Hey everyone, Poke'boy24 here with the SECOND Rewrite to my Story Monster Maelstrom as this one pays tribute to MikeJV37 who've passed away back in 2018 so let us take a moment of silence to honor our respect…
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… Thank you all for your respect since this is a reminder to everyone that we Authors are just simple Humans who Stories may live on while we do not since it's impossible to write when you're dead and so many Trolls/Haters/Flamers just keep on disrespecting those that are clearly no longer with us and yet they continue to hound and harass the Reviews of Stories that are clearly no longer getting updated when the Author has clearly moved on.
Hopefully this will be a Story that MikeJV37 can be proud of as I've been reading a bunch of his old work as well writing Style so here is the Summary of what's going to be happening.
Summary: Naruto was your everyday guy with his Parents dead, living in unstable housing, and being the pariah of his entire Village, things seem to be the same old routine but all that changed when he had a very strange encounter within the Forest.
Rated M: for Lemons, Language, Violence, Body Modification, Impregnation, Domination, and Naruto x Mass Harem.
Now let's begin shall we, and remember I DON'T own Naruto, Monster Musume, Yu-Gi-Oh, Digimon, nor any other Series that may appear within this Story.
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/ / /(Prologue)/ / /
The sun was shining over the Forest Village of Konoha as the beam of light slipped through the cracks and holes of an condemned Orphanage as the morning rays shunned upon a sleeping figure.
The figure was clearly Male as he appears to be in his Mid-20s with dirty and messing Orange hair along with whisker-like birthmarks on his face while the clothes he were wearing were just rags at this point as they barely covered his body which was covered with a multitude of scars.
Feeling the Sun's ray beaming upon his face, the Man growled as he rolled against the remains of an old worn-out mattress before opening his Violet colored eyes with Slit-pupils as he let out a yawn showing his large and sharp canines as he pointed his joints.
"Another day… Another fucking day…" the Orange-haired Man sighed as he got up and pulled down the wooden board blocking the window as he looked out towards the Forest a good distance from the Village before heading down towards the Kitchen to make himself something to eat.
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Naruto Journal Entry: About to fix up some breakfast, only to notice that I'm all out of food…
Just my luck, now this means I have to go to that Village Konoha to get more supplies…
Hopefully this will be a quick trip since I am not in the mood to handle those Villagers shit again…
It has been over Twenty years since my Parents were killed in the Raid from the Mountain Village of Iwa as well being placed within this dump called an Orphanage as those were the worst four years of my life before the Matron threw me out upon my tenth birthday followed by another decade of torment and abuse from the Villagers…
I've tried to provide for myself by attending an Adventurer Academy only to be kicked out after attacking one of my Teachers as I've found out that they were purposely sabotaging me…
The only good thing that seem to have happen for me was that the Orphanage was being shut down as everyone was evicted meaning that I finally have a roof over my head as that was nearly six years ago…
Welp, seems like I have no choice as I will have to go into the Village that's hates me…
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After grabbing an old, ragged Cloak and his extremely dull rusted Sword, Naruto made his way towards the Village.
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"Have you heard, Old Man Sushi went to the river, and hasn't return." Spoke a random Villager as a small group of them were gossiping among themselves about the long absent of one of their neighbors.
"If he gone where I think he might have gone, then he's long gone by now." Comment a young Clerk in the Market district as they restocked the baskets with fresh produce.
"I'm telling you guys, those who dare go into that Forest are never heard from again." A Girl attending the Academy told her friends as she's telling them what her Parents told her.
"Then why have nobody ever gone and rescue them?" this time a Boy asked wondering why none of the Adventurers or anybody else gone to find those who have vanished within the Forest.
"They did, but none of them ever came back~" a Hermit eerily said with a creepy haunted stare before getting chased off by a Shopkeeper since they've told him to stay away from their Store since he keeps scaring incoming Customers.
"Face it, going into that Forest is just looking for a death wish~" an aged Swordsman said to his young protégé since many who have accepted the Mission to find the missing people only wound up disappearing too.
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So far, Naruto had managed to enter the Village without any problems, especially since the two Gate-guards were still asleep, as he'd made it to the Market district with his hood pulled up as well a Scarf covering the entire lower half of his face as well a pair of old Goggles covering his eyes.
"Hey, Unagi, check the raggedy peasant." A Man commented to his friend who chuckled as he saw the wicked grin on his face.
"I hear you Hibachi hehe~ This is going to be hilarious hehe~" Unagi chuckled as the sunlight reflected off his Glasses since they were going to have some fun.
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"Okay… One small sack of Rice plus once bottle of Sauce would be this amount sir." A Female Merchant said bagging the two items since that was all Naruto could afford as he handed her the last of his money. "Are you sure you don't want anything else?" she innocently asked resting the top of her hands against her chin as she leans forwards pushing her average sized bust together to show a bit of cleavage as she was trying to sucker him out of more money.
"No thanks as this is all I need." The disguised Uzumaki told her clearly aware of her game since she was one of the Academy Students that suckered him out of his money to spend for herself.
Grabbing his items, Naruto was just heading outside when he was suddenly shoved to the ground as Habachi and Unagi took the bag of groceries.
"HA~ Look at this worthless Peasant!~ Tripped over his own feet!~" Habachi taunted as he kicked dirt in the Uzumaki's face while his Spectacle wearing accomplice dumped out the items that were in the bag.
"Only a small sack of Rice as well small bottle of Sauce, this bastard is even more pathetic than we thought!~" Unagi added with a mocking chuckle as his friend took the bottle and smashed it against the ground before tearing open the sack of Rice before pouring over their victim.
"Oopsies~ Let me help you with that~" the Cap wearing Man said with mocked sympathy as he grabbed Naruto by his shoulders and shoved his face in the puddle of Sauce. "Eat it you filthy Peasant, eat up that nice yummy dirt~" he said with a cruel smirk. "Oh, silly me, I forgotten that your hideous face of yours is completely covered." He said reaching towards the Scarf covering his latest target's face. "Now show the world just how truly ugly you are!~" he exclaimed with a chackle as he was about to yank the Scarf off…
POW! !
"AAAAAOOOOoooooo~…"
… Only to screechy howl out in pain as he was brutally punched in the nuts before getting flipped over onto his back making many of the onlookers' gasp believing that this cloaked Stranger has a death wish as he stomped on Habachi's gut hard enough to make him cough up saliva and mucus.
"If anyone here is hideous, it's you Habachi-teme." Naruto growled shocking those around that he actually did know who he's messing with. "Who and your Bitch Unagi are the ones who're pathetic. Two grown Men targeting people weaker than yourselves just so you can feel big because you both flunked the Academy. Such a sad and pathetic sight indeed." He harshly stated as he sidestepped a sloppy punch from Unagi before delivering a powerful right hook knocking him out as well breaking his jaw.
"How did you know about the Academy you worthless Bastard, you weren't even there as I would have clearly remembered your ugly face!" Habachi argued with a high-pitched voice as he was cradling his groin feeling like one of his testicles popped before getting roughly grabbed and lifted by his throat making him and the crowd panic seeing that he'd lifted him up off his feet.
"I don't expect you to remember me since you never remember anything as you had to steal other Students' work since you can't do a damn thing without either your Goons sucking your dick, or Daddy to bail your sorry ass out as it's no wonder your Mommy left you. You are just as much a cruel Bastard just like your Dad~" the Uzumaki taunted as he released some Killer Intent that caused many to faint while the old Bully lost control of his bowels ruining his Pants before punching him hard in the face knocking him unconscious along with leaving a seriously bloody nose and mouth as he dropped him on top of his Spectacle wearing follower's face. "Who's the one eating filth now~" he taunted with a wicked chuckle as he began leaving the Market District.
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Today was not how I expected it to be…
After paying for my Groceries, I was ambushed by none other than Habachi and his ass kissing suck up Unagi as they were just exactly the same as they were when we were children at the Academy…
Felt good giving those two a taste of their own medicine, plus I think I may have saved the world by destroying that Bastard's balls sparing any Woman from being forced to carry many future children as well any other defenseless people from ever getting tormented by his Bastard seed…
But personal revenge aside, there was since one problem as I now have no food or money D,:
Just as I was thinking about robbing a Produce Stand, this old Woman came up to me begging that I find her Husband as I've asked her why…
Apparently, a lot of People have been vanishing within an area in the Forest that surrounds the Village and anyone who tried to find them only ended up vanishing as well…
Not, I was just going to dismiss this Woman and leave, except the amount of Money on the Job-board wasn't something I could ignore since that hefty amount would be enough to keep me settled for several years…
So accepting the Job, I find myself heading towards the Forest with nothing but my wits, subpar skillset, and a worn rusted Sword ready to snap at any moment…
Yep, what could possibly go wrong…
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Well, the first chapter is finally up after so many years as I hope you all that liked the original Monster Maelstrom as well MikeJV37's work will like this too.
Also, this Story will be taking place within a Video Gaming Style Fantasy AU meaning no OP Naruto since there's WAY too many OP Naruto Stories.
Second is that I hit a bit of a stag about how'd I'd like to start this Story as there're literally so many kinds of Monsters as Polls can only hold a limited 100 choices, so I'll leave to all of you the Readers to pick your favorites.
Now, I've put up a new Poll on my Profile, which again can ONLY be viewed through Tablets and Computers, as there are dozens upon dozens of choices so just like my last Poll, you all will only be getting Ten, I repeat TEN choices as voting will close around June so be sure to think your choices and I'll see you all next time with the winning Monster.
See you all next time and don't forget to vote as well have an okay year.
