Hello. Welcome to the second chapter of Loud Of Steel.
I'll answer the reviews.
Gojirafan1954: Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
fanfictionmakermachine: No worries. I assure you that this won't be a scene by scene of Man Of Steel. There will be some scenes, mainly during the fights, but this story will be different.
Lets get to the story
Millions of lightyears away from where krypton once stood, A portal appeared. Kal-El's ship emerged from the portal as it continued racing towards its destination. The ship zoomed past the moon, and then finally arrived on earth. The ship entered the atmosphere and streaked across the skies.
Kal-El had arrived at his new home.
Meanwhile at a campground in Michigan, a family of seven was there on a camping trip. This was the Loud Family. It consisted of the Father, Lynn Loud Sr., the mother, Rita Loud, And their five daughters. From oldest to youngest, their names were Lori Loud, age 6, Leni Loud, age 5, Luna Loud, age 4, Luan Loud, age 3, and finally Lynn Loud Jr., age 2.
Lynn Loud Sr. had brown hair, a long nose, he wore a green sweater, and brown pants.
Rita Loud had blonde hair, she wore a pink shirt, and brown pants.
Lori Loud had blonde hair, she wore a light blue shirt, and beige shorts.
Leni Loud had blonde hair that was a lighter shade than Lori's. She wore a green shirt, and black pants.
Luna Loud had brown hair, she wore a purple shirt that had a moon on it, and she wore a purple dress.
Luan Loud had brown hair that was a lighter shade than Luna's, and it was styled in pigtails. She mainly wore a yellow dress.
Lynn Loud Jr., had brown hair, she mainly wore a red shirt, and a diaper.
The Loud parents felt their kids could use this trip to pick them up a little after what had recently happened.
Month's ago Rita found out she was pregnant. Yes a sixth Loud kid was on the way. A few months later they had a gender reveal. They cut a cake and they saw that the frosting inside was blue. It was a boy.
The Loud's were over the moon learning that the first loud boy was coming. The parents would be able to raise a son. The sister's were excited to be big sister's to their upcoming brother. Yes, the entire family was looking forward to welcoming the first boy into the family.
But then, tragedy struck.
Rita had sadly suffered a miscarriage. The family was absolutely devastated. The parents hearts were absolutely crushed, but when they were around their daughter's they would be strong. All the Loud sisters couldn't stop crying. They had all been looking forward to finally having a brother, but he had been taken away before he was born.
It had been two weeks since that fateful day. Now they were on a camping trip. The parents wanted the girls to have a "pick me up" after the tragedy that occurred.
Lori looked over and saw Luna just looking at the sky. So she walked over.
"Hey Luna" Lori greeted. "What are you doing"?
"Trying to see if I can see our brother" Luna answered.
Lori put her arm around her younger sister, and Luna started to cry. Lori then hugged her.
"It's not fair" Luna wailed. "He didn't even get a chance to live".
Lori also had tears streaming down her cheeks.
"I know, I know" she soothed as best she could. But it was hard when she was crying too.
After a few minutes both stopped crying. Luna looked back up into the sky. She then noticed something strange in the sky.
"What is that?" she asked. "A shooting star"?
Lori looked up and saw what she was referring to.
"I don't know" she answered.
"I think it is" Luna responded. Then an idea came to mind.
"I wish we could finally have a baby brother" Luna wished.
Lori then noticed that the 'star' seemed to be getting closer.
The rest of the family joined the two and watched the 'star'.
"I don't think that's a star" Rita said.
She then grabbed a pair of binoculars and saw that she was right. It wasn't a star at all.
It was a spaceship.
"It looks like a spaceship" Rita observed. "And it looks like it's COMING STRAIGHT AT US"!!!!!
The family immediately ran out of the way. The spaceship then crash-landed, digging a trail in its path. It finally came to a stop.
The Louds cautiously approached. They weren't sure what to expect. Then they saw the front of the ship open.
"Go see what it is, Daddy" Lori said.
All the girls, except Lynn who was in Rita's arms, pushed their father toward the ship.
"Girls, no pushing" He said.
Lynn Sr. cautiously approached the ship. He was trembling a lot. Finally he made it to the front of the ship, and what he saw shocked him.
"Uhh honey, girls" he addressed. "You all might want to see this".
The rest of the family walked over. When they got to the front of the ship, and saw what was inside. They were all just as shocked as the patriarch of the family.
Inside was a baby boy with white hair.
The Loud's didn't know what to say.
"Who would put a baby in a spaceship" Lori asked, breaking the silence.
"I don't know Lori" Rita answered.
The baby looked at them and giggled. He then raised his arms toward them. Luna was immediately captivated by his cuteness.
"He's so cute" Luna cooed as she picked up the baby and cradled him.
Once the others got over the initial shock. They were all captivated by his cuteness as well.
He seemed like a very happy baby with the way he was giggling.
"Does he have a family?" Lynn sr. asked his wife.
Rita was looking in the ship to see if she could find any hints as to who his family is, or at least a note. She didn't find any.
"It doesn't look like it" the matriarch answered.
Lori then held her arms out toward Luna so she could hold the baby now. Luna then gave him to Lori.
The white haired infant looked at Lori smiling. Then he giggled. Lori was really captivated now.
"Hi little guy" she greeted.
Luna then had a great idea.
"Can he be our brother?" she asked her parents. "Pleeeeeeaaaaaasssssseeeee?" she added giving them the puppy dog eyes
The rest of the girls joined her in begging and giving their parents the puppy dog eyes.
The parents had to admit, they took a liking to the baby too.
"Okay" they responded.
The girls all cheered loudly, ant the white haired infant giggled.
"He needs a name" Luan noted.
The rest of the family realized this, and they all started thinking about names for him.
Finally one name came to Lori's mind.
"How about, Lincoln?" she suggested.
The baby immediately giggled and clapped.
"He likes it" Lori said.
The others liked the name as well.
"Alright then" Rita said. "His name is Lincoln, Lincoln Loud.
The baby, now named Lincoln, giggled. Lori looked down at him in her arms.
"Welcome to the Loud Family Lincoln" Lori said.
Lincoln continued to giggle and coo happily. The parents decided it was best to go home now. The parents got all the kids in the van, which was named Vanzilla, tied the ship to the roof, and made their way home. Of course they avoided any major roads so no one would get suspicious.
Inside vanzilla, the Loud girls were all interacting with Lincoln. For the first time in two weeks the girls all felt happy again. In fact this is the happiest they have ever been.
They finally had a baby brother.
And that does it for the second chapter. I hope you all liked it. Leave a review and tell me what you think.