Amanda kept her eyes shut. She didn't want to see the world anymore. She didn't care about it. The only thing she felt was misery and despair and hopelessness.

She no longer believed Finn was going to find her. She lost all hope. The pain of her scars and burns and wounds shot into her skin and nerves like daggers.

It never ended. They never stopped hurting. The pain not only shot through her body, but her mind too.

She wanted the pain to end. And she knew the only way right now it could be through death.

Amanda wanted to die.

But at the same time, she didn't want to.

The thought and memories of Finn kept her from fully losing all hope. But it was slowly dying.

"Finn..." she sobbed with her face and eyes burning unbearably from nonstop crying. "Where are you...my Finn? I miss you, Finn. Please save me Finn!"

"Oh, will you shut up?" Luowski asked as he opened the door, hearing her from the outside. "Finn, Finn, Finn, Finn, and more Finn! That's the only name I ever hear out of your fucking mouth! Fuck Finn! Fuck Whitless! He's never going to find you! So, you might as well just start saying Greg instead. Or Luowski will do."

"Oh, you want me to say your name?" Amanda asked. "Okay then. Greg Luowski...GO FUCKING FUCK YOUR FUCKING SELF!"

Luowski snorted, and then blasted lightning against Amanda, shocking her and causing her to scream in pain, like when Palpatine electrocuted Luke Skywalker.

He brushed his hands while Amanda's body steamed for a few seconds from the blast.

"Go ahead..." she sobbed. "Just kill me. Electrocute my brains out! I don't care anymore."

"Girl you just don't realize that you are no good to me dead," said Luowski. "First off, with you dead Finn has no reason to look for you, and number two, you keep forgetting that I love you and that I will do whatever it takes to make you love me back."

Amanda didn't even respond. No words she could think of could even insult or hurt Luowski now.

"Whelp my friends are in for a treat," said Luowski. "Normally I've been letting only two at a time torture you, but because your friends entered two parks twice in one day, I have to let three Revengers torture you tonight!"

Amanda just sobbed her eyes out as Luowski laughed and opened the door for the selected Revengers.


She managed to open her eyes and saw Yzma from The Emperor's New Groove, Mother Gothel from Tangled, and Cruella de Vil from 101 Dalmatians walk in.

The three wicked women circled Amanda, eager to start torturing her.

"Well ladies, don't we have a treat tonight," said Cruella.

"This girl used to be so beautiful," said Gothel. "Now I bet her boyfriend wouldn't even be able to bear the sight of her."

"Enough talk," said Yzma. "It's torture time! And I'm going first!"

"Very well," said Cruella. "Show us what you got potion lady."

Yzma nodded and sat down on the table a case she was carrying. Amanda managed to look and saw it was filled with vials and needles. She thought they had to be potions.

Yzma took one filled with green liquid and filled up a syringe.

"Let's start here," Yzma said.

Amanda couldn't struggle, even though she wanted to. She didn't have the energy.

She was half-naked with only her bra and panties and shirt ripped from both sides and her entire massacred body exposed.

Yzma shoved the needle into Amanda's arm, causing her to wince in pain, and then injected the vial.

After first, Amanda felt nothing, but then she began to cry out and scream in pain.

It felt like she was being electrocuted and shocked and stabbed with lightning bolts on the inside of her body.

The potion caused her body to literally flash as she screamed in pain, slightly showing her very own skeleton from the outside.

She began puking up yellow liquid which also poured out her nose eyes and ears as she was continually electrocuted with what felt like a combination of electricity and acid.

The villainesses just simply laughed.

The only good thing was that the effects just lasted a minute, but the pain still lingered in Amanda's body.

Yzma smiled and then grabbed a vial with blue liquid. She injected it into Amanda again.

This time, it felt like her insides were freezing up with ice. Her body became freezing cold and felt like she was getting frozen and frostbite at the same time. She couldn't move a single body or muscle, not even her head. She tried to scream in pain because it hurt worse than the last vial, but even her voice itself was literally frozen and all that escaped her throat and lips were visible gasps of wind and small snowflakes.

The women laughed again as her body practically turned blue, and after a minute, it finally stopped.

Amanda could breathe again but was still freezing cold.

"Oh, don't worry," said Yzma. "This'll warm you up."

She pulled out a red liquid vile and injected its liquid into Amanda, shoving the needle cruelly in her stomach this time.

Amanda immediately began screaming and thrashing in every direction, as her entire body and insides felt like they were on fire.

Her bones felt like they were on fire, and she just screamed and screamed and thrashed about for the girl's amusement.

"And now for the finisher," said Yzma.

Amanda was panting in pain after the effects had finished. She saw Yzma pulled out a vile with yellowish liquid. Almost made Amanda think it was pee.

"This is the venom of the Inland Taipan," said Yzma. "The world's most venomous and deadliest snake."

Amanda's eyes popped open.

"Once it enters your bloodstream, it'll make you feel like every nerve in your body is firing at once," she said sadistically. "Every part of your body will hurt like nothing you ever felt before. And don't worry, I won't let you die. The venom takes about 45 minutes to kill a human after all. And I've genetically altered this dose to do that exactly. I'll give you the anti-venom after about, or I don't know, ten minutes?"

Amanda screamed out and did everything she could to escape, but Gothel and Cruella held her still to allow Yzma to inject the venom into her arm.

At first nothing happened, but then slowly Amanda grunted and gasped and then the screaming began as the venom began to flow all throughout her body.

Her nerves felt like nails were being hammered into her flesh and skin. The worst headache of all-time hit her followed by nonstop vomiting. The venom flowed everywhere and all she could do was uncontrollably put on a show of pain and suffering for the girls.

The venom remained in her body for about 10 minutes, all with nonstop pain. And just when she thought she was about to collapse, Yzma injected her with the anti-venom.

It took a couple of minutes, but at last the pain stopped. At least that pain.

Everywhere else still hurt.


Yzma proudly bowed to the girls, knowing her turn was up.

Gothel was next, and Amanda's sight was slowly recovering.

She never saw the baseball bat Gothel was holding slam right into her stomach.

She felt like she was about to vomit, or wanted to, but nothing came out. She had been fed so little and constantly vomiting from other tortures, that she literally had no vomit left.

But she could still scream in pain.

Gothel then swung the back against Amanda's back, hitting her painfully. She repeatedly smacked her with the wooden stick, as if she was trying to break her spine.

Amanda screamed and cried while Yzma and Gothel laughed.

Gothel swung once more as Amanda almost felt a crack in her spine. She could barely breathe due to the number of times she had been hit.

But Gothel wasn't done.

She took her bat and swung then against Amanda's legs and knees on both sides, causing her to scream again.

Gothel just kept swinging like a baseball player, until Amanda could barely feel her legs.


Once she was done, it was finally Cruella's turn.

Cruella approached the poor girl and then she reached into her giant fur coat and pulled out an electroshock baton.

"No! No!" Amanda cried out. "No more electricity! Please I beg you!"

"Oh you beg me?" Cruella asked.

She smoked her cigarette, and then blew the smoke into Amanda's facing making her cough.

"TOO BAD!" she bellowed out and pressed the weapon against her stomach and turned it on.

Amanda's body began to thrash and jolt and writhe in all directions as she was shocked repeatedly. She cried out in agony as electric waves of pain flowed through her body and into her brain.

Cruella kept it there for 10 seconds before removing it.

Amanda kept thrashing about until she stopped.

"I bet that hurts," Cruella said. "Good."

"GO TO HELL!" Amanda managed to scream.

Cruella replied by shocking her again. She proceeded to press the baton against various parts of her body.

Her chest, her thighs, her legs, and her arms, shocking her with unbearable volts of pain.

As the pain flowed through her body, as the Revengers laughed at her pain, as the last memory and thought of Finn disappeared from her mind, it was all over.

She had no more hope. She had no more will or strength to go on.

Amanda Lockhart officially wanted to die.

She was in so much despair that she couldn't even scream in pain anymore.


Lucky for her, her stopping screaming ending up boring the Revengers, so they ended the shock therapy early.

Amanda stared at the ground and heard the door close and lock again.

She refused to move or go one. She wanted it all to end.

The pain that lingered everywhere and now in her mind made her want death more than anything. It was the only way to stop the pain.

Unable to move her body, she thought of one solution.

She began to bite down on her tongue, hoping she could bite it off. But even that pain was too much for her.

She bit to hard and yelled "OW!" and flicked her hands.

And that's when she saw and heard it.

The minute she quickly moved her hands, she saw rocks on the ground get thrown.

She didn't think it was possible. It couldn't have been.

But she tried again. She moved her hands and made certain motions with her fingers.

And the rocks and various other objects on the ground floated in the air.

She had her powers back! Her telekinesis was working again.

"How is this possible!?" she asked herself.

She could suddenly hear the sound of her metal collar around her neck that suppressed her powers sparking and shutting down slowly.

"The electricity!" she thought in her mind.

The combination of Luowski electrocuting her, Yzma injecting her with electric potion, and Cruella shocking her must've been too much for the cuffs to handle.

"This means...I can escape!" she yelled in her mind.

Immediately, hope began to return to her mind and soul. The images of Finn and memories of him returned. For the first time in nights, Amanda felt happy and full of hope, and now strength.

She was still chained up, and the door was magically locked.

She knew it couldn't be opened unless another Revenger opened it.

So, she decided to wait, but in the meantime, she had to break free of her chains.

So as her powers slowly recovered, she began using them to loosen the bolts on her chains from the ceiling, making sure they didn't fully break.

She would need a distraction to escape after the next Revenger opened the door.

But now she knew there was still hope.

"Finn will find me," she said. "I will live, and we will be reunited!"


Wow. This might have been my most cruel torture chapter in all of the story. All that horror and pain, but now there's hope! But still where is she, and how will the Keepers trick the Revengers? Stay tuned to find out!

See you next update! Review please dearies!

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