Hello everyone
i m back
thx to all reviewers from heart
akku dii i miss ur rvw on 1st chap
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A special thx to colak dii for helping me
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HERE IS UR CHAP
HOPE U LIKE
R AND R
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Abhijeet left to meet acp
Abhijeet : pita jii...
Acp : aao abhijeet m tumhara hi intjaar kar rha tha
Abhijeet : aaj aap police station nhi aye...sab thik to h na
Acp : haa sab thik h...chinta mat kro...
Abhijeet : good...waise m yha apse ek case ke silsile mein milne aya hu...
Acp while closing file : janta hu...ye lo file isme us gang se related sab information h...(abhijeet take the file)
Abhijeet : sab tayari ho chuki h...mujhe aaj hi nikalna hoga...plane ke according phle mujhe us gang mein shamil hona hoga taki m un logo ko bacha saku jo wha fase hue h...(with confidence) fir us daya ko to m sambhal hi lunga...
Acp : ha janta hu m abhijeet...par plz be careful
Abhijeet with shock : ye aap keh rhe h...
Acp with low voice : ha ye m keh rha hu...(with lost mind)kyoki is gang ne bhot kuch china h mujh se...
Abhijeet with questioning gaze : bhot kuch ?
Acp realize that what he said so while changing the topic : ha bhot kuch ...n jane kitne deshwasiyo ko maar dala inhone (while looking toward abhijeet) wo bhi to humare hi the na
Abhijeet not satisfied but he noded : or aab unki bari h
Acp : haa abhijeet...
(acp pov : dekh yaar aaj abhijeet teri or mere bete ki maut ka badla lene jaa rha h par pata nhi kyo mujhe ek ajeeb sa daar lag rha h)
After some time abhijeet left
A person : lo aagai tumhri manjil
2nd person : abhi to m raste pe hi pahucha hu...manjil to mission ki kamyabi ke baad milegi...
Person : nice abhijeet...
Abhijeet : thx...now u may left ...
Person : yaa...u ryt...(while turning the car) ok byee
Abhijeet : byeee (and the person left)
Abhijeet observing the place carefully...when a person keep his hand on his shoulder...
Abhijeet turn and saw a person who is hiding his face
Abhijeet : kaun ho tum
The person look here & there or then in stright tone : sher pinjre se nikal chuka h...
Abhijeet understand everything in a second and then in same tone : or aab tabhai hogi...
The man remove his mask and said : tum hi ho new member (abhijeet noded)
Person : chalo andar (and abhijeet start moving with them)
After some time he find himself in a under ground place
A another person come to him & said : andar aao boss ne bulaya h tumhe (abhijeet entered inside)
He saw a man with mask : kya tum sach mein ye gang join karna chahte ho...
Abhijeet : haaa...
Man : soch lo...
Abhijeet with confidence : sochte to vo h jo darte...jinke andar jigra hota h vo sochte nhi karte h
Man impressed by abhijeet's attitude
Man with proud : bhot achee...hume tumhara andaz pasand aya
Abhijeet : or kaam bhi pasand aaega
Man : hmmm...(to a goon : jao ise daya se milwa do) goon noded and left...
at the tarrace of a tall building
A person siting with gun in his hand(when he listen : bhai )
The person speak without any turn : haa bol raga...
Raga : bhai ...ye new member h humari gang ke
The person turn and saw a dashing man ...who rember his face
Person : hmmm...naam kya h tumhara...
2nd person : jeet...
Person : acha h...haar mujhe manjoor nhi
2nd person reply in same tone : acha h...haar ne walo ka is gang mein koi kaam nhi...waise tumhara naam sayad daya h
Daya : haa
(when daya's phone range) after attend the call
daya in serious tone : aab tum jao jeet...kuch kaam h mujhe
Jeet : m bhi to yha kaam karne hi aya hu na...
Daya : abhi new ho tum...expirence nhi h tumhe
Jeet : kaam karuga to ho jaega...warna to m hamesha hi naya rhuga
Daya want to deny but abhijeet make him to allow
Daya : thik h ...chalo (while giving him gun)
Daya...abhijeet ...raga ...and some other goon sit in car and left
they have a dangerous fight with police
and the result is same 'tiger gang ' win
bt in fight abhijeet get injured (his right hand is injured with knife)
after fight they all back at there place
Raga : bhai...ek baat puchu
Daya : haa bol raga
Raga: aap kya soch rhe ho...
Daya : mujhe kuch gadbad lag rhi h...
Raga ask : gadbad...
Daya : haa raga gadbad...(while thinking something) mujhe pata karna hoga...
After 2 minutes silence daya ask : raga...wo jeet kha h ?
Raga : bhai ... Pata nhi sayad niche ho..
Daya get up and said : thik h ...tum jao ab
Raga left...and within 2-3 minute daya also left
In a room a person enterd with first aid and call some one as : jeet...
Jeet saw him & get up with : daya tum...tum yha kyo aaie agar koi kaam tha to mujhe bula lete m aa jata ...
Daya : ho gaya ... (his voice & face expression is totaly changed which is surprising for jeet)
Jeet saw something in daya's hand : ye tumhare hath mein kya h...
Daya : ye vo chiz h jiski tumhe sakt jarurt h...first aid...
jeet amazingly : first aid ki jururt or mujhe !
Daya : haa tumhe...tumhare hath ko...us bechare ko chaku laga h...
Jeet smile on it (abhijeet try to deny for first aid bt faild)
Daya seriously : muskurana band kro...or apna hath yha lao
Abhijeet : kaat ke laau
Daya in teasing tone : nhi ukhad ke lao
Abhijeet smile and take his slevees upward
Daya saw the wound which is tightly tied with hankey...daya remove the hankey...
Daya : bataya kyo nhi kisiko...ghav bhad jata to...
jeet dnt answer
Daya continue his process when abhijeet feel pain and a small 'aah' come out from his mouth with jerk
Daya immedtly remove the cotton with : bas 2 min...fir nhi jalega...(and he again keep the cotton and start rubbing it on his wound & then puluster the wound carefuly)
Daya get up & said : isliea m mana kar rha tha...phle hi din chot lag gai na...
jeet realy shocked by daya's behaviour
Daya : kya hua jeet ...kis soch mein dub gae
Jeet : mujhe nhi pata tha ki ek khatarnak gunda itna care bhi kar sakta h...
Daya : khatrnak m dusro ke liye hu...apno ke liea nhi...
Jeet : hmmm...i see
Daya ask : khana kha liea tumne ?
Jeet : haa...
Daya : good...waise tum boss se mile
Jeet : nhi...bas ekbar jb aya tha yha
Daya : to aaiso kro jakr milo unse or unhe humari victory ki ki khabar do...(with naughty smile : wo impress ho jaege)
Jeet smile & said : thik h jata hu m (he get up & left
On the way
Abhijeet is thinking about daya's behaviour
abhijeet in his mind : lagta hi nhi h ki daya itna khatarnak gaogster h...(at a time he get disturb with a low voice)
He listen a voice as : dimak kharb h tera...agar daya ko pata chal jata to janta h kitni badi musibat aan padti hum par...or us daya se phle vo boss hume maar dalta...
Another voice : maaf krdo bhai...dubara koi galti nhi hogi...daya ko kabhi shak nhi hoga...
Voice 1 : thik h aab chal yha se
Abhijeet left from there
Abhijeet in his mind : ye log kya chupa rhe h daya se...aisa kya h jo daya ko nhi pata chalne de rhe h ye log...or vo boss bhi...
He speak with deternination : mujhe pata karna hi hoga
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the end
To kaisa lga chap
hope pasand aya hoga
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plz rvw frnds _/\_
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and tell me ki kon next chap m intrested h
ek sawal or tha - koi bore to nhi ho rha h na...
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TO SOCHO
KI DAYA KO KYA GADBAD LAG RHI H KYA DAYA KO ABHIJEET PAR SHAK HO GYA H...
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KYA H VO BAAT JO DAYA SE CHUPAI JA RHI H (Kya sirf ye ki vo kon h ya kuch or)
OR KAISE PATA KREGA ABHIJEET KI DAYA SE KYA CHUPAYA JA Rha
H...OR KYA VO HAKIKAT TAK PAHUCH PAEGA
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for take answer plz rvw
give rvw take chap
minimum 27 rvws
nxt after 27 rvws