as me, a part-time worker, Yotsuba Kaoru who is currently in charge of washing dishes.
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"Pieter, this is a new order for you! Kaoru-chan please wash this." Anna said while handing over notes containing customer orders, as she entered carrying dirty plates and glasses for Kaede to wash.
"Y-yes!"
"Hmm... okay, Shirou prepare 2 choco lava cakes and 1 snow waffle! Zaji, you get 3 more Carbonara!"
"Yes Chef" Shirou and Zaji answered simultaneously.
After ordering his subordinates, Pieter also started preparing the other orders they received.
"This is your change, thank you very much."
"Here's your order and enjoy."
"Okay, I've recorded all the orders, please wait a moment~"
Outside kitchen Luna, Roberto and Melinda. Deftly carry out their respective duties.
The cafe where I work part time is quite famous and always busy with customers. This cafe is only open from Monday to Friday, this cafe is also only open from half past 4 pm to half past 10 pm.
For part-time workers like me and Yotsuba-san, we only start working from 6 to 9, even though the pay we get is very good.
Well, Luna-nee is really kind...
Our target market is teenagers who have come home from school and workers who have returned from their place of work. And the food we offer changes every day but the majority is European food.
The name of this cafe is The Moonlit Cafe
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On the last day of our first week of school, there was a bit of a stir created by the students in class 1-E.
Ding dong ding dong... Ding dong ding dong...
After hearing the lunch break bell, the class 1-E students immediately prepared their things and walked together to the place Shirou usually used for lunch.
Unfortunately, not everyone wanted to eat together, so out of 25 students only 23 took part in the lunch together.
This clearly attracted a lot of attention, because they weren't just carrying lunch boxes, but some were also carrying picnic mats and baskets.
Actually there were some students from the 1st course who mocked them but...
"Just ignore those stiff people who don't know the meaning of having fun..." Well with Shirou's words, they just ignored all the teasing.
The atmosphere in the courtyard used by class 1-E students could only be described as harmonious, even after finishing their lunch. Carefree, they do things like normal high school students like complaining about subjects, talking about clubs, playing cards, reading comics, and sleeping.
This has attracted the attention of many people, but what is clear is that it has brought in the Discipline Committee (Mari Tatsuya), the Student Council (Mayumi Miyuki), and the Club Management Committee (Katsuto who happened to be passing by and was dragged by Mayumi). Which made things tense, forcing Shirou to intervene.
"What the hell!? What are you all doing here!?" Watanabe-senpai snapped and it managed to make my classmates nervous.
Well, the presence of First High's top three, had really created nervousness here.
"Isn't it obvious? We're enjoying our lunch break, right Leo?" I said while trying to attract support from my first friend here.
"Y-yeah, we were just enjoying our lunch break." Leo said a little nervously.
"If you want to have lunch together, why not go to the school cafeteria, or the school cafe, or in one of the pavilions!?" Mari snapped back.
"So what if we eat here! It's up to us to eat wherever we want!" Erika snapped, who seemed to really dislike Watanabe-senpai.
"We didn't break any school rules at all but... AH..., I understand now..." I then looked at Watanabe-senpai with a pitying look.
"Watanabe-senpai, I know you must be lonely because you don't have friends, right? You get angry just because you see us together."
"..W-what?" Mari could only widen her eyes, her mouth opening and closing not knowing what to say.
Meanwhile, Mayumi could only laugh out loud, even Katsuto, who was known as an iron wall, tried to hold back his laughter.
"Well why don't you just join us, I'm sure-"
"Take back what you said! Just so you know I have a lot of friends! Wh-why are you guys looking at me like that!? Hey Mayumi, Katsuto-kun, say something!"
But unfortunately the Disciplinary Committee Chair's lamentations were only answered with laughter from his two classmates.
Finally, after a lot of shouting and teasing, the top three of High School 1 left them but Tatsuya and Miyuki remained there and enjoyed the rest of the lunch break with class 1-E, even though in the end Shirou and Miyuki attacked each other with their own sarcasm.
In the end everything went smoothly and finally it was time to go home from school.
After separating from my classmates, I immediately went to see a demonstration from the Kendo Club at gymnasium 2 and I should be able to get there without any obstacles because the peak of the club competition, should not be until next week.
But I clearly underestimated the fierceness of the competition. Many clubs have set up recruitment stands and their members have started going out to hunt for potential new members.
And something I never expected happened.
"Shiroouuu-kuuuunnn!!!!"
A beautiful girl with shoulder-length black hair tied into a ponytail ran up to me. She's my senpai from middle school, Gozen Ayaka
"Ayaka-senpai?"
"Hah.. finally... Hah.. I found... Hah.. you..." With heavy breath, Ayaka-senpai tried to explain the purpose of her arrival.
"You looking for me?"
"Of course! I was from your class, but there was no one there so I ran here and there to find you."
"How did you know that I went to school here?" As far as I remember, I have never told anyone that I was going to school here.
"Oh, that! Yukina-chan told me."
Ah, so this is what that girl did...
"Besides, why didn't you tell me that you went to school here!?"
"Oh about that... sorry, I forgot that you also go to school here." In response to my answer, she tried to hit me which I managed to avoid, but she tried again and I managed to avoid it, and finally she gave up while grumbling incoherently.
"So, what are you looking for me for?"
"What kind of silly question is that? Of course to get you into the Kyudo Club?"
"Sorry but I want to see the Kendo Club demonstration at gymnasium 2."
"What!? Why are you watching that play!?"
"Because I'm interested in watching it."
"Shirou, your talent is archery! You were born to be an archer!!!!"
"What you said was ridiculous."
"Come on Shirou-kun, we really need your extraordinary archery skills!"
"Gosh, you're so pushy, after all it's different from you. I'm only a student from the 2nd course, the Kyudo Club President and the other members will definitely not be happy."
"Don't worry, our Club President will definitely be happy with you joining and just so you know, we don't differentiate between members just because they are from the 1st course or the 2nd course."
"How can you be that sure?"
"Because I am the new Kyudo Club President." She said while puffing out her chest proudly.
"Who is the fool who chose a careless girl like you to be Club President?"
"Oy, what does that mean!?"
In the end I changed my direction to the Kyudo Club. Ok, simply put it was because my right arm was being hugged by Ayaka-senpai and it was clear she didn't want to let go of me unless I reached the Kyudo Club room.
But, just moved a few meters from where we were chatting before...
"Hey, you guys stop right there!!" A soft voice stopped our steps, the owner of the voice came from a teenage girl wearing glasses who had back-length black hair with reddish tips, the Cooking Club President Makoto Hotaru.
"What do you want Hotaru?" Ayaka-senpai asked in a cold tone.
"Of course to save him from a thieving cat like you! Muramasa-kun will be part of the Cooking Club! So let him go!"
"Hah, why do you have to hand over Shirou-kun to the Cooking Club, he was destined to be a member of the Kyudo Club, not the Cooking Club!!!
"What you said is really ridiculous!! Come on Muramasa-kun, let's go to the Cooking Club!" Makoto-senpai then hugged my left arm and started pulling me towards the Cooking Club room.
"Hey! What are you doing!! Shirou-kun will come with me!!!" Ayaka-senpai also increased her strength when pulling me.
"Just give up Ayaka!!! Muramasa-kun is mine!!!!"
"You are the one who should give up Hotaru!! Shirou-kun is mine!!!"
And a tug-of-war match for me broke out between the Cooking Club President versus the Kyudo Club President.
Many student are watching us now, those who are boys are probably jealous of me because two beautiful girls are fighting over each other, especially as these two girls are pulling me while hugging each of my arms tightly.
If only they knew that I'm in pain here!!!!
"Ouch, ouch, both of you stop!! You're only hurting me!!!"
"Shirou-kun is mine!!!" "Muramasa-kun is mine!!!"
"What's all this fuss about!?" Shouted one of the Senpai who came here to check the cause of this commotion.
In the midst of despair I finally found a glimmer of salvation.
That's Watanabe-senpai.
"Good, Watanabe-senpai!! Come here quickly and help- eh?" Why is she smiling like that?
"Haah... I thought what was going on? Turns out it was just Playboy who was caught red-handed by its victims... Karma is really real, isn't it? Oh never mind, I don't want to get involved in love matters like this...!" Mari said all that with a very clear intention, to repay Shirou for his previous actions.
Wh-what...?
"Hey wait, come back here Watanabe-senpai, hey Watanabe-Senpai!!!!"
"Let him go Hotaru!!! Shirou-kun is mine!!!"
"No, you're the one who should let him go Ayaka!!! Muramasa-kun is mine!!!"
And in the end, Shirou's suffering due to being fought over by two beautiful girls, ended after Shirou agreed to join two clubs at once, the Cooking Club and the Kyudo Club.
Hi all!!! We meet again in Fate Irregular Magician!!!
Let's go to the first part, namely the discussion section of the contents of this chapter!!!!!
1. It was Miyuki who asked Tatsuya to add a binding spell program to his CAD, after she saw the match between Tatsuya and Hatori Hanzo or whoever it was...
Well, because I made this story with the assumption that you know the story of Mahoukouka and FSN. I hope you know the scene I mean.
2. This is the moment where Shirou has lunch with Mayumi and the others, and here he gives an incomplete version of how Reinforcement works.
And once again Magecraft is mistaken for traditional magic. Well, basically that's not wrong because both what is known as traditional magic and modern magic are actually still included in the Magecraft type.
But we will reveal a more detailed explanation as the story progresses.
3. From here, we learn that Shirou works part time at a cafe called The Moonlit Cafe. Many new characters have appeared here but it's just a cafe so don't take it seriously.
4. We saw the actions of class 1-E students who shocked the school!!! I made this scene using my own life experience during high school as a reference.
Ah... Those were truly wonderful times.
Here we can also see Mari who had an unfortunate fate after being misunderstood as a lonely girl who didn't have many friends by Shirou.
And finally there is Shirou who failed to watch the Kendo Club demonstration due to being fought over by two beautiful girls!!! And here Mari responds to Shirou's actions by not helping him.
OK here too, I use the story of my life during high school as a reference but the difference is that I wasn't fought over by two beautiful girls.
But at that time I wanted to break up two of my friends who were fighting (of course they were beautiful girls) but well, in the end I was the victim of abuse by the two girls I wanted to break up.
Oh but don't worry, the two of them are friends again now!
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OK, next is my response to... OK, I posted a very ridiculous comment in the fanfic I wrote.
1. What are you reading? This is Fanfic! You read fanfic but don't know what fanfic is!! And you're saying I'm an idiot!? Are you serious..?
2. Try learning to read again, OK. So that you can understand what you read well.
3. I do know what I'm writing, even though I know which material is Canon. That doesn't mean I can't use non-canon material. This is fanfic!!!
4. I didn't include Nasuverse in Mahoukouka.
But!!!
I put Mahoukouka into the Nasuverse.
5. Everyone has different opinions!
6. In fanfic, the writers can do anything!!!! I can even make a story where Shirou becomes a servant of the Yotsuba family and he enters First High to watch over Tatsuya and Miyuki because Maya ordered him to.
(For those who want to use point 6 to write a new fanfic, please do so, I don't mind)
7. I never think my stories are perfect. But I'm proud of my imperfect works!!! Because this is proof that I can bring my imagination to the real world through this digital literature and share it with everyone around the world
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This is part of my complaint when making this story.
You know? Among the four fanfics I'm working on. Fate Irregular Magician is the most difficult to create.
Is it because of the magic system?
Not because of the magic system... because the combination of mystery and science does exist in the Nasuverse.
Chaldea is a simple example
Remember this!!!
I didn't include Nasuverse in Mahoukouka!!!
But, I put Mahoukouka in the Nasuverse!!!!
Is it because you don't like Mahoukouka's story?
No, not because of that
The thing that I'm having trouble with is the timeline and the school elements!!!
1. Timeline.
Just so you know, Mahoukouka always does Timeskip!!! First just a day, then a few days, then a whole week, two weeks, a month, a semester. Look!!
2. School elements.
- For example, PE lessons.
This first appeared after the Timeskip one month if I'm not mistaken, and from the character dialogue it's clear this is the first PE lesson held at school. This is a common subject but it should be done at least once a week.
- What are Magic High School lessons like? There are many compulsory subjects but which ones are they?? Nothing at all, we are only shown some practice tests and exam results. But there was no previous process.
- Honestly, I really didn't get the elements of high school life in the main story.
Do you know friends? The story in Fate Dungeon Myth S1 and Fate Lost Class S1 is in a timeline hole.
- Danmachi has a lot of timeline holes but danmachi has many story points that can be used to fill them.
And I used two or three of those story points in Fate Dungeon Myth S1 where the story has reached 50% now.
- Arifureta has a timeline hole of two weeks but it's very clear direction, training and this is what I use.
Then there was Fate Astray Night, of course I took 2nd Tokyo HGW. The story material that I managed to get was very limited but I know what the events of the first day were like? What was the third day like? Etc. This is what I will develop later.
But Mahoukouka is something completely different!!! There are too many Timeskips!!! There is very little material about school!!! And I have many other complaints!!!
The easiest way here is to just follow the existing timeline and main story but that really doesn't suit my style... It feels very bland to me.
I don't consider myself a great writer that's why I'm having trouble here!!!
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OK, that's enough for now, OK!!!
See you again in the next chapter.
