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Zak Saturday 1

it 's good to see you again i hope you like this and please tell me what you think

Japanese translation

Oji- uncle

Now onto the story


Jack pov

I was looking over a file of vince turns out his father named zandar and sierra dad is Destro, vince is in fact sierra bodyguard and runner i just need to figure where and when there the their shipping stuff.

"I had hoped that my growing experience would remain purely academic but fate has proved me wrong. I am clearly reading a dark energon signature and it's moving fast." Ratchet said

"Megatron." Optimus concluded

"Where'd he find more of the bad stuff?" Acree asked

"What's he going to do with it, to bring back an army of undead?" Bulkhead questioned. that caught Miko's attention "zombie-cons." She said to herself

"We can not roll out the possibility especially since Megatron is heading to a familiar location." Optimus said

"Megatron has barely emerged from stasis and it seems he is making up for lost time Bulkhead, Bumblebee, Ratchet prepare to roll out." Optimus order

"Me?" Ratchet questioned

"If we are dealing with dark energon, I may well need your experience" Optimus said "Acree."

Acree interrupted by saying "bridge operator got it."

"Go get them bulkhead, bring the hurt." Miko said while drawing

Bulkhead smashed his fist together in response,

Me and Raf were trying to figure out what Miko was up to. "That's not like Miko not wanting to go." I said ready to grab my sabers.

"She's definitely up to something." Raf Replied getting ready to move

Acree started up the groundbridge and the bots transformed and went though.

When the bots were about half way through Miko jumped up and started to run through the groundbridge.

"Making a break for it!" I yelled and ran after her with Raf following with sabers in hand.

When they got to the groundbridge opening I caught up with her, grabbed her arm and said ''Not safe Miko."

"I'm not going to miss my first zombie-con throw down!" Miko yelled, she got out of my hold and ran for the end of the groundbridge unknown to her she dropped her phone.

All i said was "Miko." Out of frustration, I ran after her with Raf following.

The bots come out of the groundbridge unknown to them. We then run over to a boulder and Miko sits on it with me sitting next to her and next to him Raf.

"You are impossible to protect, you know that miko, What were you thinking Miko?" I asked out of frustration

"Easy she wasn't". raf replied

"Hey I missed out on my last zombie-con Showdown not missing at this time at least this time I can take some snaps." miko defended reaching for phone and just now noticing that her phone was gone. "My phone, I must have dropped back at base."


With the Autobots

"That's not Megatron," said Bulkhead.

All the Bots activated their weapons and Optimus spoke up telling Starscrame to "Stand Down."

"No you Stand Down" Starscream responded then fired his rockets at the Bots

All the bots jump out of the way and Starscream arrogantly says "You cannot harm me while dark Energon flows through my veins."

In a way to prove him wrong, Optimus shot Starscream hitting his elbow joint the Force turned him around and that made his arm fly off.

Bulkhead said to Optimus "good job you clipped wings now he's ground."

Starscream grabbed his fallen arm and ran behind a boulder "come on rise already!" Starscream yelled

Starscream looked behind the boulder and saw the bots "this is Commander starscream requesting an emergency groundbridge at my co-ordinances."

The bots started walking over to Starscream till they heard "ahh I can't believe you made me lose my phone."

They all turned around and saw the three kids.

"Um, how is this my fault, you ran though the ground bridge?" I asked

"Oh no" Bulkhead said

"Base to optimus the kids are missing." Acree said over the comms a little worried.

"We have a visual on them. send a groundbridge immediately." Optimus said, already knowing what happened.

Two groundbridges opened at the same time

"Two?" ratchet said confused "You three get on our groundbridge NOW!" Ratchet yelled

I grabbed Miko's arm to make sure she came alone and said "come on."Miko protested but went with me.

Starscream jumped through his first then a second later the kids went through the autobots when they had gone through the two groundbridges and did something weird it looks like the two were becoming one.

"Ratchet what is happening?" Questions optimus

"The two groundbridge portals must be feeding back on each other." Ratchet answered

Bulkhead realized something bad is about to happen "Miko, We got to get the kids out of there." They ran to the autobot portal but when they got there something threw him back and the next thing you know the groundbridges exploded.


On the other side, Jack pov

We got up from being blasted out of the groundbridge.

I got up first and asked "are you guys okay?" i looked and the colors looked duller it looked grayish

Raf answered "yeah I think so

Behided them the bots got up bulkhead asked "um what just happened." Look to ratchet

"I can't be current but if two groundbridges are sent to the same location crossed streams the feedback could have caused a systemed overload" ratchet reasoned

"Could have, hello more like totally did." miko said but no one heard her

"The kids made it through right?" Bulkhead asked worried about miko.

Raf sounded confused and asked me "what's he talking about."

"Bulkhead we're right here." Miko said starting to get frustrated

Optimus activated his comm and asked "Acree did the children make it safely back to base."

"Negative, you don't see them?" Acree replied worry in her voice

"There's no sign of them." Ratchet said

"What no sign, seriously bulk." Miko was about to say more wben bulkhead stepped right through her and it scared her.

"He went right through you like we're not alive." I concluded

"I don't want to be a ghost" raf said hugging me

"Wait a minute." Miko said to herself looking

"Wait, how can we still touch each other?" I asked

The bots kept waking, optimus asked "Ratchet could the children have been transported onto the nemesis instead?"

"Not likely if starscrame didn't arrive to our base the most likely explanation is a dislocation the children could have just simply bridged to a unintended destination

Raf realized something "a different place but in the same place."

"Wh wh what do you mean?" I asked this as a reminder of that time I went to mortis.

"We're probably in a different dimension, like some kind of alternate reality, a shadow zone." Raf said

"Nerd alert." Miko said

"Look, Skyquake's tomb is empty." Optimus said

"How did we miss his rise and shine?" Bulkhead asked

"It would seem starscream got what he came for." Ratchet said

"That's another matter for another time our first priority is to find Jack, Raphael and Miko," Optimus said then activated his comm "acree send a groundbridge." as if saying his name made him appear.

Skyquake came out from behind and started walking over to the bots and was going to slash bulkhead but it went right through him.

"Awesome he can't touch them either." Miko said

Skyquake heard her and turned around to face the group.

'I'm so sorry Oji-sana.' i thought

"Just like we can't." Miko continued

"Then that means we are trapped in the shadow zone with a decepticon zombie." Raf finished fully scared, i sent miko and raf running while i hield Oji off

I pulled out my energon saber, I jumped and cut his arm armor followed by a cut it's inside leg but it wasn't doing any good. I threw some kunai into its eye but any cut would heal from dark energon. My energon saber wasn't even leaving stitches but I did manage to cut it's leg enough to slow it down and jump back and slashed cut his eye and the back of his neck but i didn't see an arm hitting me, throw me into the rock wall, when i got back up and dodge it's claws and ran back to miko and raf.


After some time

"Best thing about zombies is their slow movement." miko said, acting it out just then my phone started ringing.

"Is that yours?" Raf asked, then all three of them said "phone."

I answered my phone " hello acree." But all I got was static.

"Whoa, imagine that the fourth dimension has lousy service." miko said sarcastically

I scratch my head thinking something over "Guys the phone rang, we're getting a signal." I said

"Maybe the autobots can't or hear us because we're moving at hyper speed or something." Raf reasoned

I thought of something like, "if they can't see or hear us, maybe they can read us."

"Text it." Raf agreed

Miko got an idea " text me if my phone is back at base maybe the bots would see it." I thought that was a good idea and started typing.

Miko looked back, "Um, you think you can type and run at the same thing." miko said looking at the zombie-con, they ran under it's leg but i jumped up and slashed it's crest? and some dark energon landed on my arm and it burned but i ran and caught up with miko and raf.

"Deja vu." Miko said to me.

"What?" i asked

"Does this look familiar to you?" Miko asked

I looked around and said "yeah it does, why?"

"Dude, we're going around in circles." miko said

"Hmm you're right." I said, we stopped when we hit, starscream arm. "Well this will come in handy."

"It must have got trapped in here with us." raf said

"If it's here we use it." I said we started rolling it over and when the zombie got close enough miko moved the figure and fired it.

"Yeah, how do you like us now?"Miko taunted

The zombies severed arm started sparking then started moving on it's own and was faster than the main body.

'Now this, I can handle.' I said, I threw some acid kunai that would bite into anything it would touch and brought out my energon saber and blocked a slash from one of the fingers and slashed at the first figure and broke the first knuckle off followed by a slash to the back of the hand.

Which got it mad at me and charged me but I blocked another blow but did see a hand coming from behind and picked me up when it brought me to eye level before anything could happen i yelled "Miko, raf run!" I yelled then I stabbed the hand releasing me and I jumped from its chest to the rock wall then caught up with raf and miko.

we turned and started running again "How can that thing be faster than the body?" Miko said, i throw some more acid kuna to slow it down the third and fourth knuckle was hit and the acid started eating away i give it about and hour before it ate all the way through "Maybe because it's lighter and has more moving parts." Raf reasoned.


Later

miko was right about going in circles "oh come on this place is like one big Marengo around." miko said what we were thinking.

Starscream walked around the corner and called out "Skyquake your master calls."

"How did screamer get here?" mikosaid

"Wait, he can't see or hear us." I said "that means he is not here."

We kept running till a groundbridge open Starscream growed "mine or theirs."

"A groundbridge portal." Raf said

"That must be our way out here." I said

"Awesome, the bots got our message." miko said

We jumped through the ground Bridge with the zombie hand right behind us when we got through the ground Bridge Starscream was there shocked to see us than the zombie arm and starscream where having wrestling match when another ground Bridge opened and we jump through it


At the top of the base, I was standing there medanating when miko came up to me and said "I'm sorry about today hubi."

"Next time think before you do something, do you want to end up like…" i said

"Like who jack?" she asked

I lowered my head and replied with pain in my voice "His name was Shisui… he was two years older than me but we were exactly two years apart. He said I was his favorite birthday gift. He died because of me and I couldn't do anything. One day I did my first spin kick and landed wrong and sprained my ankle." I smiled a little ath the memory, "Shisui stayed by my side till I completely healed, then two years later airachnid came and killed shisui and it's all my fault we were told time and time again but we did it anyway, I couldn't do anything so I spent years training and training and my master pushed me to my limit and beyond."

"I'm sorry jack." miko almost crying

"Just… just be more careful please, I can't lose another person." i told her, she promised me she would try.


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