Red: Sorry it's been so long, I've been swamped with homework and haven't had much time to focus with editing.

Geo: Maybe we need someone else to help edit.


Lincoln cried as he finally managed to get into the house through an unlocked window. "Why? All I wanted was some me time and Dad convinces them to lock me out after all of that." Lincoln said sadly with bloodshot eyes as he grabbed a bread knife with extra sharp teeth. He moved upstairs, slipped a note and small camera under Lynn's door, and moved to the bathroom, completely unaware of Luan's dozens of hidden cameras all around the house at the moment.

"Fine, if they want me gone, then they'll get their wish!" He put the blade to his wrist and slowly cut upwards to his elbow, not even flinching from the pain as a massive amount of blood poured down onto the floor. He just finished his fourth cut when he heard a rough banging of metal coming from Lisa's room. "What the?" That was all he said before the door broke and a black creature the size of a PlayStation 2 with the body texture of ink and water jumped on him, releasing a horrid screeching sound. Lincoln cried out as it slowly began to enter his body through his wounds, and soon he blacked out.

*Lori*

"Alright, so we finally agree to stop practically torturing our only brother?"

"Agreed." Lynn said while looking down, ashamed of herself as Luna pat her on her back gently. "I'm an idiot for spreading that lie so much." Lynn spoke while hitting herself with her bat until Lori took it from her. "Seriously, stop that." She said. "Hurting yourself isn't going to fix anything."

"It's worth a try, after all the shit I did to him."

"Don't worry Lynn." Luna said as she hugged her sister tightly. "Yeah Lynn it'll be fine, I hope." Leni muttered.

*Rita*

The mother of the Loud family was currently crying her eyes out silently in the bathroom. "Why? Why was I so blinded?" She sobbed sadly into her palms. "Mom?" She heard the voice of Lori speak.

"Lori, what is it?" She asked her oldest daughter who walked in and hugged her gently. "Don't worry mom it'll be ok." She whispered as her mother cried harder into her shoulder.

*Lincoln*

The white-haired boy slowly opened his eyes, which were now a cold crimson color and stared at his eerily pale hands, slowly moving towards his bleeding cuts. He gave a sigh and suddenly looked right at the mirror over the sink, smiling cruelly with cold eyes before he punched it hard enough to shatter, causing a sparking camera to fall out and slide under the bathtub.

*Luan*

"I got a lot to do to make up to my brother." Luan said sadly while covering up her arms with long white fingerless gloves. "Lincoln...I'm sorry. I should've told you the unspoken rule, I should have listened to you…" She sobbed into her pale hands. "Luan?"

The clown jumped as Luna grabbed her shoulder. "I thought you said you were gonna stop doing that to your arms!"

"I know but..." Luna then slapped her gently and hugged her. "It's bad enough that two more of us have done that, myself included, I don't want another hurting themselves."

"Luna...I'm sorry, I just can't help it! I feel like I deserve it."

"You don't deserve to bleed Lu." Luna told her in a sad tone.

"Come on, let's get back to the van, the others are waiting for us." Lori said while sneaking up behind the two and wiping her eyes. "We need to go home." They nodded and let go of each other.

*Later*

"What took you guys so long?" Lana whispered.

"Issues." Luna muttered as she saw Lucy staring depressingly out through her window, the gentle moonlight reflecting off her face and showing her tearstained cheeks. Soon the family pulled up into the driveway. "I hope Lincoln's ok." Lucy muttered sadly to herself. "Don't worry Lucy, he's probably okay." Leni muttered, trying to make the goth feel better.

*Lincoln*

The white-haired boy watched from behind a window as Vanzilla entered the driveway below him. He gave a demonic feral growl from the bottom of his throat as he watched one specifically exit the vehicle; his father to be more precise. "But honey, all I'm saying is…what if he's still bad luck?"

Lincoln then smiled a bit when he saw his mother slap him, get back in the car and drive off with a look of disgust, he gave a snicker as he saw the girls flip him off, even Lily, who had no idea what it meant but did it anyway. This made all the sister's giggle. Lynn Sr. sighed as he went inside and shook his head "Hello?" He whispered, excited from getting no answer.

"Phew!" He sighed as he sat down in a chair to relax and after 30 minutes he fell asleep, unaware of someone sneaking up on him very slowly. "Ahhh, nice and quiet." He muttered happily when a deathly grayish black hand with razor sharp talons, each one the length of a Wii-mote, slowly reached over his shoulder.

*The Loud Sisters*

"Stupid dad, saying shite like that." Luna grunted under her breath, very upset from his attitude. "I hope Lincoln will be ok with dad there." Lucy whispered, hoping her brother would be alright as she was one of the sisters who cared about Lincoln the most. "Come on girls let's go back home, I'm sure your father has calmed down by now." Rita said with a depressed smile as the girls agreed, just as sad as their mom.


The Loud women entered the home once again and saw the living room empty and completely devoid of life.

"Dad?" Lori spoke nervously as a loud noise was heard in the basement, getting all their attention. "What was that?" Leni shivered with a strange sense of fear.

They opened the door to the lower level as Lisa pressed a button on her glasses, activating a Night-Vison mode, allowing her to see. Lucy could already see due to always being in dark places nearly 24/7. "My god there's blood on the stairs!" Lori yelped as she slipped down the steps.

"Lori, you ok?" Luna said.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHH!"

"Guess that's a no." Leni said as they went downstairs Lynn found the light switch and cut it on...and wished she didn't because she and her family nearly threw up at the sight of a mangled and charred corpse hidden behind the water heater and furnace.

"Take Lily upstairs now!" Rita yelled at her children as Leni took Lily and ran upstairs with the rest except for Lori who fainted. When they got upstairs they heard a vent cover crash and froze from the sight of the bathroom. The floor was covered in blood with a knife in the center of the floor, Luan also saw a small camera under the tub and picked it up while realizing that the bathroom mirror was destroyed. She looked up having heard a growl echoing from the vents. "Huh?"

"SWEET MOTHER OF EINSTEIN! MY LABORATORY!" Lisa yelled in panic as the sisters ran to her and saw the torn-up room.

"What happened to this place? Lori asked Lisa as it looked like a tornado passed through.

"I'm not sure, but whatever was in here wanted out badly." Lana muttered as they heard more glass breaking. "What's that?" Leni spoke nervously.

"I don't know buy we need to find out!" Lynn said as she grabbed a bat from her room. "Where's Lily?" Luan panicked when they heard a heavy thumping above them. "The attic." They said as they rushed up there.

*Attic*

Lucy slowly lifted the rusty hatch and peered inside. "You see anything?"

"No."

"How about you Lisa?"

"Negative." She whispered as they then heard Lily laughing.

"Lily!" Lori cried out as she ran up and hugged her tightly. "Linky!" The infant giggled.

"Lincoln's here?" Lucy said hopefully as she looked around for him when a low growling sound was coming from behind Lori. "I went over that video that Luan found in the bathroom, Lincoln was cutting his arm up when something attacked him, my guess is that it was a creature I was studying for the government." Lisa spoke sadly as her sisters paled when they saw the large creature's outline. "So…that corpse we saw…was?" Lynn spoke as she felt herself crying. "No, that body is much larger than Lincoln. I would say that was our father." Lisa spoke as Lily reached out towards the creature. "Linky!" She cried out.

"Lincoln...is that really you?" Lucy said with fear in her voice as it moved very slowly, the sound of its steps above her. 'He's on the ceiling.' They all thought when suddenly, the attic light sparked.

The sisters minus Lily stared in horror at what they were seeing. The creature looked eerily similar to that of a dragon but more humanoid with blackish grey skin. Its bones were showing through its body, mostly the spine, and it was still growing to the pint that the attic could barely contain it. It had a spiny tail with a sharp blade at the end, it's hands and feet had five razor sharp claws on them, each one the length of a syringe and about an inch wide. On its back were two sets of snow white wings, its eyes were blood red and glowing and its head was long with a beak like a pterosaur.

"Lincoln." Lily cooed happily as the light went out again, turning back on a second later to reveal the baby Loud in its arms giggling as it retracted its claws and held her. The creature gently nuzzled her with its head, cooing softly as a black van pulled up in front of the house. The giant creature set the infant down and climbed out the window only to get shot in the face. "Lincoln!" They cried out as his mouth glowed orange and a huge ball of flaming blue plasma shout out and hit the vehicle, making it explode and injuring the passengers. The monster screeched before if flew off, his wings glowing in the pale moonlight as it disappeared.