Hoodedgenius98 chapter 1. : Huh a rewrite ok, let's see what happens. Are you gonna be replacing some events/people/timings?
Me: I might but maybe not I don't know yet.
ThunderClaw03 chapter 1. : Great job keep it up. This rewrite should be interesting, can't wait to see what happens next update soon
Me: Thanks! I'm trying to add more detail to this story.
rmiser1994 chapter 1. :interesting rewrite.
Me: Thanks.
Harry was shaken awake by Dobby the next morning, "Master Harry Potter sir needs to be getting up he's be tolding Dobby to get him up so we's can be going to the bank," Dobby chirped. Harry groaned and rolled off the bed, stumbling to the bathroom to take a shower to wake him up, grabbing a few clean clothes from his trunk.
After spending at least half an hour in the shower, he walked to the kitchen dressed in his clean clothes and hair still drying. Harry sat at the table and started eating breakfast after thanking Winky, the one who had made it, causing her to blush and try to say that he didn't need to thank her, to which he responded with that Dobby and her deserve his thanks.
He won that round.
After breakfast Harry had Dobby take him to the doors of Gringotts. Harry bowed to the Goblins guarding the front of the bank before walking in, after they bowed back with a small look of surprise on their faces. Harry had learned from Dobby that it was good manners to bow to the Goblins.
Walking up to the teller he waited until the Goblin was finished making sure the gems were real and not fake before speaking,
"Greetings, Honorable Goblin. I wish to speak to someone about seeing my parent's last Will, I have no key but am prepared to take a blood test to determine that I am who I say I am." Harry bowed slightly to the Goblin, who looked shocked, before calling out something in a different language, but must have been calling for another Goblin as another one ran over a second later.
They exchanged a few brief words in the same language, before the teller turned to him, "This is Lurnaff, he will be taking you to the Potter Account Manager, where they will have you take an inheritance test to prove you are who you say you are," the Goblin smirked, "But be warned that if you are not who you claim to be, then you will be dealt with. Permanently."
Harry gulped at the threat but nodded, "Understood Sir." Lurnaff started leading him through the maze that was the Bank, after a while but they stopped in front of a set of ornate doors with a crest of some sort. Lurnaff opened the huge door and pushed him in the room, before slamming the door closed, causing him to jump in shock at the noise.
Looking around, Harry noted that there were plenty of weapons on the walls; all that could be used to kill him if the Goblins wanted to. Finally noticing the Goblin sitting behind the desk, Harry walked over slowly, but not too slowly in case he made the Goblin mad.
When Harry got close he saw a plaque on the desk which read, 'Grinlast, Potter Account Manager', and bowed slightly as a sign of respect.
"You claim to be Harry Potter do you not, human?" Grinlast raised an eyebrow, "You may look like the Heir of Potter, but we shall not know for sure, until you take the test. Are you willing?"
"Yes Manager Grinlast, I am grateful for the chance to prove that I am who I say I am."
"Very well then." Grinlast took out a stone bowl with runes Harry didn't recognize all over it, and started pouring a light blue potion into it. He handed Harry a knife embedded with gems into the hilt and runes onto the blade. "Use this to slice open your hand, and let your life-blood run until the potion changes into a dark red color. Worry not, as your hand will heal afterwards."
Hesitantly, Harry nodded and took the knife, before breathing deep and slicing through his hand, like a knife through butter. A few tears of pain came to his eyes, but he didn't let them fall as he moved his hand over the bowl, only the tears showing how painful it had been. Grinlast looked upon the human with a little respect.
It took around five minutes for the concoction to turn a dark red, his hand had healed right afterward, like Grinlast said. The best part in Harry's mind was that the pain in his hand was gone and he didn't even have a scar to show for it.
Grinlast started stirring the potion before pulling out some parchment, and proceeded dump the potion over it, "We must wait five to ten minutes for the potion to sink into the parchment and tell us what we wish to know."
Harry nodded, "I thank you for allowing me to do this." Grinlast once again raised an eyebrow, Harry idly wondered if Grinlast would teach him how to do that if asked. "We are not doing this because you wished to, we are doing this as we wish to know you are who you claim to be."
Harry nodded still feeling thankful regardless of why they had done it.
What seemed like hours later, which was actually about seven minutes, the potion was done sinking into the parchment and words started to appear; it took at least another three minutes for all the words to form from the potion. Grinlast handed him the parchment after reading it with a shocked look on his face.
Wondering what could have made Grinlast so shocked he took a look:
Birth Name: Dive On
Renamed: Rose Dive Potter (Re-Renamed 'Harry James Potter' at fifteen months old by Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore (Illegally))
Birth Gender: Female (Made male by Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore (Illegally))
Parents-
Birth Mother: Shara On (Kryptonian (Deceased))
Blood-Adopted Mother: Lily Marie Potter [née Evans] (Human Witch (Deceased))
Birth Father: Cado (Saiyan (Deceased))
Blood-Adopted Father: James Charlus Potter (Human Wizard (Animagi form- Stag) (Deceased))
Relatives-
Aunt (Through Blood-Adoption): Petunia Holly Dursley [née Evans] (Human (Alive))
Uncle (Through Blood-Adoption?): Jack Napier Potter (Human{?} Wizard{?} (Unknown) (Alive))
Cousin (Through Blood-Adoption): Dudley Vernon Dursley (Human Squib (Alive))
Second Cousin: Bruce Willis Wayne (Human Muggle{?} (Alive))
Godparents-
Sirius Orion Black (Human Wizard (Animagi form- Dog/Grim) (Alive)) [Godfather]
Alice Longbottom [née Fortescue] (Human Witch (Alive)) [Godmother]
Magical Guardian(s)-
Sirius Orion Black (Declared by Blood-Adopted Parents and recognized by Magic)
Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore (Declared by law, unrecognized by Magic)
Genetics/Species-
Kryptonian: 35%, Birth Mother
Saiyan: 35%, Birth Father
Magical 20%, Blood-Adoption
Human: 10%, Blood-Adoption
(Wizarding abilities given through Blood Adoption)
Titles-
Heir/Heiress of Gryffindor (From Blood-Adoption (Father)) [Passed from Firstborn to firstborn]
Heir/Heiress of Ravenclaw (From Blood-Adoption (Mother)) [Passed from Firstborn to firstborn]
Heir/Heiress of On (From Birth Mother)
Heir/Heiress of Emyrs (Champion and Chosen of Magic)
Heir/Heiress of Potter (From Blood-Adoption (Father)) [Passed from Firstborn to firstborn]
Heir/Heiress of Black (Named by Godfather) (Temporary)
Heir/Heiress of Slytherin (By Right of Conquest (Declared by Magic))
Abilities-
Potions Proficiency- (Illegally Blocked 90%) 10%
Transfiguration Proficiency- (Illegally Blocked 80%) 20%
Charms Proficiency- (Illegally Blocked 80%) 20%
Jinx, Hex, Curse, Counter-Curse Proficiency- (Illegally Blocked 60%) 40%
Rune Translation Proficiency- (Illegally Blocked 90%) 10%
Spell Success Rate- (Illegally Blocked 80%) 20% (Raises to 55% when in Danger)
Wandless Magic Success Rate- (Illegally Blocked 98%) 2% (Raises to 4% when in Danger)
Wordless Magic Success Rate- (Illegally Blocked 95%) 5%
Natural Occlumens- (Illegally Blocked 100%) 0%
Parseltongue- (Illegally Blocked 70%) 30%
Metamorph- (Illegally Blocked 99%) 1% (Block eroded over time due to Accidental Magic)
Saiyan Abilities- (Illegally Blocked 100%) 0%
Kryptonian Abilities- (Illegally Blocked 100%) 0%
Eidetic memory- (Illegally Blocked 90%) 10%
Active Potions-
Power Suppression- First given at 15 months old (Lasting 3 more years)
Mild Love Potion- Keyed to Ginerva Molly Weasley (First given at 12 Years old) (Lasting 8 More years)
Trust Potion- Keyed to Ginerva Molly Weasley, Ronald Bilius Weasley, Molly Weasley [née Prewitt], Hermione Jane Granger, and Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore (First given at 11 Years old)
Hatred Potion- Keyed to Petunia Holly Dursley [née Evans], Vernon Dursley, Dudley Vernon Dursley, Marge Dursley, Severus Tobias Snape, and anything associated with the name Slytherin (First given at 15 months old)
Targeted Hatred Potion- Keyed the one who'd been given the potion (First given at 15 months old)
Past Potions-
Power Suppression- 15 months old, 7 years old (lasted only 3 years), 11 years old
Mild Love Potion- 12 years old
Trust Potion- 15 months old, 11 years old (Added Ronald Bilius Weasley and Hermione Jane Granger), 12 years old (Added Ginerva Molly Weasley and Molly Weasley [née Prewitt])
Hatred Potion- 15 months old, 3 years old (Added Marge Dursley), 6 years old, 9 years old (lasted only 2 years), 11 years old (added Severus Tobias Snape and anything associating with the name Slytherin), 14 years old
Targeted Hatred Potion- 15 months old, 4 years old, 8 years old, 12 years old
Other ailments-
Horcrux- located in scar (Given by Tom Marvolo Riddle Junior, self-proclaimed 'Lord Voldemort')
Basilisk Venom- located in bloodstream (Negated by Phoenix Tears)
Phoenix Tears- located in bloodstream (Negated by Basilisk Venom)
Contracts-
Marriage Contract with Ronald Bilius Weasley and Rose Dive Potter (created by Molly Weasley [née Prewitt] and Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore) (Declared Illegal by Magic)
Marriage Contract with Ginerva Molly Weasley and Harry James Potter (created by Molly Weasley [née Prewitt] and Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore) (Declared Illegal by Magic)
Harry sat numbly in his seat, staring at the parchment- it had all been a lie. His life was a lie. There were potions in his bloodstream that made keyed muggles hate him, abilities that had been blocked, and probably wasn't even fully human. He was the Heir to various Houses (He had a feeling that the politics were going to be horrid.)
He was Blood-Adopted, which is probably the same as regular adoption, all four of his parents were dead, had an Uncle on his father's side that no one told him about, and was probably alive, and had a cousin that he could have gone to live with.
His friend's Mother and the Headmaster had made an illegal marriage contract for her two youngest children with him.
He had a Horcrux in his head, whatever the hell that was, and it belonged to Voldemort, so he wanted that gone as soon as possible.
Oh, and let's not forget to mention the lovely little fact that he was a bloody Girl! His gender had been forcibly changed by the Headmaster, his name was supposed to be Rose! Or Dive On, he noticed, looking up at the top of the page.
After everything Harry found out today, is it really a big surprise that the next thing he, or really she, did was pass out from shock?