Hey guys! It's 65 back again with another episode for you guys. I really wanna keep this season moving along, so I won't be too long with the reviews this time.
REVIEWS
Matthew Crispin - It's alright. You don't have to feel pressured to review every chapter of mine. It's not mandatory but it is appreciated. :) Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the Christmas special. I didn't want it to just be a basic villain so I decided to mix things up a bit.
Indoraptorman101 - Trust me, the actual main antagonists of Season 3 will come as a surprise to you. Regarding your idea, I like it! It unfortunately can't happen anymore this season because I already have it planned out, but hey, maybe in Season 4? Not sure if that's gonna happen yet but we'll see.
JTWAS1994 - Thanks for your review. I always appreciate them. I hope you enjoy this story as well.
Alright guys, let's start this episode! Reviews and constructive criticism welcome!
NB: Credit goes to Indy Scott for this episode's villain. Credit also goes to a guest review for additional ideas used.
Disclaimer: I do not own the Loud House. All rights belong to Nickelodeon.
NB: The theme song is "Thunder" by Imagine Dragons, with my own little twist in the lyrics. It follows the same tune though, of course. I felt like the song fit perfectly with the series so, here we are. You can kind of imagine Lincoln singing the lyrics if you like, as I feel they're sort of based off of him.
Theme Song
Just a young gun with a quick fuse
I was uptight, wanna let loose
I was dreaming of bigger things
And wanna leave my old life behind
Not a yes sir, not a follower
Fit the box, fit the mold
Don my mask and attire, my new persona
I was "Lightning" before the "Thunder"
Thunder, thunder
Thunder, thun- thunder
Thun-thun-thunder, thunder, thunder
Thunder, thun-thunder
Thun-thun-thunder, thunder
Thunder, feel the Thunder!
Lightning and Super Thunder!
Thunder, feel the Thunder!
Lightning and Super Thunder!
Thunder, thunder
Thunder!
Episode 3: Sugar Rush
"What's up my sweeties! It's your girl Sweetheart here, and I'm about to score big! I'm in the Royal Woods National Bank about to make racks!" said Sweetheart, who appeared to be talking to a phone camera.
Sweetheart is a young girl wearing a pink suit with a yellow heart insignia on it. She has pink and yellow gloves, boots, and a mask. She had bonbons attached to a sash across her person and also had a utility belt on around her waist. She also wore a red cloak with a hood to further conceal her identity. She seemed to recording her bank burglary while in the act.
"As you can see, I've got my cookie bombs all ready to go! They're about to blow this door down! Hope you're wearing headphones!" said Sweetheart, as she pushed down the button for the detonator which set off the bombs.
Her cookie bombs were arranged in a heart shape in the middle of the bank vault door and when they exploded, they left a perfect heart shaped hole in the center.
"Now that's sweet!" said Sweetheart.
*bank alarms start going off*
"Uh oh. I better get outta here!" said Sweetheart, as she quickly jumped through the hole inside the vault, and then jumped back out a few seconds later with stacks of money in each hand.
"Alright sweeties, it's time for this girl to bounce! *puts money in a small pink backpack before putting it on* If you wanna see me on my next job, make sure to follow me! Bye bye!" said Sweetheart, as she ended the recording.
"This video was posted about fifteen minutes ago, which means that this robbery was very recent." said Asst. Chief Peters, holding out his phone for Chief Barnes and Super Thunder to see.
It was then revealed that the group had been watching the video of Sweetheart's burglary the whole time. They had just arrived at the scene and the police were currently documenting evidence.
"I don't get it. How did she even escape?" asked Powerhouse.
"Hang on family. I think I see something. Madame L, would you mind bringing down that object from the air vent please?" asked Super Sense.
Madame L used her telekinesis to retrieve the object in question. She then dropped it in Super Sense's hands.
"*analyzes the substance using her heightened sense of touch* Upon closer inspection, it appears to be bungee-like material made of taffy." said Super Sense.
"Taffy? Ooh! Yum!" said Freeze excitedly.
"No Freeze." said Flame, keeping her twin from eating the remnant of candy.
"Aww..." said Freeze disappointed.
"It seems this young thief is very fond of candy. Judging from the video we saw and also this piece of evidence." said Chief Barnes.
"There's also been a piece of candy left over in every place she's hit this week dudes." said The Amp.
"Wow. This sure is a SWEET and SOUR situation! Hahahaha! Get it?" joked Light Show.
Everyone groaned as usual.
"So like, how are we gonna find this girl? She's totes moving way too fast." said Invisi-Girl.
"We're just gonna have to try and anticipate her next move! We've got to strike first Thunder!" said Mr. Elastic.
"I like your attitude Mr. Elastic. Of course, the police department will continue to search for clues as to the identity or whereabouts of this individual. We'll let you know if we find anything." said Chief Barnes.
"Thanks Chief. Alright Thunder, let's bolt." said Mr. Elastic, as he and the rest of Super Thunder left the scene.
"Ooh a cookie!" said Peters, about to pick up the familiar looking cookie from off the ground.
"I wouldn't eat that Peters." said Chief Barnes.
"Oh. Right." said Peters, with a sheepish smile.
Meanwhile with Sweetheart...
"Here's your money. *throws bag to the Green Lion* Piece of cake." said Sweetheart, actually eating a piece of cake after that statement.
"Hmph. Rude." said the Green Lion, as she began checking the amount of money.
"Hurry up lady! I don't have all day! Where's my cut?" asked Sweetheart impatiently.
"Here." said the Green Lion, handing a few bucks to the girl.
"Fifty dollars?! This isn't even close to half the amount!" said Sweetheart.
"Did you really expect me to split my money 50/50 with a 9 year old girl?" said the Green Lion.
"This is bogus! You cheated me! I'm gonna need more money than this!" said Sweetheart.
"What do you even need this money for?" asked the Green Lion.
"I'm saving up for a new purse alright? Now are you gonna give me some more money or what?" asked Sweetheart.
"How about this? I will give you some more money if you do another job for me." said the Green Lion.
"What kind of job?" asked Sweetheart.
"I've seen your robbing spree videos across social media. You seem to be quite the filmographer." said the Green Lion.
"So?" said Sweetheart, not seeing the point.
"Have you ever heard of the team known as Super Thunder?" asked the Green Lion.
"Super Thunder? That group of hero wannabes? Yeah. What about 'em?" asked Sweetheart.
"I need you to get some footage of them in action. I need to see how they fight." said the Green Lion.
"What do you need that for?" asked Sweetheart.
"Just get the footage okay? And I'll pay you some more money." said the Green Lion.
"So I'll have to fight them?" asked Sweetheart.
"Well how else are you going to get the footage?" asked the Green Lion.
"*sighs* Fine. But you better pay me more than $50 for this." said Sweetheart, as she walked away from the Green Lion and left the area.
The next morning, at the Loud House...
"So her name is Sweetheart?" asked Lori, trying to get filled in on the events of the week.
"Yup. But trust me, she's totes anything but sweet." said Leni.
"Its kinda scary how quickly she robs these places. It's like she thinks this is a game." said Lincoln.
"Maybe you guys would've had better luck catching her if I was around. I probably could've tracked her in the air." said Lori.
"Oh its alright Lori. You're in college now. We know you won't be able to make it to every emergency." said Rita.
"Still, if you can, we wouldn't mind if you flew on by." said Lynn Sr.
"Yeah! We can SHOOT THE BREEZE! Hahahaha! Get it?" joked Luan.
Everyone groaned as usual.
"O-M-Gosh you guys! No way!" exclaimed Leni suddenly.
"What's wrong?" asked Lynn.
"Check out what Sweetheart posted on Lifewall! She's #1 on trending!" said Leni, in shock.
The other Louds suddenly crowded around her as she played the video on her phone.
"Hey my sweeties! It's Sweetheart here again! So, I know some of my fans have been dying to meet me, so I'm doing a meet and greet over at Fairfield Park today. Come on out and we can enjoy some tasty treats! See you there!"
"A meet and greet at Fairfield Park? Something's fishy about this dudes." said Luna.
"Yeah, those treats might be STALE! Hahahaha! Get it?" joked Luan.
Everyone groaned as usual.
"I think we should head to the park guys. She might be planning something." said Lincoln.
"You have a point Lincoln. Alright Louds, it's time to suit up! We've gotta get to the park!" said Lynn Sr.
"I'll call Carol along the way. She might be able to help us out." said Lori, pulling out her phone.
A few minutes later...
"*communicator buzzes and she answers it* Hello?" said Twister.
"Hey Carol. We're almost at the park. Do you see Sweetheart anywhere?" asked Wind Vane.
"Nope. But there's a lot of people here already. Looks like kids and teens mostly." said Twister.
"Huh. That's weird. I thought she would've been there by now." said Wind Vane.
As the Thunderbolt started driving by the park, heading towards the entrance, everyone started taking in the scene.
"Whoa. There's a lot of people here." said Powerhouse.
"Who knew Sweetheart had so many fans?" said Freeze.
"I know. I'm honestly kinda jealous." said Flame.
Just then, Super Sense received a vision. In the vision, it showed many people running and screaming as the park seemed to be lit up in flames.
"Family, this is a trap." said Super Sense.
"What do you mean Lisa?" asked Invisi-Girl.
"Sweetheart had no intention of meeting with her fans today. I'm not sure if they're the intended target, but what I do know is that this park has been rigged with dozens of her cookie explosives." said Super Sense.
"You mean-?"
"Yup. This park has been turned into a minefield." said Super Sense, to Lightning's horror.
"Oh no..." said Wind Vane, with dread.
Just then, Sweetheart is shown pushing the button down on her detonator, which starts setting off her explosives.
*explosions start happening randomly around the park and many people start running for their lives*
"*drifts Thunderbolt inside the park and then comes to a stop* Let's move Thunder! We've gotta help those people!" shouted Mr. Elastic, as he and the rest of Super Thunder bolted into the fray.
With Wind Vane...
"Carol! Where are you? We need to get rid of some of these flames!" exclaimed Wind Vane.
"Right behind you Loud! *flies next to Wind Vane* Let's create a whirlwind!" said Twister, as she and Wind Vane started manipulating the air around them to create a whirlwind.
"Don't worry sis! I've got you covered on the ground! I'm blasting these trees with water." said Freeze, currently riding through the park on a wave.
"Thanks Freeze!" said Wind Vane, via communicator.
With The Amp, Light Show, and Ms. Shift...
"Yo! Everyone! Come this way to the exit! You've gotta evacuate the park!" said The Amp, using her mother as a megaphone.
"This meet and greet is officially too LIT! This way people!" exclaimed Light Show as well.
The crowd started moving towards them, hoping to get out of the park as quickly as possible.
With Invisi-Girl and Remedy...
"*sees an injured sister and her younger brother* Oh no! Are you injured? Come over here! Remedy will fix you up!" said Invisi-Girl standing beside Remedy.
The sister and brother staggered over to them and Remedy tended to their wounds.
With Powerhouse...
"*narrowly dodges a bomb* Whoa! *dodges another explosion* Phew! Who needs gym when you have this?" said Powerhouse.
"Power! Look out!" exclaimed Flame, as she suddenly dove in front of Powerhouse to save her from another explosion.
*Madame L gasps*
"Powerhouse! Flame!" exclaimed Lightning, as he ran over to see if they were okay.
It was then revealed that Flame had made a flame barrier that protected them from the cookie blast.
"Man, I may never look at cookies the same way again. You saved me big time Flame." said Powerhouse.
"Don't mention it. Its what sisters do." said Flame.
"*joins the group by riding a wave* Okay. I think I put out all the fires." said Freeze.
Meanwhile, in the air...
"*hears sirens approaching* Finally. The police are here." said Wind Vane.
"And the fire department too." said Twister.
"Well, *ends recording* I think that's enough footage for one day. Sorry my "fans", but even Sweetheart has a sour side." said Sweetheart, as she left from on top of the rooftop she was hiding on, and left the area.
Police cruisers pulled up to the park as well as the local fire department. Both parties then exited their vehicles in quick haste. The fire department got to work putting out the remainder of any fires. Super Thunder managed to evacuate the majority of the group, but a few people had severe third degree burns.
"We're gonna have to get them to the hospital." said Super Sense.
"Peters! Get Royal Woods Hospital on the line. We need some ambulances out here." said Chief Barnes.
"Right away Chief!" said Asst. Chief Peters, as he hurried to make the call.
Back with Sweetheart...
*Green Lion is watching the video of Super Thunder captured earlier at the park*
"Well? Are we good? Can I have my money now?" asked Sweetheart.
"*pauses video* Uh, no." said the Green Lion.
"What?! Why not?!" exclaimed Sweetheart.
"I asked you for footage of Super Thunder in action, but this is so blurry and far away that I can barely tell that they're there." said the Green Lion.
"Look lady, you asked me to give you action. As far as I'm concerned, I gave you plenty. Super Thunder won't be going near a cookie jar for awhile thanks to me." said Sweetheart.
"Little girl, if you want your money, you'll get me footage of Super Thunder up close and personal. Which means you'll have to get your hands dirty." said the Green Lion.
"*coughs* Um, Green Lion, if I may-"
"Fine. I'll do it. *takes her phone back* And don't call me little." said Sweetheart, as she started to walk away.
"Hold a moment young one. Here." said the Green Lion, handing Sweetheart a miniature camera that appeared to be just a lens.
"What is this?" asked Sweetheart.
"It is a miniature spy camera. Using this, you should be able to capture superb footage of Super Thunder in action for me to use. Just attach it to your suit somewhere and tap the lens to activate it." said the Green Lion.
"Okay lady. Whatever you say." said Sweetheart, as she left the room munching on some gumdrops as she left the room.
"Green Lion, why are you wasting time with this *wheezes* child? Surely there are stronger candidates to combat this super team." said Baron Hush.
"Its not about the combatant, it's about the footage. Now hush Baron. You need not worry about my affairs." said the Green Lion.
"*grumbles* Alright..." said Baron Hush dissatisfied.
Meanwhile, in downtown Royal Woods, Super Thunder were wasting no time in trying to track down Sweetheart.
*The Thunderbolt is in its aerial mode*
"The Thundercloud is in the sky! How are we doing down there kids?" asked Mr. Elastic, via communicator.
He currently had Super Sense, Remedy, and Madame L with him in the Thundercloud.
"No sight of Sweetheart on the west side Dad." said Freeze, currently searching the streets with Flame.
"Powerhouse?" asked Mr. Elastic.
"No sign of her on the east side either." said Powerhouse, searching along with Light Show.
"What about the heart of downtown?" asked Mr. Elastic.
"Invisi-Girl, Amp, Lightning and I are posted up on four street corners in the middle of town. We haven't seen her yet." said Ms. Shift.
"Okay, well just stay alert every-"
"Mom! Everyone! Look out!" exclaimed Wind Vane suddenly, via communicator.
"What's going on?!" asked Mr. Elastic concerned.
"*heightened sense of smell kicks in* I smell a sweet chocolate aroma approaching." said Super Sense, via communicator.
"Chocolate? What type of candy is Sweetheart attacking us with?" asked Lightning.
"I think we're about to find out bro." said The Amp, as four bonbons seemed to fall from the sky and landed in the midst of the group.
"Bonbons?" said Ms. Shift confused.
*bonbons suddenly start beeping*
"Totes not bonbons!" exclaimed Invisi-Girl, as she created a forcefield to shield her group from the explosion.
"Something tells me Sweetheart is here." said Twister, currently in the air.
"There she is!" exclaimed Wind Vane, pointing below.
Amidst the smoke that arose from the exploding candy, a short figure appeared and walked through it.
"What's up Super Thunder? I'm sure you already know this, but I'm Sweetheart. Nice to finally meet you." said Sweetheart.
"Yeah, unfortunately, we can't say the same for you dude." said The Amp, dusting herself off.
"*skates in* There you are! How dare you ruin the good name of candy! You should be ashamed!" said Freeze.
"Ashamed of what? I'm just sharing my sweets with you." said Sweetheart.
"Oh yeah? Do all of your sweets explode?" asked Powerhouse, joining the group.
"Pretty much yeah." said Sweetheart, eating a chocolate bar.
"Alright young lady, we're giving you one chance to surrender. Come quietly or we'll have to use force." said Ms. Shift.
"Yeah...*pulls out a large lollipop from behind her back* I don't think so." said Sweetheart.
"Oh does the lollipop blow up too?" asked Flame.
"Oh no. *presses button on it and the head starts spinning* This is a buzzsaw." said Sweetheart, with a devious smile.
"Oh boy." said Ms. Shift.
Sweetheart then started wildly swinging her lollipop buzzsaw around at the group.
"Hey! Watch where you're swinging that thing!" said Lightning, jumping out of the way.
"Yikes! This SAW is a real BUZZKILL!" said Light Show, jumping out of the way as well.
"It's time to stir things up!" said Twister, flying above the fray.
"Literally." said Wind Vane, following suit.
The two heroines created a cyclone that tossed Sweetheart up into the air.
"Whoa! This is actually kinda fun!" said Sweetheart.
*Thundercloud lands and Madame L hops out*
All of a sudden, Sweetheart noticed that her lollipop buzzsaw seemed to be being taken away from her.
*Sweetheart lands on the ground and sees Madame L retrieve her saw using her telekinesis*
"Funtime is over." said Madame L, as she dropped the weapon in Powerhouse's hands.
Powerhouse then snapped it in two by breaking it over her knee.
"Hey! That was expensive!" exclaimed Sweetheart, as she narrowly dodged a fire blast.
"So was the park you almost burned down!" said Flame.
"Okay, so maybe that was a bad idea. But you have to admit, my cookies were the bomb!" said Sweetheart.
"Suddenly I feel robbed." said Light Show.
Just then, Sweetheart felt her arms being restricted behind her back.
"What the heck?" said Sweetheart.
"*suddenly appears behind her* Sorry, but you totes need a timeout." said Invisi-Girl.
"Ugh! How old do you think I am?" said Sweetheart irritated.
She then stomped on Invisi-Girl's foot which made her accidentally release her hold on her. Sweetheart then took another one of her bonbons from her sash and pulled the pin out of it.
"Alright! This girl's had enough! This bomb-bon's about to go off if I don't get out of here safely!" said Sweetheart.
"That's not gonna happen unfortunately!" said Mr. Elastic, stretching his arm out to restrict Sweetheart's movement.
Unfortunately, he didn't do this well enough.
"*smirks* Dumb choice." said Sweetheart, as she dropped the bomb-bon from her hand.
"No!-"
The bomb-bon suddenly exploded in Super Thunder's midst.
"*blows away smoke from the area* Are you guys okay?" asked Wind Vane.
"*coughs* We're fine, but where's Sweetheart?" asked Lightning.
"It appears that she has once again eluded our grasp." said Super Sense, holding up a familiar looking piece of taffy candy.
"Hey! This saw wasn't even real! There's not even a blade on it!" said Powerhouse.
"Yo, we got punked big time dudes." said The Amp.
"It's almost like she wasn't really trying to fight you guys." said Twister.
"Ugh...the Chief's not gonna be happy about this..." said Mr. Elastic, slightly dazed.
"So...can I eat the taffy now?" asked Freeze.
"No Freeze!" exclaimed Flame.
Freeze just pouted as police sirens were heard approaching the scene.
Meanwhile with Sweetheart...
"Are you happy now?" asked Sweetheart.
"Yes. *downloads camera footage to her phone* Very much." said the Green Lion.
"Thank you. Now where's my money?" asked Sweetheart.
"Is this enough?" asked the Green Lion, handing her $300.
"Oh this is more than enough! That new purse is mine! Sweetheart is out! Later!" said Sweetheart, once again leaving the area.
"Alright, so you got the *wheezes* footage you wanted. What *wheezes* happens now?" asked Baron Hush.
"Patience Baron. I like to do things in an orderly fashion. Judging by this video, Super Thunder may be worth keeping an eye on." said the Green Lion.
Phew! That was a rush! I hope you guys enjoyed this episode and I hope it wasn't too sweet for you.
I'm just kidding but let me know what you thought of this episode in a review.
Anyways, I'm gonna get out of here. Thank you all for reading. I'm 65rogeryork and I'll see you all next time! Later!
