Stylesheet : Thank you for the advice , from the fics you recommended I know Lady Stark I admit is a good fic the others however are in same tune and one of them is Sandor centric , I don't know how you came to that conclusion but not all Stark Wanks are bad I know excellent ones like A Trip To The Crypts , in my Bio I said I`m a House Stark fan , I don't fill my free time with reading trash fics , and I don`t copy them or try to be like them , Thank you and I read other fics that are not Stark centric fics and I do wonna learn .
I`m new to posting stories so I ` have lack of experience .
I said in my first chapter that I `m new to posting stories and that this is my first fic .
I have read good stories that started with short chapters , I have no proper grammar because I`m new to posting stories , the paragraphs get split because that`s how fanfiction do when I write chapters .
short chapter length doesn`t lead always to shittiness I`m not trying to promote my fic but some of my long chapters are good or close to .
the description and writing is learned from good fics and not Stark Wanks .
the characters are taken from the Conquest era and the characters are from the telling of the Maesters who have questionable motives and this is a fic close to a Wank but not truly , the two character you reached in ch 9 don`t have name or character description so I filled it .
I don`t understand you Stylesheet you said first that this is Another trash Stark Wank know you advice me ? and bring examples that most of is your preference ? if you don't like my work then why you reached to ch 9 .
there have been readers who commented , I haven't been long in this website , I have rode fics and I write like that because I want my stories to be good , my aim isn't to write great stories there are people who are born for writing great stories , that's not me .
I will read great stories .
terra666 : to me this looks prepared , why it looks like a first draft of a first draft to you ? ,I will spend more time organizing my thoughts and notes, and in this chapter I used Microsoft Word .
Brandon
After waking up Brandon took of the cover he rubbed his eyes and thought of what he needed to do , first he has to kill the two Dragons of the second trusted adviser and sister wife of the former lord of the castle and his future wife then see who are the Dragonlord supporters he stood and walked , the chambers where wide it was bigger than his Winterfell , he was a Bastard but he was still a royal his chambers were as big as Torrhen chamber , he continued walking till he reached the closet , he needed to change , he opened it and searched for the clothes for business it was on the other half , he took a black breeches and a crimson undershirt and a black doublet slashed with crimson and had sewn on it what looked like Dragon scales , he looked to the lower level of the closet to see the boots section he took a long light brown boots then looked for something to finish his attire , he spotted a crimson cape so he took it and begin dressing the clothes was tight on him . He knew what he had to do he left his new chambers he wandered to the castle hallways , the halls where similar to each other , he thought that the castle was similar to Winterfell which meant that the library was in the same area he gone to find it he reached to find big wooden doors he opened them to see that it was big and had three levels , Winterfell library had four levels he walked inside to see it full with books he took the stairs until he reached the highest level he found scripts hung on the sides to identify them he came closer and started reading it said how the Valyrian bond with their Dragons the other said how the Valyrian bonded with their Dragons then the third section said Dragons nature and secrets the Targaryen must have brought them for emergency but where left to collect dust , the Targaryen`s must have natural bonding , he wasn't surprised the Targaryen`s where from Valyria there must have brought the books for showing their greatness but there wasn't any songs sung of the Targaryens being warriors in the past , he took one book from each section and descended he reached the tables then put the books he saw that the library was empty , it must have been because the Targaryens where the only users of the books he opened the first book to find the title written in big and a language that he didn't understand he started going through the pages to find it written in the same language , it must be high Valyrian he opened the other book to find it in the same tongue , he opened the third book to find it written in high Valyrian , while in Essos they spoke dialect Valyrian but mostly common tongue he closed the three books and said " guard ! . " a guard entered and said " what do you require m`lord ?. " Brandon said "bring the Maester, it seems I have need of him. "The guard nodded and left then after a couple of minutes the guard returned with the Maester. Then the guard bowed and said "what can I do my lord. "the Maester was a pale man that looked like in his 60s was short wore the usual Maester grey rope and had a heavy chain which had all the Maesters into it like gold link for money, black iron for ravenry ,silver for medicine and bronze for astronomy,iron for warcraft,copper for Agriculture and husbandry , Lead for letters and writing , plantuim for foreign languages and Valyrian steel for the higher mysteries he was bald but had few white strands on his head he had a wrinkled face and had hard lines on his face and wore a wary expression, he handed him the three books then said "I want you to translate these books as I have need of them. I need to kill the remaining Dragons. "The Maester took the book and said "as you say my lord. "Then he bowed and left, with that Brandon sat on the same place that he was sitting then after a hour and a half the Maester returned with a number of Parchments he put the books then said "if I were younger it would have taken me half an hour to translate them, age takes its toll, I translated the books you gave me . " then he bowed and left , after the Maester left he saw the parchments held in ribbons to separate them he separated them in the three parts the first parchments where a thousand page in total then the second where a fifty page in total the last was a fifty page in total he opened them gradually then after finishing he put them in their ribbons , he knew how to kill Dragons it`s through the blood he took the books and Parchments and left .
Brandon stood in the armory his chosen guards of soldiers behind him and the Maester there in front of them the former Lord of the castle and the first sister wife and second trusted adviser and on the left side his right Hand man and first trusted adviser all naked and on a wooden stand their bodies was half of it was covered , he could see where the wounds were , all looked at the bodies then Brandon said " Maester I want you to extract the blood from them and gather the dried meat used to feed them to create fake bodies . Putt some fake hair and white clay to make a fake appearance then stuff it with blood then dress them in their clothes. "The Maester said "what will I do with the deceased lord and his wife? " Brandon said "hung their bodies in the inner caves. " the Maester kept looking at the bodies then asked " and what of Orys Baratheon he was Lord Targaryen right hand man and first trusted adviser ." Brandon turned and faced the Maester and said "throw him in the Dragon dung, throw him off the rocky mountains if you want to I don`t care , " then he left towards the armory to construct the second part of the plan , then he stood on top the battlements then saw as mechanical wooden hands moved the fake bodies then the Dragons started calling they moved their heads to smell the fake bodies then he gave the signal and from afar the soldiers readied big wooden scorpions then they pulled the wooden handler to position on the beasts then all shoot the Weirwood arrows and the Dragon screeched and died , he descended to see his achievement ,he felt pride , one of the soldiers came and said " what shall we do with them ?" Brandon said "take the sea green one to a ship for White Harbor then hung the silver one in the inner caves . "he will send one of the Dragons then after he finishes he will send for a letter of legitimization then he left the bloodied courtyard heading inside the castle .
