Hello, I'm just writing this text to tell you that I appreciate your opinions. Some people tell me what they think of my story and I'm happy with it. However, looking like comments telling me my story is getting boring, I would like to know what you want me to do to improve it. Don't hesitate to send me a comment to answer me.

PS: regarding my mistakes, I'm sorry. However, no corrector was dedicated to helping me. So I do what I can.

Thanks