This twisted ordeal is from a story on Fanfiction that is made up of only two chapters, but it was the first chapter that got my attention, and that story is called "Her Brother, Her Kryptonite." I decided, what would happen if the bad guy she faced did beat her, and is far more dangerous than she last encountered him? Well, here it is and this is where the superheroine loses. Warning: If you guys don't wanna read what goes down, then I advise you to turn away. Enjoy to those who do wanna read this.
Her Brother, Her Kryptonite: Twisted Ending.
Power Woman defeated.
In any other city in any other country on Earth, the sight of a young woman soaring through the air might have been considered shocking. Life-changing, even. But to the residents of Royal Woods, Michigan, all it inspired was a few moments of clapping and cheering before everyone carried on with their lives. But some men find this a chance to watch her in action, for she is very attractive.
But Lori Loud still remembered the first time she had taken flight over her town; she remembered how the people gawked and fainted and re-evaluated everything they had ever known to be true. And as she flew to her destination, she allowed herself a small chuckle, remembering the faces people had made the first time they saw her.
"Okay…" she then said, "now it's time to focus again." But who is she in this form?
Power Woman.
Now, she has her blonde hair and she doesn't seem to be wearing a mask and yet folks can't seem to recognize her. It has been 6 or 7 months since she got her powers from an accident made by her little sister Lisa, and now she has devoted herself to protect the citizens of the city, and fighting evil.
The first few times, she had worn nothing but a cheap mask with her regular school clothes, and she needed a new wardrobe and all thanks to her little sister Leni, and like Lisa she has been keeping Lori's secret from the others for some time, so Leni can be trusted.
Her brand new and very attractive hero attire is a white tight-fitting white leotard with a cut-out right above her boobs or a cleavage-bearing leotard, fixed with a long flowing red cape, blue elbow-length gloves, and night-transparent leggings that showed off her wonderfully long, smooth legs.
Though she is happy that her little sister made this attire and it does help keep her secret identity safe, she doesn't feel comfortable when men and other folks stare at her and the beauty she shows, and mostly because they like to stare at her bodacious breasts and cleavage, she even found some perverted stuff online, and it's all about her, and computer animated and it made her feel disgust.
And as much as Lori would've liked to reminisce, she needed to focus, she was getting closer to her destination. She could tell because the screams of frightened children were getting louder in her super-sensitive ears.
Her body turned into a multicolored blur as she accelerated towards the noise. Her eagle eyes landed on a large yellow school bus at the side of a bridge, threatening to fall into the waters below. Using X-Ray vision, she could see the bus driver passed out at the wheel, as well as the legions of elementary schoolchildren crying out for someone to save them.
'Hang in there, kids. Power Woman is coming!' Lori thought as she grits her teeth in determination.
(Somewhere at a flyover far from town.)
Just as the bus started to tip over and the children's screams reached their crescendo, Lori swooped down between the lake and the bus and threw up her arms. The front of the bus fell into her palms, and using her Herculean strength, she lifted the bus into the air above.
She smiled as she heard the children cheering for her, at least they respect her for her heroism, and she's also become a true symbol of justice and virtue for other women.
She gently lowered herself to the road, setting the bus down gingerly. She went to the doors and tore them off like they were made of paper. She stepped into the bus and looked at the children. "Is everyone alright?"
"We're okay, Miss Power Woman," they responded in unison. The ones that could talk, at least. Some poor children were still crying.
Lori ushered them all out of the bus and she directs them to a nearby pickup truck and the man inside gives them a ride back to the town, and to inform the cops about what happened, but he does look back and he takes a snapshot of Lori's chest.
Lori is annoyed by this, but she shrugs it off and she watches the truck leave, and then turned to the still-unconscious bus driver with furious eyes. "What's wrong with you?!" she shouted at him. She stomped over, every step shaking the entire bus and the road. "You almost got those kids...killed?"
She blinked in surprise when she saw something poking out of his neck. She reached over and plucked it out. Her eyes widened with she saw that it was a dart, dripping with tranquilizer. "What the—" She does smell, some form of anesthetic.
Before she could finish, something strong punched her in the stomach and threw her out the bus. She actually felt that, and this made her furious.
She looked up and watched as a man walked off the bus, slowly materializing with every step. Lori cursed herself for being so stupid; she should've checked for invisible people with her X-Ray the moment she saw the dart.
"Endangering the lives of all these kids just to get to me?" Lori growled. "That's low, even for a poacher like you, Camo-Man."
When Camo-Man came into full visibility, he shook his head. "Not poacher, Power Woman," he said with a smug look. "I prefer the term...collector." Lori narrowed her eyes at her adversary.
Camo-Man.
Standing at 7 feet tall, he is dressed from head to toe in lime green camouflage gear that can change color since he made it and with some other gear that can make him invisible, he has black combat boots, and he is armed with more weapons than any person could carry.
He is a very dangerous foe, and is known as the greatest trophy hunting prick and he is also super-rich and yet no one knows where he resides, and they only know him by his first name Hunter. He is the best and by far the most wanted hunter on the planet, because he always hunted the rarest of animals.
But, after a long time of hunting, he sought out stuffed bear, stag and elk heads, tiger and leopard fur and he even once hunted the tusks of elephants to mount onto his wall, but it was all boring to him over time and said he would rather hunt a Tyrannosaurus Rex, but then he heard about this new person, a superheroine who goes by the name, Power Woman. He wants her!
Camo-Man reached to his belt and pulled out a long hunting knife and lunged for her. Thankfully, the knife shattered into metallic debris as it hit Lori's tough arm, but he had taken her moment of distraction as a chance to punt her in the stomach.
Lori was knocked back slightly, but the next time he tried it, Lori caught his leg in her hands. "So tell me why I literally shouldn't fry you with my heat vision right now?" asked Lori.
Camo-Man didn't answer. Instead, he swiftly reached into another of his pockets and tossed its contents into Lori's eyes.
Its contents being a highly concentrated mix of sand, pepper, and magnesium. Lori howled in pain as she let go off her enemy's foot and reached up to rub both of her teary eyes. Camo-Man laughed arrogantly.
"I have you now, Power Woman!" he shouted with a sick grin. "Your almighty heat vision is no more!"
"Oh yeah?" Lori shouted back, and she tries to find her foe. "Good thing I don't need it then."
This confuses Camo-Man. "What's that?"
Lori's partially-exposed chest expanded as she inhaled as much air as her lungs could hold. Then, like the Big Bad Wolf of fairy tales, she blew onto her adversary. But, the man smirks and he knew she had this and he ducks and she instead freezes the incoming cop car and the officer inside is frozen.
"Thanks for keeping the cop away!" Camo-Man then punches her in the face and she let's go of his foot, and then he throws the highly concentrated mix to her eyes again and this makes her howl in pain as it stings her vision, and she can't use her powers.
She then tries to use her ice breath. "Yes! This is it!" He then throws the smoke canister and it blows up, and she instead sucks in the smoke, but then she coughs it all out, well tries to but it has gotten into her system. "What? W-What is happening? T-To me?"
Camo-Man smiles as Power Woman is now dazed and she stumbles around. "Oh, do you like the chloroform smoke bomb I made? I use it to nullify large beasts, such as Rhino's, Bears, Elephants, Lions, Tigers, and…. Bodacious Blonde Super women, like you!"
He then kicks her in the gut. "Lori Loud."
Hearing her name surprises her. "W-Wait, how did y-you know my name?!"
Camo-Man laughs maniacally. "Oh, the last time we fought you thought I got away, but truth I turned invisible and followed you, to your home. From then on, I have been observing you at what you and you're crazy family does, and I know you're greatest weakness… The secret feelings you have, for your brother, Lincoln Loud!"
Lori is now horrified, one of her enemies knows who her family is and what she does on a daily basis, and that means her family is in grave danger. Lori thinks about this, but she's in too much pain and dizzy to even think about anything.
Camo-Man sees his chance, and so he runs past her and he slaps her ass and this makes her gasp and irritated and she tries to punch him, but she misses and nearly falls to the ground. Then Camo-Man kicks her to the side, and then he punches her in the face.
Lori stumbles and she lands her rear onto the frozen cop car, and she tries to regain herself, and she sees Camo-Man is about to slash her with his bayonet, but she dodges by a few inches, but the bayonet manages to tear her costume, and now her breasts have been exposed.
"Hey! What in the heck?!" Lori tries to over herself and she blushes bright red from this, and she tries to use her powers, but the chloroform she breathed in is nullifying her powers, and her super strength. "No, I need to…"
She then gets pushed to the hood of the police car that is frozen and her breasts are pressed against the hood, and she tries to get up, but she can feel the clothing on her ass torn off. "What are you doing?!" Then Camo-Man turns her over and she's facing him.
"Try this on." He then injects something to her neck. "There, this calming special chloroform shall do the trick, and it is filled with special chemicals to trigger some hormones inside of you… Which means, you're fucked on horny, my prey."
Lori is wide-eyed and she tries to punch him, but he catches her fist and he head-butts her, this stuns Lori and she's shoved onto the hood of the frozen cop car. She then feels something, Camo-Man has unzipped his pants, and he shoves his long cock into her pussy, and this makes her scream.
Camo-Man thrust into her some more. "Wow. Nice and tight, this is what I like. Screw shooting my prey, when I can fuck the most attractive of all wildlife." He then thrusts in faster, and this makes Lori moan from the sensation, but she has to fight back and stop enjoying this.
Lori then kicks him away, and she tries to fly. But then Camo-Man grabs her by the hair and slams her to the concrete divider. "Fucking little annoyance. You cannot escape, the hunter! I am Camo-Man, and I have come collect my greatest trophy, you!"
Camo-Man then repeatedly hits her head to the concrete divider, and then he looks to her dazed look, and then he shoves his cock into her mouth and she panics from this and tries to remove him from this, but she can't and she's forced to suck his manhood.
Lori continues to do this, and she moans at each moment she sucks his cock and soon, he cums into her throat and she feels like vomiting. Camo-Man let's go of her head, and she vomits it all out. "You sick pig!"
Then Camo-Man picks her up, and slams her chest first onto the cop car that is still frozen. "Now, to break you!" He then shoves his cock into her ass and this makes her scream, but Lori's screams turn into moans, and she continues to do so as Camo-Man thrusts into her Power Woman ass.
He continues to do this, and he smiles. "Yes, you love this don't you? Just like any other sex crazed animal I have killed and stuffed. Perhaps my pet would love to have sex with you." But then he stops and he can hear police sirens. "Shit, the cops are coming."
He then has an idea. He grabs Lori by her red cape. "Stand up, now!" Lori does so and she groans from his actions, and now she's standing up and yet she feels like collapsing because of his thrusting into her ass.
Then Camo-Man wraps his legs around her legs. "Now, fly!"
Lori is confused and she cries. "B-But… I can't…"
He gropes her breasts and he pinches her nipples. "Fly Power Woman, do as I say!"
Lori cries and she takes off, with Camo-Man stuck fucking her ass, the police arrive, but they don't see Power Woman. All they see is the frozen officer in his frozen cop car, the damaged bus and some torn clothing, that belong to Power Woman.
(Somewhere else.)
Power Woman flies across the sky, and she grunts and moans as Camo-Man is still attached to her ass and thrust faster and faster, and this makes her scream and moan, and she tries her best to keep flying. "H-How much l-longer?!"
Camo-Man looks around. "Keep flying, we're almost there! Go faster!"
Power Woman nods, and she tries to fly as fast as she can, but Camo-Man continues to thrust into her, and this makes her truly lustful at this feeling, she can feel that it's far better than Bobby. She can handle the weight of this man, but the aerial sex is too much.
Then she feels Camo-Man remove his cock from her ass, and he does so slowly that it makes her moan with pleasure, and even Camo-Man moans doing this. "Well, looks like you love this more than I do, well you're gonna love this!"
He then shoves his cock into her pussy, and he thrusts faster and faster, and this makes Power Woman moan and groan from each thrusting sensation. Then she feels like losing herself from flight, and soon she feels something. "N-No… D-Don't."
"Now, you are fucked!" Camo-Man then cums into her pussy, and Lori moans and screams as she can feel his hot semen inside of him and then she loses consciousness and then she begins to fall from her flight, along with Camo-Man, but Camo-Man smirks. "Right on cue."
Camo-Man keeps his cock attached to her pussy and he continues to pump his semen inside of her, and then he uses his backpack and he deploys the parachute, and he holds onto Lori by her breasts and he continues to grope them and this makes her moan.
They soon land, on an airfield near a mansion, and he removes the parachute backpack and he looks to the unconscious Lori Power Woman, and she moans as she remains on his cock, and feeling the sensation of his hardcore sex.
"Well, I guess I should keep this up." He keeps her on his cock and he slowly thrusts into her again, and this makes Lori Power Woman moan and smile, and he walks into his mansion. "By the time you wake up, you'll be my new slave and to do so… We're gonna make a dang good deal, bitch."
(Many months later.)
Months have passed, and Lori Loud has been missing, and no one knows where she is, and not just that, but Power Woman hasn't showed up, and crime has been sparking with the crooks she locked up doing whatever they want.
The Louds have been trying to find Lori, but nothing. They have feared that she may have been taken away, but by who?
Let's go to the Hunter's Mansion, and we now see the man himself, Camo-Man, and he walks down the halls with his friends as they are ready to party once more for his greatest victory. "As you see, everything on this wall is all dedicated to my greatest victories, and the toughest one in the wilds had to be from that very angry Bull Elephant."
The other hunters snicker and whisper about that, and then one of them asks. "Hunter, tell us… Where is the greatest trophy here? You told us that you have done the unthinkable and taken down the most dangerous and most challenging beast of all time."
Camo-Man snickers, and then he leads them down the halls. "Here she is." They all gasp in shock, and then they grin at what they see.
Right there, chained to the wall and in a sitting position is…. Power Woman (Lori Loud.) Her mouth is gagged, and she has some anesthetics inside her red ball gag, and she can't move and is too tired, and she even has a shock color on her neck, to shock her if she strays too far from the mansion.
They gaze upon her naked form, and she still has her boots, cloves and cape, and then Camo-Man explains. "As you all see, I have managed to overpower her, even when others said that she was invincible when facing an enemy, in truth… She is not."
"Also, to ensure she wouldn't leave, and prove to be a good hunt, we struck a deal. She stays with me, and will always be my slave and do as I say, and in return I will not harm her family, and the deal is made, and set and she does what I want. Watch this."
He then pushes the button and the chains let go of Lori and she falls to the ground face first, the hunters all chuckle and laugh and they all lick their lips at the way she looks.
Lori slowly gets up. "Come to me, now!" Lori does as she's told and she stands next to Camo-Man, and then he gropes her breasts and this makes her moan. "As you see, she is all mine and I have claimed her as the one thing who would pleasure me when I need it."
He then removes her restraints and she doesn't bring harm to him and sheds some tears. Camo-Man then shoves her to the other men, and they all grab and grope her, and this makes her moan from the sensation of this perverted hunters.
"Now, my fellow hunters… In order to pleasure our desire on this beast… Let us do it our way. Through the labyrinth." This makes the other hunters snicker, and Lori knows what he means.
When she is needed to pleasure him, she is told to run through the labyrinth at the back of the mansion, and she can't escape due to the traps, and when she's caught she's shot by a dart and then forced to have sex, and now she's going to have to endure, being hunted by these men and forced to be raped by them.
But the one thing that matters to her, is that her family is safe. 'I may have been defeated violated and tormented… But, what matters is that… What matters is that my family is safe, especially Lincoln… I… I'm sorry.'
The Twisted End.
A/N: This is how I pictured the end of Power Woman (Lori Loud) if her rival knew who she was, her weaknesses and how to defeat her, and what he intends. After all, a lot of the guys were attracted to her looks, and this man is attracted by all of her. Leave a review guys, and tell me what you all think of this.
Also, anyone here recall the story called Archetypal, and the battle between Super Hero Lori and Super Villain Whitney?
Date made: 8/6/21.
