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(Scene change)
TDI. Chapter 3: Not so Happy Campers - Part 2
(Dock of Shame)
Chris is in the dock, "Last time on Total Drama Island..." the screen shows the 22 campers at the campfire. "22 campers signed up to spend 8 weeks at this old, and abandoned crappy summer camp ..." Owen is seen hugging Gwen and Tyler, then switching to Lindsay terrified of the cockroach. "Some seemed happy, others not so much..." Chris chuckles a bit. "We're about to have our first challenge, so stay tuned to see what happens next" Chris says as the camera shows DJ and Katie.
"What do you think they'll make us do?" Katie asked DJ nervously, to which the Jamaican put a hand on her shoulder to comfort her.
"Don't worry, it's our first challenge; how hard can it be? Maybe the challenge will be relaxing and fun."
(Cliff)
All the campers are in their swimsuits at the edge of the island's highest cliff.
"OH SHIT!" Although the word was censored by the editor, Chris preferred it uncensored, but nooo, the producers wanted this show to be family-friendly.
(Opening, if you're curious, read the chapter Not so Happy Campers - Part 1)
(Cliff - present)
"All right campers, your first challenge is divided in two parts, the first part is to jump off this cliff" some gulp at the idea of doing that.
"Piece of cake" Bridgette whispers to Tyler, the girl's swimsuit is the typical one you can find on a surfer, a short-sleeved gray wetsuit, it has a lighter gray tone on the belly and a circle on the chest with the image of a wave, as for the athletic guy, he has red trunks.
"If you look down, you'll see two areas ..." the campers lean over and can see the two circles in the water "... the larger area represents the part of the lake that we filled with ... psychotic... man-eating sharks" Chris couldn't help but laugh a bit as he saw the campers open their jaws and eyes wide at the sight of the swimming sharks.
(Confession)
"How the hell is that legal?!" Trent exclaims completely shocked. Maybe signing up for this show wasn't such a great idea after all.
(Cliff)
"The small area is completely shark-free, so I recommend you to land there. For every camper who jumps and survives will earn a point for their team..." Chris mentions as the camera focuses on some crates on the beach at the bottom of the cliff "...the team with the most points will get some help to transport the crates you'll find on the nearby beach straight to your respective cabins for the second and final part of the challenge, building your own hot tub before dinner".
"As this is your first challenge, and you are still learning how things are done here, no one will go home today, but you surely won't like to disappoint your teammates. Alright, Bass, you go first" Chris indicates, putting some tension on the team.
"Alright" Bridgette swallows a bit at seeing the distance from where she was standing to the water, it seems her confidence was diminishing "Who's going first?" to which her team falls into an uncomfortable silence before switching to the Gophers.
"Don't worry guys, they always make the interns try these things out to make sure it's safe" Owen comforts, the guy is wearing orange trunks.
But unnoticed by anyone, Chris nervously shifts his eyes upon hearing that.
(Off-camera flashback)
Chris can be seen with Chef, who is in his swimsuit at the top of the cliff, clearly the cook is not very happy to be there "Why do I have to do this?"
Chris just maintains his usual smile, "You know we have to test this out to make sure it's safe, that, and all the interns we have are in the hospital".
"Do I look like a college student looking to gain some work experience?" The Chef was seriously considering to ask for a raise for what they're asking him to do.
"Come on, just jump already you big chicken" the host says, and then mimics the behavior of a chicken to mock him, to which the Chef just resigns and puts on his goggles.
"I don't get paid enough for this" he says, only to jump and land in the shark area "Hey, I made it!" he says cheerfully, but is cut off when a shark touches his foot "What was that?" Now he's worried "Hey Chris, something's not right here!" he exclaims, only to be pulled under the water, and seconds later he manages to resurface and swim to the shore.
Chris after seeing all this just shrugged "Looks safe enough to me" he says, filling up the safety standards on his clipboard and walking back to his trailer.
(End of off-camera flashback)
"Alright, who's first?" Eva asks, wearing a navy blue one-piece swimsuit that simulates her usual clothes.
"Ladies first" offers Duncan, who seems to be wearing black trunks as a swimsuit. The punk in question wants to make sure at least he'll survive by watching the others do it first.
"Get out of the way people!" everyone is surprised to see Izzy, who has a green three-piece swimsuit consisting of a top, tights, and a green cap, running straight to the cliff with a huge smile on her face and then jumping, she does two backflips, and falls like a skydiver laughing all the way down to the safe zone.
The campers just looked at each other before the Bass celebrates at seeing the girl resurface completely unscathed, with Chef approaching in the loser boat to pick her up.
"Alright, that's one point for the Bass, who's next?" Chris was relieved that the girl was okay, he wouldn't be getting a lawsuit.
"Woo-hoo, here we go!" Tyler looks more excited about the idea of jumping as he sees that it's survivable. He takes a run, jumps, and assumes the proper position to dive safely like the athlete he is, but he missed his aim a bit and ended up colliding with one of the metal rafts that delimited the safe zone, giving a cry of pain, but still seems to be okay.
"Ouch, that had to hurt" Chris chuckled to himself.
It seems the jumps by these two encouraged the bravery of most of the team.
"Aaaahhhhh!" it seems Bridgette immediately regretted jumping judging by her terrified expression and the sudden movement of her arms as if trying to grab something.
"WOOOO-HOOOO!" while Geoff didn't have much trouble, his happy face was evident as he held onto his hat to not lose it. He wears trunks the same color as his pants.
"Watch out below!" at least Eva had the courtesy to warn so as not to land on someone.
" ..." Duncan said nothing as he fell with his arms crossed.
"Oh no, there's no way I'm doing that." DJ, who wears gray trunks, didn't look enthusiastic and seemed rather scared.
"Scared of heights, big guy?" Chris seems to want to give the Jamaican a motivational talk.
"Ever since I was little" the boy confirms.
"Don't worry, if you don't want to, you don't have to jump ..." the host says empathically, but quickly changes his expression to a mocking one while taking out a chicken hat "but that'll make you a chicken, wear this for the rest of the day".
"Are you serious, man?" DJ didn't like Chris's mocking smile as he nodded, and even less the fact that he started acting like a chicken.
On the other hand, Justin, who wears dark blue trunks, jumped but didn't land in the safe area getting terrified gasps from the other campers. It seems the sharks are approaching to eat him, but instead, they stayed awed by his looks and ended up carrying him to the shore, to the incredulous gaze of the others.
(Confession)
"Did you guys saw the same thing I did?" Noah blinked in surprise, what the hell happened there?
*Static*
"Did the sharks pull him out of the water?" Tyler scratched his head, confused.
*Static*
"Man, that was weird" Geoff rubbed his eyes to confirm he was seeing correctly.
*Static*
"Oh come on! That's unfair" Harold didn't seem to like the idea that the show's pretty boy saved himself because of his looks.
*Static*
"What happened to the part about them being man-eaters?" Izzy, for her part, crossed her arms with a disappointed pout, she wanted to see some action.
*Static*
"Meh, it's not the weirdest thing I've seen," Naruto, on the other hand, looks rather unfazed. Years of living with Kurama and his mother made him get used to seeing strange things.
(Cliff)
"Excuse me, Chris, I have a condition," Courtney, who wears a swimsuit consisting of a top similar to sportswear and short leggings, both gray, with her hair tied in a ponytail, catches the host's attention.
"What kind of condition?" Chris asks, curious about how the polite girl wanted to get out of this and save her face.
"A condition that prevents me from jumping to a possible death," the girl mentions as if it was the most normal thing in the world.
"You can chicken out if you want, but that'll make the rest of your team hate you, and put you at risk of being the first to go when the first elimination challenge comes" Chris didn't want to help her but just informed her of the possible outcomes that could happen.
"It's a calculated risk, I've seen the other team, and I don't think most of them will jump" it seems this girl is very confident in what she says or maybe just plain arrogant.
"Whatever, here's your chicken hat." As Courtney walks away, Chris checks his list of the teams. "Alright, we have seven jumpers and two chickens, there's two more left" the host says, looking at Cody, who seems ready to jump, and Katie and Sadie, both of whom have the same two-piece swimsuit consisting of a light pink top with dark pink polka dots and the bottom which is the same color as the dots, are holding hands with a pleading expression.
"I'm not jumping unless it's with Sadie" Katie pleads.
"And I'm not jumping unless it's with Katie" Sadie agrees until both kneel in front of the host with tearful faces.
"Can we be together, please, please, please, please, please..." the girls mention at the same time repeatedly, annoying Chris.
"Um ... I could switch places," Cody, who has cream trunks with black spots on the sides simulating a tide, offers to change to give the host some options.
"You've got to be shi... Alright!" Chris stops himself in time to maintain his professionalism. "Cody, you go with the Gophers, Sadie, you go with the Bass." 'I really hope both of them behave, and I don't care about any legal trouble that comes if I have to kick them out' these girls really are testing his patience.
The girls could only squeal happily as Katie separates for a moment to give Cody a grateful hug making the geek blush considering they are both in swimsuits and quite close.
"Thanks Cody, I owe you one" the taller of the best friends says, returning to Sadie and running straight to the cliff, holding hands.
"We are coming Killer Bass!" the two exclaim before finally jumping.
"Alright, we have nine jumpers and two chickens. Gophers, if you manage to beat that, you'll get some carts as an advantage for the next part of the challenge," Chris, feeling more at ease, gives the Gophers the green light to jump.
"Sweet, alright guys, who's going first?" Trent says, wearing reddish-brown trunks.
"You don't have to ask twice" with an excited grin on his face, Naruto who is wearing black trunks with orange lines to the sides, runs towards the cliff and jumps.
"AWEEEESOOOME!" he shouts excitedly, then assumes a diver's position and lands in the safe area.
Cody turns to look at his new team. "I know it's weird to have a new teammate right at the beginning, but let's win this guys" with that, the geek takes a run and jumps, although quite terrified if his scared screams and the jerky movement of his arms indicating he wants to fly are any indication.
"Alright, the Gophers have two points, who's next?" the host asks the rest of the team.
"No way I'm jumping" Heather announces, wearing a maroon-colored bikini.
"Why?" Beth, wearing a pink and fuchsia swimsuit, she thinks that the queen bee might have some medical condition.
"Hello, national television? My hair will get wet" Heather clarifies to the incredulity of her team.
"Didn't your hair get wet a few hours ago at the dock? It's too late to complain about that," Gwen rebukes her, wearing a black two-piece sports swimsuit.
Although her comment earned her an annoyed look from the queen bee.
"Shut up, weird goth girl" Heather was not in the mood to remember that detail.
"If she doesn't jump, I won't either," Lindsay, who has a red bikini, follows Heather's example, not the best thing to happen at the moment.
"Oh no no no, we're not going to lose the challenge just because you don't want to get your hair wet, you scrawny spoiled brat" Leshawna tells her, wearing a gray one-piece swimsuit with an 'L' on the left chest.
It's worth mentioning that this earned several surprised looks from those still on the cliff.
"Back off, Ghetto-glamour, too-tight-pants-wearing, rap-star wannabe," Heather didn't hold back and returned the fire.
"And you, mall shopping, ponytail-wearing, teen-girl-reading in high school prom queen" at this point, Trent and Owen step in ready to separate the two if a fight starts.
"At least I'm popular," Heather finishes, horrified looks and gasps from the others, except for Noah, who seems to enjoy the free show those two are giving.
"Jump!" Leshawna's patience has run out.
"Make me!" Heather doesn't believe the sassy girl would do anything, how wrong she was, considering that Leshawna indeed picks her up and throws her off the cliff.
Heather then emerges from the water and looks where Leshawna is supposed to be standing with hatred. "Leshawna, you're so dead!" but it seems the mentioned girl didn't hear her or didn't care.
"Hey, I threw you into the safe zone?! I just hope to land there" she said to herself as she jumped, landing next to Heather, as Naruto and Cody helped them onto the boat.
"Does that count as her jumping?" Gwen asks Chris, who shrugs, the goth will take it as a yes.
It seems if she didn't want to lose, she had to jump, considering she had no other choice, she jumped completely terrified as she screamed all the way down.
"Ahhh!" Noah followed suit, wearing navy blue trunks with brown flowers, fell like a cannonball.
"I thought this was a talent show" Lindsay said, terrified, much to Chris's amusement.
"Yeah ... no," as there was no other option, the bombshell jumped with a terrified scream.
"I... can't do it" it seems that fear consumed Beth, as Chris pulled out another chicken hat. "Sorry!" she yells, only for Cody and Leshawna, who are on the beach, act like chickens to tease her.
"That is ... pathetic, right?" Lindsay asked, somewhat confused.
"Super pathetic" Heather mercilessly comments as the camera shifts to those on the cliff.
"Yeeeesss!" Harold, who wears olive green trunks, unlike Beth, didn't chicken out and jumps, he just had to close his legs, or else ... "AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!" all the boys covered their family jewels with pained faces as they saw Harold hit the water surface in the worst possible way.
"Oooohhhhhh" even the sharks seemed to feel that.
(Confession)
"Man, that was just painful to watch," Duncan tightly closed his eyes, he felt that hit despite not receiving it.
*Static*
"I don't think he'll be able to have offspring anymore," mumbles a trembling Cody.
(Cliff)
"Uhhhh... I hate when that happens" but Chris's smile said otherwise.
"Alright, see you down there dude" Trent tells Owen to jump afterwards leaving the oaf at the top of the cliff.
"Listen up Gophers, you need this jump to win" Chris had pulled out a megaphone to inform those below.
"No pressure dude" Owen relaxed a bit when he heard Chris until... "Okay, there's a lot of pressure," forget it, Owen is now very nervous and just took a few steps back.
(Confession)
"You know, the thing is, I'm not a good swimmer" Owen mentions, still wearing his swimsuit.
*Static*
"I look at him and I think that if he jumps, he'll die" Gwen doesn't hold her teammate in high regard.
*Static*
"I don't think he's going to make it," Geoff says.
*Static*
"Do you think he'll be okay?" Katie asks Sadie, apparently both are inside the confession.
"I hope so, he's been a really nice guy so far" Sadie replies.
(Cliff)
"Come on, you can do it big guy," Leshawna murmurs, hoping the boy can jump and give them the victory.
Owen just takes a breath, gathering all the courage he has. Finally, he opens his eyes with a determined look and runs to jump off the cliff, but as always, gravity plays its part, and let's say that the boy's weight worked against him.
"OH CRAAAAAAAP! AAAAAHHHHHHHH!" at this point, Owen is falling at full speed into the water.
Meanwhile, Trent is helping a pained Harold to reach the boat, but both look up to notice a shadow as they see Owen reaching them, and once the oaf hits the water, he causes the biggest belly flop splash ever seen, even creating a mini-tsunami that reached the island's forest.
On a part of the beach, Gwen luckily had a not-so-rough landing as she thought. She tried to stand up, only to slip and fall again, landing on what cushioned her fall, a groan sound much to her surprise. She finally opens her eyes only to blush bright red noticing she landed on top of her Japanese teammate, who was looking at her equally surprised.
It didn't help that they were both in swimsuits, and let's just say she could feel how well-built he was.
"I-I-I-I'm sorry!" the girl apologizes, quickly getting up with her face on fire, while the equally blushing Japanese boy gets up.
"I-it's fine, it was just an accident," Naruto tries to calm the situation, he then takes a deep breath. "This never happened?" he asks, extending his hand to the goth girl.
"Never happened" Gwen replies, shaking his hand, somewhat relieved. "By the way, I'm Gwen" she greets, making Naruto smile as they move on from the akward situation.
"Naruto, nice to meet ya" at least the first friendship has just emerged on the island.
"The Screaming Gophers win!" the host announces through his megaphone, making the team members celebrate, but Trent, who is on top of a capsized loser boat, stops momentarily as something happens with Owen.
"Hey man, what's going on?" the musician asks.
"I think... I lost my swimsuit" everyone cringes at what the guy admitted.
(Beach)
With their normal clothes on, the teams transport their boxes to the camp, while the Gophers take advantage of the advantage they gained by using the carts that Chris promised, the Bass on the other hand were falling behind by carrying the boxes as best they could. DJ, Duncan, Tyler, Eva, and surprisingly Izzy each carry or push a box on their own due to their physical strength, but the others had to pair up to push the remaining boxes.
"Ouch, I think I got a splinter" Courtney was not in the best mood, she just cost her team the advantage and put herself at risk of being the first one eliminated, just great.
"Carry your box, chicken" Eva snarles, barely keeping her anger in check, keeping her mind focused on completing the challenge is what she needs to prevent her anger from consuming her.
"Hey, I have experience being a C.I.T., you need me" Courtney tries to defend herself, but the others didn't buy that one.
"Sorry princess, but that experience only helped us to be behind the other team" Duncan rolls his eyes, she may be sexy in his eyes like Heather, but she's too uptight for his taste.
Tyler stops for a moment to put down his box and find the words he was going to say, "Umm... I have to use the bathroom." After saying it, he quickly goes to the bushes.
"Hurry up, we're still behind" Eva says, picking up the pace a bit.
"I also have to go" Katie says.
"You too?" it seems Sadie was on the same page as her friend, as after letting out a squeal, the best friends also went behind the bushes.
On the other hand, it seems that Courtney is experiencing a little instant karma as a bug stung her in the eye.
"Ouch, I think it stung me" what a way to start the show. But well, after Tyler and the bffs returned, they had to catch up. While the clumsy athlete was already quite close to the others, Katie and Sadie had another problem.
"Hey, don't you feel some burning?" Sadie nodded in response to her friend's question.
"Yes, I'm feeling a lot of itching." They didn't progress much further as they had to scratch themselves until Chris arrived on an ATV to see what was going on.
"You girls are falling far behind, what's wrong?" but the host's question was answered by Courtney.
"Your butts are itching" the polite girl answered, causing Chris to cringe as he looked at her eye.
"Oh darn, that looks bad. And what happened to you?" He couldn't leave these teens alone for a few seconds without something happening to them.
"She was stung by an insect" Bridgette, who approached to see what was happening, answered, and then witnessed Katie and Sadie's plight, years of living on the beach taught her some things about nature, so she had an idea of what might have happened.
"When you went to do your business, did you squat?" Bridgette asks, to which the friends nod in response to the surfer's question.
"Did you notice what plants were around you?" Bridgette asks again, only for Sadie to respond.
"They were somewhat oval and green, there where a lot of them around us" to which Bridgette already had an idea of what happened. The girls are probably from the city, so she understands why they were unaware of these things.
"You squatted over poison ivy," the surfer concludes, causing the best friends to widen their eyes in shock and then scream terrified while Chris laughs at their misfortune.
"Oh man, I can't believe it," Chris doesn't believes in karma, but if it did exist, he was thankful it had reached these girls for bothering him earlier.
(Cabins)
The Screaming Gophers had already arrived at the camp with a significant advantage. Right now, they were trying to open the boxes with their teeth, an additional mini challenge by Chris part.
After another half-hour, they finally managed to open them and found that there were no instructions.
"How on earth are we going to assemble this thing?" a frustrated Heather asked until Naruto spoke up.
"Don't worry, I know how to do it. Neighbors back home pay me to install various things in their houses, so follow my instructions and everything will be fine" it seemed to lift the team's spirits a bit.
"Well, at least the Moron knows how to be useful," a calmer Heather accepted, even though she didn't like the idea of taking orders.
"Whatever you say Dweeb," yep, without a doubt, Naruto was right. Dealing with her will be a headache.
Then they get to work on building the hot tub with some enthusiasm. Naruto made things a little easier by taking care of the complicated parts along with Noah, who knew something from reading it in his books.
Meanwhile, taking advantage that the other team hasn't arrived yet, Heather, followed by Lindsay approached Leshawna to talk a bit.
"Hey, I'd like to apologize for what I said earlier, and ... well, your earrings are really cute" it seemed Leshawna took what Heather said well. Maybe she misjudged her.
"I'd also like to apologize for pushing you off the cliff" at least this would improve the teamwork in building the hot tub.
"That's okay, I just needed a push. Everything in the past?" Leshawna just shook the hand that the queen bee extended. At least everything was behind them... for now.
As they walked away, Lindsay was curious about the conversation. "Were all those things you said about Lefonda true?" she asked, mispronouncing Leshawna's name.
"Leshawna..." Heather corrected her. "and no, she's going down, and by the way, those are the ugliest earrings I've ever seen" yep, this girl will certainly make a certain reputation on the island.
"But if you hate her so much, why were you so friendly with her?" Lindsay couldn't understand that.
"Have you ever seen this kind of shows? Keep your friends close and your enemies closer," that might be her only advice that Heather will willingly give in the program.
"Ohhh..." Lindsay tried to understand as much as she could from that statement. "Am I your friend?"
"Yes... for now," Heather said the last part quietly.
(Change of scene)
The Killer Bass finally arrived at the camp. Time wasn't on their side, and from what they could see, the other team was making good progress on their hot tub.
"Great, how are we going to catch up?" Duncan was already a little annoyed.
"Come on, guys, we can do it. We just need to be quick" Geoff tried to cheer up his team, but it seemed his words weren't working.
"Well, I have experience in being a C.I.T., so if we manage ourselves well, we can do this," wanting to take the opportunity to clean her name, Courtney took the leadership of her team.
"Damn girl, what happened to your eye?" but Leshawna couldn't help but notice how swollen Courtney's eye was, and she wasn't the only one. The rest of the Gophers were surprised to see the swelling eye.
"Don't look!" the embarrassed girl said as they looked at her.
From these moments on, the camera showed some parallels on how both teams organized themselves to assemble their respective hot tubs. On one hand, the Gophers did it excellent, but on the other hand, the Bass had many problems, not being able to communicate, fighting over tools, and some not wanting to work.
"Dude, come and help; we're running out of time," Tyler normally liked to do things under pressure, but in this situation, they were very short on time and needed all the help they could get, but Justin wasn't helping.
"I'm sorry buddy. Do you know what would happen if I started working like this? I'd get calluses on my hands," he said, irritating Duncan even more.
(Confessional)
"Dude, this is a show where we'll have challenges all the time. How the hell are you going to contribute to the team if you don't want to damage your image?" yep, Duncan wasn't in the mood to deal with that.
*Static*
"Normally, I'd motivate him to work harder, but the hot tub isn't coming out all right, and I know I'm now the most likely to go home, so I'm going to let Justin dig his own grave" Courtney said with her eye completely swollen.
(Cabins)
Chris ended the challenge when he noticed that there were 10 minutes left until dinner. Upon inspecting the Topos' jacuzzi, he could see that it was very well made. "This is an awesome hot tub" he announced to the team's delight, while Owen emerged from the water celebrating.
On the other hand, the Bass were worried. They had to improvise a lot, so when Chris inspected it, it only took a few seconds for the hot tub to completely fall apart.
"Well... it seems we have an obvious winner" he said, causing the Gophers to celebrate. "Gophers, you will be able to enjoy this jacuzzi for the rest of your stay. What do you think?" he asked, seeing the team celebrating.
"Yay! We won!" Lindsay exclaimed happily as she hugged Beth and Heather, but everyone stopped abruptly when they saw Owen celebrating naked. For those watching the show at home, it will be censored, but the campers, Chris, and the camera crew were not so lucky.
"Wooo-hoo-hoo-hooo, yeah!" ~We won the challenge, we defeated the other team, we're really awesome, yeah!~ he said, dancing and shaking his butt to the horror of those watching the uncensored version, finally, the oaf ended up hugging Lindsay and Heather, much to the queen bee's horror.
(Confession)
"Let's not talk about that … Ever" Eva shudders a little when she recalls what just happened.
*Static*
We can see a catatonic Heather who still hasn't snapped from the hug that a naked Owen had given her.
*Static*
"Yeah, the camp still sucks, but I guess since I'm here, I might as well do my best to win" Gwen says, as the windows can be seen indicating that it is already night.
(Cabins - night)
The Gophers can be seen having a party in the hot tub they built, with Cody, Trent, Lindsay, Heather, and Naruto in it, while Gwen relaxes in a nearby chair with Beth, and Leshawna does a victory dance with Harold, Owen, and Noah.
~Let's go Gophers, let's go Gophers, let's go, let's go, let's go, Gophers~ while they celebrated, the Bass just wanted to go to sleep. Courtney, upon noticing the camera, only asks, "Are you recording this?" only for the cameraman to give her a thumbs up. "Great, enjoy your little party as much as you want, but I will win this competition, and no one will stop me" she declares as the image goes dark.
End of the chapter.
Campers:
Screaming Gophers: Beth, Cody, Gwen, Harold, Heather, Leshawna, Lindsay, Naruto, Noah, Owen, Trent.
Killer Bass: Bridgette, Courtney, DJ, Duncan, Eva, Geoff, Izzy, Justin, Katie, Sadie, Tyler.
I think developing my writing style, I will have to refine it as I progress, but well, friendships, romances, and others are already forming. Finally, I was able to give an order as I wanted for the season, and now I need to think of original challenges. It will take me some time, but I hope it turns out well.
As you could see, no one was eliminated, so let's see what happens next. I also need to remind you that some time ago my readers in the spanish version of the story already decided to make it harem, so yeah, that's a thing, one thing that you need to know is that the harem is of maximum 6 girls, no more, so select them carefully and give me some ideas of how Naruto can be with them.
That's it for now from the not so much of a reader now.
I will be reading the reviews, accepting constructive criticism and interesting ideas.
Until next time.