Well Makoto got out leagally but what if he found a way to escape more...sneaky like?

Disclamer: I own nothing in this


Makoto Naegi: Escaping the Prison Chapter 2

Route: Sneaky Escapist

Nicole was happy with that but there was something more to her, she was connected to a vast multiverse interface. It told her there were two more ways Makoto could have escaped

So she can see parallel universes so she wanted to see how else Makoto would have gotten out and connected with one and watches

Makoto reaches into the cake to make his selection


Teleporter

Makoto picks out the teleporter and was a little concerned, he didn't want to end up embedded in a wall again

"Don't worry you know how it works now" Nicole reassured Makoto

"Alright...here goes nothing" Makoto said taking a deep breath and presses some of the green buttons and hits the red one and teleports

He appears outside the prison but hears a voice "Ready..." Makoto opens his eyes and finds himself standing on a firing range, in front of the targets and the one talking Captain Lin Beifong was monitoring Will Furno's marksmanship test "Fire!" She ordered

Will did and unfortunately none of them noticed Makoto till it was too late and reacted in shock when Makoto was hit

Nicole sighs and said "You just can't seem to get the hang of that thing can you?" she reserts it all


File

"Oh a file, a bit old school but it is known to work" Makoto said with a smile and looks around the only places he can see to use it is the cell door and the barred window

File on Window

Makoto figured he can just crawl out the window to freedom with no one suspecting a thing.

"It is easier then moving to avoid the cops" Makoto admitted. He files off the middle of the three bars and crawls out.

Unfortunately he was on one of the higher floors of the building and falls down screaming

Nicole shakes her head "Protip: Look before you leap" She resets it all

File on Cell Door

"Well, if I am careful and quiet I won't have the whole station after me" Makoto said and files the lone bar of the door. That has a space big enough to squeeze through.

Quicktime Event

He got it off and exits holding the bar however it wasn't unnoticed as Scout hearing it turns and sees Makoto out of his cell "Hey! Back in your cell!" He draws his trademark bat and charges at Makoto.

Do Nothing

Makoto stunned a bit at the sudden surprise fails to act in time and Scout hits him down to the ground with the bat saying "Bonk!" as he did

Nicole shakes her head and said "You've got the reflexes of a statue...Hint: You can defend yourself by using the bar" she resets it to during the combat

[Arthur Note: I changed the fail quote to match the fact it is a story]

Take out Scout

The point restarted with Scout running at Makoto but Makoto was ready this time he swing his pole and knocks Scout down and out "And that is for that awful joke" Makoto said relieved

However suddenly Makoto hears footsteps behind him. It was Gumshoe who came up behind Makoto with a tazer and zaps Makoto shocking him into submission "Good thing I carried this with me or I would have been fired for sure if you were successful" Gumshoe said with chuckle

"Oh yeah, forgot to tell you! There is another guard coming!" Nicole said sheepishly and restarts it again

Take out both Scout and Gumshoe

The point restarted with Scout running at Makoto but Makoto was ready this time he swing his pole and knocks Scout down and out "And that is for that awful joke" Makoto said relieved.

However suddenly Makoto hears footsteps behind him. It was Gumshoe who came up behind Makoto with a tazer but before Gumshoe could zap Makoto, the boy swings the pole up do the end facing behind himself hits Gumshoe in the head

The detective was knocked down and the lit tazer zaps him into unconsciousness

"Woah...I didn't know I could do that" Makoto said seeing the two injured and unconscious cops and drops the pole.

"Now isn't the time to reflect" Nicole told him

"You're right, have to get out of here before…." Makoto said and then heard the lift at the end of the hall

The doors open and two more cops arrived Officers Da Samurai and Logan the former saying "Yo that is tight Wolverine" smiling at Logan

"Don't call me that here you idi..." Logan said and spots Makoto and the two unconsciousofficers "Hey! He's escaping!"

Makoto legged into a nearby room closing the door. He looked around to see it was a dark room with no way out other then a vent "Oh man I am trapped!"

"Calm down there are some things in here" Nicole said and shows him there wan an entire belt of grenades and an old chair

"So few….well it is better then nothing" Makoto said and thinks on which to choose


Belt of Grenade

Makoto decided to use the grenades, it would work well to at least knocking the two cops outside out. "Alright...here we go" Makoto said leaving the belt on the floor near the door holding one, he pulls the pin and quickly opens the door and throws it

"Yo, check yourself! Grenade!" Da Samurai said shocked as the grenade bounces off the wall and back into the closet before Makoto closed the door failing to notice

Makoto had his eyes closed and ears covered but heard the beeping really close. He opens his eyes and sees the grenade he three there on top of the other grenades.

We see out side the room as Logan and Da Samurai look at the door and hear Makoto go "What the…?!" before there was an explosion heard inside

"Man, I knew we got some straight up weirdos in these cells but this one was kind of weird" Da Samurai said rubbing his head

"We should get the cleaning crew up here" Logan said sighing

Nicole confused simply said "Uh...I don't even know what to say to that one..." She reset everything


Chair

Makoto chose running is better to facing the two cops. He moves the old chair to under the vent and opens it and climbs in. He sees that he can go left or right

"Hopefully one of these ways leads to an exit" Makoto said thinking which way to go

Left Route

Makoto goes left and as he moves through the dark as he moves he hears voices. Below him Captain Bogo was holding a meeting with some other officers to go over some items

"Now, all in favour of more doughnuts in the break room, say aye" Bogo said to those at the meeting

"Aye" was said by every cop at this meeting

"Nay" was said by the Janitor Waluigi who was also there

Bogo glares daggers at Waluigi and said "Quiet Waluigi! You are a janitor and don't count to this vote!" Bogo has a big resentment to janitors ever since one many years ago threw out his lunch. He calms down and said "Now the next item on the agenda is..."

Before he could continue the pipe below Makoto he just crawled on gave way and he comes crashing down onto the table surrounded by the cops in this meeting

It took a while for them to realise who Makoto was and one yells "He's a prisoner! Get him!" and some drew the weapons and one cop jumps to dive onto Makoto

"Fatty..." Nicole said and whistles a bit before restarting the events

Right Route

Makoto crawls through the vent and found himself climbing up more then going down. He soon came across a loose piece of it "I so hope this isn't bad"

He manages to knocks the loose piece of vent off and see it go over the edge. He gets out and sees he is on the very roof of the prison

"You're kidding me! How am I going to get down now?!" Makoto said not wanting to risk the vent again.

"I locate some items we can use, look behind you" Nicole said

Makoto does and sees a large crate, why it was here he didn't know but opening it he finds A rope with a launcher, a backpack he assumes is a parachute, some plungers and a jetpack

"One of these can get me out of here" Makoto said and thinks


Jetpack

Makoto puts on the jetpack and said "I haven't use one of these but hopefully it is simple and easy" He then presses the button and the pack sputters and fails to start

Nicole sighs and said "Wow... That was the lamest thing I've ever seen. The author must have gotten REALLY lazy or something. I mean honestly that was probably the dumbest FAIL I've seen in this entire fanmake! So anyway, what do you think of the fanmake so far? Enjoying it? It's been quite a big work to honour one of the best flash series to come out. Unlike the original you can read this entire fail. Laaaaaameeeee!"

Sudden the Jetpack shoots to life "WOAH!" Makoto yells out. He goes flying all over the sky unable to control before flying right into a barred window and into the very cell he escaped from

A maintenance worker known only as The Janitor looks up and seeing him said "Oh look, who came back" he laughs a bit before serious said "You better not have messed with my stuff on the roof"

"It takes many years of jet pack training before you are able to operate one" Nicole said more satisfied with this and resets


Parachute

Makoto puts on the parachute and stands on the edge "Oh please let this work" He said nervous and takes one step off the roof and begins falling.

He then grabs the cord and pulls and only sees a bunch of items fly out including a bowling ball, "You're kidding me?!" Makoto said shocked, it wasn't a parachute, it was a backpack

He hits the ground very hurt but just still conscious but then the items from his pack land and the bowling ball hits him in the head knocking him out.

Nicole sighs "I think that was just a regular backpack. See what happens when you assume?" she then resets


Rope

Makoto sets up the rope device and aims it and fires it. It hits a target and is secure. "Good now...the hard part" he said concerned

He begins sliding down the rope with his bare hands and groans his pain as it starts hurting his hands "Ow. Ow. OW!" he yells out at the rope burn and room lets go and lands on the ground with a crash

"Ohhhh...that hurt" Makoto said getting up slightly dazed, he then checks himself other then being a bit scuffed up he was okay "Yes! Oh man that was a close one"

Suddenly an armoured van runs him over knocking him away. Nicole surprised said "This seems awfully familiar" She then resets


Plungers

Makoto hold them and tests the plungers they were very good at sticking to things. "Unconventional but they should work."

"Only one way to find out" Nicole said

Makoto begins going down the building slowly and carefully "Easy does it now" He soon reaches the point he could drop down, which he does "Phew….that was close but I am free now"

"Maybe but we should run before the cops come looking" Nicole said

"Right" Makoto said getting a bit excited due to this and begins running through the desert, how he will get back home quicker can wait till he is as far from the prison as possible

Still this was exciting he might stick to this being a professional thief business, least until something better comes along.

The End 2/3


Well another sucessful escape from Makoto, he made it out of prison but there is one more chapter before we're done with Escape from the Prison.

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