Hello! So I mostly have the Namek Saga written, it just needs adjustments to some of the chapters. But I feel like you can enjoy this nonetheless. Anyway, Reviews!
Guest: So Vegeta's little brother Tarble is here too. This should be interesting.
Answer: I hope I can make it interesting.
Guest: Will Shallot and Giblet appear in this story and will Giblet work under Sealas?
Answer: I'm not sure if I should add them yet, but Giblet working under Sealas is a bit random. He's more of a lone wolf when it comes to his goal with the only exception begin that as Ahms.
Guest: Besides the dragon ball series what other anime do you watch and enjoy.
Answer: Well there's a lot to go over to be honest and they normally don't last too long. But I can tell you with absolute confidence that One Piece remains my favorite.
Mostly when you compare it to Naruto or Dragonball, it really hasn't done anything extra, it made it clear from the start that it was gonna be kind of weird, but the good kind. Plus it goes into a lot of detail when it comes to the world not even surrounding the main characters. Not too many Anime do that anymore.
But other than One Piece I love My Hero Academia as well.
KMilesXD: Hey, Rukido. I just wanted to apologise for my previous review and I didn't mean to stir up trouble in the review section. I have a few questions about Rukido.
1. I believe that Rukido's physical appearance is based on Super Future Gohan but with the hair being black. In my head, I picture Rukido resembling a younger Paragus. Just think about it, Goku and Turles resemble Bardock and Vegeta takes after King Vegeta.
2. Why doesn't Rukido have a Saiyan name? It kinda baffled me in the original story but I didn't think about it too much. It's your story but I'm just curious that's all
Answer: It's fine, it would be weird if it didn't happen at one point.
1st Answer: Well if I'm being honest, a lot of the Saiyans do look similar to one another. It's mostly the eyes that really remain different. But, yeah my design is mostly based off of Future Gohan while he's Super Saiyan.
2nd Answer: Well, not too many Saiyan names catch my eye and anyone that is good is already taken. Plus, I've stuck with the name Rukido for the longest time. I think about...3 to 4 years now? So it's kind of a name that I'm keeping.
Guest: I just wanted to say in the video I told you about there was this one part which was my second favorite part of the video which featured a tag team between Goku and Bardock in case you couldn't tell Goku was in Super Saiyan Blue and Bardock was in Super Saiyan 4 the attack they did was both of them fire their Ki wave attacks at their opponent it was cool and that's why it earned my part of the 2nd favorite part of the video maybe you can get an idea from your story from it.
Answer: I saw it and I've watched a lot of Heroes material and have gotten plenty of ideas from it so far.
I just need to make sure it makes sense when I write it.
Guest: Here's an interesting fun fact for you originally during the dark king Mechikabura saga Xeno Trunks was gonna become a super Saiyan 4 however the team behind it couldn't agree if his hair should stay purple or if it should turn black that's why they have him the super Saiyan god form in the final version of it.
Answer: Had a feeling that was the reason.
Guest
You know Gradeaundera has a video about autocorrect and I think you should check that out.
Answer: I will.
MekhiIsTheBestInTheWholeWorld
Yes, I like Dragon Ball Legends and that is because of how the main characters Shallot actually has a background and story that I can get behind and find interesting and it is not just all Goku-like and whatnot. This differentiates him from Beat who I don't really like in comparison. Also, is Turles gonna have a love interest in this story or become a Super Saiyan? Another thing, is Shallot gonna be in this story too or nah? Keep up the great work as you always do.
Answer: Maybe to both those for Turles. It's still on the board to be honest, but I need to think about it. As for Shallot, he's undecided.m at the moment, but definitely not the same way I did in the original.
Amanny: I'm surprised Tarble is here, though Vegeta won't be nice to him. I don't like Slug either.
Why I love Dragon Ball Legends, because it has cool stuff in this game. The characters are amazing, the story mode is great, PvP is fun, missions and prizes are nice and useful and the summons are fantastic.
I love Dragon Ball Legends which is why I am playing it.
Response: Nope. Also, I didn't answer your question last time about the Shadow Dragons so sorry about that. We agreed to use them, but not through the Black Star Dragon Balls.
Also I realized I didn't answer your question about the Shadow Dragons. I am thinking about using them to be honest, they held a pretty good lesson even if their Saga wasn't the greatest. Don't rely on the Dragon Balls for all of your problems. I don't know if I can use the same lesson in this story, but I think I may still add them in.
Guest: My favorite part of the video I told about was the end where we see Bardock defeated Frieza by punching him and then going super Saiyan pushing Frieza back then punching and kicking him before charging at him again and going straight to super Saiyan 3 (skipping past 2 mid you) and hitting Frieza again before charging up all his Ki and going super Saiyan 4 and then charging his spirit cannon and throwing it at Frieza which finishes him off and definitely killing him and Frieza didn't even transform he was still in first form and didn't even transform not that it would've changed anything because Bardock was still WAY beyond Frieza's power level at that point. Just shows how cool Bardock is and how smart he is because he didn't take any chances.
Response: Huh, neat.
Guest
Well I actually do have a good concept of how time travel,timelines,and time machines work as shown in dragon ball and it's that all timelines including ones that are created because of time travel and time machines all exist at the same time but they all branch off from each other all timelines are their own version of the multiverse but with VERY distinct differences when Future Trunks and by extension Xeno Trunks used the time machine that their mothers from their timelines created they didn't change anything their timelines stayed the same even after going back a second time and when Xeno Trunks was pulled to the time nest by Chronoa to become a member of the time patrol after he killed his timeline's version of Cell Future Trunks continued to live his life in his timeline while Xeno Trunks was now a time patroller and then we get to the Future Trunks saga in super where Future Trunks came to the main timeline again years later and tell them about his current situation with Black and Future Zamasu and later when they found out that black is actually another version of Zamasu who in his timeline used his timeline's version of the super dragon balls to switch bodies with his timeline's version of Goku and after killing his timeline's version of Goku he jumped out of his timeline to find a timeline where he could initiate the zero mortal plan eventually coming to Future Trunk's timeline and teamed up with Future Zamasu and when Beerus killed the main timeline Zamasu with the Hakai technique again it didn't change anything Black wasn't erased from existence they still had to deal with him and Future Zamasu they just created another new timeline this is shown in the Manga when a new time ring appears in the box where the time rings are contained in in fact when Future Trunks and again by extension Xeno Trunks used their time machines the created many new timelines including the GT timeline and other versions of it and the conflict between the time patrol and The Dark Empire created many new timelines like the ones we see in God mission,the Dark Dragon ball saga,and the Universe mission. In fact Fu could be responsible for the new timeline that we see with Bardock and the other Saiyans uniting to prevent Frieza from killing all Saiyans. That's my understanding of it anyway.
Response: ...I won't lie, I got a headache reading all of that, mostly from it all being compacted into one paragraph. Also, I should have classified that a bit better. There are a lot of plot holes and things that annoy me about the Future Saga in whole that I'll explain when I get to it.
Guest: Will there at least be another Female Saiyan that Rukido falls in love with? And yes I do enjoy dragon ball legends. It's a cool game with how it takes interesting concepts and puts them in the game's story mode which revolves around the tournament of time.
Answer: Hmmmm...sure, but I won't say when or who.
Guest: I do like seeing their power levels and I do want to see what power levels you give all the characters.
Response: I won't lie, this is gonna give me the worst kind of headache, especially when I get into Super eventually. But I find it a lot of fun as well.
Well that's all of them, now onto the Story!
Arrival to Namek! Race for the Dragon Balls
(Namek) (34 Days After Leaving Earth)
One month, that's how long it took to get here. It was a long journey for the Dragon Team, but they had finally arrived at the homeworld of the Namekains.
Namek.
However, they remained unaware of the threat looming on this planet.
"It's...a lot like Earth. Minus the sky anyway." Krillin said, looking up. "I don't know why, but I've got a bad feeling."
"Relax! We're already stronger and then we were on Earth. Ain't nothing here we can't handle." Yamcha exclaimed with a smirk. However a quick glare from Raditz shut him up quickly.
"All I'm saying is that we should be careful. For all we know another Vegeta could be on this planet!" Krillin said with a shiver. He was getting all kinds of bad vibes from just being here.
"Shouldn't you put the ship in one of those…Capsule things woman?" Raditz asked, looking at their only way off this planet. He rather not be stuck here of all places.
"Good idea, the last thing we need is for this thing to get destroyed." Bulma said taking out the capsule made for it. With their ship safe in a Capsule, she then took out the Dragon Radar and turned it on. "Hey guys! There's one of the distance and four others all together!"
"In that case, I'll head off to get that one then you see about finding-hang on, two energy signatures coming up." The Saiyan said, getting ready to fight. The others soon followed his example while Bulma quickly ran behind a large boulder. Not long after, two guys weren't battle suits with Scouters flying up to them. 'No way! Frieza's men are here?! Then that means...'
"Look what we got here? A bunch of tourists not knowing where they belong?" A Grunt said with a smirk.
"Heh, I say we kill them and take the girl for some fun." The other Grint said as they aimed their weapons at the group. However they quickly missed Raditz appearing behind them, smashing both their heads together, effortlessly knocking them out.
"Weak trash." Raditz muttered, taking the scouters as they fell into the water. He tossed one to the scouters to Gohan while placing the other one on. "These men belong to Frieza."
"Frieza?! You mean that Alien Emperor you were going on about?!" Yamcha said with a gulp. If he were honest, he and the others had a few nightmares about the guy. "Shouldn't we not to piss the guy off then?"
"Not likely. If he's come to get this planet of all places, it's for one reason." The Saiyan said, hoping they would get it.
"You don't mean..." Krillin shivered in fear.
"The Dragon Balls!" Gohan exclaimed. The others started shaking while Raditz growled. "Then those four Dragon Balls on the radar..."
"Are they already in his possession?! Damn it!" Yamcha yelled, punching a hole into the side of a boulder.
"Can't any of you guys do anything! We don't exactly have Goku or even Rukido here ya know!" Bulma exclaimed with a bit of anger and some fear. She didn't want to die on some alien planet of all places.
"With our current power? Nothing...nothing at all." Raditz said with a growl. However he turned his head and turned on his scouter. "I already linked our scouters. We'll also be able to hear the Frieza Force frequency."
"H-hang on! Are we still going through with this?!" Yamcha exclaimed, looking at the Saiyan like he was insane. "We barely did anything to Vegeta alone! How are we even going to deal with a guy that's supposed to be a hundred times more powerful?!"
"Do you want to bring your friends or not?!" Raditz yelled down, a furious expression on his face. "Giving up now of all times, isn't going to solve a damn thing! We're already here, so get over it!"
"Uncle Raditz is right! We spent a whole month getting here and we can't turn back now!" Gohan said with a glare. "Besides we only need to get the Dragon balls, we don't have to face him at all."
"He's right, I'm sure if we can get them together we can make our wish then get the heck out of here!" Krillin said looking at the other two. They looked at one another before nodding, getting a smile out of Krillin. "Great! So we'll track down the Dragon Balls and find a way to get them without Frieza and his goons even noticing."
The Rebel Saiyan didn't seem to be okay with that, his anger over the realization of his race's sudden extinction was still fresh. Still, even with all of his anger, he knew well that he was nowhere around Frieza's power even with the Great Ape power on his side. That just meant he had to get stronger the Saiyan way.
Through battle.
'I doubt he'll notice a few of his men going missing when scouting.' Raditz thought, pumped at the idea of messing with the Frieza force. However then he noticed something up in the sky and growled. "Oh you have got to be kidding me!"
"Huh? What's wrong...hang on...this energy!" Krillin exclaimed as he looked up to the sky. Everyone followed his gaze and saw a Space Pod entering the atmosphere and landing somewhere far away from them. "It's Vegeta!"
"You mean that Saiyan that beat you guys down!" Bulma said with fear in her voice. Noticing this, Yamcha smirked and went by her side, wrapping an arm around her shoulder.
"Relax babe, I can take on Vegeta all by myself! I got my blade this time, so he won't stand a chance." Yamcha said with hope his plan would work. However the sudden stomp on his foot made him realize otherwise.
"Oh don't try to get with me out of nowhere! If you think we're getting back together because you think you can beat Vegeta then you can forget it mister!" Bulma exclaimed while stomping away. Gohan and Krillin laughed at the failure while Raditz merely smirked at the display. "Now hurry up! I wanna find somewhere we can at least hide out!"
"Sounds good to me." Krillin said, not even bothering to argue. Soon enough they were all following after her, even Raditz just to know. He looked off into the distance, seeing another ship to where Vegeta was while another crashed not too far away from the location.
'Another ally? Who the hell would work for Vegeta willingly?' Raditz thought to himself before continuing after his group. He'd bring it up to them soon enough.
(With Vegeta and Tarble)
Tarble wasn't sure what to make of his brother. He was stronger than him without a doubt, but his attitude was throwing him off greatly. Being born with a gentle heart was the reason why he was cast away in the first place while his brother was kept for having the heart of a true Saiyan. Plus his power was considered too low among even Elite Class Warriors and his father didn't want him to embarrass the family.
He ended up being sent through multiple Galaxies before finally hitting a planet. His Saiyan programming just involved getting stronger, making his life easier for the most part. It was a simple farming planet, but it had plenty of strong wildlife for him to deal with. So he just helped out with the farm and kept fighting off any wildlife that got too close. It wasn't until he was found by Fireza's patrol about a month ago before he was finally able to learn about the fate of Planet Vegeta and his brother. With that, he was brought before Frieza and was asked to join with his brother once he healed.
However it was clear that he had other plans.
"Vegeta, it looks like Cui followed us after all." Tarble said looking off into the distance.
"Tch. It wouldn't matter anyway. Unlike him, I'm not a coward and with my power he's, but an ant compared to someone like me." Vegeta said with a smirk. He then turned to his little brother, already having a few ideas. "You're actually around his level. Fight him if he decides to come to us. You could use the battle experience."
"Y-yes sir!" Tarble said, not wanting to let him down. Unlike Vegeta he couldn't sense other people's power however he was able to pick things up on his scouter and noticed Cui suddenly stopped. "It looks like he stopped."
"Really? I figured if I hid my power level he would come running straight to us. Too bad we couldn't kill that freak sooner." Vegeta said with a bit of disappointment. Tarble sweat dropped at the comment, but said nothing on it. He still needed to prove to his brother that he was more than capable of being part of the Saiyan race.
Or at least die trying.
(Namek, Village)
The Rebel Saiyan was currently jumping island to island to find some of Frieza's Troops. After finding a hideout, he flew off to find a fight nearby. The others were going to try to find the Dragon balls left alone to see about finding them first before getting the one's grouped together. For now however he was going to focus on raising his own power before they were inevitably forced to fight Frieza.
Raditz saw a village down below and landed just outside of it before walking towards it. He instantly got noticed by the Namekians as several Warrior Type Namekian landed right in front of him.
"You! You wear the same armor as the invaders!" One of them yelled, entering a battle stance. "Leave now or else."
"Even with your power, you nothing compared to my own." Raditz said as they all flinched at that. He could tell that they could sense energy by their expressions, but the warriors weren't backing down. "I have no interest in battle with your people. I only need to know what Frieza's people are up to."
"How do we know if we can trust your word? Your power may be great, but there's some darkness in it." The Namekian said with a growl. That was also true. He wasn't exactly doing this out of the kindness in his heart. It was mostly payback at this point.
"In that case I won't even ask about the Dragon Balls on this planet." Raditz snarled out, not allowing them the chance to react as he continued on. "Hell, I'll even defend your Village from these invaders if you wish."
The Namekian's muttered among themselves, looking towards their Elder for help. The Saiyan waited for them to finish up, taking his time to sense the surrounding area for any of Frieza's Forces. It wasn't long before an Elder Namekian walked up to him, a stern yet nervous look upon him.
"We will...accept your offer. So long as you don't betray us nor ask of the location of the Dragon Balls." The Elder said, not letting his expression down for a moment. "In return however, we have healers that can bring you back to max power so long as you fight for our village.
"Seriously?!" Raditz exclaimed in shock as he felt a grin on his face. This was just what he needed in order to catch up with Vegeta's power and maybe even Friezas. "In that case, consider this a deal."
This was going to be great!
(With Krillin and Gohan)
Krillin and Gohan decided to scout out for the next Dragon Ball while Yamcha stayed with Bulma and helped them set up in their cave. They arrived not too long ago and saw the horror that was Frieza, Cooler and his men, all ready figuring out who was the strongest in the group.
Despite his small stature and the rather silly looking hover chair, his power was immense. The demon's power didn't seem to have an end and the two shivered at the dreadful feeling he gave off. Cooler was around the same level it seemed, but something felt off about it. Almost as though he was holding himself back.
He was the one that had such frightening power to begin with, not even showing his full power yet from his hover chair. They had already witnessed the massacre of everyone in the village with the exception being that of a single Namekian child, Dodoria being the one to do so.
"Dodoria. Finish up the child so that we may leave." Frieza commanded as the Henchmen grinned madly.
"As you wish Lord Frieza!" Dodoria exclaimed with a bit of excitement. The Namekian child stepped back in fear as the alien opened his mouth to end him.
However Gohan had other plans as he dashed in, despite Krillin's protest, and kicked the Alien Henchmen across his head. The surprise attack along with Gohan's anger from the display was enough to send him flying sliding back a bit while Gohan landed next to the boy.
"Don't tell me there's a Saiyan here?" Frieza asked, not the least bit affected by the boy's presence. He had to admit, the lack of a challenge was quite boring.
"Another one? You really need to make sure to exterminate them after this." Cooler said, his tone mocking. Frieza chose to not comment on it, knowing that he was right.
"You damn brat!" Dodoria exclaimed, opening his mouth to fire a beam. However Krillin came out of nowhere and kicked him from behind, sending him flying into a building.
"Grab that kid and let's book it!" Krillin yelled as quickly as he could. Nodding, Gohan quickly picked up the young Namekian and flew off with Krillin right behind him.
"They didn't look that strong or maybe Dodoria has gotten weaker." Zarbon said calmly while Dodoria pulled himself out of the wreckage.
"When I get my hands on those brats..." The Henchmen muttered to himself, but was cut off by his Lord's laughter.
"That was rather humorous, but if that's all it takes to knock you around, I may just have to replace you." Frieza said calmly while Dodoria freaked.
"D-don't worry Lord Frieza! I'll take care of those pests immediately!" Dodoria exclaimed, understanding the message. He took off to the sky while leaving Frieza and Zarbon with the Dragon Balls.
"Should I go with him, my Lord?" Zarbon asked.
"No, I have another task for you. Keep a lookout for Vegeta and his little brother. I rather have them taken in alive while I still have the time to torture them myself."
"As you wish my Lord." The Henchman replied as he took off into the sky. Frieza sighed annoyed by the fact his scouter was gone and that this was taking longer than it should have.
"Tch. Somehow, I doubt he'll survive." Cooler mumbled, referring to Dodoria. The Soldier may have held some power, but he was no fighter. 'All the better I suppose.'
Meanwhile Gohan, Krillin and the Namekian child were speeding away as fast as they could from the rampaging Dodoria behind them. They were almost caught before Krillin suddenly used the Solar Flare to blind him. The Henchmen screamed in pain as the others hid their energy and flew off as quickly as they could. Dodoria was trying to recover his vision before he was suddenly attacked from behind and sent flying to the ground below. He growled as he looked up, meeting the gaze of Vegeta with Tarble right behind him.
"Vegeta!" Dodoria yelled while the Prince smirked.
"Hello Dodoria, best get ready for me." Vegeta mocked as he and Tarble landed on the ground. 'About time I get to pop the Pink Balloon!'
(With Raditz)
Raditz scoffed as he dealt with the latest bunch of Frieza's men. He let them get a few shots before he ended them within seconds. Afterwards he would allow the Namekians to heal him, raising his power little by little.
'I'm close to Vegeta's strength on Earth! All I need to do is get into one real fight then, I'll be set!' Raditz thought while clenching his fist. He was about to rest up a bit before he sensed another powerful ki in the air. 'The hell?! This power feels powerful yet dark. Even more so than Vegeta's!'
"Well, well if it isn't another monkey!" A voice yelled from above. Looking up, the Saiyan greeted his teeth at the sight of none other...than Cui. However his eyes were glowing red while a misty purple aura surrounded him. The self proclaimed rival of Vegeta looked down with a smirk as he spoke up. "Maybe you'll tell me where Vegeta is hiding?"
This may have been trouble.
(Chapter End)
Next Time on A Change in Time
It is I, the Emperor of the Universe, Lord Frieza. It appears that I've had a small...complication. Even now it feels as though my forces are diminishing on this backwater planet and it isn't because of Vegeta. Cooler thinks there are others here and I must agree with him. Damn it all, I may have to call...them in after all.
Next Time: Rampage Across Namek!
A/N: I know I could have shown more here, but bear with me here. I also won't lie and say that the Namek Saga won't last too long either and we'll be jumping into Ginyu or now Bonyu Saga soon enough. There just aren't too many notable fights or moments that need to be rewritten in full detail and most of those moments are with Vegeta anyway.
I also changed Cui from attacking Vegeta to going after Raditz instead. He does need the training after all.
And well...that's really the only other change other than Tarble being there, but he'll have his own moment soon enough.
Well as usual, I hope you've enjoyed this chapter and that your day is going well. Until next time!
Power Levels
Raditz
Base: 10,000
Small Zenkai: 12,500
Gohan
Base: 4,000
Krilin
Base: 3,000
Yamcha
Base: 2,750
Vegeta
Base: 24,000
Tarble
Base: 17,000
Dodoria
Base: 22,000
Zarbon
Base: 22,000
Frieza
1st Form: 530,000
Cooler
Heavily Suppressed: 460,000
Cui
Base: 18,250
Dark Ki: 20,000
Dende
Base: 3