Ahem, hey guys it's Our hero here and I'm just here to tell you all that plans have been changed, so there's new relevant info in this updated Chapter 2, Also the harem has been changed, just a few ladies (five in total) have been switched with other ladies that weren't originally in the Naruto Universe,
So yeah, and one of the girls who was switched out was the mysterious girl in this chapter so that scene has been rewritten,
Chapter Two Denial and Suffering,
Naruto and Tayuya glared at each other, neither one wanted to make the opening move, Naruto because despite his fellow red head's nursing, his wounds still ached, Tayuya because her blades were too dangerous to just swing at injured people, she wasn't sure she could even fix what they'd do to him, 'With one hand,' she thought looking at him, 'three wounds will be made, and then his own will open,' she thought bitterly, 'I let my temper get the better of me and now I have to think of some way out of this,'
'Shit,' Naruto thought, 'I let her get to me and then I lashed out at her,' he cringed looking at the blades, 'those aren't regular swords, they'll rip me to shreds in one slash,' Naruto shuffled his feet slightly, stopping as the motion made his kidnapper's stance harden, he noticed two weakness in it, the first was, her front was wide open, but he'd have to dodge a counter slash from six blades after even the first hit, the second was at her back, but due to being trapped in a cave he couldn't really get behind her, he considered using the ceiling but a glance at her legs showed strong legs, she'd clear the distance and take his head easy, also she had sexy thighs,
Tayuya noticed that her opponent's eyes went to her legs, and trailed upwards stopping at her thighs, 'This is my chance,' she thought, "Hey," she said, drawing his attention back to her, "I'm going to the right," she said, making Naruto flick his gaze to her right, noticing the entrance, "If I do that, you wont kick me right?" she asked,
"Why are you going that way?" he asked,
"Because I don't want to fight," She stated,
"If that's true drop your swords," he said, his gaze narrowing,
"If I drop them you'll attack me," she spat glaring back at him,
"I won't kick you if you drop your swords,"
"I'll drop my swords if you drop your pants!" she shot back,
He blinked,
She blinked,
The cave was silent,
"What?" he asked,
Tayuya's face was entirely red, "I just meant that so you couldn't kick me very well you idiot!"
Naruto shook his head and shot back with, "I ALREADY SAID I W-"
Tayuya threw her blades down and raised her skirt,
"Wha-"
Quickly Tayuya ran over to the surprised ninja and pushed him to the ground covering his mouth before he could make a single sound, "Listen," she said, "My name Is Tayuya Akari, do you know that name?" she asked letting go of his mouth,
"Akari? I don't-,"
Tayuya covered it again, "That's a pain," she stated, "basically you are Naruto Uzumaki right?" he nodded, "I'm your wife," she stated, she waited a few seconds for him to process that, then she spoke again, "Yes I'm serious, your mother Kushina Uzumaki and My mother Lishotte Akari betrothed us together when we they were younger, don't ask me why my mother never told me when I asked and she's dead now," she stated, "do you understand that?" then she took her hand off his mouth,
Naruto just looked confused at her, "I take it you lost this marriage contract?" he asked suspiciously,
"Nope" she stated pulling it out of her stocking and held it over his face so he could read it,
"I'm... so confused right now," he said after a while, "You're my wife?"
"Well one day, I think?" she asked, for all Tayuya knew about the contract she actually was his wife already,
Naruto laid his head on the ground, "Why haven't I heard about this?" he asked,
"Well it's either cause my village was wiped out by Orochimaru, thus anyone who did know about our arranged marriage likely thought I was dead, or maybe your mum just forgot to mention it to anyone,"
He nodded, she did die suddenly, and from what little he'd been told about her she was reckless and forgetful so maybe it had just slipped her mind, though he'd have to check up on that when he got back to the village, 'Maybe Ko-chan knows about this? she was friends with my dad,' he shook his head, 'questions for later' he noted, now his apparent future wife was straddling him in a skimpy maid dress, and he'd already seen her underwear too,
"Uh you mind getting off me?" he asked,
She realised their positions, but she smiled down at him, "Yeah, there a problem?" she asked shifting herself up his body, giving him a great view of her thighs, "Want me to get off?" she asked softly, adjusting her position so he could again see up her skirt,
"Considering we just met this is a little wei-," Naruto noted the pupils in Tayuya's eyes had were slowly slitting, "Wait, those eyes,"
"Problem?" Kyubii asked, "I'm just trying to cater her to your will,"
'Leave her alone!' Naruto thought, 'She's not a toy she's a person!'
"Look in her eyes," Kyubii spoke from inside his mind, "She's a little dazed sure, but more importantly she's able bodied and sexy," The demon he'd had his entire life stated, "Sure she'd be angry if you fucked her right now, but if you stay around her for long enough she won't even care that her whole purpose in life will be to service you," Naruto could hear the smirk on the Nine tail's face, "Think about it, a nice bodied maid girl who can help you kill your enemies and then instantly after could be fucked on top of the bloodied corpses of your enemies without any complaints, nothing would matter to her but you,"
"I SAID LET HER GO!" He demanded,
Tayuya's eyes returned to normal, She quickly took several breaths, "The hell IS that!?" she asked,
"The Nine tailed fox," Naruto stated, "More specifically her corruption, it's a type of genjutsu that comes with her essence, her chakra, when it gets a hold of you she can puppeteer not your body, but your emotions, making you willing to do anything she wants,"
"She?" Tayuya asked, "And how are you immune to it?"
"I'm not," Naruto said, "I need to focus or she can manipulate me too,"
Tayuya stood up and picked up her swords, "No offence but I'll be over here tonight," she said,
Naruto nodded, "Hey if I try to grope you while you're asleep just know while you cut my head off it wasn't me who wanted to do it,"
Tayuya nodded and then took in his words, "... does she make you do that often?"
Naruto shook his head, "Only once, usually she tries to force me to fight back against the people trying to hurt me," He looked down at his hands, "That's why I use a kick based martial art, so people will know which one of us is fighting,"
Tayuya looked at the still cooking bear, "I take it they don't care,"
He shook his head,
She moved closer to the bear and started spinning it again, "Food'll be ready soon,"
Inside Naruto The Kyubii smirked, 'Good boy, I let this lovely lady here hear our little chat about her being your slave, you made a big impression on her today Naruto, though I still believe she'd have been better as a slut but whatever, You'll let me corrupt someone eventually,'
OCTOPUS-Nearby-OCTOPUS
The sound of metal upon metal echoed thought the forest as Kakashi tried to defend himself against the onslaught the fake Kushina was using against him, Yet as she again stopped giving him time to breath he noted, that she really did fight like Kushina, The naginata left her mouth many times, many different forms were used by her, one handed, two handed, in her mouth, and she even used water chakra to surf around on it,
'Exactly like Kushina did,' Kakashi noted in between heavy breaths, "There's no mistaking it," he said, "You fight exactly like her, how?" he asked,
"Why would I tell you that Kashi- no, Kakashi," She said, "You are my enemy now,"
"Am I?" he asked, "Why am I your enemy?"
"Because the entire Leaf village is my enemy," she stated, her eyes hardened as she said that, "Do you know what my favourite number is?" she asked,
Kakashi thought for a second, "Trick question, you don't have one"
Kushina nodded, "That's right, what about my least favourite number, do you know what it is?" She asked picking up the naginata again, "It should be an easy number for you to figure out Kakashi," She leapt into the air, "IT'S THE SAME NUMBER AS THE SCARS YOU AND THAT WRETCHED VILLAGE INFLICTED ONTO MY SON'S BODY," She placed the blade into her mouth and pressed her hands together, "Are you ready to feel the rage of a mother Kakashi?" she asked as a giant water dragon rose behind her, "One who's been forced to watch as forty two scars were given to the child she loves even though she was forced to abandon him? the scars the villagers she almost sacrificed her very life to protect gave her beloved son!" her eyes turned red and her hair came alive,
Red chakra exploded out of her body, The dragon behind her grinned menacingly, she leapt forward, it's as if she were in slow motion as she moved from one tree to the next, the dragon striking where she landed, "Drown in my despair," she said getting closer, "Choke on my frustrations," She leapt high above the trees, "But most of all," She called as the dragon followed her,
Suddenly Kushina was in front of him, the blade was in her mouth, Her eyes glowed red, she spun in mid air slicing open his chest in three places, "Be ripped apart by the maelstrom of my WRATH!"
Kakashi tried jumping back, but his arms and legs were held in place by golden chains,
Kushina shot past him, A trail of red following her Naginata's blade, "Goodbye Kashi-kun, Tell Minato if he listens to whatever scum like you spouts, That I'll handle the leaf," She turned and watched as the water dragon descended upon Kakashi, as soon as he entered the mouth, The dragon's blue body had ripped apart The body of Kakashi Hatake, and the proof was the red of his blood staining it's body through it,
She closed her eyes and let her chains search for any trace of the man she'd just killed in case he'd somehow escaped,
They found nothing. . . not a trace of the only remaining member of her husband's Genin squad, or she guessed the last remaining member of them, though her last words to him were harsh she tossed her weapon into the base of the nearby tree, not wanting her tears to stain it, 'Why do I regret that?' she asked herself, 'He never defended Kushina's son from the abuse he faced, so why am I crying?' She rested against the tree and shook her head, 'I couldn't allow him to escape after he saw me, not after he knew that I fight just like Kushina and the leaf is my enemy, too much is at stake,'
Kushina clasped her hands together, "Farewell Kakashi Hatake," She bowed her head, "May you finally find the rest you've been so cruelly denied,"
Then she leapt off hiding her presence again,
OCTOPUS-In the morning-OCTOPUS
Naruto and Tayuya had spent the entire night not sleeping, not talking, just laying awake glaring at one another, when morning came Tayuya grabbed Naruto by his arm making it look like she was hanging off him, but in truth she held him hostage and dragged him away,
Naruto gave a reluctant stare back at Waterfall as he was being dragged, 'I'm sorry everyone, I hope what little I did was enough to help you,' he thought,
"Seeing as how we're going to need somewhere to hide, we're heading off to Takigakure," Tayuya explained leaning further into him, "We can get you in a hospital there,"
Naruto looked at her, "Why are you doing this?" he asked, "from kidnapping me to trying to look out for me?"
"Do you know who Orochimaru is?" Tayuya asked,
Naruto thought for a second, "Yeah, evil snake guy, has a boner for ninjutsu, right?"
"Good, now who was the latest born Senju and Uchiha?" she asked,
"Uh well,"
"Exactly," Tayuya said, "The Senju and the Uchiha came together to make a village where they could raise there future generations in peace, and it lasted for a whole two generations before they were mostly wiped out," Tayuya explained, "The village system wasn't a bad idea, but it's been handled like shit," she said,
"That's circumstantial," Naruto said, "The Uchiha were wiped out when one of them went rouge, Itachi Uchiha, one of the greatest Anbu the leaf ever produced, and the Senju were ninja's, they were sent off into battle and died protecting the village," Naruto argued,
"A little convenient that the entire Senju clan has no living relatives isn't it?" Tayuya asked, "That in the leaf there isn't even a distant relative to one of it's founding clans,"
Naruto was stunned, 'She's not implying-,'
"That's right sweetie," Tayuya said, "They were sent off to die,"
"What?" Naruto asked, "That's-,"
"What's Wood style?" Tayuya asked,
Naruto shook his head, not sure what she was getting at, but he still answered, "The First Hokage's-," he stopped, she was giving him a look,
"No," she said, "The Senju's bloodline limit," she corrected him, "Orochimaru has texts that predate the leaf, that predate Hashirama Senju that point to the fact that Hashirama wasn't the first nor the last Senju to use Wood style Ninjutsu," She explained, "and yet nobody seems to have it anymore do they?"
"I don't understand where you're going with this," Naruto admitted,
Tayuya nodded, "Fine I'll be quick then," she said, "Orochimaru has a theory, a theory that Wood style is what happens when A Senju or someone close enough to their bloodline gains Senjustu, and learns how to focus it," she said, "And another theory about how the leaf has managed to survive as the top rated village for so long,"
She took some paper out of her bra, "This," she said, "is the only method to accurately test your chakra nature," she said, "It's chakra paper, and the only place you can get it is from the hidden leaf village,"
"They sell paper?" Naruto asked,
"What's your nature?" Tayuya asked, "because after every other village Genin passes the true Genin exams they're tested for their natures,"
Naruto was surprised at that, "I... don't know,"
"I know you don't, cause Konohana doesn't test natures until Chunin level now," Tayuya gave him a smug grin, "You're smart, why would they do that?"
Naruto rolled the thought around in his head, 'Why was that?' he wondered, but he always came back to the same answer, "Because they sell more of it to the other villages and there isn't as much left for Konoha," he said,
She nodded, "That's right, Konohana runs a monopoly on chakra paper, all funds from it go back to Konoha,"
"What does that have to do with the Senju?" Naruto asked,
"Orochimaru has a theory on chakra paper," she said, "That's only made using wood style,"
"What?" Naruto asked,
"He found traces of Senju DNA in chakra paper," Tayuya explained,
Now he was confused, "How does this all link back to me?" he asked feeling like he was getting the run around,
She rubbed her head, "Cause the Senju haven't vanished," she hissed, "The notable members were killed and the Stragglers/Survivors were taken and forced to make chakra paper against their will," she said, "And then we come to the main issue here, money," she said, "The villages went from Ninja dominated to who has the most money dominated," she turned to him, "And I want to destroy that system," she said, "The system that keeps us down, that spits on the weak, the miserable, the poor," she stated,
"I want to destroy the system that made me an outcast, that forced me to work for that snake bastard, that forced me to get this seal on my neck, the system that has forced me to kill and kill and kill until I grew a taste for bloodshed and carnage, and now I want to cause it to the ones who created the system," she looked him in the eye, "The civilians,"
"And you," she said, "You're the proof that I'm right," she said, "That the system needs to die,"
"Riiiiiight," Naruto rolled his eyes, "And how did you come to that conclusion?"
"Because you're the son of the Fourth Hokage," she said,
Naruto's eyes went wide, "What?" he asked,
"Your father," Tayuya pulled the Marriage contract out again and showed it to him, he stared at the signatures of his parents, 'Kushina Uzumaki, Minato Namikaze,'
"Was the Fourth Hokage,"
Naruto shook his head, "...no," he said when he finally found his voice, "No, th-that's impossible," he said,
"It's true Naruto," Tayuya said, "You were supposed to be Konoha's Prince, but you we're robbed of any life you ever had to make you more pliable to Konoha,"
Naruto leaned against a tree, Tayuya released him so he could slide down it in shock,
"Nine tails..." he started, "is-," he took a breath, "Is she telling the truth?"
"She is," The gigantic fox spoke, "I never told you because you were always being watched,"
"By who?" he asked,
"The noodle girl and her father, the neighbours, the Anbu, your teacher, the real question is who wasn't watching you?" The fox responded,
"Why?" he asked,
"Don't take my word for it," Tayuya said, offering him a hand, "Let's travel together for a bit," she said, "If by the end You don't see what I do then we'll fight and whoever wins, wins,"
"And whoever loses?"
"Dies," she said, "As strong as you are, you already know too much about my plans,"
He nodded, "Thanks for being honest," he took her hand and was pulled to his feet, "It's refreshing,"
She nodded, "Don't worry about it,"
And quickly the two were back on the road,
As the two started their trip to Takigakure Tayuya grew increasingly paranoid, as the hours passed while the two walked she realised that never once had they even come into contact with a single bandit,
On the way there while she travelled with the other sound four they'd encountered and killed a few, but now while dressed in an incredibly expensive Maid dress, joined by a wounded boy she held up dressed in a fine silk suit they hadn't even run into one of them yet,
Perhaps they'd seen her carrying him across water and decided to leave the two alone,
She scoffed, 'Yeah and I'm a pink fluffy unicorn who grants wishes,' The logic made no sense since bandits weren't known for their intellect or their pickiness, Pretty girl in skimpy outfit, and rich guy with pretty girl,
Yeah they'd be targets on sight,
Yet even as night passed Tayuya sensed no one closing in, sure she wasn't exactly the best of trackers, but she'd been taught how to track, how to know when you're being watched, and right now the two were not being watched, and no one was following them,
Had she gone a little further into the forest on her left she'd have understood why no bandits had approached them,
The seven nearest camps were filled with corpses, each corpse frozen with a look of terror on their pale damp faces, they and their surroundings were wet and damp, as if a tide had just rolled in, despite how it appeared, the nearest ocean was sixty three miles away from the camp closest to the ocean,
The leaders of the camps were treated no differently, if anyone investigated now an experienced medic who'd seen the cause of death enough would recognise it instantly, they were drowned,
A lone figure seemed to watch the last leader die,
"Tis the last one that could hope to bother thy charge this night," She stated, flicking her blonde hair back into it's place, "I shall return to watching Naruto-Hime and miss Akari," and after a slight giggle at the thought of the redhaired boy dressed as a princess, the lady leapt into the air, a sudden waterspout pushing her into the air where she vanished,
When the morning came Tayuya again checked to see they hadn't been followed, 'Strange,' she thought, 'I haven't sensed the Copy ninja at all since we left that cave,' she thought, 'or anyone' she shook her head, 'No, don't look a gift horse in the mouth Tayuya, especially not when running from Konohana,'
Thus after a quick bite of whatever pieces of bear they had left the two were back on the road,
Unaware that they were being both watched and followed,
The trip was entirely uneventful,
Then they finally got to Takigakure, Naruto was stunned, "Woah," he spoke in awe of the giant tree that covered the entire village in it's roots, "This is Taki?" he asked Tayuya,
She rolled her eyes in response, "Yes," she said pulling him to the entrance a long bridge that opened over water, "Hello I'm Mitsuri," she said, "This is my husband Niwaki, you'll know him by his yellow eyes,"
The chunin looked confused, "But his eyes aren't-"
The man behind him shook his head, "Excuse him Miss Mitsuri, he hasn't been told about certain codes here cause he's still green," He pulled his partner back, "Enjoy Taki you two,"
"Thank you," Tayuya said pulling Naruto onto the bridge, once they were far enough away from anyone she said, "The phrase 'Yellow eyes' here means you're with Orochimaru," she explained, "If anyone starts bothering you use it, we'll be watched of course but they wont bother us just in case we're on official business, which as far as I'd like them to know, we are,"
"If anyone askes we're on business," he nodded,
"Good," she said, "Orochimaru scares them, scares most people honestly, and he has spies in every single nation, if anyone tries to talk to you drop the phrase 'It's on me and he knows',"
"What?" he asked, "What does that mean?"
"I have a forbidden ninjutsu on me, it's highly dangerous and Orochimaru knows I have it," she said, "If one of Orochimaru's spies are here they might check up on you, just tell them that, but the story I'll tell them is that the Jutsu is fused into your spine and removing it would destroy the jutsu,"
"What if they ask me to show them it?"
Tayuya looked him right in the eyes, "Just don't show them," she spat, "Trust isn't offered around any of Orochimaru's group, it's fear of him that keeps us all in line not comradery,"
Naruto was confused, "What?" he asked, "You don't have a single friend?"
"..." she wanted to tell him that there was one person she liked, Kin Tsuchi, but she didn't know Naruto yet, she couldn't trust him, especially not as Tayuya knew Kin was a likely candidate for the Chunin exams Oto team, "Do you?" she asked,
Naruto turned his head, normally he'd have told her about Iruka, or Ayame, but the fox's words echoed in his mind, 'The noodle girl and her father, the neighbours, the Anbu, your teacher,' He remembered every word the fox spoke 'the real question is who wasn't watching you?'
Naruto shook his head, 'Was even Ko-chan watching me?' he wondered briefly before he responded, "I uh, guess not,"
As they crossed the bridge Tayuya stopped him, "Go explore the village," she said, "I have to check in," and before a single word of affirmation or even understanding crossed the Uzumaki's lips she leapt away and vanished,
"She's fast," he said after a while,
Then he stuffed his hands into his pockets and thought, 'wait wasn't I supposed to go to a hospital?' he thought, his wounds felt much better then when they'd first truly met inside the cave, but they still ached, 'I guess checking in is more important to Orochimaru,' he shook his head and was about to pick a path,
Then he realised something was going on straight ahead of him, 'Looks like...?' his heart raced, his breathing hitched, 'A festival' he looked around trying to find somewhere anywhere to hide, 'I am not getting caught again!' he thought, 'not this time!'
Quickly he turned and ran down an alleyway, "Don't slow down" he said to himself as he ran down the alleyway trying to remember what Ko-chan had taught him,
'Remember the Anbu watch from above, you're not strong enough to face them yet, so hide below, try to find a sewer system, alcoves, hiding from the Anbu is the priority' he could hear it in exactly Ko-chan's voice,
'That's right,' he said as he tore down a winding path of dimly lit alleyways, only leaving one when he knew nobody was watching him, and only then to enter another, and another, had he not been panicking so much he might have realised that Tayuya might not be able to find him as he'd gone so far from the gate, or that he wouldn't be able to fin his way back,
He turned back trying to check nothing was following him, a faint buzzing from in front of him alerted him of something, and he was topped over, "Oof," he groaned, then came back to his senses,
"N-no," he cried raising his arm trying to defend himself, "Not like this,"
"Damn it!" another voice cried, Naruto looked up, an olive skinned girl with green hair and eyes and two giant wings glared at him, "Every time!"
"Wha-," Naruto stopped realising there was a group of people coming, "Sh-shit." he groaned,
He scrambled to his feet and was about to run,
The Nine tails smirked, "I don't think so,"
And seized his body, making him stand in place, 'Kyubii?' he asked, 'what are you doing?!' he roared,
"In twenty seconds you'll thank me,"
'What are you talking about?"
The group drew near, armed with the usual stuff, pitchforks, torches, crude knives or kunai, bottles, crates, anything they could grab to hurt someone,
"You thought you could get away demon?" One of the villagers laughed,
Naruto turned as much as the fox would let him, and saw that he was already boxed in, 'No,' he thought, they started closing in on him, 'I have to move,' he thought, 'Fox let me move!' he thought as his panic rose,
A villager put their hand on his shoulder, "Thanks for catching that demon bud," the villager said, passing Naruto,
"What?" Naruto asked, he realised he could move again, as he turned as saw them all advancing on the green haired girl,
"So thought your little wings would help you escape demon?" one of the villagers asked,
"That's so cute," another barked out,
"She looks like she's about to cry," another laughed,
"J-," she gritted her teeth, "Just do it," she said,
Naruto's eyes went wide,
"JUST DO IT!" screamed the seven year old girl, tears streaming down her malnourished face,
Naruto gritted his teeth as she was laughed at again,
"Hey fox," he said quietly, as he started approaching the group "thanks,"
"You're welcome,"
Naruto pushed past the group of villagers, he kneeled down to meet her eyes and... she punched him,
A villager ran forward glass bottle raised high above his head, "That wasn't very-," Fu covered her head trying to shield herself from the impact, but nothing happened,
The villagers stood around in shock, Naruto himself was in shock, he'd never been in this situation, usually the fox did this,
But there was no mistake, it wasn't her using his fist but him pinning the villager who tried to hurt the girl to the nearby wall with his foot,
Naruto took a breath, "You know what isn't very nice?" he turned and glared at the villagers, "BEATING UP CHILDREN!" he roared,
Kyubii grinned and let out a little of her power,
Naruto's teeth sharpened, his fingers grew claws, and the fox's aura bled out of him, "You want to fight so bad?" He asked taking his stance, letting the man with the bottle fall to the floor, "Try me!"
The villagers screamed and ran, Naruto glared at the man against the wall, "Go!" he roared, the man rushed to his feet and ran,
After a few seconds Naruto calmed himself and turned, the girl stared at him in complete shock, "Who- what are you?" she asked,
Naruto smiled gently, he kneeled again and offered her his hand, "A friend,"
She gave him a curious glance and he nodded,
"They've already tried this haven't they?" he asked, "The old ''I'm pretending to be your friend but it's just to hurt you later on'' thing," he said, "Yeah they've done it to me too," he said sitting down across from her, "and the ''we're a nice family here to adopt you but we're actually just going to abuse you until you run away'' thing too I assume,"
She nodded, "Y-yeah,"
Naruto gave her a weak smile, "I'm sorry," he said,
"D-do you know why they do it?" She asked,
"Do you have someone you see when you dream?" he asked, "Someone with a massive presence?"
"Yes, I have Chomei-chan, she's the seven tails,"
"She's why," Naruto said, "Well, it's mostly because the people are monsters, they just want any excuse to hurt you, so they pretend you're a demon who'd kill them instantly if you could,"
"But Chomei-chan is nice," she said, "Why do they hate her? why do they hate me? I never did anything!"
Naruto paused, "I'm sorry," he repeated, "but in the end they don't care about you,"
Fu looked up at him and sobbed then she realised they weren't alone, "L-lord Hisen," she gasped and stood on her shaking feet looking down,
Naruto turned to see an older man with greying hair surrounded by what Naruto assumed were Taki's version of the Anbu, firstly they were all women, clad in kimonos and body suits, conical straw hats and white masks, they were each armed with polearms,
"Fu," the man said, "You can't just attack-,"
"First of all," Naruto said walking in front of the girl, "She was attacked!" Naruto stated, "not the other way around," he spat, the polearms were quickly aimed at him, Naruto was unperturbed, "So where were you and your faceless harem then?" he asked, "Clearly not protecting a little girl from harm,"
"M-mister please!" Fu begged, "He is the leader of our village," she stressed,
"I know," Naruto said, "And so it's weird how fast he showed up after you were about to be beaten right?" Suddenly Naruto's eyes widened, 'Wait,' he thought for a second, 'This is... just like-'
OCTOPUS-Flashback-OCTOPUS
Naruto watched as his would be attackers were themselves descended upon by a blue haired woman, he was in amazement as she struck like lightning and without a single civilian touching her she beat them all down, she turned to him, her amber eyes were ice cold and focused, but he felt a little warmth behind them, he noticed she had a piecing under her lip,
"Okay?" she asked looking at him,
"M-me?" he asked, at her nod he cried and hugged her leg, "Y-yes th-thank you miss," he sobbed into her leg,
She patted his head gently,
"Naruto!" The redhead looked up seeing Hiruzen flanked by the Anbu, "I am very disappointed in you,"
OCTOPUS-Flashback end-OCTOPUS
Naruto shook his head, it was all too similar,
'What would Ko-chan say at a time like this?' he asked himself, Naruto rolled his shoulders and said, "Want her?" he asked, "Me first," internally he cringed, 'Man Ko-chan would've said that all way cooler,'
"This is not your village boy," Hisen spat, his warriors looking ready to rush Naruto, "Don't tell me how to run it,"
"Move fag!" A familiar voice hissed,
Hisen looked incredibly nervous, he turned, "O-oh lady Tayuya" he said, "H-how can my humb-"
"By fucking off shit for brains!" she spat, her fingers already on her swords, "That moron there is with me," she said, then seeing Fu behind Naruto, "And if that Brat is with him, then by proxy who is she with?"
Hisen swallowed nervously, "Y-you,"
Tayuya nodded, "That's right, good worthless skin sack, now take your bitches and jump off a cliff!"
Hisen nodded, "Thank you Lady Tayuya," and him and the women vanished,
After a few seconds Tayuya stormed over, "We need a place to hide," she hissed quietly,
"Um," Fu looked up at them, "Wh-what about my tree?"
Tayuya nodded, "It's better then nowhere, lead the way runt,"
"thanks for-," Tayuya shook her head at him,
"Not. now." she hissed, "When we're inside,"
Naruto was confused but nodded,
"Um, it's this way then," Fu said and ran leading the two to her tree house,
When they got there before any could enter Tayuya stormed inside, searched the entire house, and then said, "Shit, almost clear!" she said tossing some smashed things out of the window,
Naruto walked up the tree while Fu flew inside, "What's going on then?" Naruto asked, then he realised there was a giant seal on the wall,
"There's this shit," Tayuya said drawing her swords, "No idea what the fuck it does so I'll chop it up,"
"It's a monitoring seal," Naruto said, entering the room before Fu who seemed to want to use him as shield,
"Monitoring seal?" Fu asked,
"How the shit do you know that?" Tayuya asked,
Naruto smiled, "Well I am-," he froze, 'No, I'm not Konohana's seal master out here,' then he remembered his watchers, how fast Sarutobi showed up after he was rescued, he shook his head, "I'm great with seals," he said, he reached into his pocket, "I even have a-," his eyes went wide, "where's my notebook?" he asked, shoving his hands into his other pocket, "it's gone I can't-," he realised his possessions were burnt, "fuuuuuudge," he forced himself to say since Fu was there,
"You mean fuck?" Fu asked,
"Don't say that," he said, "It's rude,"
Tayuya smirked, "Yeah Greenie, say 'shitting my dickhole you giant ass-whore', instead, it's more polite"
"Tayuya!" Naruto looked at her and frowned, "She's seven,"
Tayuya just grinned, "hey Greenie tell him to fuck off,"
"I don't want him to leave," Fu said, she wrapped her arms around Naruto's leg, "Why don't you fuck off?"
Naruto gasped, Tayuya laughed,
"Fu, don't say that," Naruto pleaded,
"Let her say what she wants shithead," Tayuya grinned,
Naruto looked down at Fu, "By the way, I'm Naruto and this is Tayuya,"
Fu nodded, She looked at Naruto, "Daddy," then to Tayuya, "Mommy,"
Naruto's jaw dropped, Tayuya gritted her teeth, "Where'd that come from?" she asked... as politely as Tayuya could,
"Mommy doesn't want me," Fu said sombrely, she pulled Naruto's jacket, "Daddy still loves me right?"
Naruto shook his head, 'Yeah this is just like that time,'
OCTOPUS-Flashback-OCTOPUS
The blue haired woman glared at Sarutobi, "They attacked," she stated, "I defended."
Sarutobi looked at her, "The villagers are grieving Konan," he stressed, "They're not responsible for their actions, and they don't deserve broken arms and legs,"
Konan crossed her arms, "Does he?" She asked gesturing with her head to Naruto,
Sarutobi sighed, "Konan it's late," he said, "I want to get back to my office and finish my paperwork,"
She waved him off, "Go."
One of the Anbu walked closer, "Let me jus-,"
Naruto wasn't sure when, and it seemed like the others were just as surprised as him, but one second Konan was stood in front of him, the next she was behind the ox anbu who'd stepped forward,
"Don't," She warned tightening her hold on his neck, "Or else."
"Enough!" Sarutobi said, "Konan release him,"
Konan nodded, and threw him behind her,
"Released." she stated,
Another dashed forward but Konan placed a foot at her neck pinning her to the wall, "She's fast." the Anbu choked out,
Konan turned to Sarutobi and hissed, "Leave him."
"Someone needs to watch him," Sarutobi said,
"I will." Then she let the anbu go and grabbed his hand, "Let's go," she said gently leading him away,
"Where Are you going Konan?" Sarutobi asked,
"Taking him home." she said,
Naruto held her close, "C-can you be my mommy?" he asked,
Those piecing amber eyes looked down at him, but she nodded, "Ko-chan is here," she said patting his head, "She always will be."
OCTOPUS-The End-OCTOPUS,
Review Corner:VVV (This is where We comment on reviews, Infurno, I've changed it a little from the system I use so people can tell what we both think about the reviews, and I left the review's in so you can read them and respond before posting them)
The beginn of Red Dawn: I don't know why but I like the DarkNaruto stories the most. The story itself is good. Anyone can take the prehistory from other stories or canon.
What exactly happened to Naruto on the bridge can be explained later or even left out. I actually think it's better if you leave some things to the imagination and don't explain every detail to the reader.
I wonder is Kushina alive in your story?
I have to say I'm not a fan of Tayuya. She has a habit of insulting everyone. Which in itself isn't that bad, but Naruto is already being ignored and insulted enough by those around him. I don't need a character like Tayuya who insults him like everyone else in his home village.
I hope you tone down her character a bit, the story gets 3/5 stars. Since I can only say more if the story is not updated annually.
Our Hero's Comment: Well Tayuya sort of is toned down, but in other ways she's sort of toned up, more on that in the next chapter where we'll more get into her and how she fights,
Big Inferno's Comment: Tayuya will change somewhat throughout the story but she will never lose what makes her herself
champblaze: Not sure what is going but I am a little interested.
Our Hero's Comment: Sorry about that, I have like three other Naruto Stories where Naruto is still in Konoha so I figured I'd just jump to the part I wanted to write,
Big Inferno's Comment: hopefully you like the future chapters
Deniswanheda: Mmmm ésto podría ser interesante, podría hinata estar en el harén (Google translator: Mmmm this could be interesting, could hinata be in the harem?)
Our Hero's Comment: Uhhh not my choice man, Ask Infurno,
Big Inferno's Comment: there are many planned but unfortunately for your question Hinata is not one of them
naes151: oh interesting start really enjoying the graphic descriptions and tayuya is best girl so cant wait to see where this goes
Our Hero's Comment: Glad you're enjoying it man,
Big Inferno's Comment: Tayuya is my favourite paired with Naruto so she will have a lot more things to come in this story
Borello: interesting idea
Our Hero's Comment: That one's yours Infurno,
Big Inferno's Comment: thank you
Guest: Nice story, just a little bit criticism you shouldn't put all dialogue in bold letter
Our Hero's Comment: Wasn't me man, though it wasn't really Infurno's fault either, I think I misunderstood one of his messages when he asked about the speech, and gave him accidental bad advice, I think the " were deleted by DocX, if so I'll look into a different method of sending the stories to him,
Big Inferno's Comment: yeah that was my mistake this is the first story I've uploaded so I wasn't sure how to separate the 2 at first
SamsonOfOld: more chapters I like tayuya she need to be trained by her master Naruto to be an obedient little cum dump.
Our Hero's Comment: I write the story man, But infurno's the one who decides how characters are, if you want Tayuya to be more submissive, it's him you gotta convince,
Big Inferno's Comment: sorry I have bigger plans for Tayuya and his other future wives than just being submissive kunoichi to him
BlindWriters: Great start,
Our Hero's Comment: Thanks man,
Big Inferno's Comment: more to come hopefully you continue to like the story as it goes on
Jajur Von Hohenzollern: interesting,
Our Hero's Comment: Aw, thank ya kindly,
Big Inferno's Comment: more to come stay tuned hopefully you enjoy it as the story continues
Here's the harem list Naruto X Tayuya X Samui X Temari X Ino X Blackfire X Sara X Yumi/Iwa's Pakura lookalike X Ameyuri X Pakura X Tsukiumi X Shizuka X Leena/Suna's Pakura lookalike X Azula X Kurama X Leone X Tsunade X Karasuba
Credits
Story Idea: Big inferno
Stroy Writer: Our Hero,
