Broken Things

by The Vulture Queen

Three teens are saddled together to catch pokemon for profit. A story about mental illness, colonialism, and growing up in a collapsing world. Cover art by Sparkling Espeon.

75. Edits Summary

Hello,

I know I promised an update in the spring. That did not happen. The reason? I was busy editing the old chapters. I've finished uploading the changes to AO3, Space Battles, and Thousand Roads. There is no need to reread the story. The following are the most significant changes.

2.3: I changed the capture mission from elekid to dedenne.

3.1: I changed Arc 3 from Flying to Fighting and added a new epigraph.

3.11: I altered the interactions between Kekoa and the florges. You should probably reread this one.

5.5: I deleted the old Kekoa chapter here as it didn't feel necessary. I moved the Genesis chapter up and cut the arcade scene and Lyra's departure.

5.6: All new Lyra POV chapter that changes her trajectory. Read this one.

5.9: Reflects the changes in 5.6.

5.10: Changed the early battle a bit. Decided the story was more interested if Pixie was too badly injured to battle for the foreseeable future.

Work on Arc 6 is ongoing and it should begin next week.