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We are now at chapter 20.

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Superboy was currently flying over the skies of Mayetta, New Jersey.

The Loud hero was after a car that had been stolen.

He swooped down and lifted the car up.

While the Loud hero had the car off the ground, the two thieves jumped out and tried to run.

But Superboy quickly put the car down and restrained the thieves, just as the cops arrived.

When the cops handcuffed the thieves and put them in the car, one officer walked up to Superboy.

"Thank you, Superboy." The officer said. "We've been trying to catch these guys for months."

"You're welcome, officer." Superboy responded.

Suddenly, he picked up a sound.

With a loud boom the Loud hero took off.

Something was wrong with Lynn.

Back in Royal Woods, Lynn was limping away from baseball practice.

Ever since this morning, she had had this intense pain on the right side of her lower abdomen. As the day went on, the pain got worse.

Eventually, the pain got so bad, that she collapsed to the ground on her knees, clutching her abdomen.

A sonic boom was heard.

Lynn weakly looked up and saw her brother land in front of her.

Superboy went up to his sister in concern.

"Lynn, What's wrong?" He asked.

"It's my stomach." Lynn answered. "It hurts so much."

Lynn then vomited on the ground.

The Loud hero rubbed her back.

"Just let it out, Lynn." He soothed.

Lynn vomited again.

When she was finished, she looked up at her brother with tears in her eyes.

"Help me." She pleaded. "It hurts so bad."

"It's gonna be ok, Lynn." Superboy soothed. "Here, just lay down so I can see what the problem is."

The Loud hero helped Lynn lay down on the ground.

He then used his X-ray vision to see what the problem was.

Focusing on her abdomen, he immediately spotted the problem.

"It's your appendix, Lynn." Superboy told her. "You have appendicitis. Come on, I'll get you to the hospital."

"Ok." Lynn weakly said.

The Loud hero gently picked up his sister.

He then took to the air, and made his way to the hospital.

He didn't fly at full speed of course, just fast enough to get to the hospital in time without making Lynn uncomfortable.

After a few minutes, they reached the hospital.

Superboy ran inside the emergency entrance with Lynn in his arms.

He informed the receptionist about the situation, and a gurney was rolled out.

The Loud hero gently put his sister on the gurney.

"It's gonna be ok." He assured. "I promise."

"Th-thanks for bringing me here." Lynn said weakly.

"Of course." Superboy responded.

He then leaned down and whispered in her ear.

"I'll be back with the rest of the family."

When Lynn nodded, the doctors wheeled her off.

The Loud hero stood there for a few seconds, worried about his sister.

"It's gonna be ok, Superboy." The receptionist assured him. "You bringing her here saved her. The surgery will go just fine."

"Thank you." Superboy responded.

He then walked out the doors, and flew away to inform his family about what had happened.

Later, the entire Loud family was in the waiting room.

Lincoln had informed them all that he had brought Lynn here because she had appendicitis.

They all stopped what they were doing and went to the hospital.

Lincoln was just looking at the floor, praying that his sister would be ok.

Soon a doctor walked in.

"Louds." He called out.

They all immediately stood up.

"Yes. How is our daughter?" Rita asked.

"She's doing alright." The doctor informed them, causing them all to sigh in relief.

"The surgery went great. Right now she's just resting in the recovery room." He continued.

"Thank's doc." Luna said.

"No problem." The doctor answered. "You can all see her now if you want."

They all followed the doctor to the recovery room.

When they got to Lynn's bed, they were all relieved to see that she was ok. Sleeping, but ok.

The doctor left them all alone.

The family just waited until she woke up.

After a few minutes they heard groaning.

They saw that Lynn was waking up.

They all immediately surrounded her.

"Lynn." Lincoln said. "Are you feeling ok now."

"I think so." Lynn answered groggily.

They all carefully embraced her in a hug.

Later that night Lynn had been admitted to a room. She would be staying there overnight.

Right now the Louds were all in the room with her.

Soon a doctor came in.

"I'm sorry, but visiting hours are over." She said.

They were all disappointed. None of them wanted to leave. But they had no choice.

"Ok, fam." Lynn Sr. said. "We should go home then."

"Wait." Lynn called out. "Can Lincoln stay here with me tonight?"

"I'm sorry Lynn." The doctor said. "But visiting hours are over."

"Please. Let him stay." Lynn pleaded. "I really need my brother here right now. Please?"

Her brother could have sworn he saw tears in her eyes.

Lincoln then turned to the doctor.

"I have to stay with her, doctor." He said. "My sister needs me. As her brother I have to be here for her."

"Alright." The doctor relented. "Since your family we'll make an exception. But only her brother can stay here."

"Thank you, doc." Lincoln said.

The doctor smiled at him. She was touched by how far they were willing to go for each other.

The rest of family said good bye to Lynn, then they left.

Now it was just Lincoln and Lynn there.

"Thanks for staying with me, baby bro." Lynn said.

"Of course big sis." Lincoln responded. "I would never abandon you."

"Linky." Lynn addressed. "Promise you won't tell anyone what I'm about to say?"

"I promise." Lincoln said.

"I was really scared back there." Lynn admitted. "With how much my stomach was hurting, I thought I was gonna die."

"I was scared too." Lincoln admitted.

Lynn was shocked.

"Why were you scared?" She asked.

"Because you're my big sister." Lincoln responded. "Seeing you in such pain terrified me. I would never want anything happening to you, or the rest of our family."

"Wow." Lynn said.

"Don't worry." Lincoln said. "I promise I won't tell anyone."

"Thanks, baby bro." Lynn responded. "And I promise I won't tell anyone what you told me either."

"Thanks, big sis." Lincoln said.

Lynn then yawned.

"I'm pretty tired." She said.

"Ok." Lincoln said. "You can go to sleep. I'll be right here."

"Actually." Lynn said blushing. "Can you sleep with me tonight? I don't wanna be alone."

Lincoln smiled.

"Of course." He answered.

Lincoln carefully climbed into bed with Lynn. He made sure he wouldn't get her abdomen.

When he was in bed, he carefully embraced Lynn.

Since he didn't bring any pajamas, he would just sleep in his normal clothes.

Lynn rested her head on his chest.

"Good night Linky." Lynn said. "I love you, baby bro."

"Good night Lynn." Lincoln responded. "I love you too, big sis."

The two siblings then went to sleep. Throughout the night Lincoln made sure Lynn didn't move around too much so she wouldn't feel any pain in her abdomen.

And that's chapter 20.

Lynn having appendicitis and Lincoln helping her was inspired by the picture 'Commission: Sucker Punched', drawn by JFMstudios on deviantart.

I hope you all enjoyed this. As always please tell me what you all think.