Author's Notes
Good morning, fellow writers and readers. Welcome to my first fanfic.
Constructive criticism, opinion and advice are more than welcome. If anyone has a question or query, write it in your review. I will explain any queries and answer any questions in the updates, or in a PM.
I do not own Total Drama. The only thing that belongs to me are the 22 OC.
Enjoy!
Total Drama: Enchanted
Chapter 1 - An Explosive Beginning (Part 1)
We meet on Pahkitew Island in the morning, six months after the sixth season of the Drama Total franchise. The island has finally been repaired, and updated in several ways.
The image is transferred to a newly built dock. Above this stands the most sadistic host in television history, with his casual clothes and charismatic smile, ready to start the new season.
"You asked for it and we will give it to you here! Welcome, Total Drama fans! We meet again at the place where I was last seen: Pahkitew Island!"
The scene quickly changes to the island malfunction in the previous season. "If everyone remembers, the island had had minor difficulties, but it is nothing that money cannot fix. After a few months of repair, the island is back, wilder and more dangerous than ever."
The scene returns to the host. "We have not only fixed the bugs, but also given an update." Several images from various areas of the island are shown. "Now the place is full of my famous traps that I have very proudly thrown out there" he gives a small cruel laugh.
"Everything here will be different, but the rules will be the same," explained the host as he toured the campfire area at one end of the island. "A group of naive teenagers will compete against each other for many challenges, in order to win One... Million... Dollars!"
The host walks the area where the Canyon of Shame used to be. "At the end of each day, a camper will be forced to go home with nothing but humiliation, shame, and broken dreams, until only one camper is left standing."
The host returns to the dock. "Who will survive? Who will be first in the loser gallery? Who will win the glory? Keep your eyes glued to the screen to find out," the host concluded the introduction.
"I am your beloved and famous host, Chris McLean, and this is..."
"Total!"
"Drama!"
"Enchanted!".
"Welcome back!" Chris greeted, standing on the dock. "Ok. Time to meet our new campers. In an attempt to get back to our roots, this season we have 22 contestants again to torture as I please," he explained with a cruel smile.
The first boat reaches the dock, leaving a girl with white skin and ginger hair in two long pigtails that fall down the sides and end in short spirals at the end. She is dressed in a pink scarf with yellow polka dots, a white blouse, an orange long skirt and red shoes.
"I present to you the first arrival, Ginger!"
"Hello Chris! I'm so excited to meet you!" Ginger greeted, before greeting the audience.
"Thank you. They tell me very often," Chris replied.
As Ginger moved to the other side of the dock, the next boat arrived, carrying a tall boy with tanned skin and dark brown hair. He was wearing a beige T-shirt, with the sleeves pulled up to the shoulders, a green jumpsuit with the dropped left shoulder strap, black rubber gloves and brown work boots. On his belt is a tool bag.
"Hello Otis. Welcome to the island," Chris greeted.
"Hey," Otis greeted curtly, as he passed the other side of the dock. Ginger waved at him, but the boy only raised his hand in a subtle wave.
The next boat arrived, bringing a girl with light skin and purple hair. She was wearing a pink tank top with black trim, a purple jacket with shoulder pads, gray jeans, and purple pumps. On her head she has purple sunglasses.
"Agent Clover Jones. How is everyone doing?" the girl introduced herself, running a hand across her forehead.
"Nice presentation, Clover" congratulated the host. "I am excited for this new season. Go and socialize with your colleagues while I receive those who come."
Clover nodded and went to stand on the other side of the dock. She decides to strike up a conversation with the other two campers.
"Hello, my name is Clover. Nice to meet you," said the agent.
"Hi! My name is Ginger" greeted the girl with pigtails. "Happy to meet you. It's been a long time since I made a new friend."
"Hey" Otis replied simply.
As they spoke, the next boat had arrived, leaving a boy with light skin and dark brown hair. He was wearing a blue shirt, a yellow loose tie, beige pants, and brown shoes.
"Hi Chris," the new one greeted with charisma. "It is a pleasure to see you."
"Glad to see you too, Nigel," Chris greeted. "I see you very confident."
"Of course, I am. This game will be a piece of cake," Nigel replied, walking with the others to the other side of the dock.
The next boat arrived, leaving a robust, light-skinned girl with thick, fairly long dark hair that falls to her knees. She was wearing a green tank top, war pants, and black war boots.
"Hi Agatha. I'm glad you could come," Chris greeted.
"Me too, host," replied Agatha, with a remarkable Russian accent. "Everyone get ready, because Agatha is not here for silly games."
The next to arrive is a boy with dark skin and white hair. He wears a white tank top that only reaches his navel, dark brown glasses, a pink long scarf, a silver hat, ripped jeans with a multi-colored belt and gray shoes. Around his neck, wrists and ankles he has bright party sticks like bracelets.
"What's up, Chris?" the boy greeted with great enthusiasm. "Where is the party?".
"Welcome Julien" Chris greeted. "The party will start very soon."
"Good. I'm more than ready to-" he pulls a detonator from his pocket "-start with the fun," and presses it.
KABOOM!
The boat he arrived in suddenly exploded into a thousand pieces, while Julien went to join the others with a smile. "There is nothing better than an explosive beginning," said the boy, leaving some of the campers stumped by the boy's action.
Julien notices the looks. "If you like that, then get ready-" he said as he took some cherry bombs from his pockets "-because there is more where that came from."
The next to arrive is a slender girl with a fair complexion and long black hair. She is dressed in a long purple knee-length silk dress and brown wedges.
"Here we have Karen!"
The girl bowed in her elegant dress. "Hello everyone. I am delighted to be here" she said, with a kind smile.
"COWABUNGA!"
Everyone sees the next boat coming from the horizon, and in the back was a boy doing water skiing. He was dressed in a black spiked biker leather jacket, a motorcycle helmet, a white T-shirt, black pants and shoes.
When the boat reached the dock, the boy continued to ski and jumped onto the dock, skiing directly towards the host, until he stopped in front of him. He stands up and takes off his helmet, showing off his white skin and light brown hair.
"The best entrance so far, Raymond" congratulated the host.
"Excellent," the boy celebrated. "So, this is the place?"
"That's right, friend. Welcome to the most dangerous place on the planet."
Raymond scoffs. "Please. I eat the danger of breakfast, lunch and dinner every day," he said as he settled into the growing group of teenagers.
The next to arrive was a girl with white skin and long brown hair that fell over her shoulders. She was dressed like a cowgirl, wearing a red scarf around her neck, a white tank top, a tasseled brown vest, blue jeans with a thick leather belt, and long-heeled boots. On her head she wore a cowboy hat with a red ribbon.
"Our western cowgirl: Maggie!"
"Hello! Thank you for accepting me here," said Maggie. "It would be better for you all to pack your bags now, because I am here to win."
"She talks a lot to be someone on the ranch," Nigel scoffed.
"There seem to be people here who are looking for trouble," Maggie said angrily, as she presses her finger on Nigel's chest in warning. "And I don't allow people to make fun of my ranch and get away with it."
Maggie leaves him alone, while Nigel only rolls his eyes, ignoring that attempted threat.
The next boat arrived, leaving a boy with light skin and blond hair slicked back. He was wearing a rather elegant suit, consisting of a long-sleeved gray dress shirt under a gray vest, black tie, dark gray pants, and black shoes.
"Good morning" greeted the individual, looking with superiority at all those present.
"Hello Freddy," Chris greeted mockingly.
"My name is Felix," said the boy, offended. "Don't forget it, Christian."
"Now that I was able to meet you, why did you sign up to participate?" asked the host. "I thought those of your type don't stoop to doing things as "vulgar" as this, in your own words."
"Of course, it is. I am an aspiring lawyer, and my father is a millionaire magnate. You could only dream of being like me" said the boy, boasting of himself.
"So how did you end up here, blondie?" Maggie asked, annoyed by the arrogant attitude of the new boy.
"I was signing some contracts, until I discovered that one of them was a contract that aimed me to participate in this nightmare. But hey, the damage had already been done and I couldn't cancel it anymore, so I said to myself: Fred... Felix, you are perfectly fit to win this contest. So, I decided to accept my cruel fate and compete" explained the boy.
"Then you can do us all a favor and go where you came from," Raymond said.
"I agree with that," said Maggie.
The next boat came with a girl with pale skin and short blonde hair, with freckles on her cheeks and nose. She was wearing a yellow shirt under a green diamond-patterned sweatshirt, green fingerless gloves, green round glasses, dark green pants, and white shoes.
"Next up is Rita!"
"Greetings, fellow competitors," Rita greeted. "I hope that competing against all of you will become an interesting experiment," she said, walking with the group.
The next to arrive is a boy with light skin, red hair and a patch on his left eye, covering a scar. He wears a blue scarf tied around his neck, a light blue t-shirt under a leather vest, black pants with ankle buckles, a double metal strap at the waist, a gunsmith leg band on each leg, and leather boots. On his back he has a mini jet pack rocket and has two crossed bullet belts on his chest.
The boy watched them all coldly, analyzing them. "So, this is my competition?" he scoffed. "They are just rats, that need to go back to their cages."
"It shows you didn't read the contract, Hunter," said Chris.
"The use of weapons is prohibited" Felix continued with a book in his hand, interrupting Chris. "And yes, I also took the time to study the rules book for this show."
"What? Do you think I'm going to shoot someone here?" Hunter scoffed. "I don't waste ammunition on carrion."
"Considering your father is a professional hitman and your mother is an animal control officer who cuts animals' heads off, it's easy to take on the obvious," Chris explained.
Hunter just huffs in response. "Fine".
The boy proceeds to remove and throw away all of his weapons and knives that he had in sight, including his jet pack, leaving his weapon rack empty. Chef Hatchet arrives and collects all the weapons and takes them away, then throws them in a trash can.
The next boat passed, leaving a fair-skinned, blonde-haired girl with the tips dyed purple. She is wearing a black tank top under a gray blouse, with an open black jacket, black pants and long black boots.
"Our next contestant, Erika!"
"Hi! I'm Erika, definitely a real girl" she introduced herself, earning some confused glances from that presentation.
"Uhm, hi. I'm Clover, I'm real too" the agent greeted.
"I'm Ginger! Happy to meet you" greeted the girl with the pigtails.
"Would you like to be my new friends?" Erika asked.
"Of course!" Ginger said. "Wow, that was easier than I thought."
While they were talking, the next contestant had arrived. A black-haired boy tied with a hair band, wearing a blue kimono that covers his arms and legs, along with much of his body, and in white socks and sneakers. On his head he has a kasa hat and at his waist he wears a white ribbon and two sheaths with swords.
"Greetings, Yoshio" Chris greeted.
"Yonde kurete arigatō. Koko ni ko rarete kōeidesu" greeted the boy in Japanese, bowing respectfully.
Everyone is confused by hearing the boy's greeting in another language. He clears his throat and speaks in English.
"Thank you for having me. It is an honor to be here" he translated the sentence to English. "You can call me Yoshi."
"Of course it is an honor, buddy" said the host. "I just have a problem. Did you read the contract that specifically says you can't bring weapons here?"
Understanding what the host was referring to, Yoshi pulls out his swords and hands them to Chef, who takes them and tosses them into the trash can, along with Hunter's confiscated weapons.
The next boat had arrived, leaving a girl with light skin, curly brown hair, and braces. She wears black glasses, a white T-shirt under a white, orange and purple plaid shirt, blue jeans and white low top sneakers with black details.
"Hi guys! What do you tell me?" The girl greeted with great joy.
"Welcome to the island, Bianca".
"Thank you very much. I am so excited. I already want to tell about all my new experiences in my new Total Drama blog"
"If she lasts long enough for that," Nigel muttered to Otis, drawing a short laugh.
"You better not go over it," said Chris. "We don't need another Sierra this season."
"Don't worry about it," said Bianca. "Would you like a photo to start my new blog?" she asked, pulling out her cell phone.
"How can I say no to a photo?" Chris said, posing for the photo with her. After taking it, Bianca joins the rest of the group.
Chris turns to greet the next contestant, only to scream in fear when he sees no boat, but a creepy boy staring at him, bending down to look him straight in the face, with a terrifying smile.
He was extremely tall, with completely white skin, black painted lips with a line that rises to the same painted eyes, and tousled black hair that covers his right eye. His clothes consists of a black polo shirt, black and white striped sleeves, shoulder pads full of black feathers, a top hat with a drawing of an eye, short black pants hooked with two straps of the same color and a belt, his abdomen is bandaged , black gloves, a dark scarf around his neck, long socks with black and white stripes equal to the sleeves, and black leather shoes.
Chris recovers from the fright, although the fear remains. "Everyone, this is Isaac" he presented with a little nervousness.
Isaac's smile intensified. "Helloooooo," he said, waving the fingers of his hand.
The other contestants were slightly disturbed by the subject. Some even hid behind others out of fear.
"Don't be scared. There is nothing to fear" Isaac continued, as he took out a deck of cards and did tricks with them. "I have more charisma than it seems."
"Great, a clown that doesn't make me laugh. How funny" Raymond scoffed, but he is heard by Isaac.
"Be careful with your words, acrobat. For your own GOOD" Isaac threatened, appearing out of nowhere behind Raymond with his creepy smile, making him jump from fright.
"Okay, easy, friend," said the acrobat, recovering from the fright.
The next boat arrived, and some of those present are surprised to see the next to arrive.
"Is that ...?"
"No way!".
"It really is her!"
A tall girl comes down from the boat, with light gray makeup, hair that stands out like a mohawk dyed dark pink and lips painted dark purple. She wears a black tank top with a skull logo on her chest, a purple vest, black leggings with pink edges, black platform shoes and a purple visor that covers her eyes. On her arms are black and pink cuffs with white edges. On her neck, she has gray headphones with green edges. In her hands she has an electric guitar.
"Who's ready to rock!?" the girl said.
"The famous teen music star, Sonya!".
"Sonya? Sonya Swaray? Is this for real?" Bianca asked, unable to believe it.
"You can bet it, friend," said Sonya.
"Oh my gosh. It's such a pleasure meeting a star. I am Clover."
"Always happy to get to know the fans better," Sonya said, offering her fist.
Clover is shocked by the offer, and bumps her fists into it.
The next boat arrived, but there was no one. Suddenly it sounded like something like a battle horn in the distance, with a silhouette on top of some trees, blowing a conch shell. He grabs a liana and swings with a scream like Tarzan, until the liana breaks, and the boy flies off into the water, screaming.
They all approach the edge of the dock, when suddenly, the boy shoots out of the water and lands on the dock. He gets down on all fours and dries up the water like a dog.
The boy had brown hair and wore a brown tank top underneath an open shirt with the sleeves ripped off, war shorts, and sandals.
He just stared at them all carefully, until he got close to them and started sniffing them like a dog. Some were uncomfortable with the subject sniffing them.
The boy stopped in front of Isaac, whose eye was fluttering rapidly, followed by the rest of his body, before his eye darkened and said, "DON'T YOU DARE".
And that was the signal for the boy to walk away with his tail between his legs.
"Diego! My name is Diego!" The boy introduced himself, recovering from the fright.
"What was that from before?" Raymond asked.
"Seriously! What's wrong with you?" Felix complained.
"Sorry my friends. I needed to be sure that you are trustworthy" explained Diego.
"A very strange way of doing it, don't you think?" Nigel said.
"But it is very effective. I must say that some of you are quite... strange."
"Look who's talking" Hunter growled.
"Okay, campers, relax, because there are still a few to present," said Chris.
Suddenly it is seen in the distance as a small plane flies over them from the sky, dropping a red-haired girl, who lands kneeling on her feet. She is dressed in a classic pirate outfit, such as a white shirt, a large yellow and red jacket, brown shorts, a thick belt, a sheath with a sword, white long socks, blue boots, and a pirate hat with a white feather.
"Ahoy, comrades!" the girl greeted. "I am Captain Chantal Celeano, the captain of the Ravenous Condor."
"Excellent entrance. In my opinion, this managed to be the best so far," said Chris.
"Thank you, sailor," said Chantal.
"But you're going to have to give us your sword" Chris continued. "Does anyone seriously read the contracts?"
"I'm not going to give you my sword" said the pirate. "It is very important to me".
"Oh, Cheeeeef!" Chris called.
Chef Hatchet arrives and fights Chantal for the sword, until he finally manages to take it away from her with a kick to drive the pirate away.
"Jerk," the pirate growled as she stood up.
As Chris laughs, he watches the next boat arrive, leaving a boy with tanned brown skin and dark brown hair shaved down the sides, wearing a green T-shirt, dark green sweatpants, white sneakers, and a watch on his left wrist.
"Good morning, Tony" Chris greeted.
"Hello..., friends. I am excited to compete against you in this... game" said Tony awkwardly, passing the group.
The penultimate boat arrives, leaving a pale-skinned girl with blonde hair tied back in a braid that falls down her back. She wears a pink blouse, blue shorts, a pearl necklace, and white sneakers.
"Pearl, everyone!"
"Nice to meet you all!" Pearl said, going to hug the majority, although the rest pushed her away or didn't even let her get close.
The last boat arrived, bringing the last contestant. A boy with light skin and light brown hair, wearing a yellow shirt and a blue hoodie, green shorts and orange flip-flops.
"Hi, can you help me?" asked the boy. "I don't know what I'm doing here."
His comment earned some laughter from some and faces of confusion from others.
"Lucas, you're on the TV show you signed up for," Chris tried to explain.
"Really? Great!" Lucas celebrated, but was thoughtful again. "Why did I sign up here?"
"To win the million-dollar grand prize!" Chris answered.
"Amazing!" The boy celebrated again. "And who are you?".
"Going back to the main topic, all the new contestants are here already," Chris announced, ignoring Lucas's question. "Follow me all! It's time to start the real fun!"
The twenty-two campers were in the campfire area, west of the island. There were several cut logs and semi-buried barrels there that they could use as seats, but not enough for everyone, although some don't mind standing.
"Welcome everyone to Pahkitew Island! This will be your home for the next few weeks of this season," explained Chris. "As you can see, the island has changed a lot since last time. Now it is full of my traps that I happily set up everywhere. You will have to watch every step you take, because you never know when you will take a wrong step."
Many of the campers show concern about that.
"However, the producers decided to have some compassion for you and managed to recreate some classics from the old Wawanakwa Camp, such as new cabins, communal bathrooms, and a dining room. All of these are free of these dangers, at least, of course, that I'm in the mood for some trick" Chris said with a smile.
"Of course, the challenges will be in some area that is full of such traps," Chris continued. "Don't worry. You have a low chance of survival."
Some gasped in concern, while others only teased.
"But..." added Chris. "Venturing around the island may be good for you, because... I hid a McLean Immunity Idol somewhere. Whoever finds it will be safe from being eliminated, and will survive to see another day on the island."
Many celebrated for the news, but there were others who remained unimpressed.
"The only thing this season that will not change, and never will, is the confessional. I remind you that there you are free to express opinions, discuss strategies, or just let off steam. I will give you a few minutes to go and give some previous thoughts about the season."
Confessional
Pearl - "Well, so far everything is going better than I expected. Not counting the dangers, the possibility of dying, and some of the strangest contestants, everything is going great."
Nigel - "What do I think of my new companions? It seems that only half of them are around the normal range. The rest are just phenomena, like the pirate, the caveman, the kamikaze, and the creepy clown."
Sonya - "Many of my new teammates are a bit... weird, but it's nothing to worry about. This rhythm can't be stopped."
Felix - "Really, I don't understand how they bring these savages into this contest. It seems like I'm in a crazy house. Anyway, none of those fools have a chance against me."
Clover - "I see I have tough competition, but I shouldn't focus on that. Mission is my priority."
Agatha - "The competition is nothing more than mosquitoes. This one I have in the bag."
Hunter - "I am known for being one of the most feared bounty hunters in the world. You just need to know that I didn't earn that title for nothing."
Bianca - "Hello, followers of my blog! Wish me luck!".
Diego - "I have already analyzed almost everyone here, and I must say that there are many subjects that I cannot trust, and some that I cannot even understand, such as one that smelled of metal."
"Okay, campers," Chris called. "It is time to start our first challenge."
"Wait! First challenge? What about the teams?" Pearl asked.
"I decided to start simple and fun," explained Chris. "So, I decided to start this season in a different way. It will be all-against-all!"
"What!?" almost everyone said in unison.
"That's right. This challenge will be all-against-all," explained the host again. "Since this is the first episode after a long hiatus, I decided to start with a simple challenge, so you can prepare for what is to come" Chris finished with a smile.
"That doesn't sound so bad," Clover commented.
"Your challenge is... a race around the island" said Chris. "You will have to make a complete tour of the island. You will cross the forest, some caves, the water, and other parts that I do not remember, but that will be difficult for you."
"However, this race may be your chance to find the immunity idol, if you don't die on the road, of course," Chris said with a laugh.
"But first, you have to leave your things in the cabins. I warn you that if you leave them here, I'm going to throw them in the ocean."
Everyone has collected their things, like suitcases and other belongings, and went to the cabins. Chris advised them not to unpack anything yet as they will be assigned to a cabin at the end of the day.
"So... who is excited to participate?" Clover asked
"I am," Ginger replied. "I already want to play and make new friends."
"It will be fun until we start the eliminations," said Raymond. "Don't get me wrong. Most of you look great, but sooner or later you will have to leave the competition."
"Most of us?" Clover asked.
"There are people here who are... how can I put it?... weird" Raymond replied, pointing at Isaac.
"You are talking about me?" Isaac asked, still smiling.
"No offense, buddy, but your choice of clothing is quite disturbing," Raymond explained.
"I like to use it. Any problem with that?"
"No. I just don't want to have a heart attack every night."
"Don't worry. I don't need to do it…" Isaac laughs, before muttering: "...but I love doing it".
Elsewhere, Pearl was walking in silence, until she bumped into Nigel.
"Oh. Sorry" Nigel apologized.
"No, it was my fault" said Pearl. "Sorry".
"No problem," said Nigel. "Nice name, by the way. Pearl. It fits you perfectly, like a finger ring."
"Thank you" thanked a blushing Pearl.
Confessional
Nigel - "There are many phrases I am known for, but my favorite was always: Nigel is my name, and charming is my game."
Elsewhere, Bianca decided to get closer to Sonya.
"Hi Sonya," the blogger greeted nervously.
"Hi, girl. Is there something for you?"
"N-No. I just ... I'm really excited to meet a superstar in person."
"Oh. Thanks." Sonya smirked.
"Why did you come here?" Bianca asked. "Aren't you already famous?"
"I did not come for fame or money. I do not need it" explained the singer. "I wanted to come here to take a break off stage. Relax and have fun."
"Amazing. I really came here just to add new stories to my blog."
Sonya starts to remember something. "Wait. Is your name Bianca Song?" Bianca nods. "I know that account! I follow you. I love your job."
"Are you serious? I can't believe it!" Bianca widened her eyes in surprise. "Thanks, Sonya."
Confessional
Bianca - "I can't believe that a superstar is one of my followers. This is so amazing."
"What are those?" asked a voice.
Both girls turn and see Tony pointing at Bianca.
"What are you talking about?" the blogger asked.
"You have robotic teeth" Tony pointed out. "Can I touch them?"
"Are you talking about my braces?" Bianca asked, very confused, walking away from the boy.
"Braces" Tony tried the word. "Mhm, fascinating."
He walks away, leaving the girls very confused and not knowing what to think.
Returning to the main group, some thought about an important topic.
"How do you think Chris will choose the teams?" Maggie asked.
"In the last season he had assigned teams based on who had a parachute and who had not," Rita explained. "Who knows? He will surely explode us, and he will assign us based on who is unscathed and who is not."
"I just hope he doesn't assign me with weaklings like you," said Agatha. "I don't need to have to carry my team all season."
"It will not be necessary, because I very much doubt that you will survive with that attitude," said Felix.
"In case you didn't notice, pompous boy, I'm the strongest here" Agatha said, flexing the muscles in her arms. "Your noodle arms would have no chance against me."
"Strength is not everything" Yoshi commented. "It takes more than just brute force to win a real fight."
"Do you want to bet, bug?" the Russian girl growled, cracking her knuckles.
"If that's what you want, go ahead" Yoshi stands in combat position.
"Calm down, both of you!" Sonya gets in the middle of the conflict. "There is no reason to fight. You must learn to cooperate if you are assigned to the same team."
"Sonya is right" Karen said. "We must learn to trust each other. We won't get anywhere if we fight each other."
Yoshi pulls himself together and nods. "It's true. If we want to survive, we must work together."
Agatha just huffs in response. "Whatever".
Upon arrival at the cabins, everyone left their things there, while some went to see the interior, noting that they are identical to the cabins of previous seasons.
Karen and Pearl were testing the beds, although Pearl's bed breaks and she ends up with splinters. Ginger sees them and decides to do the same, lying down on another bed.
"Hello," Chantal greeted Ginger. "I am Chantal. How are you?"
"Hello! I'm fine" Ginger replied. "Why do you ask?".
"I'm just curious. I want to get to know my future comrades better."
"I'm fine! Don't worry about me" the girl clarified with a smile.
Confessional
Chantal - "As the captain of an entire crew, I can know when a comrade has a problem. Whenever I have a new sailor on board, they act very reserved, and I can say that Ginger is being reserved. She must learn that she is free to act as she likes it best."
Chantal shrugs. "Okay, but let me give you some advice: You just have to be yourself."
"Yes, listen to that advice from a girl dressed as a pirate" Raymond laughs, leaning against the door of the cabin.
"It is not a costume; it is my captain uniform. I am a true sky pirate."
"Of course, my dear, and I am the Wizard of Oz."
Confessional
Raymond - "It would be better for Chantal to stop acting and start behaving like a real person. We don't need another Leonard here."
"Attention, campers!" Chris yelled into a megaphone, making everyone cover their ears. "It's time for the first challenge!"
"We are in front of you!" Maggie complained. "You don't need the megaphone!"
"I like to use it!" he yelled again with the megaphone, before putting it away. "As I explained to you, your first challenge will be a race around the island. Easy and simple."
"Of course, I must warn you about the traps along the way. If you fall into one, you must get up and continue. Cowards and weaklings don't win this game."
"What will the winner of this race get?" Nigel asked.
"What everyone yearns to get on this show: immunity in tonight's vote."
"Tonight?" Pearl asked. "That means…?".
"Oh yeah," Chris replied. "I told you not to unpack anything ... because one of you is leaving tonight!"
"Tonight already?!" Bianca asked.
"That's right" Chris replied. "And that doesn't end there. Each episode, one of you will be eliminated. What a surprise, right?"
"They never told me this game would be that difficult," said Lucas.
"Have you never seen Total Drama?" Nigel asked him.
"Be careful what you do, because you will never know when the time will come," Chris warned with a smile.
"Alright, let's do this," Raymond said, ready to go.
"Excellent!" Chris said. "Everyone, follow me to the starting line!"
Everyone arrives outside the dining room, and they find Chef Hatchet, who was sharpening his knives with a stone, drawing sparks, while wearing a protective mask.
"This is the new dining room, where you will enjoy the culinary delights of our dearest chef, Chef Hatchet."
Chef takes off his mask and greets everyone, with an evil smile, which terrified some of the campers.
"Okay, campers, pay attention. The dining room will be the starting line, and also the finish line," Chris explained. "When you arrive, you must enter the dining room to claim your victory. The first to arrive will win immunity in tonight's vote."
Some nod, determined to win the race.
"And with all that explained, are you ready!?" Chris asked, standing in front of the starting line.
Some are already in position to start running.
"On your marks ...! Ready ...!".
Clover and Raymond had determined faces, Felix had a evil smile forming on his lips, Ginger and Lucas had excited faces, and Isaac still kept his smile.
"Begin!" Chris announced, but to his dismay, he was in the way of the cast, and they all stepped over him. "Watch out for my face! Not the hair! Aahhh!" he yelled before falling to the ground and everyone stomped on him.
They all started running towards the forest, disappearing into view, while Chris compiles from the accident and returns to the camera.
"And so, we begin this new season! Will they survive the traps? Will they make it to the goal unscathed? What will come after that? And the question that generates the most tension in the public: Who will be the first eliminated of the season? Find out, next time, at…! "
"Total! Drama! Enchanted!"
CONTESTANTS
Ginger, Otis, Clover, Nigel, Agatha, Julien, Karen, Raymond, Maggie, Felix, Rita, Hunter, Erika, Yoshi, Bianca, Isaac, Sonya, Diego, Chantal, Tony, Pearl, Lucas.
Eliminated: N/A
And this concludes the first part of the first chapter of Total Drama: Enchanted. This season will be full of surprises, some that really surprise you, or possibly disappoint you. That will be your decision.
The teams will be formed in the next chapter. The way of forming them will be quite different.
In one part it has been mentioned that the Cannon of Shame is no longer present. I plan to follow the Total Drama tradition of using a different elimination method. You will know how it will be soon.
You are free to try to guess who will be the next eliminated. I will send a greeting to anyone who can guess correctly.
This chapter is full of references and inspirations. You can try to guess which they are, and what cartoons they belong to.
Rita's assumption that Chris will blow them up to decide the teams was a reference to how the teams were formed in Guest 1138's story, "Total Drama Danger Zones", and in Tempokeep's story, "Total Drama Karon Island." Greetings and thanks to Guest 1138 and Tempokeep for giving me the idea.
Something interesting that you should know. Six of these OCs have already made their debut in another story. In Guest 1138's story, "Total Drama City." However, some of them will have their notable differences here.
Reviews are more than welcome. If you find any errors in spelling or grammar, do not hesitate to send me a PM and let me know. There I will be able to correct it in the next update.
See you in the next chapter. Bye.