Rider of Tohsaka Chapter 1 – Summoning the Hero

Here is the rewritten version of my Rider of Tohsaka, this is a Naruto/Fate Stay Night fic where instead of summoning the Epic Hero Archer EMIYA, Rin summons the Jinchuuriki of the Kyuubi from a time long past.

Now I've made some changes to his character like his phantasms and appearance, once this story is completed fully, if I decide to continue to the full story, I will be making the Origin story to explain how his tale came to be and how it differs from Canon.

I don't own Naruto, nor do I own Fate Stay Night.

Rin Tohsaka sighed as she breathed in deeply to prepare herself. Finally, she was ready.

She had been preparing for this day ever since her father, Tokiomi Tohsaka, had been killed in the last war by what she believed to be an enemy master and he had chosen her to be his successor after discarding her younger sister to the Makiri clan. Just yesterday she had finally acquired the artifact for which she had decided to use to summon her servant for the Fifth Holy Grail War.

Now she knelt down to the floor of her home's basement and carefully placed the ancient artifact inside the circle she had spent the last two days painstakingly drawing. From what she knew, this artifact would summon the strongest Servant under the strongest Class, the Saber, or so she hoped seeing as she had kind of forgotten what the old man with extremely long, white hair that gave her the artifact had told her about this certain hero's legend. However, she had never failed in her preparations and studies, and she had no intentions of starting now. Her summoning would be perfect and with the Servant it gave her, she would have a guaranteed victory against all of the other servants and masters.

She vaguely heard the clock she had set up earlier strike the time in the distance. It was now two in the morning, the perfect time for her magic circuits to activate. She closed her eyes and reached deep within her being as her father and Kirei had taught her to begin the process. Rin swept away some sweat from her forehead using a small towel and placed ten of her Jewels around the circle, since her Prana that she stored inside them would assist her body's own and serve as the anchor to give the Servant its physical form.

"Fill. Fill. Fill. Fill. Fill. Let each be turned over five times, simply breaking asunder the fulfilled time." Rin began chanting the incantation long since designed for summoning the spirits of heroes long past, feeling the Prana begin to build up in the jewels and her stomach as she continued. "A base of silver and steel. A foundation of stone and the Archduke of Contracts. And my ancestor, my great master, Schweinorg. Raise a wall to block the falling wind. Close the gates of all four cardinal directions. From the Crown, come forth and follow the forked road to the Kingdom."

"I hereby propose… Thou shalt come under my command, and thy sword shall control my fate. Abiding by the summons of the Holy Grail, if thou dost accede to this will and reason… then answer me."

Rin fought the urge to smirk in victory as she felt the wind begin to pick up as the ritual had almost come to completion. "An oath shall be sworn here… I will be all that is good in the eternal world. I will be the disposer of evil in the eternal world. Thou, clad with the Great Trinity, come forth from the circle of constraint…"

The summoning circle began to emit a very bright light, and the Tohsaka heiress felt the jewels she had laid out turn to dust as the Mana in the air started to swirl violently like a whirlpool as the Servant slowly materialized within the summoning circle. Rin wanted to open her eyes and see her progress, but she chose to keep them closed to maintain her concentration. "… Guardian of the Heavenly Scales!"

Instantly after those last words, the bright light erupted from the circle, just as Rin cracked her eyes open to take a peek at her newly summoned servant, she was forced to close them just as quickly, only catching a glimpse of golden hair before forcing them shut again when dust from the summoning got in her eyes.

The smoke cleared entirely and Rin finally got a good look at the being that she had summoned. He was a man that looked to be a little older than her that stood at a height of six feet, meaning she came up to his chest, and his cerulean blue eyes were framed by his spiky golden blond hair that was tied back into a ponytail that flowed down to the middle of his back in a form of golden waterfall. Adorning his cheeks were six whisker-like birthmarks with three covering each cheek. Gracing his forehead was a headband with a horned metal plate in the center of the cloth that bore a spiral symbol that oddly enough looked like a leaf. His garments consisted of a pair of black pants and his chest was bare, with the exception of a sort of forest green flak jacket that revealed his muscled torso that had Rin drooling for a second before she noticed it was covered by a red Japanese-style haori that had black and red flames dancing at the bottom. The last thing she could see on him was a Japanese-styled katana with its tsuba in the shape of a red spiral that hung across his back.

For a moment Master and Servant examined each other in silence, the Servant weighing whether or not the girl before him was his new master for this war; while Rin fought the urge to let her eyes roam to his chiseled facial features or his muscular torso that made the macho boys in her school seem like toddlers from the sheer physical power it emitted from her just being in the hero's presence.

"You who have summoned me, I ask of you, are you my Master?"

Rin jumped a bit at the lyrical, yet deep voice that came from the man before her and grinned as it seemed that her summoning had been a success and she pulled up her sleeve to show a strange red tattoo drawn into the shape of what looked like a fox head with nine red lines behind it. "Yes, I am Rin Tohsaka; I am the master that summoned you!" She declared happily, proud of herself for summoning a hero of legend… even if she had forgotten which legend he was the hero of… she should really learn to pay more attention to what people tell her. "May I ask what your name is, Saber?"

"Saber?" The currently unknown hero asked as he looked at her with his tilted gold covered head, confusion clear on his face as his sky blue eyes twinkled with mischief, "I don't know what you've been smoking babe, but I was summoned in the Rider class, not Saber."

Rin's jaw of course dropped to the floor at that information as she stared at the now proclaimed Rider in surprise, having believed she had succeeded when she had seen the blade on his back. "B-but, I thought I summoned servant saber!"

The new comer just gave the shocked girl a gentle and understanding smile as he rested his right hand on her head and shuffled her hair a bit much to her irritation. "Don't worry Rin-chan; I'm sure that we'll be the best of friends. Now where's your kitchen, I'm starving!"

With that, her servant seemed to phase out of existence and Rin looked at his spot for a few seconds as she tried to come to grips with the fact that she had failed to summon the Saber class servant like she had wanted, no like she had dreamed of for the past ten years. 'At least it's Rider,' she thought as she bit her bottom lip in a thoughtful manner that was considered cute by many of her male schoolmates, though none would have the balls to admit in fear of their crush removing their manhoods with a rusty scalpel after how they saw her deal with Shinji Matou's acts of perversion on their first day of high school. 'They're supposed to have powerful noble phantasms…'

With her mind made up, she made her way up the stairs from the basement to the main house as she heard a rustling movement in the mansion above her. She went up to find her previously summoned servant standing in the doorway to the balcony that connected to the living room, the room and kitchen looked as if a hurricane had gone through and the remarkably well-built man was looking at everything with interest clear in his eyes.

Taking a peek into the kitchen as she passed as she recalled him talking about being hungry, she could see that he had somehow discovered all of her hiding places for her secretly favorite food of ramen and devoured them all in such a short time. Besides the food that she declared retribution for in her head, the Tohsaka magus clan heiress just passed it off as the man waking up in a place that wasn't even from his own time.

"Wow, architecture and designs really have changed huh?" Rider asked without turning around and he continued to look around at all the new sights, moving past the girl in a blur of yellow and appearing in front of a display case that held a picture of her standing with her mother and father along with the man's cane and their family's ancestral sword that had been given to their family's founder by a feudal lord sometime in the past when they first became a magus family.

"I guess," Rin said as she came up to stand next to him and fight her blush at seeing the muscles outlined clearly beneath his skin that was exposed at the front. "I never did get your name Rider. Who are you?"

The man just chuckled at the young brunette magus as he secretly checked her out, noting down how she had a cute face and a nice body, thanking his old teacher and godfather for teaching him the correct path of the world as he noted to mark down her measurements for the continuation of a certain series of books that he hoped he could get back out into the world.

"Yeah sorry about that Rin-chan, I was just excited to see something new; it's been many eons since I've been alive," He said, drawing Rin's curiosity at how old his legend just might be. "My name is Naruto Uzumaki; I was the Rokudaime Hokage of the Hidden Leaf Village and the Last Jinchuuriki of the Elemental Nations, Dattebayo!"

The next morning

"So what is your legend exactly?" Rin asked as she took a bite of the mouthwatering eggs that her servant had set down on the table for her. "I don't think I've ever heard of Naruto Uzumaki-Namikaze, or the Hidden Leaf Village. That sounds sort of like something you'd read about in a manga or novel about ninja."

When the magus-in-training had woken up after the summoning of Rider and learning his name before leaving him to get some rest since his summoning had drained her, the black haired girl was pleased to find her servant already up and about.

Though it had creeped her out a bit to find several copies of him walking around like it was as normal as the air they breathed…

So as soon as she got over her shock of the multiple handsome men in the same room as her, Rin decided that she wanted to know more about the hero that she had summoned from the Heroes Throne. Questions ranging from whom he was to what era he came from and what his Noble Phantasms were… for all intents and purposes, the things she needed to know as his master so that she would know how to fight against other servants with him.

All she had to go on with was that his name was Naruto Namikaze and he was something called a Hokage and Jinchuuriki, terms she was utterly unfamiliar with, while also wearing a clearly Japanese-styled haori.

"I don't really know, my particular legend didn't have a name while I was still alive," Naruto, or as he was summoned, Rider said as he shrugged, not showing any concern that she was lost on where to learn about his legend, knowing himself that it was an extremely long time ago and probably forgotten by the modern world, and said, "All I can say so far without seeing more of your history books instead of what was dumped in my head by the Grail is that I'm from before what the citizens of the modern world call the Age of the Gods, that shouldn't be much of a problem for you, is it Master?"

"Oh no, don't worry," Rin said with a sigh as she waved her hand to placate the servant before taking a look at the clock on the wall. "We'll make some plans for the Grail War later, right now though? I have to get to school before I become too late."

"Sounds like a good plan master," Rider said as he gave her a broad smile that had her blushing. "While you are going to this school place, I'll check out the surrounding city to see how we can use it to our advantage!"

Giving a nod to her servant after getting over how bedazzling his smile was, the master of Rider grabbed her school supplies while throwing on her red coat and running out the door, only giving slight notice that Rider had jumped out the window instead of using the door before phasing out of existence.

Several hours later

A pair of dark gray eyes stared down at the lit-up area of Fuyuki City's square from the highest viewpoint available within the city. The man that the piercing gaze belonged to was very confused with his life at this current point in time as he stared down at the bustling crowds of the city's occupants.

The first mark on his confusion was the fact that instead of being summoned by Rin Tohsaka like he had always been, the silver haired man had woken up from being taken into the Heroes Throne once again to find himself staring at the smirking face of Shinji Matou and the saddened face of Sakura Matou while standing in the Makiri mansion.

The second to high-light his odd summoning was that instead of his usual Archer class that he always showed up in no matter the timeline, he had been summoned as Saber and now he was standing on top of the tallest tower in Fuyuki alongside his master after being summoned several days before Rin usually summoned him and being confused the hell out of.

"How does it look, Saber-kun?" Sakura asked as she stared down over the landscape of the city with the Servant that had saved her from her rapist of a brother and monster of a grandfather upon being summoned, "Is this building good enough for you to evaluate a possible battleground?"

"Hm…?" Saber hummed as he turned his gaze to the sixteen year old girl standing by his side. "I would usually prefer somewhere even taller since I am used to using a bow more than a sword, but this is good enough for being in the Saber class. I have enough information of the layout of the city to be able to pick the places where my battles would be in my favor."

He then pointed towards the direction of Hanamura High School, Sakura's school, and the park where the famed Fuyuki Fire once raged. "Those two spots would work perfectly for me in close combat."

"That bridge," he continued as he pointed to the red steel bridge over the Fuyuki River with Sakura's attention completely on him. "Would be an ideal location for me to fight if I had been summoned into the Archer class, it provides no cover for an enemy and has an eagle's nest providing three-hundred and sixty degrees of view that would be ideal for an Archer, so we'll most likely have to avoid it since the servant of the bow will most likely think the same."

Sakura nodded as she listened to the nameless hero explain battlefield options to her, knowing that it was better to listen quietly to someone who had been fighting for the majority of their lives instead of interrupting like a rank amateur.

"Hmm, that's interesting…" A voice said from directly behind them, making the master and servant tense in shock at somebody sneaking up on them. "I'll have to remember that when I'm fighting you or Archer, nee Saber-kun?"

Earlier in the Day

Rider, a man who had been known as Naruto Uzumaki-Namikaze, the savior of the world, in his lifetime, was honestly confused as he watched his new master interact with her classmates from his astral form without her knowing since she believed that he was out scouting. The blond was surprised that anybody had been able to summon him for a Grail War considering his legend had been lost to the ravages of time by what he had found out to be a great flood that had supposedly wiped all traces of human life off the earth with the exception of an old man and his family from his curiosity leading him to read dozens of history books with his shadow clones while his master slept.

Then there was also the fact that he was utterly surprised that there was even an artifact left in the world that was tied to his legend directly and what surprised him even more was the object that currently held the place of a catalyst for his existence.

The necklace of the Shodaime Hokage, the necklace he had been given by the Godaime Hokage, Tsunade Senju, after winning a bet against the buxom woman.

The very same necklace he had given to his wife as an engagement ring after the Fourth War had ended with the defeat of Kaguya and Madara.

The necklace of course as he could see, had defiantly seen its fair share of wear and tear since it was apparent that the rope that had once held it to his and his wife's necks was long gone and had been replaced quite often in its course of life. However the gem itself appeared to be untouched by time, something that astonished even the great hero.

Then there was the girl that was his master; from what he could tell, she was at the late stages of her teenage years though she was shorter than the girls from his time had been, in height and a bit in the chest area. He had found that despite being many eons older than her and the fact that they were in a master/servant relationship, that he enjoyed watching her as she walked around school with her fake persona of being the perfect school idol, and there was the fact that he enjoyed all of the tsundere expressions she made when she thought she had let something show or when she was around the Emiya boy.

The eon old spirit felt a sense of satisfaction at the prospect of the teasing he could unleash on her as he observed a light dusting of red dash its way across his new Master's face when she caught sight of what he guessed to be her crush; a young boy with maroon colored hair like his friend Gaara once had and a pair of golden eyes, that was fixing what appeared to be an A/C unit that he had read about in one of the books for a glasses wearing boy that clearly held a dislike for his master and for some reason kept glancing over in his direction as if he could sense the heroic spirit or something.

Once Rin had her blush under control after she had left the boys' hallway, the Rider spirit decided that it was time to make good on his word to explore the city and make a map of the layout in his head.

Naruto took in a deep breath through his nose as soon as he took up a post atop the tallest building in the city, something he had heard about from the Grail that was called a skyscraper; his haori, hair and headband's ends were blowing in the strong wind that occupied the sky. He had decided to take to the high-ground to see if he could feel out any enemy servants that might be sprawled across the city. It had been a long time since he had been alive enough to access this certain ability and since he was in a city that had only small patches of nature still around, it took him slightly longer than he would have felt comfortable with, but after a couple moments or so, Rider began to feel the familiar sensation of nature's power flowing into him; enabling the ancient hero to once again slip into Sage Mode.

As he opened his now mascara covered, toad bar eyes, he could feel every living thing that was occupying the city and in the area around it. He was surprised at the feeling of hundreds of thousands of people occupying the city; especially considering that it was a much, much bigger number than what had occupied one of the hidden villages and it was hard to feel all of them at once as well as all of the wildlife and pets and plants. However as he breathed in calmly to center himself in the vortex, he was also able to sense a few Prana signatures that were outrageous compared to the many others he was feeling. He zeroed in on those to try and pinpoint whether or not there was anything happening.

All he could feel at the moment was the signatures sitting in random spots, doing nothing except for a wild signature he could feel that seemed to be scouting its immediate area, sort of like what he was doing and a two signatures moving about the city in a calm manner.

Turning back to where he had left his master in her school, he moved to leap off of the tower, only for him to feel the two signatures from before coming to his current post and he hid his Prana signature with his Sage Mode and henge'd into a tile just in time for him to see a red coat wearing figure carrying a young purple haired girl onto the skyscraper and be hidden from them.

Watching them from his position, the Rokudaime was impressed by the skill shown by the white haired man as he pointed out places a long distance from where they currently were that would be optimal for him to fight, though at the same time making the Uzumaki snicker at the fact that he wasn't pleased to be his current class of Saber as he kept mentioning what he would rather be doing with a bow.

So when he finally released the henge and came up to a few feet behind them, he decided to give them a good scare before he ran off to rejoin his master. After all, no good warrior would ever let their guards down, especially since there is supposed to be a war going on.

"Hmm, that's interesting…" Rider said from directly behind them, making the master and servant pair tense in shock at somebody sneaking up on them. "I'll have to remember that when I'm fighting you or Archer, nee Saber-kun?"

He kept his snicker from escaping when the Saber class servant whipped around with two swords coming into existence in his hands to guard his master. "Who the hell are you!?"

"Me?" Rider asked as he pointed at himself before feigning a worried look to his right and left. "I'm just an observer of the beautiful world brought to life by the Power of Youth until you two came along and interrupted my time alone."

Saber wasn't amused.

If that snarl was any indication about how the man felt, or when he angled his body to where he appeared in front of the man that had snuck up on him and his master. The man that was clearly a servant to be able to do so.

Naruto's smile remained on his face even as the twin blades sliced through his torso, only for his body to go up in a burst of smoke that startled the silver haired man and his master.

"Sorry Saber-kun," Rider's voice said from behind Sakura, making the red clad swordsman pale in utter fear as he turned to see a terrified Sakura with his opponent's arms hugging her loosely around her neck, just above her breasts, while leaning her back against his naked torso. "But I can't fight you just yet; my master only wanted me to patrol for now, especially since Lancer and Assassin have yet to be summoned."

He then let go of Sakura and backed up to the edge of the skyscraper that overlooked an alleyway. "I would love to stay and talk some more, perhaps we can even become good friends. So this is goodbye until then! Ta-ta!" The golden haired man then proceeded to leap off the roof of the skyscraper in a free fall dive, scaring many of the civilians that could see him and startling Sakura as she watched from behind her servant's back.

However instead of going splat like many believed, and Saber hoped as he and his master watched the falling man, he would via falling from that height, Rider smirked as he landed in a randomly placed hay cart that looked completely out of place in modern society, before he leapt out of it and began walking in the direction of his master.

Behind him once the civilians had given up watching him and moved away, the hay cart went up in a burst of smoke, leaving the spot it once occupied empty.

Saber sighed as he pinched the bridge of his nose between his thumb and pointer finger at the thought of fighting another person with Cu Chulainn's cheerful attitude. Turning back to his master, he decided to get the girl back to their safe house that they had to make due with via Shirou Emiya's hospitality since Saber had destroyed the Makiri Mansion.

Hello everyone, here is the revised idea of my Rider of Tohsaka experimental fic. As many of you have seen, I have changed some things up by making the chapter longer and switching up my original plan for servants and how Naruto in particular looked and his title was changed from Nanadaime to Rokudaime.

In this chapter, you will notice that I mentioned killing Shinji and Zouken via Archer Shirou. I decided that instead of subjecting Sakura to even more shit from her rapist of a step-brother and pedophilic, worm infested vampire of a grandfather, which I would have the future form of Shirou kill them after being summoned by Sakura before Shinji can take control through the Book of the False Attendant. Now here is the line-up for the Servants and their Masters for the Fifth Holy Grail war:

Sakura Matou

Saber Shirou Emiya, the Counter Guardian

Revealed Later

Archer will be revealed later on in the story to keep the suspense.

Shirou Emiya

Lancer Arturia Pendragon, King of Knights

Rin Tohsaka

Rider Naruto Uzumaki-Namikaze, the Golden Fox

Bazett Fraga McRemittz

Caster Cu Chulainn, Ireland's Child of Light

Illyasviel Von Einzbern

Berserker Herakles, Greatest Hero of Greece

Revealed Later

Assassin will be revealed later on in the story to keep the suspense.

As you know, the story is basically, Naruto gets summoned instead of the Epic Hero EMIYA as Rin's servant and all that. In here I decided to use the class I see Naruto the most as, because seriously while I understand in other stories, him being Berserker due to his rampages as Kyuubi Jinchuuriki and Assassin for being a shinobi; I have never found a story where he is Rider besides my own, I mean while ya'll don't like to think about it, he does ride the Toads of Mt. Myoboku and the Kyuubi's tailed states into most of his major battles. Like with the Kyuubi states, he wore the Berserk Five through Eight tails when he fought Pein, her wore the completed cloak while fighting Madara and Kaguya, while he wore the Four tailed cloak against Orochimaru and his massive clash against Sasuke at the ending of Shipudden. For the Toads, he road Gamabunta in his battle with Gaara during the Chunin Exam Invasion and he rode Gamabunta and several other large toads in the beginning of his battle with Pein.

If you want an idea of what Lancer Arturia looks like if you've never heard of her or haven't seen her yet, you can look her up on Type-Moon Wiki under Lancer Artoria, I am using the light version, not the Alter version. Also for the Caster version of Cu Chulainn, just use google.

The pairing for now is Naruto x Rin and Saber; Archer Shirou (Saber class) x Sakura.

That is all for now, I hope you enjoyed reading. Please Review as I always ask.

Iskander Mandoraekon signing off, Ja Ne.