Chapter 16:
Sup i'm alive, sorry for not updating, to those who came back i lost my account password.
Also, to FerunaLutelou, and falox2 you right, i need work on my english hard, also english is hard not gonna lie, captions sucks cause i'm used to gamer talk no captions and points and all that.
Also falox2 you're a genius i didnt think of doing that, thanks man.
Now enough of me bitching lets get on with the story.
"Ughhhh," Nashi sounded out as he looked up to punch his alarm clock.
"Hmmm? Where the fuck is everyone?" I said as I walked around looking for them, he even opened the bathroom pretty sure Gray would be there trying to float water.
"Hmmm, what?" He asked as he looked around his house until he saw something in his living room, and on the table, there was a bag on top of it.
Walking to it he finds a piece of paper on top of it with some writing, sitting down and lifting the paper he saw writing.
-hello original, if you are reading this it means you are awake, next time make sure you don't push yourself to exhaustion, I mean you are the original and unlike us, you don't die or pop out of existence when you exhaust yourself of chakra, but anyways thanks for helping us out. Ps I made your favorite-
"Hmmm, I don't remember passing out," I told myself as I sat cross-legged thinking about what happened last night and…
[flashback]
Last night.
"Sup guys," I said as I opened the lid and was surprised by the wooden walls of the hole, and even the ladder hammered on the walls.
Looking down a head popped out from one of the corners, "yo, original is here," someone said out loud and by the looks of it, I see a blond with red tips, making me see that its red. (A/N: imagine rengoku family hair)
"Yo original get down here," someone with blue hair said, he wore glasses and he had a head of blue hair that goes smoothly down until they reach his ears to which they begin to stick out. (A/N: imagine hans from fgo)
Shrugging I just jumped down and landed, looking up I was greeted with a weird sight.
"Welcome boss, to the first floor of the basement," Blue said as he spread his hands out, showing me the wooden room that was a 50 by 50-foot wall box, but aside from its width and length, the room was only six feet tall, probably so if we had an intruder plus there's a lot of pillars for them to hide on.
There were some thick pillars enough to hide behind it done by sanding down logs to make a circle, because if not I start to wonder how in the name of god did they get epoxy, but varnish and wood finished are kind of understandable since in Konoha most of our houses are basically wood, there are some concrete but it is far too small and thin to help with anything.
Looking around I noticed something. "Where is brown and gray?" I asked since I didn't see them around.
"Oh them, yeah Brown is power digging, and Gray is walking home to get extra chakra to take Brown's place," Blue said as Red looked down the hole.
"Ok, red tell him I'll change places with him, prepare to add some pillars," I said as I put on a hard hat that was placed to the side for them to use.
"Ok, but before you go, here have this," Blue said while handing me a pick axe, and a bag with a seal on it.
"Did we hit a rock?" I asked an obvious question.
"Duh, now stop asking and get to working," Blue said as he took a different scroll which I assume holds the pillars and materials to make the frames so that it doesn't collapse on us.
"Thanks for helping boss, but why did you want to switch so suddenly?" Brown asked as he left the hole.
"That's a simple question brown, it's so that I can get some work in, since I'm the original and the work I'm employed in I kind of need a lot of muscle strength and all that, plus I will be going to sleep in the next couple of hours, since I think its six pm now, and in the next four hours I need to sleep for tomorrow," I said as I patted his surprisingly taller shoulder, he now had short brown hair that spikes up, not to mention he is slightly taller than everyone here.
After Red got out I then just jumped down and started hammering away at the walls with my pickaxe, putting in browns muscle memories, mixing with Blue's chakra control training method, I soon just did some none stop picking while trying to use or enforce the memories my clones had to increase my proficiency and effectivity.
After mostly focusing on getting to the level of his clones in only a few hours it was easy since we are generally on the same level, some slightly stronger than the others, aside from the memories doing something was helpful, since they have already done this for almost a week now but adding chakra was recent but it did help.
After three hours of finely controlling chakra to empower my body, basically substituting most of my needed energy and stamina with it while simultaneously increasing my destructive force, though behind me blue just kept taking the rocks that were smashed up, basically cleaning my messes.
[end of flashback]
"Hmmm, I guess I died of exhaustion, but let's look at what Gray gave me," I said while getting closer to the plastic Tupperware.
Opening the small Tupperware inside was a normal breakfast, there was your usual Asian breakfast staple rice, and aside from that there was sunny side up eggs, hotdogs, and a dish I found to be delicious, it was an eggplant that was charred, peeled, then smashed gently with a fork, add battered eggs, onion, garlic, and tomato slices, and cooked over oil, they called it tortang talong.
"Welp I got to say thanks, but dam the sun is just rising," I said as I looked outside to see the sky still colored dark blue slowly being turned to blue by the rising sun.
"Welp who am I to ignore this," I said while I stood up and picked up some utensils and ate.
As usual, he then took a bath, got ready, and dashed off to get my ass to the training ground, it was a simple thing to do, it was literally the crack of dawn, aside from him there were some ninjas that seem to be preparing the whole village, some going to the hokage tower, some to the towers on the wall, and some to the walls directly, but most of them went to the hokage tower few went to the other districts though such as a workplace.
Reaching the hokage tower, I ran past it reaching the wall, I quickly ran up the wall, seconds later I was at the faces, reaching there I thought I might as well do one last joke on the faces, being near Hashirama's ear I punched a hole at, I crumbled the rocks and after that, I placed an oak seed inside it.
"Hehehehe,"
After that I ran upwards and passed the edge, reaching there I looked around, what I saw was as Sir Hayate had told me, there was a small hut, but aside from that there were some trees generously sprinkled around, but what interested me was the path, to the right it seems to be connected to the small hut, and to the left was the river that circled around the village, but straight ahead seems to lead to nowhere except for a crack on the ground.
Reaching the end of the middle road I was met with a very far drop, looking around I saw nothing but rock except for the small amount of water below, part of me felt like jumping and landing safely like in those cartoons, but part of me also said that's stupid and proceeded to curb stomp that part.
"Well I'm guessing this is the place," I said as I saw a small cave in the ravine. "Welp I guess the impulsive thoughts won, AHHHHHH!!!!!" I screamed out as I jumped from where I was to the other side, but clearly failed intentionally as I dropped, noticing that I was getting closer to the wall I activated my ability and pushed chakra outwards, making the film of contained chakra bubble up and form spikes due to the contrasts things I'm doing, a bloodline meant to contain and an action to push, doing those empowered my body due to the chakra being roughly sucked in back over charging the muscles and skin from the chakra being added inside and the leaking chakra being added to the action.
Soon I had slammed into the wall with my body coated with what looked like a tailed beast cloak but colored blue and not red, slamming into the wall I didn't bounce as I fell with my hand having a claw like the shape of chakra around it grinding against the wall, noticing the small cave I jumped aiming for it, turning off my bloodline the chakra stopped fighting and acted like a thruster as I focused it on the bottom of my feet, now rocketing through the air I was seconds from the ground, but before hitting it face first I activated my bloodline only for a second to absorb the impact.
"WOOOOHOOOO!!!!, I love doing that," I said as I picked myself up and patted myself down, after that I looked around, noticing nothing was going on, and the fact no one was there I decided to do some meditating while I was down here, my chakra control is good and all but compared to blue my chakra is like tap water to his pure water, so I'm still on the path to refining, plus with my slowly diminishing gains.
I don't really know if I am having diminishing gains but comparing myself to Naruto, Sasuke, Kiba, and everyone else I'm kind of falling far behind, if I didn't have a large arsenal of tricks I don't know if I could beat them, I mean in the recent mission showed my shortcomings, so I need to refine my usage of elements, I should probably tell blue and gray to train on one of those elements.
Plus since my chakra is small compared to someone like Naruto but I'm pretty good up there since I'm just below Sasuke in terms of our pool of chakra, so since I can't have hacks like Naruto I'm going to have to have enough control over my chakra to not waste a single drop.
Or in simple terms, I should work on it myself, that would be more productive, plus I'm already giving my clones a big job since we're here trying to do that ass pull I read in one of the fanfictions, so I'm already giving them a high bar to catch and there already close to it, also I need to mention their new changes in my clones? red still looks like Rengoku so nothing changed there.
Blue how ever changed, from his generic straight hair now he has some rise, also not to mention his sharper face and those blue eyes, combine those he looks like Hans from fate grand order, also don't forget about his glasses.
Brown didn't change much, his hair is still short and brown, and he is taller and more muscular, what changed was his face, since he now looks more angular, if he ever wears a red bandana I'm going to call him Ryu, cause he looks like ryu from street fighter.
Gray however, let's say he changed drastically, because if I didn't know better, or if he wasn't inside my house I would genuinely ask how the fuck did Dr Franken Stein get here, though he was missing the gray skin since his was pale, not to mention the stitches and screw through his skull.
I guess my one week of being out of the village doing that mission has changed everyone, but it could be that they all wanted it and just waited for the right time, but that's kind of none of my business because I have to change a lot, I mean the first time I just got bigger clothing, the second time was changing my clothes to be more ninja-like since I got dark green pants that has the same color but a tad darker shade of color than the full body suit lee wears, and mute brown shirt, third was when I started to pick up Urahara clothing so I can't really complain.
And so as I drowned in my own memories I felt someone poke my cheek, after feeling someone's touch on my cheek I slowly opened my eyes.
As my deep obsidian eyes opened, I was slightly blinded by the light that seems to have gotten brighter, as my eyes adjusted I finally noticed that everyone was there, the one poking me was Sai himself, and behind him was Tsubaki and Hayate.
"Hmm?" I groggily asked as I was basically half asleep, noticing Sai and everyone else I rubbed my eyes. "What time is it?" I asked.
"Good morning pukes, I think 7 am now," he said.
"2 hours huh," I said as I slowly stood up.
"Well aren't you early," Hayate said.
"I mean you didn't tell us the time, I got here around 6 in the morning," Tsubaki said.
"Oh, you didn't know?" Sai said.
"Know what?" I asked after noticing he won't add anything after that.
"Well every Jonin needs to make a debrief to the hokage, after that everyone can continue on their move," Sai said.
"So, does that generally take two hours?" I asked while stretching.
"Well there is more to it, bu- *cough* *cough* but, ugh, there is more to it," Hayate said.
"You really need to get that checked sir," I said.
"I have, but aside from pain relief and medicine to not be negatively affected by it I would need someone like Tsunade at this point," Hayate said.
"Yeah, too bad the greatest medic in the world kind of left, I mean I would too but instead of hiding I would find them and slaughter them all," I said.
"Ok, enough with the small talk we train now," Hayate said as he clapped, soon we all gathered standing next to each other.
"Today I will be training you to strengthen your body," he said as he pulled out a piece of paper and coughed into a handkerchief.
Sai raised his hand. "Yes, Sai?"
"Why do we need to increase our physical strength," he said.
"Well it's so that when chakra is not available you won't be limited, many shinobi have fallen to this so it's best to not be too reliant on it, now I want you to equip these," he said as he dropped a bag.
"Hmm," I said as I squatted down and opened the bag.
"What's inside?" Tsubaki asked as Sai leaned in to look.
"Looks like their weights, chakra active by the looks of it, so if we try to increase our parameters with chakra they would increase in weight," I said.
"Well they don't look heavy if you can lift it like that," Tsubaki said.
"Well I'm guessing it's not set yet since the seal isn't complete," I said while pointing at the center that didn't have the set weight on it.
"He is right, before you equip them, tell me how much weight can you work with," Hayate said.
"I can go for about 150, so 200 kg should work," Sai said.
"Same for me," Tsubaki said.
"Hmmm, I got about 250 on my ass currently, so about 400kg would work," I said.
"Wait isn't that too excessive," Hayate said as he quirked an eyebrow.
"Yeah doubling yours from ours won't make you look cool," Tsubaki said.
I looked at her with dead eyes. "Look if he is willing to do this for us I'm going to milk this till its dry, I'm an orphan if I didn't join the NTP (ninja training program) I wouldn't even be here, and aside from the stipend that the hokage gave us I wouldn't even have the equipment I have today, and since I'm technically a full fledged adult now I can't even get that, so if someone is going to train me I will push it to the limit, because if you forgot I'm a dam orphan with no family," I said surprising the girl, Sai didn't show any outward emotion, and Hayate looked at everyone.
"Well then with that said and done let's move on towards our training," Hayate said as he passed around the rest of the team.
Sai, Tsubaki, and I have an equal distribution around our bodies as small bands with small metal rods inside, a seal was made in the middle and some writing going around the entire band and a vest, aside from the design he had one band on each limb which they can decide how and where its placed, last one was a vest in the middle, aside from that after hearing my words both Sai and Tsubaki chose to increase there weights to 300, mine was still 400.
Also, I think our teacher has a sadistic side because our first mission was to get out of the ravine, and oh boy did I give him that look, I looked at him with those emotionless face and eyes showing nothing leaving to guess what I am thinking about, I did it until he flinched, unnoticeable to most but brought a smile to my face.
After making him uncomfortable I rubbed the bottom of my sandals to get as much dust as I could to increase my grip, I soon walked towards the wall making the weight more noticeable, reaching the outside I looked up and sighed deeply, after that I just pushed and climbed, Sai and Tsubaki followed me.
Generally, our training is similar to mine, and here is the formula,
step one give impossible odds.
Step two exhaust them half to death.
Step three give them an incredibly short break, 30 seconds to a minute or so.
Step four double step one.
Step five enjoy the show.
And with those steps, he forced us to climb the ravine with weights going up and back down to the room.
Reaching the cave we were told to do calisthenics a hundred of each.
And last but not least was the sparring match, and I have to say the sparring matches were interesting, Sai took advantage of every opening he could humanly find and if he cant find one he makes one, he was fast, agile, and slippery despite the weights, at first you would ask yourself if he was even wearing them, but looking at how soaked his shirt was you know it was messing with him.
Tsubaki, on the other hand, was a whole different beast, like Sai she was fast and agile, but that's where their similarity ends because she is super flexible, you know that scene when Maki fought Yuta, because dam she nearly got me with that one, the only reason I got out was because I was physically stronger, also she fights like a dam hyuga, she doesn't block pathways or anything but she injects her chakra into the body, and the funny thing is when someone forcibly injects chakra into someone it hurts like hell, like god tried to jam a burning rod in my skin making me feel like I was boiling inside, also did you know she was fast? because its nearly impossible to catch her unless I purposely set her up, like when I faked a lariat to make her bend back just to use the momentum of my fake when I passed her to leg sweep her into an armlock, so I'm pretty sure she would have won if I didn't copy Shirou's hand to hand style, no form, or style but fluid in motion.
Me on the other hand, well let's just say I don't look so good, I am the one with the most wins in this fight but I also feel like the looser because I have the most bruises of them all, Sai's punches sucked since he was strong, not just that he was incredibly crafty as well, punching me from angles I didn't know, when parrying he pinches my skin or anything to irritate it, also when I punch him he bleeds the punch off by jumping back or follow the momentum of the strike, not to mention his kicks when he does that.
Tsubaki might have done the worst damage on me, because right now I still feel like shit, her punches would send what I sensed to be shockwaves through my body almost like a direct contact chakra burst but more controlled and refined, aside from her punches she has her little stabs at me, she does them when she dodged, parry, or counter, and after my session with her, I got multiple red marks around my torso and arms, lucky enough she isn't like hinata where she perfectly aims for the chakra points to shutdown a part of my body so no electric feeling, but dam does my arm feel numb, she may not be able to disable them but does she block some senses.
After that we were told to train ourselves we were told to leave and keep the weights if we wanted to, and as you know I kept it, because ow boy do I want to get on that rock Lee training, I even tried to look for rock lee and his father bushy lee, no matter what people said on the internet I still consider them father and son, I mean look at them even there relationship mirrors a goofy father and son dynamic.
Anyways walking home I had a noticeable limp, reaching the stairs I sat down and activated my ability, Sai and Tsubaki went off early since they were allowed to go take off their weights and I just pushed myself to go without chakra, since it absorbs chakra and didn't want to increase the weight as I climbed, so sitting down I tried to advance my healing just to feel them get heavier, stopping the flow of chakra I went up the stairs and looked around, seeing a tree I went under it hiding myself from the sun, laying down I got to see the sky and the sun was already passed noon I think about 3 pm.
Laying down I let the chakra flow, the sad part is that the seals absorb chakra lessening my recovery, and activating my bloodline which lessened the absorption but increased the cost of my healing since I have to focus on two things.
After the weight reached the point that I felt like it would crush my bone I stopped actively using my chakra and the pressure left me slowly but surely, soon after I repeated it, after a while I felt like my body was good enough, I then stood up and walked towards the end of the cliff, taking in a deep breath I then climbed down.
-Also speaking or thinking about Lee and his equally bushy browed guardian I can't seem to find where the fuck they are, I've looked around the village for the past few years now, since I wanted to ask them about how to unlock the gates, I mean its quite literally one of the strongest transformations in the dam world not adding bloodlines and tailed beast, I mean what ability boosts can you naturally get that can get you to the point of being able to kick a madara that's arguably a god into the dirt, because I'll wait, the hundred healing might be a close second but being a meat shield is not my thing since that's more Naruto's thing,- I rambled in my head as I reached the bottom.
After reaching the bottom I walked towards where I remembered their training ground to be located, walking there people gave me a wide birth, people didn't look at me with disgust or anger I mean some did but what I could mostly see was worry and disgust, I mean I am damaged as hell, I was dirty, rips were visible in my clothes, I looked like a homeless brat, but I didn't hold and just told myself to remind my dumbass to remove clothes before training.
After forcing myself to stop limping and walking normally I reached their training ground, and as usual, they were training, Naruto was still training to master chakra boost shown as he joined Sasuke in a game of tag in a giant circle only stepping inside small circles enough to fit the very tip of there foots sole and toes, however, the difference in there usage is shown with the sounds, Sasuke is back to the natural silent body flicker, while Naruto always emitted a buzzing noise every time he uses chakra boost, though it's clear that Naruto has improved because he usually only moves in straight lines and now he seems to be able to control the direction while not getting off the circle.
However Sakura is the only one being personally taught by Kakashi on how to stand on water, but aside from that she seems to be ragged to which I assume comes from her being trained, I mean her long hair is all in a bundle to which reminded me of my shoulder length hair, I used to have it pretty long just at the top of my back but after being slapped by it while training chakra boost I decided to ultimately cut it cause im not dealing with that, especially in a fight.
After watching for a bit I continued on my way, while taking note of Kakashi's quick glance.
Continuing my walk I reached the forest I continued to walk until I saw four trees with four symbols on them, which actually made more sense now after their little changes.
One had a skull with crosses for eyes and a screw piercing through the side.
One had a fire with a familiar smile on it.
One had a symbol of what looked like a boy with a book and a mermaid floating over him.
And one last is a familiar symbol of a sideways fireball.
"So Stein, Rengoku, I don't know who this one is, but looking deeper it seems to be the little mermaid, books, glasses, ahh Hans Christian Anderson but he looked like the fgo version, and last one would be Ryu from street fighter, dam my clones are as much of a fucking nerd as I am, though it makes me wonder if I can throw a Hadouken in this world, I mean Naruto can throw fucking rasen shuriken, people can spit out elements so if possible I would like to, but enough rambling lets go down," after my silent mutterings I kneeled down and moved some of the leaves and gripped the grass and pulled and what could be seen was a hole.
Looking around to make sure no one was around I then entered the hole and covered it as I go down, this time however I did not jump down because I didn't want to crush my bones, so upon reaching the bottom I noticed that the floor was directly under me and not like the previous time where there was a six foot distance from the roof to floor.
However looking around he saw no one, walking over to the second hole to enter the second floor which was going to be made for blue as soon as I got closer I heard loud shouts and them singing the generic army song.
"I don't know what I've been told," someone yelled out and a chorus of sounds came to life.
After hearing that I just climbed down and saw brown and red shirtless and covered in sweat while yelling after every strike, after seeing this I just smiled at the group of idiots I made 4 years ago.
After recollecting I just picked up the pickaxe and equipped a hard hat and silently joined them and they in turn just smiled along as they continued to sing and swing.
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"Hmm, the moon is beautiful tonight," a boy said out as he sat on top of what looked like to be a giant sabertooth tiger.
"Too bad, this beast broke my blade," he said with a sigh, jumping down from the corpse he walked around, after approaching a tree he stopped for a second, and a second later a soft glow appeared over his blade and a swift slash could be heard.
"This should do," he said as the sword severed a tree.
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Minutes later a fire was made and beside it were skewers of meat, and beside it was a boy wearing deep purple and light purple robes, adding to his purple hair you could think that it was his favorite or something.
While the boy chewed on his skewered meat he pulled out his blade. "I'm sorry my friend, you were a great companion and I will bury you with respect, but I'm sorry because I may need to continue to use you," he said as his blade was now only an arm's length now, from its three foot blade now there is only a two feet blade, looking at the beast behind him there was an unfinished slash on its neck that held a silver glint, and the sword on his hand was shattering and crumbling.
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"BOSS!!! BOSS!!! BOSS!!!" A well-dressed man ran while opening two giant doors.
"I TOLD YOU TO NOT DISTURB ME UNLESS IF ITS IMPORTANT!!!" A rotund man said as two women scantily dressed were dancing on his lap.
"B-BU-BUT SIR THEY S-S-SENT THE HOUND!!!" He screamed out as fighting could be heard behind him fighting along with screaming and squelching.
"WHAT, THOSE NORTH TIGER BASTERDS!!!" He yelled out while slamming the table with his hand. "SEND THE NINJA!" He yelled out but before his minion could respond a body crashed through the walls along with a spear a foot and a half of the spear was red and the 6 foot was still silver, but what shocked them the most was because the man on the end of the spear was the ninja he just mentioned.
"W-w-what!?!?!" The boss said while the minion fell down and his pants were stained with a liquid.
"John Brawlder, you have stepped out of line, killing 5 men and selling drugs in the north tiger's territory, the price will be your life," he said as he pulled the spear out of the man's chest.
"W-wait, i-i-I can pay you, i-if its money i-I can pay, I can pay 5 times what they are paying," the fat man said out as he fell to the floor as his entertainers left him.
Hearing his proposal he just ignored it and walked closer, getting closer he could smell the man, and it was a disgusting strong smell of alcohol, and his offensive odor, and it looks like he was about to speak but before he could a spear was jammed in his throat, the fat man choked on his own blood and looked at the boy.
The boy, however, looked up and jumped crashing through the roof, and upon reaching the apex of his jump the boy turned around his cloak opened and they finally saw on his left hand, it was a spear that you could buy in any store though brittle and cracked the boy continued to hold it, throughout his mission, he had never used it since he never used it, but it wasn't that he never used it, but its because he had one use for it and they finally saw it.
The boy held the spear in a reverse grip, what was once thought to be a useless spear has finally shown its true color, as the spear shone brightly in a blue color, the cracks shone blue, and then silver and brown was no more as its color was covered in blue a light, when the light shone like a second moon he tossed it and as it came rocketing down, as it came down it showed why no one had any information why he ever had two spears but refuse to use the other, it was not that he didn't use it, but it was the fact that no one lived to tell about the tail, as the spear hit the ground and from the south a small explosion caused the village to shake slightly.
When he landed there was nothing but debris, there was no fire, no overly huge destruction, but it was just a destroyed building not even his spear was left behind but that was to be expected since he did pack a lot of power into it, the boy soon flickered out of existence as there was nothing left.
Chapter end.
Sup peeps I wish you a good life and thanks for reading this far, though I would like to ask do you want me to explain my choices at the end of the stories or just let you figure it out yourselves, because if you want me to explain it kind of takes the fun out of it.
Anyways question of the day:
Who do you think in Naruto would make the strongest baby? I mean if Orochimaru just got bored one day and decided to make the most broken child out there?
For me it would be lee and Sakura, I mean just imagine the carnage, lee has massive reserves shown by him being able to flood the gates in his body to open them, Sakura was literally genetically good with chakra control, I mean look at her no ninja family but she could reach fucking hokage level, I know she is like an ant to someone like Naruto, bro had a fucking ninja linage, both had something to fuck over anyone, Sasuke with his eyes, Naruto with kurama, and both were reincarnation of gods, I mean they had the perfect hand in life, sad they got the short end of living it, but seriously with hundred healing she can store 100 times her normal chakra, if there child learns fucking sage mode and perfectly mixes it in that seal oh boy she would be a forever sage, plus give there child 8 gates she would theoretically not die since the 8 gates only kill you once and there child can die a hundred times, plus i bet with tsunade or Sakura's medical knowledge a punctured heart could easily be fixed, I mean in Naruto Tsunade fixed Choji's fucking ripped apart heart from him using the red pill, so I stand my case Sakura and Lee child would and could slap the shit out of madara no sweat.
Anyways thanks for reading and have a great rest of your day fish out.
Also tell me if I missed some spelling mistakes or if you want to ask some questions, bye.
