Based on comments on this chapter I am continuing this storyline. I don't want to delete this chapter because I fear I might lose the comments. So below is the original note they are responding to and the next chapter is Chapter 24 - now a complete first draft.
I wonder if exploring this meeting in London where our villains are punished and more questions answered like how she pulled off the switch just stretches it out unnecessarily. I think that would add another two or three chapters. I could instead wrap everything up with a few summary paragraphs. With a second ending still left to read is shorter preferable? Im stuck and I need feedback. I am currently working on the second story line.
New notes
I want to add in some Helene and Chef Josef interactions (a sentence or two added in 2 or 3 chapters) BUT it is already too long! I need to trim the chapters after 15.
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