So, thanks again to my very good friend "Marvelomac1010" for the client, well the target mostly and how this dude dies, and then we have something else... Lincoln and the others, preparing to deliver their own revenge onto that damned bastard sinner snake for what he did to Lori Loud. This is going to be super painful and they don't intend to kill him, yet. Enjoy reading this new chapter folks!

Helluva Loud Adventures.
"Acidic Showers, and the Serpent Sinner."

(November 17. Nevada.)

We now go to a local college located here, and right now... Someone is walking into the showers and that said person is named, Samuel Evans and the dude smiles at what he had done earlier. "I am damn awesome, no way to fucking hell is anyone still gonna suspect what I did to that bitch."

The college student continues to use the showers and he enjoys the feeling of the water touching his naked body, but then the water from the shower stops flowing. "What the heck?" He then tries to turn it on and then off, but it doesn't seem to be working. "Are you kidding me? I need to shower!"

The man then tries to get the shower working, and he twists and twists the faucet but nothing happens, and now he's' annoyed and feeling irritated and impatient and then he keeps twisting and twisting, and then he hears something is flowing. "Yes, finally! Dumb fucking thing... Now, shower me with..."

But the water is not water, and instead he is hit by a very volatile kind of acid, and the man screams in pain as the acid is on his face, head and dripping from his body and thus causing intense pain and burning his skin. The man screams and runs around the bathroom, looking for some help.

But then door is blocked by Lincoln. "Hey, fucker." He then kicks the man away and he lands back into the shower and the rest of the acid flowing hits his body as he lies down and Samuel struggles on the ground as his whole body is being burnt and torn apart by the acid hitting him.

Blitzo is in the room and he records this and he has the soul orb and he snickers. "This shit is too good, also you kids don't have to be here anymore. I can handle this shit with Moxxie and Millie. You guys have somewhere else to..." They hear the man still screamin.

Blitzo then stomps on the man's cock and this makes him groan from pain, and yet more acid is all over him and it reaches the insides of his head. "Shut the fuck up, I am talking to my grandson here, fucker!" He then looks to Lincoln. "You and you're big sister go and handle the other thing, we got this."

Lincoln nods and he takes his leave, and he leaves Blitzo to prepare the soul orb and he continues to record the man being slowly killed by the acid showering him. "This was a good fucking plan to see where his house was Moxx. Ha! I can see his lungs."

Lincoln then sees Luna and she sighs and she hands the note to Millie who goes to her husband. Luna then looks to her brother. "A dang shame the client's lady is dead, raped by the asshole target dude after the client was sent to hell. Looks like he won't see her in hell, kinda sad huh bro?"

Lincoln nods. "Yeah, sure does suck. The client wanted to also know how she was doing, but this is gonna be upsetting to the client." He then has the amulet for the portal and Luna has the duffle bag with different melee weapons. They then open the portal and they step through.

They got some personal matters to manage.

(Somewhere in Pentagram City.)

We go to the hideout of Cherri Bomb and this is where she has been holding the sinner, the kingpin... Well, former Kingpin Sir Pentious and right now the portal opens and coming through is Lincoln and Luna, and they see at the main entrance are some other folks who are there for the same thing.

We see: Charlie, Vaggie, Carol, Dana, Becky, and Whitney. The group are there for one thing, and then Carol goes over and she hugs Luna and Lincoln, and they return the embrace and then she asks them. "So, you guys finished the whole killing job, so you two are ready for this thing?"

Lincoln and Luna show them their claws and knives and other weapons in the duffle bag. Lincoln then explains. "Now we know that Cherri Bomb has a shit ton of weapons and other stuff, but I think it would be fair for us to hurt that bastard with what we have. Also, where the heck is Leni?" He also notices something else. "Also, where the heck are Angle Dust, Dia and Summer?"

Charlie explains the first thing. "Angel Dust said that he's already done it last night, alongside Summer and Dia. So, we don't need them to be here, and it'll just be us involved to make..." She then calms down. "To make Sir Pentious suffer, for what he did to our little girl." She wipes away some tears and tries to keep a calm composure.

Vaggie then explains the other thing. "Right now, helping comfort Lori. The hotel maybe repaired, but it's just a hotel we can repair damages, and Niffty finished it in less than an hour, what is more important is Lori and she is still a mess after what she had to endure from the dumb fucking snake shit head."

Vaggie then calms down and she explains something else. "Also, Lori is going to be fine, which we hope and Leni helping her is the best option we have, but our option is to punish the fucker who raped her, and we are not letting that kingpin get away with it!"

"Former, kingpin." they spot Cherri Bomb and she snickers as she is now at the door. "Welcome to my domain, now come with me and we can all get the chance to fucking bring the hurt to that piece of shit sinner snake." They all follow Cherri Bomb into the building, and they see all the weapons she has.

They look at every gun and all sorts of ranged and melee weapons and this does impress the former students of the High School, and then they see something, well someone. "You!"

They all see hi, chained and dangling by his arms, is Sir Pentious and he is groaning in pain and Cherri Bomb goes over and she punches the asshole sinner. "This dumbfuck has been beaten by a pulp from me, and I have been loving making him an asshole, heck I shoved a steel pole in his ass too."

This makes Lincoln and Luna snicker, but Charlie and Vaggie don't care about this, but the other teens didn't quite like to hear that, while Velvet grins and she smirks at hearing that and then she looks to the others. "So, who here wants to go first and...?"

Charlie and Vaggie go forward, and Vaggie doesn't use her angelic weapons and so she has some silver knuckles and she begins to punch the face of Sir Pentious. "You fucking asshole! You thought you could've gotten away with what you did, huh?!" She then breaks the chains and the sinner drops.

Vaggie then punches Sir Pentious in the face and she doesn't stop. Charlie then goes over and she has he pitch fork and her eyes are now glowing and her hair is moving like it is alive or there could be wing here, but the windows are all closed and there is no wind. She then impales the arms of the sinner.

Sir Pentious can barely respond, since he is worn out and hurt bad. But then Charlie uses her pitch fork and she impales Sir Pentious in the stomach and she raises him up and she growls and hisses. "You will suffer and wish for death for the heinous and fucked up shit you did to my little girl, you monster."

She then tosses the sinner to where th others are, and Carol, Becky, Dana and Whitney are armed with baseball bats and they beat up the sinner and all of them are in rage at what this sinner did to their friend, Lori Magne. But then Carol has an idea and she grabs her golf club, since she has her things.

Carol then begins to whack at Sir Pentious, and he just grunts and groans and has some tears at the beat down he is getting from these really angry teenage girls, they are unleashing their sin of wrath and some of them are in tears and pissed off, they recall what they were told about Lori, and they didn't like it one bit!

Then they stop and Dana and Becky kick Sir Pentious away and he is rolled over to Lincoln and Luna, and the duo don't use the claws and weapons, they use their hellhound claws, but then Lincoln turns into his four-legged hellhound form and he growls.

Luna then stabs the sinner in the chest with her claws. "You're fucking tears won't be able to make us show mercy after what you did, you're going to suffer and then go through a tormenting pain, and we are the start of it all, bitch!" She the stomps on his head, and then she grabs Sir Pentious and she slams him back to the ground.

Luna then uses her claws and she rips off two of his tentacles and this makes Sir Pentious scream in pain, but then she grabs Sir Pentious by the right arm and she throws him towards Lincoln, and the hellhound formed kid is now biting hard onto the tentacles of Sir Pentious and he thrashes him around.

Lincoln then throws him onto the ground and toys with him as a dog does to destroy a chew toy, he keeps doing this and Sir Pentious just keeps bleeding and is in serious pain by this creature, but then Lincoln slams him down and sinks his teeth to the shoulder of the sinner.

He keeps him down and soon the others come over, and all of them begin to beat down the sinner once again, and all Sir Pentious can do is endure this suffering torment of so much pain and in the hands of Charlie, Vaggie, Lincoln, Luna, Carol, Dana, Becky and Whitney.

Deep down, Sir Pentious can now see. 'I shouldn't have... Shouldn't have taken... That offer from... Them.'

Cherri Bomb watches this go down and she snickers evilly, but then Velvet races by with a hammer and she joins in beating up the serpent sinner and Cherri Bomb chuckles. 'When this is over, the boss of hell wants him and that means my own plans can come to fucking fruit.'

(Later.)

After a major beat down towards Sir Pentious, we now see the group waiting outside the building, and some large armoured demonic warriors arrive and then Charlie steps aside and shows them the messed up, chained and scarred form of Sir Pentious, and he is traumatized.

The armoured demons nod and they grab the unresponsive form and they take off to bring Sir Pentious to Lucifer, so he can enact his punishment to the former kingpin after he raped his granddaughter. Lucifer finds this personal and Sir Pentious will suffer a lot for his actions!

They watch as this is gone and they all sigh in relief and Cherri Bomb smiles and she snickers. 'With that dumb fucker down, the rest of the cities territories will be mine. First, the damned headquarters of Sir Pentious.' She then sees some of the Egg Bois running off to save their boss.

This, makes the others confused and then Dana asks. "What the heck are they going to do?"

Luna chuckles. "Something dumb, that's for sure... Right bro?" But she gets no response from her brother. "Lincoln?" They then look to Lincoln and he is looking at nothing and Luna knows what this means. "Bro, what's the idea in your head?"

Lincoln then turns around and faces the others. "Tomorrow night as in tomorrow even if it a school night... We're gonna need Bobby Santiago to come and help with Lori, and I know what he should do to help her get over what she had to endure."

They all didn't know where this was going, but it did sounded like Lincoln knew what he was doing. Charlie and Vaggie can see that they can trust whatever it is Lincoln has planned, but knowing he mentioned Bobby, now that is something that feels way too obvious for them.

To be continued in the next chapter folks!

A/N: Target down! Thanks "Marvelomac1010" and as for Sir Pentious, well his eternity of suffering from Lucifer is soon to come, and next chapter is handling how Lori is doing and perhaps what Lincoln has planned might just work. Leave a review and tell me what you all think folks!

Date made: 9/18/21.