FINALLY, WE HAVE ANOTHER CHAPTER FOR CRYSTAL PRISON! Today, we're taking it easy with an Omake. This one is an AU and a little personal project.
I had a special interest in this one. Speaking of which, I posted some commissions on my DA page. It's a preview for the Friendship games. Posting will be a little slow as I have exams coming up and my brain is dead.
Now for the reviews.
VongolaJoe: Spoiled Rich is that snobby mom or Karen that everyone hates but can't really do against because of who her husband is. She's a bootlicker, always trying to cozy up with influential people. Dusk Shine and by proxy Twilight Sparkle are among the upper ranks of society. We're talking about that they have the personal numbers of politicians, executives, and other famous people. You can tell they have MONEY. Not new money but that enduring Old money.
Filthy Rich is old money therefore he's aware of the rules and conduct of the upper class. Dusk Shine and his family are significantly above them in terms of status. For instance, if Dusk Shine says he can't do something or that it's a bad idea that needs to be reevaluated. Filthy Rich better take it in consideration. Why was Filthy Rich angry with his wife? Think about it in business terms. Dusk Shine is the link for a MASSIVE contractor, someone that can boost his business to the moon if they can make a deal. Spoiled Rich's arrogance could've soured that deal and many more if words gets out. It's mixture of respect for Dusk Shine and his skills and of self-preservation.
Mr. Haziq: Spike definitely loves talking.
DaleJr.88: Damn I need to hurry up and watch some shows. Glitch Techs was great from what I heard. Yes please for the DA account name. Starlight Glimmer will be first then the Dazzlings were appear next. Starlight will Dusk Shine's righthand woman while the Dazzlings will crowd around Dusk Shine since he has magic.
I'll probably do them as Omakes as well.
Dusk Shine/Night Blaze's first phase will be like canon but he faces the princess from the other world. She brings him down to more manageable levels but still superhuman. Elden Ring is GOT with the Souls games. You play as a Tarnished, a forsaken group who roam the Lands Between after since the Shattering of the Elden Ring. The quest is you must battle tons of bosses including several Demigods to restore the Great Rune. Hoarah Lux was the 1st Elden Lord and 1st tarnished, a brutal legendary warrior who slaughtered friend and foe alike. He married Queen Marikia who was the vessel of Erdtree aka the source of all Life. Horah became Godfrey becoming a more noble and kingly demigod, using Serosh as a limiter. He had 3 children Godwyn, Morgott, and Mogh. They've become the Golden Lineage. However, they divorced and Marikia took a second husband, Radagon who had kids with Queen Rennala being Radahn, Rykard, Ranni, Miquella and Malenia.
The last phase of Dusk Shine's boss fight is that he fights Sunset Shimmer as in canon. He lives in a mini-mansion. Twilight Sparkle isn't afraid to fight. Her brother was captain of the Royal Guard so he must've taught her something.
The preview takes places months after the Friendship games but before Camp Everfree. Dusk Shine was betrayed by Cinch and Crystal, burned and mutated into a monster essentially having a meltdown and dealing with the fallout of it. He needs some support. Dusk Shine is Filthy Rich's social better. Both are old money while Spoiled Rich is new money. Dusk Shine and his family has access to things that Spoiled Rich can't imagine and resources money can't buy
Sunny Flare would live with Sugarcoat and Sour Sweet for a while. Then she'll live with her older sister.
Twilight having the Magician Acrana is more like a subtle reference during the Magical Duel episode with Trixie.
Jester fits with the pre-movie Sunset Shimmer as she was a primary bully and causes hell for her fellow students. Her selfishness and narrow-minded desire to become a princess blinded her on what's truly important. Aeon is her redemption arc.
Principal Celestia helps people with her authority. It's in her nature. Plus you can't rule a nation for 1000+ plus without some form of negotiation and people skills
Fluttershy always had that cleric/druid vibe to her. I always pictured her as one of the smartest people in CHS
Luna is the 2nd in command. The old-school disciplinarian to maintain order in the school. It's out of love to mold the students into mature and responsible adults
Cranky Doodle is likely the 3rd highest rank in CHS. First it's Celestia then Luna then Cranky Doodle. I think it's because of his age and has seniority.
Derpy Hooves iconic lazy eye was an animation error. Funny how that works. I think her, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy are a part of the welcome wagon for incoming students
Rainbow Dash and the chariot go together. The chariot represents moving forward, taking action, willpower and determination. When reversed, it means hesitation, lack of willpower, being stuck in life unable to reach your goals.
Justice is something that Diamond Tiara needs. I can't imagine having a mom like Spoiled Rich. At least she has a decent fellow like Filthy Rich to help her.
Hermit and Wallflower Blush, a match made in heaven. The classic introvert. Why do I have a weird feeling that she's one of those 'Not like other girls' girls?
Strength and Applejack. Few things can beat the honest, reliable, and dependable farmgirl
Fortitude and CMC considering everything that they did. It's not surprising that they received some backlash for the AAM incident. They exposed some of their friends' and families' deepest darkest secrets all over a slumber party which spiraled out of control to where the police had to get involved. Nobody trusts them anymore.
Hunger and the Shadow 5. Well, they forced one of their students to magic, threatening to destroy the world and ripping the fabric of reality for a high school competition that probably doesn't even matter in the long run. Cinch's influence runs deep from Dance magic after months away from her. I won't be surprised if they use similar tactics.
Tower and the Dazzlings. They've brought disaster on themselves and other people. Equestria, the human world and now all they have is a niche fanbase and a rusty van. I planned something similar with Dazzlings when they try to steal Dusk Shine's magic and shows why he's the Bearer of Magic incarnate. Let's just say people aren't happy. They'll be somewhat exiled/isolated and since they're a different race/species, I'll have to make up some lore about them. The Dazzlings will have a fall from grace, occupying Sunset's apartment from canon while under supervision. Dusk Shine will help them out as a way to to help himself out. They're eternally grateful for his assistance, willing to repay him in any way possible. And I mean in ANY WAY. Think about that Bodyguard omake idea I had.
Rebirth and Sci-Twi. This girl needs some love after everything she went through. A common origin theory about her was that her parents died in a car crash via Berry Punch who's been characterized as an alcoholic or makes them. Berry Punch is one of those SUPER minor characters throughout the 9 seasons. She only has a minute or so of actual appearances.
Star and Pinkie Pie. Nothing much I can say about this either as you made all of your points
Moon and Trixie. It also represents illusions, fears, and anxiety when reversed. It's heavily implied that Trixie's father either abandoned her and her mother or didn't know or care that she exists. Another fan theory is that Trixie is Trans, as her original design was male. That can be one angle you can work.
Hierophant and Cadance and Shining Armor. This is a double feature as both share guilt about Twilight. Cadance cannot do much with Twilight's isolation and now has to reconstruct Crystal Prep to remove Cinch's mark. Plus Shining Armor bears the guilt of indirectly influencing Twilight to join the friendship games
Faith and the Rainbooms. Yeah one of the biggest issues with the MLP populace is how fickle they are. I understand that it's a kids show and they want swift resolutions to everything. But it's super annoying after a while.
Hope and Princess Twilight. She's the princess of friendship so it's her job to see the better in people.
Pixel Pizzaz is a minor character. One of the minor Arcana can work as well. However, since she's a minor character, virtually any unused Arcana can work as Pixel is a blank slate. You can do whatever you want to do. For me I'm working on Vinyl Scratch as like an extra member of the Mane six
Peace has been restored at Crystal Prep. It's been months since the disastrous Friendship games, thanks to Cinch's hubris. Why would she risk the ENTIRE world for several kilograms of gold-plated plastic? Then Dusk Shine's revenge rampage shook up the school's status quo. It's cruel, merciless, calculating, and destructive in every sense of the word. Yet they couldn't deny Dusk Shine's effectiveness, culling the population of troublesome students and faculty. Especially those still loyal to Cinch. Some were … simply put, terrible if they wanted to be polite. Crystal Prep remains the prime elite school in Canterlot. Still, students can breathe easier under Principal Cadance's leadership than Cinch's draconian suffocating iron fist.
"That concludes the afternoon announcements," Cadance concluded, removing her finger from the intercom. She exhaled, easing into this comforting chair. Cinch did have an eye for quality luxury items. Was it a gift from one of her many benefactors, or bought it herself? "Time for work," The young principal muttered, clicking her pen and signing multiple documents for the upcoming months. Cadance is still a novice when managing an elite private school. Thankfully, she had bountiful support from the local community, various faculty, alumni, and most of the student body. They preferred her gentle, compassionate, and authoritative leadership instead of Cinch's ridge and self-serving methods. Cadance frowned. By Faust's light, how many children suffered for Cinch's ambition over the decades? Dusk Shine. The former principal claimed she had one or two students with Dusk Shine's potential. Where were they now? Cadance hopes that they're happy, healthy, and safe.
KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK!
"It's open," Cadance greeted warmly. Well, speak of Grogar; it's Dusk Shine. "Hey, Dusk Shine," She smiled at her brother-in-law or dutiful enforcer, as people claimed. He systemically removed most of those who would've challenged her newfound authority and pacified or frightened others to keep their heads down. The princess of love could've easily handled them herself. She still appreciated his support, albeit under Aether's control, erupting years of pent-up rage against his classmates.
"Good afternoon, Principal Cadance," Dusk Shine replied softly. Cadance raised an invested brow at his flushed face and docile posture. He wants to ask her something but is nervous. "I. . . can I ask you something, please?" The top student requested before taking a seat. He fiddled with his hands on his lap.
"Of course," Cadance consoled, straightening her face and posture. It must be serious if he's acting like this. Her love senses were cheering, alarming her at the possibility.
He slowly breathed, wanting to get this over and done with. "Okay, so I have this friend who likes this girl," Dusk Shine started, his mulberry face a luminescent strawberry.
"It's you, isn't it?" Cadance's blue eyes brightened and widened along with her beam. IT'S FINALLY HAPPENING!
"N-no, but let's say it's me, as we have similar personalities," Dusk Shine stammered, defending himself as his face brightened again. Cadence's smug grin remained, crossing her arms as she leaned forward, silently calling him out. "Okay, it's me," Dusk Shine confessed, surrendering to Cadance's plot.
"EEEEK! Yes, just tell Sunset or Trixie that you want to hang out one-on-one," Cadance squealed, getting excited at the potential love affair. He's finally growing up and discovering the wonders of love. Both girls had a stable relationship with him, so it won't be anything bizarre. Wait. She wondered when these emotions appeared. Eh. . . Cadance will worry about it later.
"Um, no, it's not Sunset or Trixie," Dusk Shine confessed softly.
"Really?" Cadance questioned, tilting her head in confusion. He nodded. Those two were definitely among Dusk Shine's potential romantic partners. "Do I know her?"
"Kind of," Dusk Shine remarked, moving his hand in a flapping manner. He reached into his pocket, scrolling through his phone while approaching her. "It's her," Dusk Shine announced, showing Cadance her picture.
Cadance squinted her eyes, attempting to recall this girl. "Oh, her," Her eyes widened in celebration as his face reddened. "Nice choice," She praised.
"How do I approach this?" Dusk Shine asked, pondering whether he should be direct and formal in his advances or should he act straightforwardly but with a casual tone.
"What do you have in mind," Cadance smiled, pushing those documents away. They can wait. The two spent almost an hour texting Dusk Shine's love interest. It was mainly Cadance as Dusk Shine paced anxiously in her office between responses and her crafting his replies.
His phone buzzed. "What did she say?" Dusk Shine muttered, huffing into a brown paper bag. Cadance glanced down.
"She said yes," The principal broadcasted with a giddy smile even when Dusk Shine popped his paper bag in shock. His eyes widened at the news. SHE SAID YES?!
". . . OH," Dusk Shine muttered. He didn't think that he would get this far. "Oh fuck, she said yes!" He exclaimed, grabbing the sides of his head.
"Dusk Shine, relax. You'll be fine, okay," Cadance got from her desk, resting a hand on his shoulders. She glanced at the clock. "Head home. We'll talk about this later," Dusk Shine nodded, retrieved his things, and exited the room. Cadance waited a few seconds before breaking a wide beam. "YES! YES! YES! YES! WOOOOOHOOOOOO!" She boomed, hopping around the office as if she won the lottery. "I need to make a few calls," Cadance rushed to dial a number.
Shining Armor and his crew were filing reports when his phone buzzed in the office. "Hey babe," The captain answered. He flinched. His ears rang from the roaring and excited babble of his wife. "Run that by me again?" Shining armor requested, barely getting a single word of that.
"DUSK SHINE HAS A DATE!" Cadance broadcasted, still feeling the high of the news. He stood abruptly, smiling along with his wife.
"Let's go!" Shining Armor celebrated. Others paused and focused on their captain. "Sorry, my brother has a date," He explained, pointing to his phone.
"Finally!" One of his crewmates shouted. They smiled, offering their blessings, and wished him the best. Some watched Dusk Shine grow up and knew his troubles at Crystal Prep. They helped him in any way they could. Someone pulled a whiteboard as they discussed a betting pool.
"Here's the thing. . . it's not Sunset or Trixie," Cadence whispered enthusiastically.
"Oh cool. . .," Shining Armor remarked. Wait… it's not one of them. "WAIT, WHAT?!" His eyes bulged out of his skull from the reveal. When did this happen? Was it one of his classmates? Did he know them?
"What happened?"
"Dusk Shine's date isn't Sunset or Trixie," Shining Armor divulged to his team.
"Ain't no way," One of them smiled amidst the frenzy. They went into a discussion, wondering who the girl was. Those two were at the apex of the betting pool. If it's not those two, then who was it? A schoolmate? Someone from CHS or none of the above.
Shining Armor's phone buzzed again. It's Dusk Shine. "Hold on, I need to take this," He ended the call and accepted his little brother's number.
"Hey, Shining. . . I need some help because I know that Cadance already told up," Dusk Shine whispered as he was still at school. He didn't need eavesdroppers monitoring his calls.
"Don't worry, we got you covered," Shining Armor smiled with his crew.
"Thanks … wait we?" Dusk Shine smiled, briefly pausing, wondering what his brother was talking about. He got his answer from the roaring cheer of his brother's coworkers.
Significant time has passed since Dusk Shine's date. It was a total success as the two went on several dates consecutively. Now they're dating exclusively and gradually becoming a couple. Both haven't made it official or public. However, it didn't stop Dusk Shine's classmate.
"Hey, you think Dusk Shine is dating someone?" Neon Lights whispered to his friends, gesturing to the smiling Dusk Shine texting on his phone.
"Probably," Trenderhoof and Suri remarked, aware of their Top student's better mood over the past few months. He's been smiling more and friendlier. Their most significant clue was Dusk Shine glued to this phone and smiling at the messages.
"But who is it?" They questioned as they scanned their classroom for potential suspects. Was it one of the Shadow 5? Sunny Flare, Sugarcoat, or Sunny Flare? It can't be either of them, as Dusk Shine would've been talking to them. It must be someone from outside their class. Lemon Zest or Indigo Zap? Perhaps someone outside their school, like CHS. Sunset Shimmer, Trixie, or one of their friends?
More students got involved in the discussion as the days went by. Who is this mysterious girl? Maybe they're just good friends and only overthinking this situation. Well, they'll see soon.
They'll get their answer enough. Cadance announced a small casual social event later on in the week. She encouraged students to get together as a plus-1. Some CPA students did what their principal asked and discovered their dates. Dusk Shine shuffled through his locker as the school ended. He didn't have to worry about finding a plus-one since he already had one.
"Hey, Dusk Shine," Lemon Zest's voice appeared behind him. Her cheeks were ruby as she shuffled her feet. "Are you going to the party?" She muttered, locking up at him, twirling her long green hair.
"That's correct," Dusk Shine answered, much to her delight.
Lemon Zest beamed as she flirtatiously approached him. "So. . . do you want to be my-AHHHH," The rocker purred before screaming as Moon Dancer bumped her out of the way. Dusk Shine blankly watches Lemon Zest slide across the floor.
"Dusk Shine, do you want to be my plus one?" Moon Dancer rattled off with a blush. Yes, it's better to straightforward with your intentions.
Fleur De Lis appeared from the left field, shoving his Platte swap out of the way. "Out of the way!" She scoffed before flipping her hair. Her hand and arm slid across his neck and chest. Dusk Shine didn't know what was happening, confused as she smirked. "Hey, Dusk Shine," Her soft finger circled on his chest. A delicate flowery aroma diffused from her body. She recently put it on for this . . . seduction attempt. "How about you ditch them?" Fleur De Lis criticized the other two girls. They scowled at her. "And go out with this lavish rose instead?" She coaxed. More girls got into an argument. The rest of the Shadow Five, Starlight Glimmer, and the Dazzlings. All girls barred their teeth at each other, tensing their bodies.
"Excuse me," Dusk Shine announced, stopping the brawl before it began. They stopped and turned to him."I already have a date," He articulated loudly to reach his point. Their eyes widened, and their jaws slacked. Astonished and utterly furiously about missing their chance.
"With who?!" They demanded, viewing each other suspiciously.
"My girlfriend," Dusk Shine revealed with a demure smile and blush on his cheeks.
"WHAT?!" They boomed. The rumors were true after all, but who was his girlfriend?
The party was in full swing. Groups of students were dancing and having a wonderful time under the teacher's supervision. However, two people are missing. Dusk Shine and his girlfriend. He knew he was telling the truth because why would he lie to impress them.
"Oh, there he is," Trenderhoof pointed to the door. Dusk Shining holding the white hand of . . . VINYL SCRATCH?! Several stared rattled stone cold as some spat or choked on their beverages while the two strolled together. Everyone, sans Cadance, had the same question. HOW THE FUCK DID THIS HAPPEN?!
"Dude, what . . . and how?" Several classmates questioned, pondering Dusk Shine's charismatic nature. Although it shouldn't be surprising as both were minor celebrities. More students exchanged money as it wasn't Sunset, Trixie, or anyone from school.
"It kinda just happened," Dusk Shine explained as Vinyl smirked with an arched brow. "The best estimate I can give was sometime during the Friendship games. We chatted. Our relationship grew, and now we're here," He concluded with a shrug, giving Vinyl's hand a gentle squeeze as she kissed him. Envious glares landed on the pair, but they turned their noses. There's nothing they can do. Whatever, they're a high school, so they probably won't last long. An energetic song blared from the speakers. Vinyl Scratch beamed, dragging Dusk Shine with her to dance. Others shrugged before joining the dance floor. The party went on.
A slow sensual song appeared, and students got together in pairs, touching each other's bodies. Boy and Girl. Boy and Boy. Girl with Girl. Non-binaries and all in-between. It didn't matter as love was love.
Dusk Shine and Vinyl Scratch held each other, relishing in the other's warmth as their hands roamed and rested. Vinyl removed her iconic red-trimmed glasses, revealing her gorgeous rubies. She smiled. Her delicate lips touched his. Both shut their eyes, melting in their presence. Cadance and Discord smiled at the pair, exchanging a high-five. Finally, the two separated their lips.
"Hey. . . wanna take this party somewhere else?" Vinyl Scratch whispered huskily into Dusk Shine's tender ear. His eyes widened with blazing cheeks. She rubbed his chest, rubbing his toned chest, attempting to persuade him.
"Re-really?" Dusk Shine stammered, his amethyst eyes bouncing around.
Her smile curled upwards with a low-lidded expression. "Of course," Vinyl Scratch purred, her finger slightly tugging at her sleeveless shirt. His throat dried at the peek of her bare chest. She didn't show him everything as they were public, but a little something to tantalize him. "We don't have to go all the way," She replied earnestly, pecking him on the lips. "Just. . . all . . . you're. . . comfortable with," Vinyl cooed between each kiss. "Okay," She whispered. Dusk Shine gulped the tension in his throat.
"Oh. . . okay. I trust you," He nodded.
"Good boy," Vinyl's intoxicating breath tingled in his ears. She gazed around. Everyone was distracted, holding their partners or chatting in their small groups. Perfect. "Come on, show this secret lab of yours," She took him by the hand, guiding him outside for some . . . alone time. Both faces were vibrant scarlet as Dusk Shine took control, leading his girlfriend to his private room. His heart thundered in his chest and ears, but he wasn't afraid.
They've arrived at Dusk Shine's lab. Vinyl scoped their surroundings, hoping that nobody was around. She popped a quick mint into her mouth. He had high standards, so it's better to be safe than sorry. The door clicked open. They entered. She whistled, impressed at this private room. It's almost like a studio apartment mixed with a research room. Then again, Cinch, that foul woman's name, pulsated on her tongue, gave Dusk Shine an upgrade. He sat on the couch, rubbing his hands nervously in his lap.
"Can you lock the door, please?" Dusk Shine requested, adjusting his glasses with a roaring heart. Vinyl immediately secured the door behind her, smiling at him taking charge. "And can you . . . sit on my lap?" His face brightened as he squeaked out the request, patting his lap.
"Well, since you asked so nicely," Vinyl Scratch agreed with flushed cheeks and a smirk. She sashayed over to him, parching her legs over his lap. Her arms wrapped securely around his neck. His hands did the same for her slender waist. He attempted to remove his glasses, but she stopped. "Keep them on," She ordered softly. He did as their lips danced with each other. Vinyl Scratch wanted Dusk Shine to engrave this night into his crystal-clear memory for the rest of his life. That he did and many, many, many more.
We got some Vinyl Scratch love today. I don't know why but I got interested in this character as a Crack Pairing with Dusk Shine/Twilight Sparkle. I hoped that you enjoyed this little Slice of Life chapter.
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