Hey there,
It's been quite a while since I last opened the Fanfic app. I've noticed that there have been numerous negative reviews about my story, and I don't blame any of the reviewers. I'm well aware that the story I've created has its fair share of mistakes and even some plot holes. However, I'd like to explain a few points raised in these reviews.
Review from Harrison-Sytherin-Black:
1. Mc is Childish
You're absolutely right. In the first chapter, I intentionally portrayed the main character as childish. But if you've read the latest chapters, you'll see that he has grown and matured than before
2. It doesn't make any sense regarding his power-up.
I understand your concern, but even in the original DxD series, the author doesn't focus on the specifics of power-ups. Issei's power boost is often tied to unusual situations like touching boobs. We haven't explored that part in my story yet, but it will be done.
3. Give him personal growth.
Your feedback is appreciated, and it has given me the motivation to work on the character's personal growth. I'll make an effort to improve that point.
Next is a review from Morgriff:
1. A 19-year-old boy working in a bookshop who hasn't talked to a single girl?
I see your point. It's a valid concern. To clarify, my character is not the cashier at the bookshop, which is why he hasn't had many interactions with girls. Thank you for pointing this out.
A review from a Guest about Riser's defeat:
I appreciate your feedback, and I will dedicate a whole paragraph to explain how Issei will defeat Riser in my story, emphasizing the use of magic over science.
Another Guest's comment about Motohama and Matsuda:
I acknowledge that these two characters may seem strange, but the original novel confirms that they are Issei Hyoudou's first two best friends. I cannot ignore this fact.
Review from AlexGod:
1. The boy doesn't know about Issei's name, but he knows about the DxD storyline... huh?
I understand the confusion. "Issei" is a common name in Japan, and the information about his reincarnation into the DxD universe hasn't been disclosed in my story.
Guest Review:
1. Please consider running the story through Grammarly or another grammar-checking tool, as there are numerous sentence errors.
I'm contemplating using ChatGPT or another AI for grammar and sentence structure improvements. What are your thoughts on this?
Review from anthonylew2014:
1. The description lied about MC becoming OP.
The story has just begun, and Issei has already demonstrated his strength by confronting a cadre-level fallen angel. This signifies that he is already above the middle class. This pace is deliberate to gradually develop his OP status. Thank you for your understanding.
Review from Guest:
1. Don't write the complete Riser arc, just focus on the important parts.
I appreciate your input, and I will consider condensing the Riser arc to focus on the crucial aspects only.
That's all for now. I apologize for not being able to respond to each of you individually. I'm still figuring out how to interact within this fanfic platform. In the initial chapters of my story, I sent messages to readers, but only a few replied, so I'm unsure if it's a good approach. I will be uploading a new chapter in a day. Please look forward to it...
Prepare to meet Issei's future queen in the upcoming chapters!