Thank you for the review, it motivates me when I see someone reviewing this because it means someone is still reading it. That said, I was surprised that the review came from the latest chapter. While here I am, still struggling to read from the first chapter and kept having a lot of urge to rewrite it because I can. I definitely better as a reader than writer, because as a reader I don't have the power to change the story, no matter how much I wanted it to.
In the newest review, I saw that many don't like the MC and hope touhou character take charge. Well you're in luck because most of the arc I planned will start with Touhou and end with MC handling the aftermath. Of course, the MC will kept relevant (I'll try my best).
Urgh... I really want to refute a part of Indecision review, but I don't want to spoil the story. So I'm just gonna refute the biggest one.
The MC is very obsessed with Isekai story so he wanted to reenact that, and no he will not rampage with touhou character except rumia and that too for a little prank. He won't rampage because he wanted to show to the world that he can transform into some OP character and they should worship him. So he will try to avoid ruining his reputation (of course, the doll part is just my lazy writing that I want to fix and wanting to teleport out of the arena, rather than revel in glory as he would do).
Now there are some mistakes that I will admit.
Why MC not using spell card and attacking the monster meele as rumia ?
Well ... because I forgot, yeah he definitely could do that. In the next rewrite I will try to make an excuse that after seeing how ineffective the danmaku was (only paralyze and how quick their recovering) when he fighting the bandit and he choose to use meele.
But that only an excuse, so yeah that an honest mistake from me. I guess I have the same problem as MC, I do can use my strength but I kept forget about using it. Yeah, I'll try to fix that too.
As for the end note, should I create a new story for the rewritten chapter? I think I definitely should, that way maybe I could avoid creating the same mistake over and over again and confusing new people when reading this. SO unless some of you told me not to, I think I will do that.
Why I did this? Like I said in the latest chapter (The chapter before this), for now, I have low motivation to write, I probably going to rewrite this until I had motivation to write a new chapter. (My existensial crisis was another reason too, but I will overcome it ... I hope.)
Will I make the rewritten story better than this? No, I can confidently said that. but maybe...no, there is no way I can do that. It probably the same story with a subtly change and that's it.
So in advance I'm sorry, and thank you for the review no matter how harsh or kind it is, any review will motivate me to write more and it helps with distracting the voice coming from my head(Just Kidding, please don't take it seriously).
pst... anyone know, where I could throw and talked about depression? I don't want to do this here, Since I had the same paranoia too much as the MC. My paranoia said that I will make someone depressed too, or even worse I will make my future me read it and get depressed. For now, I think I just want to randomly throw it away, somewhere, anywhere without thinking someone will help, the more depressive the environment the better. That way, I don't have to think much about making thing worse.
The last paragraph is me just being a little crazy, please ignore him. Though it did help clear my head, but it is not solving the problem. Still I admit, with clear head, maybe I can react differently on the problem that I had.
Thats all, byeeeeee.