Authors Note: This has been in my mind for a while so, hehe. Hope you like, please review only construuctive critiscm, not hate I tried my best on this soo...yeah. Also comment if you like warriors, check out mynother book in progress Isle of the Lost by Running Fry.
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Twas before the clans existed, and their heros alike, twas before Skull and Moonstrike. Days of black and blue, cats would run in the heaveans confused, what is the new place brought upon the reaper, and who's this mysterious Cometkeeper...
The Gaurdians of the Stars were seated on flat tile plates with mini stairs on the bottom. They were still and serene almost statue like. They were cloaked in white light which shined off they white transluscent fur. In union they chanted, Comet, Comet, heavenly reign, bring no more suffering end all the pain...
Day 1:
Hawkpaw was running furiously, begging his legs not to give out. Each pawstep brough surges of pain. In the distance he heard dogs barking, their massive paws sending tremors on the ground. As the sounds grew more distant he settled down for a moment to take a breath, the only sounds he heard was his heart beating and him gasping for air. Although he was sitting and trying to relax for a moment he was still alert. His leg had a bite mark in it and it was currently bleeding. His arms were sore ans bruised. His eyes were wide andnscared. But this will make me stronger, Failedstar said so, right? He told me not to turn out like him, a failure, and this was the best way to do so...This is only a test he said, and the exam is coming up shortly so I must prepare. Then the barking grew closer. Time to go, break over, His paws began to run automatically, as if they didnt need to be told to. He then spotted a tall tree, and furiously began to climb. At the top of the tree he heard a soft mew, "Whats a youngster like you doing all the way out here?" He turned and saw a large smoky black tom sitting on a thick branch. "Who are you, and what do you want?" He said panicking, Hawkpaws tail started twitching in a nervous habit. "I want nothing, but my name is Retro, or thats what my twolegs used to call me."
Hearts of warmth, Hearts of fire, grow into cold desire, Comet, Comet bring forth your light please block out this sinister night...
Retro, what a weird name, what the heck is even a 'Retro'? "You may be wondering what retro means, to shorten it out it means something of the past that recently has been revived. My twolegs old cat Shelly died years ago, and she looked exactly like me so I was kind of a revived male version of her. You know what Im saying?" Hawkpaw shaked his head they were both silent for a moment. "What ha-" He was cut short when he heard claws scratching at the trunk of a tree. The tree they were in. He initially started to panic, but calmed down when he remembered he was in a tall tree. Retro didnt even seem fazed. "Anyway as I was saying what happenee to your twolegs, if its okay to ask." He said rembering what his sister said to him, "Dont be digging in elders business, if they dont want to talk then dont pressure. Got it?" that had stuck to him this very day. "Its ok. My twolegs died in a fire, My fur wasnt always this dark, it was a light grey, and I was stuck in the fire for a while until the twolegs in red found me, then everything went dark and I woke up with permanetly dark fur." "My twolegs were pronounced dead at the scene, the scent of death was in the air." Retro finished wistfully staring at the sky, "I wonder where they are now..." Are they in some type of twoleg StarClan, or do they go to the Dark Forest?
Comet, Comet Starkeeper of the heavens, protect us in the stars, so the evil that follows us doesn't get far...
Day 2:
The dogs twolegs finally got a hold of the dogs, he furiously yelled at them put a red thing on their necks with a snake on the end and started to drag them away. Good boy Hawkpaw, you survived the first test, the second one should be coming up shortly. Go away you toad breath, Hawkpaw thought, feeling more confident than ever with Retro. Retro was like his new mental support, no-one ever has before and Failedstar only supports him when he does what he wants for him, abd that usually goes like, "Finally your small brain can do something, keep it up and you might be able to take your first step in the Smart World, haha." He always finished off with a sinister laugh. And its worst now that he has a second test, there are 5 tests in general and the first took him three days to complete. Failedstar said the tests will just get harder and more dangerous to ''prepare him for the exam" which was likely not the case. Your test will begin tomorrow, I'll spare you some details, it'll be about Snakes and a cat called Mamba. Dont think this will be easy, it wont. Haha ha!" He finished off with a maniacal laughter wich ringed out in his head until it died down.
He'll have to prepare for his new "adventure" tomorrow and he'll need all the help he can get, from GalaxyClan...
To be Continued...
Sneakpeak:
"Retro, what the heck is that thing!" "Its a black-headed Lancehead, Im pretty sure." He whispered loudly. "Welcome to my throne of snakes!" Said a green-black cat—who was definetly larger than Retro—appeared. A snake was on his wrist, it was coiling around it, its eyes a dead black. "Time for the first test." The large black cat echoed. Snakes began to crawl the ground began to shake...
