Hey! Guess who was inspired to write for once! This chapter just came to me. The results of the vote will be seen in this chapter. Right now lets get into the reviews, I'm going to try and answer and respond to a lot more than normal since so many people gave me so many good ideas!
ArashiNokitsune chapter 17 . Oct 11
All Things Considered, I think she needs to learn more about her Kryptonian side as she didn't know that magical creatures could hurt her she needs to learn more about our weaknesses when it comes to that side compared to her Sayain side which does not virtually have any outright biological weaknesses or Mystic weaknesses least she stares at the moon and go berserk with the great ape form and she's using magic to help control her emotions which means there's not much of a chance that she will evolve as a Saiyan with her rage-induced limit breaking ability. looking at my review I realized I didn't clarify on the last part what I meant to say is that with occlumency I don't really see high chances that Adrian would stumble into Super Saiyan 2 it's unlikely she needs to learn a bit more about her Kryptonian side considering she didn't know that magic itself is technically one of her weaknesses as a Kryptonian let alone magical creatures.
Me: Those are really good reasons, I added some of those reasons to the chapter as you will see later on but what I really want to address is that Occlumency is a way of helping control your emotions and ordering your mind yes. BUT she could also use Occlumency to bring up every memory of her being angry, furious, pissed she has ever had and that could help her go super Saiyan and higher! After she does it once then it would be much easier to do it other times.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 17 . Oct 10
She should leave The School and split her holiday vacation between Metropolis and Capsule Corp and Meet the Goku. Plus fill them in on what has happened to her over the Years and And about the Wizarding World and The Betraying Traitors Especially Dumbledore and Quite Frankly She should use The Tournament to reveal the Truth to the World but make it clear by forcing The Daily Profit to Publish only the Truth and the Are to back up their stories with Evidence. I'm going to have to go back and take a look at the List of a Look at the property assets and business shares. Which I just did but sadly I accidentally hit send post before I was finished And sure enough she owns 20% of the Daily Prophet 10% from Potter and 10% Black She should Have Goblins Buy you the Remaining 80% and divide the Shares Equally between each of the House Titles She owns. And art the same time points out to Wizarding World she does not take too kindly to betrayal and traitors. And that has been what The Wizarding has been doing from the vary beginning Starting with her parents than her. In fact, The Ministry has even betrayed her Godfather and broken the Law By sending him to prison without a trial. In fact with the Way, the Wizards and Witches act and treat other races and Non-Magicals and that of mundane born First Generations. For one With this being AU, I would even Arrange for our Young Hero to call upon the Queen and The Prime Minister to rain in the British magical community And call them Oathbreakers and Traitors.
Me: I thank you for the review and let you know that I added your idea for the daily prophet. She doesn't own all of it sadly but she does own most of it. In regards to her splitting her time between capsule corp and superman, I only want to do one thing at the moment. I also don't want to tell the heroes about what has happened to Adriane just yet, they would want to arrest people right away and would ruin Adriane's plans because they would think they knew better. At least in my mind, that's what would happen.
Hoodedgenius98 chapter 17. Oct 10
How about 1 and 3 where the real one does 3 while Clara takes her place at the yule ball and makes it a complete disaster.
Me: I already messaged the sender of this review but I forgot to respond to their response. I will also add my reasons for not doing this here.
1) Clara hates Potters, I don't want to do something with that right now.
2) I WANT to make the wizards and witches run around like headless chickens over the fact that "Harry Potter" managed to sneak away.
3) I don't think Clara would be the type to dress up like that for the ball anyways.
But yes those are my reasons.
(Original review)
darkyurika chapter 17 . Oct 10
personnelement je vote le 3ieme la tourner et rencontre bulma
très bon chapitre et hâte de lire la suite, decidément granger et wesleys ne comprenne pas qu'elle ne veux rien avoir avec eux, et snape c'est un prof il ne peux pas invoquer les dettes de vie par contre lui en doit une a adrianne hé hé, j'espère que tu fera payer chère tout les traitres, merci pour ton travail
(My response thanks to Google Translate )
Me: Je suis content que vous ayez aimé le chapitre, veuillez excuser mon utilisation de Google translate, je voulais répondre en français mais je n'en connais pas. Vous avez raison de dire que Rogue ne peut pas s'endetter à vie grâce au fait qu'il est enseignant.
(Translated review thanks to Google translate.)
darkyurika chapter 17. Oct 10
personally, I vote for the 3rd turn and meet Bulma
very good chapter and eager to read the rest, decidedly granger and Weasley's do not understand that she does not want to have anything with them, and snape is a teacher he cannot invoke the debts of life, on the other hand, he owes one to them Adrianne hey hey, I hope you make all the traitors pay dear, thank you for your work
Me: I'm glad you liked the chapter, please excuse my use of Google translate, I wanted to respond in French but I don't know any. You're right that Snape can not call in life debts thanks to him being a teacher.
A couple of weeks later, Adriane was scowling as she left McGonagall's office. She couldn't believe that the professor wanted her to open the Yule ball dance with the other champions. Adriane had tried to refuse but, Mcgonagall was insistent. In her mind, "Harry" had to open the dance, or else he would make a mockery out of the tournament and Hogwarts as a whole.
Adriane didn't even bother trying to explain that her being in the tournament was already making a mockery out of it. She just rolled her eyes and walked away after McGonagall was finished speaking. Adriane didn't bother explaining that there was no way she would ever willingly participate in anything that she didn't need to.
She was only in the tournament because Adriane didn't want Dumbledore suspicious of her. Adriane went back to the chamber while grumbling softly. "Wish I could just leave for the break-" Adriane stopped right there and stared at the wall in front of her blankly.
Why couldn't she leave for break exactly? Sure, people might try and stop her but, if she just snuck out and went to another country then they wouldn't be able to find her at all! She was starting to get excited and wondered where she should go.
Adriane didn't even notice that in her happiness and excitement she started floating. She did remember that she had heard of Superman mostly being around a metropolis. Maybe, just maybe, she could go and meet him?
She would have to find a way to get his attention of course, but that shouldn't be too hard. After all, he was bound to show up sometime and when he did she would just swoop over to where he had been seen.
Adriane started packing her trunk right away, getting plenty of clothes to last her for the break. She also packed her training weights that she wasn't wearing at the moment.
"Winky!"
Pop
"Yes, Mistress Adriane?"
Adriane rolled her eyes fondly, "Winky can you take care of Usagi while I'm gone? I'm leaving for the break to go and meet someone who can teach me more about my powers."
Winky nodded, "Yes Ma'am, Winky can be doing this for you!" Winky then popped away, leaving Adriane smiling fondly at where the tiny house elf had been. Adriane turned back to her packing as she made sure she would have everything she would need.
Training weights, Check.
Clothes for all occasions, check.
Toiletries, check.
Money, check.
Books, check.
And a lot more things to do in any spare time she would have. She even packed a camera to take pictures of her vacation.
She truly couldn't wait until it was time to leave, she would wait until the day after the other students left to give Dumbledore the idea that she was going along with the Yule Ball idea. When he lets his guard down the day after she would silently sneak out from the forbidden forest and then fly away to the airport.
Adriane got an idea and walked to her desk and started writing a letter.
Dear Grinlast,
I am writing to inform you that during the Christmas break I shall be going over to the United States to hopefully meet the superhero named Superman. I can feel you judging his name from here so I shall inform you that he did not choose this name, it is what the public named him and he just went with it. He is also from the planet Krypton like my birth mother. It appears that his parents managed to save him and his cousin, Supergirl, Just like my mother managed to save me.
I believe that he could teach me a lot about some of my powers, and also my mother's home planet. As you know the first task wasn't that long ago, well what you may not know is that the dragon's tail managed to get a hit in and hurt me. It broke my skin and made me bleed, I now have a scar on my shoulder blades thanks to me not being careful enough while battling a dragon.
I'm hopeful that Superman can explain why the dragon managed to hurt me like that, I would like to ask you to please purchase a plane ticket to metropolis city, this city is the same city that superman operates in most of the time. The plane should leave the day after the students return home.
Dumbledore and the Professors will most likely be expecting me to try and leave with the students so they will be keeping a closer eye on me that day. They shouldn't expect me to try and leave the day after the train leaves for London. Since they wouldn't believe that I have a way to travel that far on my own without them catching me.
I would also like you to see if you can purchase controlling shares of the daily prophet. If you can then please inform them that the new owner orders them to only print the truth that has evidence that they can prove. No more speculation or lies, I refuse to allow that rag to write anymore crap about me.
Pardon my language, it had been a long day.
I hope your blades drip with the blood of your enemies,
Lady Adriane Kenna Dive Potter Black Griffindor Slytherin Ravenclaw Merlin.
Lady of the house of Potter. Lady of the house of Griffindor. Lady of the house of Ravenclaw. Lady of the house of Merlin. Lady of the house of On. Heir to the House of Black.
Adriane sighed relieved when she was done with the letter. Calling Dobby she asked him to take it to Grinlast and told him that she was going to bed since packing and writing the letter both took a while.
It took another week before Adriane heard back from Grinlast so she was very excited when Doppy Popped in and handed her a letter after she left her room in the chamber that morning. She immediately sat at the table she had brought down there and opened it.
Dear Lady Adriane Kenna Dive Potter Black Griffindor Slytherin Ravenclaw Merlin.
Your letter was very informative. I have people looking into the superheroes in the muggle world, we had not been aware that there were more people with powers like yours out there. If we had known we would have tried to acquire one of them for when we were training you in the time chamber. Although everything seems to have turned out alright so far.
In regards to your wish about purchasing controlling shares in the Daily Prophet, that has been done. That is, in fact, the reason why this letter is getting to you so late, my apologies. We here at Gringgots have managed to get it so you now own 89% of the daily prophet. I will admit that it was tricky when we were explaining the new rules to the employees that worked there.
A woman that we have since learned is named Rita Skeeter demanded to speak to the owner and, that creatures had no right to tell her what she is and is not allowed to print in the paper. We took great joy in correcting this woman that we did, in fact, have the right and that the owner wished to be unknown as of this time.
We have one of our researcher Goblins posted at the Daily Prophet's building. This will ensure that little to nothing that has no proof will be able to slip through. We also made it clear that people needed to either give memories of the proof they had seen, or physical evidence of it. This will keep people like Rita Skeeter from making up false proof to be able to get it into the paper.
Now in regards to the other thing you asked of me in your letter. Inclosed in the envelope you will find a plane ticket that I had one of our muggle-born workers acquire for you. It leaves the day after the train at 5:00 pm sharp so please do not be late.
I do look forward to hearing about your trip when you get back.
May your enemies lay dead at your feet,
Great care, Grinlast.
Adriane smiled widely when she found the ticket inside the envelope just like the letter said. The train left in a few days so she would have plenty of time to pack. She decided to secretly head down to Hogsmead to get a jump start on some Christmas shopping.
Adriane took off her watch and using her metamorph abilities she changed her hair to light brown and put it in a ponytail. She changed her eyes to a night teal color before she started getting dressed.
She grabbed some black and white striped tights that had a warming charm on them. She wore a black knee-length skirt and a t-shirt that had the words 'Stay back, I don't want to catch stupid' on it.
After putting on a nice white jacket she was ready to go to the town. Calling Winky, She had her pop Adriane down to the town.
Adriane smiled softly as she started walking around the town, picking up things she thought her friends might like. Adriane figured that she could go shopping over in the states too. It would probably be easier over there considering there would be so many more shops to look at with new things in them.
Adriane grabbed a butterbeer from the three broomsticks before she decided to go on a nice walk around the town. She decided to take a small break and just enjoy the sight of the town covered in a light layer of snow.
It was nice, it reminded her why she fought so hard for others to be able to live in peace.
Adriane smirked to herself as she boarded the plane leaving for America. She had been right in thinking that the professors would relax the day after the train left. It made it so much easier to silently sneak away from the school, she was relieved that she wouldn't need to wear that stupid watch throughout her vacation. Adriane did not need to use a glamour to pretend to be a boy on the other side of the ocean after all.
Adriane sighed and looked out the plane window as she got settled for a couple of hours of sitting down doing nothing. She knew that she could have flown over much faster on her own, but then she would be in the state illegally and that wasn't something she wanted. She didn't want to give anyone a reason to look into how she managed to get from London to America.
That would probably be a nightmare to deal with, so traveling by plane it was. No matter how slow and boring it was.
_Several hours later Adriane was stretching her limbs out after the long flight. She was so glad that it was over and done with for now. Instead of taking a taxi, Adriane decided to walk to the nearest, good, hotel.
After she checked in she would see about getting a tour of the Daily Planet, maybe she could meet Lios Lane and get her help for getting Superman's attention. Lios Lane was apparently one of the only people superman regularly spoke with at the newspaper. Adriane was hopeful that this way she wouldn't need to go to fights to try and get a small chance to talk with Superman.
She would go tomorrow to set up a time to tour the newspaper, right now she would going to sleep off her jetlag.
I hope you all enjoyed this chapter! I really liked all your suggestions, sadly I couldn't use all of them because some ideas just wouldn't fit into the story I want to tell. Now she will not be meeting Batman during her time training with Superman, I want their meeting to be during the summer.
Also please tell help me decide on something else. Do we want Adriane to be introduced to the Dbz gang when they're heading to Namik, or during the andriod saga? I'm personally a fan of the Namik one.
