Very Different Sort of Men

by CaroCollins

Mr. Darcy and Mr. Wickham are not only different from each other but each one has many of the other's canon character traits. It has a sympathetic Wickham and an unsympathetic Darcy character. It is an exploration of how each character would behave in the other's place. There's a spoiler already in the comments. You may wish to avoid reading them. Quotes can be skipped.

24. Natural Pride - 24

Based on comments on this chapter I am continuing this storyline. I don't want to delete this chapter because I fear I might lose the comments. So below is the original note they are responding to and the next chapter is Chapter 24 - now a complete first draft.

I wonder if exploring this meeting in London where our villains are punished and more questions answered like how she pulled off the switch just stretches it out unnecessarily. I think that would add another two or three chapters. I could instead wrap everything up with a few summary paragraphs. With a second ending still left to read is shorter preferable? Im stuck and I need feedback. I am currently working on the second story line.

I want to add in some Helene and Chef Josef interactions (a sentence or two added in 2 or 3 chapters) BUT it is already too long! I need to trim the chapters after 15.