With Luisa
We see a nervous Luisa sitting on her bed while her parents and abuela we're sitting down on gym equipment*
Luisa:s..so why are you all here? N..not that I mind it mind you!
Luisa said moving her hands in a nervous matter*
Luisa:It's the first time that you guys are in my room
Alma: yes, well it's important, when we went to the school the other day we found out a lot of things. Nothing bad about you so please calm down
Alma said already seeing Luisa starting another panic endused ramble*
Agustín:quite the opposite it cariño, i can confidently say that it warmed all our hearts to hear that you've been defending Mirabel all this time
Luisa:oh well of course she's my little sister why wouldn't I protect her?
Julieta:tell that to Isabela
Julieta said her voice a little horsed from crying so much last night. Alma placed a hand on her shoulder for support*
Alma:yes. Well either way we're very proud of you for looking after her, but we also learned that you flunked a grade
Luisa:o..oh that, I uh it's just well...
Alma raised her hand to stop Luisa from speaking and took a deep sigh*
Alma; I'm not blaming you Cariño, I'm blaming myself. I've given you far to much responsibility and not enough time to study. I can't express it enough that, that's a mistake on my part not yours ok?
Agustín: yes, so please breath Mija
Luisa took some deep breath it took a few minutes for her heart to calm down*
Luisa:ok...ok, I'm better now
Alma:good, now what I was thinking is that we hire a tutor so that you can get caught up and...
Luisa:um...abuela ?
Alma:yes Mija?
Luisa:I don't need a tutor since well Mirabel kinda is my tutor
Luisa said scratching her cheek. The first and second generation madrigals looked at Luis surprised*
Luisa:yeah, after I was left behind Mirabel got It in her head to help me pass this year. So for like an hour a day she tutors me, hell she even convinced the teachers letting me take exams I've missed because of my chores
a smile started to appear on Luisa's face thinking of her younger sister and honestly Luisa's best friend. Julieta and Agustín couldn't help but feel pride for Mirabel even if it was unearned pride*
Alma:I...I see, maybe i can get Mirabel to tutor Isabela then...
Luisa:that would be a horrible idea honestly. Sure Mirabel and Isabela would say yes. But the second you're away they'll start to argue, more Isabela not respecting Mirabel's authority. But Mirabel is not perfect she would probably get smug about having authority over Isabela and tease her about it
Again all eyes were on Luisa who just shrugged with an awkward smile*
Luisa:I'm the middle child, I'm the peacemaker between the two of them
Alma:then what do you recommend?
Luisa:y.. your asking for my advice?
Luisa said shocked that alma wanted her for her Brain not her strength. Alma just nodded*
Luisa:w..well I would go back to the school and talk to her teacher Gabriela, she gives tutoring lessons for those who need them, as for my education I'm actually doing alright with Mirabel's tutoring just kinda wish we would have more time to study without someome asking for my help. It's bad enough they ask me when Mirabel drags me to lunch
Alma:I see, I see I...wait did you just say drags you?
Luisa flinched and mentally cursed herself for slipping up like that*
Luisa:d..did I say drag? I mean uh...
The look of all 3 adults in the room was enough to shut her up from lying, Luisa sighed and rubbed the back of her neck*
Luisa:ok ok, so uh I might've forgotten to have lunch a couple times...
Agustin;define a couple?
Luisa:9 out of 10 times until Mirabel decided to change that
Julieta:so, for years you've been skipping lunch and just starving yourself until dinner?
Julieta said looking horrified since A she was her daughter and B her whole gift is food. Luisa looked down embarrassed*
Luisa:I tried, but every time I did someone would call my name and I would have to help them with a house, or the pastor would want the church moved so the sun would hit the windows just right, or the donkeys would get lose. A lot of times my chores just didn't let me have a lunch
At the back alma had a haunting look on her face, education is one thing but she would never want her grandchildren to go hungry that's something she wouldn't want them to experience she personally knows how that feels*
Alma:Luisa why didn't you ever say anything? I would've done something about it, made it clear that you have to eat at so and so time
Luisa:I...I thought you would think I couldn't handle it...
Luisa said looking down in shame, Agustin grabbed Luisa's hands to give her some support*
Agustín:oh cariño no, We could never think that! But you are not a machine Luisa
Luisa:heh, you know if mirabel were here she would say that analogy doesn't work since machines use fuel to work
Luisa said with a crooked smile remembering how many times Mirabel said something along those lines to a stubborn Luisa*
Julieta:hay it's so cute that you know that about your sister, but that's beside the point
Luisa:I know I know but I got better honest! Mirabel always drags me away for an hour a day and we have lunch together, she always manages to convince the people to leave me alone for an hour of eating and studying
Alma:hay that Niña really is something
alma said with an impressed smile, she shook her head and looked at Luisa*
Alma:never the less, I'll make it known that you are to be left alone for lunch, you and Mirabel will also get another hour free to study since it can't be good that You're cramming all that in 1 hour,
Luisa:yes abuela thank you abuela
Luisa said happy that she'll finally get a bit of a break, Julieta eyes widen and she stood up suddenly*
Julieta:oh dear God...
Alma:Julieta what's wrong? Why act in such a way?
Julieta:we left pepa alone in the kitchen!!
Everyone eyes widen an they look horrified as they all collectively ran downstairs, but it was too late to save them*
Pepa:ah there you are! Don't worry there's still plenty of food left for you all
Pepa said smiling, they all looked at Dolores and Mirabel helping each other walk to the door*
Dolores;no more, I can't go on no more...
Mirabel:just hold on, once we get to the bakery we'll fill you up good. Don't you give up on me!
Mirabel and Dolores managed to go outside and disappeared from the crime scene*
Pepa: looks like you're not the only good cook in the family Julieta just look at them, they're bursting with flavor!
Pepa said with a proud smile ignoring the fact that Camilo and Antonio were passed out. And Felix on all 4 his body trembling, the eternal simp I mean Felix raised a trembling hand up and gave pepa a thumbs up*
Felix:I..it...it was delicious mi amor, really you are a woman of so many talents...
Were Felix final words before he joined his sons in the land of the dead*
Julieta; Right...well I wouldn't want to eat cold food so I'll just whip something up for the rest of us, and maybe a smoothie for everyone else to...wash down your food
Pepa:oh yes! I would love a mango smoothie. And don't worry Mami I made sure to save a plate just for you
Pepa sat down and ate her food, alma gulped and sat down looking down at the food that was so horrifically, comedically vile that it can't be described in mere words*
Alma looked at Camilo and Antonio and noticed both were faking being passed out*
Alma"why you little cheats"
Pepa;well Mami what you think?
Alma looked at her daughter looking at her with a huge smile as exited as a little girl on Christmas morning. Alma gulped again her mouth becoming dry because of the fear, with trembling hands she grabbed a piece and with a silent prayer she ate it*
Pepa:well?
Alma:...
Meanwhile with Mirabel and Dolores
Miguel:here, eat eat you poor children
Miguel said running to the table with freshly made Cubano sandwiches and juice*
Miguel:hay dios pepa's cooking
Dolores: you've had it before?
Dolores asked while Mirabel ate down her meal thankful to have that awful taste out of her mouth*
Miguel:long, long ago before Felix found the encanto i actually went on a date with your mother where she cooked for me a "romantic" meal and...let's just say there's a reason we've only ever had the 1 date
Miguel trembled at the memory as he walked to the back Dolores hummed slapping Mirabel's hand away from her Sandwich. Dolores looked at Mirabel with a mocked angered look*
Dolores:you had yours this is mine
Mirabel:come one Lolo, Miguel's sandwiches are sooooo good
Dolores:really? Then I'll have to be the judge of that won't I?
Dolores said with a smirk as she purposely ate her sandwich slowly to mock Mirabel who whined the whole time*
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Author note: with the scar of the madrigal finished (finished writing, not finished publishing) it's time again for another story to take its place
The wandering Ronin N
Fandom: Naruto
Shipping:Naruto x Sakura
Description:Óbito's attack to the leaf turned into a failure as Minato managed to kill him, but when one problem is solved another one comes to takes it place. In order to save the world, Minato Uzumaki makes the ultimate sacrifice of a father. He gave up his own son
Naruto Uzumaki, knowing nothing of his past having nothing to go with but his own last name. a samurai in the shinobi world with one goal in mind, To find out about his clan and the legacy they left behind. in his journey he'll live by the samurai code even if it kills him
Prologue
we see Konoha in chaos, the kyuubi was just sealed back up in there new vessel, the person who released it was killed and now it was just a matter of rebuilding*
Hokage tower
Minato took a deep breath as he crashed on his chair, he moved his head and frowned slightly seeing a photo he kept on there*
Minato grabbed the picture framed and looked at his genin team, more specifically at Obito or how he called himself Madara Uchiha*
Minato:all this chaos and for what Obito?
Minato muttered with sadness behind his tone as now he's a sensei who outlived two of his genin something that no sensei ever wants to experience. Minato just sighed again opening a drawer and placing the picture there, he closed it not wanting to see a memory or his failures*
jiraiya:man it's a mess out there
Jiraiya said, Minato got a small sense of amusement hearing his teacher use the window instead of the door, he could almost hear hiruzen screaming at a younger Jiraiya for doing that. Jiraiya sat down putting his feet on the table, he looked at his student showing genuine concern*
Jiraiya:how are you holding up?
Minato:how I'm holding up? How am I holding up... Look outside Jiraiya that's my mental state right about now. My village just suffered a horrific attack, the death has reached over 500 and still rising as more bodies are found. I had to see mebuki and her husband die in order to protect there new born daughter. Konoha is still on fire and I can hear the screaming match the civilians and Shinobi councils will have tomorrow when this all settles, oh and let's not forget that the person responsible for this massacre was my very own student that I had to kill!
Minato screamed and then covered his face with his hands, small tears of frustration falling from his face still not being able to fully accept that the knuckle headed genin he trained could cause this much destruction. Jiraiya sighed and patted Minato's back*
Jiraiya:the good news is that he's dead whatever his goals were they won't materialize, one of the death was mebuki, and don't you start you know as well as i do that she was becoming corrupt, her friendship with Kushina means nothing
Minato sighed and nodded hating when his master was right, and then Jiraiya grinned*
Jiraiya:and finally proof that those tips I gave you for that honeymoon of yours worked not 1 but 2 kids? God I'm good
Jiraiya said in a smug tone rubbing his chin, Minato rolled his eyes with a small smirk*
Minato:actually I tried those moves she hated them and swore me to never use them
Jiraiya felt as if a huge rock was throwned on his back so he just sat back down and sighed rubbing his back*
Jiraiya:named them yet?
Minato:yeah, Minato and menma you should see them, they even got fuzzy hair on there head Naruto is a blond like his old man's and menma has black hair like my father, heh safe to say that I'm gonna be my boys favorite
Now it was Minato's turn to be smug, he had his eyes close so he missed Jiraiya's smile faltering*
Jiraiya:so which one has the 9 tails?
Minato:we decided to give it to menma
Jiraiya:why not split it in half?
Minato looked at Jiraiya confused as if he grew a second head*
Minato:because why would we do that? Kushina was given the full kyuubi at birth, so was her mother, her grandmother, and so on and so forth. The Uzumaki blood has the strength to seal the kyuubi up fully with the correct sealing jutsu. Splitting the kyuubi in half isn't just reckless and dangerous but...just dumb when you really think about it
Jiraiya:yeah...Minato we need to talk, the...the toads just gave me a prophesy, it involves menma
Minato's smile completely disappeared, it was as if he took of Tobi's mask off all over again*
Minato:what are you talking about? How could there be a prophesy about my child he was just Born
Minato said not in an angry tone but a cold one missing all emotion. Jiraiya just shrugged having more time to get acquaintance with the news the toads gave him*
Jiraiya:it was gonna be made the second you placed the kyuubi to anyone, you gave it to menma so his destiny is set in stone now
Minato didn't know how to take this news so he did what his brain thought best to protect him, he entered his Hokage mode, holding his hands together in a serious expression on his face*
Minato:what is this prophesy you speak off
Jiraiya:the toads told me I would train "a great apprentice and that apprentice would either bring great peace or great destruction to the world, this child will have a great power inside him a power like no other" having the kyuubi inside him can't think of a more powerful power then that
Minato nodded thinking of what that means for his son, but his gut punch wasn't over since Jiraiya wasn't gonna give him time to breath*
Jiraiya:Minato, we need to place our complete and total attention to menma if he's to save the world nothing can be more important then him...which... which is why Naruto should be placed in a orphanage outside of Konoha
The window in the Hokage tower broke from all the chakra pressure Minato released, his face showing no expression but his eyes told him everything Jiraiya needed to know*
Jiraiya: Minato, i don't say this to be cruel. I say this for the good of Naruto, think about it with all the attention we have to give menma, how do you think Naruto would respond to such a thing? And don't give me any crap that we can train both of them you know we can't, all or attention need to be on menma. Tell me does that sound fair to Naruto? that the boy was born with the misfortune of being the brother of the child of destiny?
Minato calmed down and looked at his desk, his Hokage side was telling him Jiraiya was right, his Shinobi side was telling him Jiraiya was right, his analytical mind was telling him Jiraiya was right, Naruto deserves better then to just be forgotten by his parents*
Minato:what about Kushina? No matter what you say you won't be able to convince her, family is the most important thing to a Uzumaki
Jiraiya:I already came up with something. But if she finds out, if she realize what we did...I'll be honest with you Minato she'll divorce you, I don't see any way she could ever forgive you, I'm begging you to think over about this. I told you all of this because I want you to decide what to do I told you my idea it's up do you if we'll do it
Sadly for Minato, his mind was still in Hokage mode, the decision was made before his newly form father side of him could even interject*
Minato:you said he could bring peace or destruction, there's not another option this is the only option. We're Shinobi we have to live with our choice even if there heartbreaking now what is it?
Jiraiya nodded and took out a scroll putting it on the table, he opened it and read it, his eyes widen slightly*
Jiraiya:the second isn't the only one able to create forbidden type jutsu but after we do this I'm burning this scroll since this is something on the level of what Orochimaru would do
Jiraiya said in disgust of himself for making such a disgusting jutsu, Minato nodded and looked down at the scroll and what it said it does*
Minato:"memory blocker, a B level justsu the more chakra you place on the scroll the higher level the technique will become. With this you'll be able to erase or altered someone's memory"...
Minato grabbed her hat and placed it on himself*
Minato: Kushina will be the only to have this placed on Her, You and me? We'll live with this guilt and shame it's the least we deserve
Jiraiya nodded as they both got up and flickered to Kushina in the hospital room, she was sleeping exhausted but with a smile having both of her baby boys in her arms, Minato's expressionless mask faltered a little as the reality of what he's gonna do hit him like a load of bricks, but his eyes became cold again as he nodded to Jiraiya, Jiraiya gave a silent sigh grabbing Naruto from Kushina's grasp and flickering out. Minato walked up to Kushina and kissed her temple softly*
Minato: please... please forgive me for this even if we both know you could never forgive something like this
Minato said as a lump started to grow on his throat, he did the jutsu, for all Kushina will remember menma lived but Naruto didn't survive childbirth*
With Jiraiya in land of iron
Jiraiya bought a basket and placed Naruto inside it, he made sure he was as warm and as comfortable as possible. He walked to the orphanage seeing a lady already there waiting for him, Jiraiya flinched, he looked down, Naruto had grabbed his finger and started to giggle. Not a lot of things can break Jiraiya's heart the old sannin has been through enough heartache throught his lifetime to get used to it. But this? This was something that managed to break the heart of the toad sannin of mount myoboku. He kissed the baby's forehead and took his finger back*
Jiraiya:sorry kid, I'll pray to Kami that you have a good life...
Jiraiya said in some pathetic attempt to make himself feel better about this whole situation, he walked to Takeda Yoshie and gave her the basket, the late 50 woman looked at the little baby*
Takeda:does he have a name?
Jiraiya:yeah...Naruto, Naruto Uzumaki
Takeda lifted her gaze but Jiraiya was already gone, she smiled as she gave little Naruto her finger to play with*
Takeda:don't worry Naruto you'll make lots of friends here I promise...
The wandering Ronin coming Tuesday 24th on Wattpad Or read the first arc on
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