Hey everyone this is AtomicflapJacks (Just call me Atomic) and this fanfic is one where Deku (Izuku Midoriya) has the same abilities as Jiren since Deku definitely been like Jiren as in like cold and secluded and not trusting anyone. this will be an OP!Izuku fanfic and there wont be any dbs characters in this one its just Deku who has a similar Behaviour pattern as Jiren and similar powers unless if I change my mind. He wont be borderline invincible but he wont be easy to beat in a fight. (Izuku will be getting one for all but at a later date, not when he normally did in the first season but he will get one for all, ill make sure to include the vestiges of One For All are lot more earlier when he gets OFA.) this is my first fanfic so if it is kind of trash then sorry I just need experience with writing, and that means the fight scenes are going to be slow, the characters might lack emotion due to me since well, exclamation marks. there wont be any Love at the beginning or middle or even the end as far as I know, but keep in mind all the women are in love due to Izuku not being a cinnamon roll this time around he is going to have some spine and will have the same muscular physique as Jiren along with scars. he will have ssj4 hair in combination with his now dark green fluffy hair, he will be around 6ft 8in. Izuku's dad is All for one and he wont be a douchebag but a caring well villain dad and Tomura will care about Izuku and will have an overprotective behaviour and a tiny possessive behaviour over his baby brother (yes he will be calling him that.)
that is about all the notes I have. in the future there will be less words in the future its just that this is the first chapter so I just want to let you readers know. since this is my first story I might drop it but this is just to see if ill ever come back to write another chapter, so no promises in finishing this story but I'd rather not.
5:30 AM
Musutafu city was nothing but silent as the orange shimmering light called a star in the sky lit up every dark crevice in the city... well most of them
Midoriya Apartment
this old home seems like a tomb in this current state as not a single shred of light dared to enter. This home seemed to be a home for a family of three because it was once. then there were two. then there was one and only one.
there was no noise in this tomb like home the tiniest mice could be heard scurrying across the floor and the dust can be heard moving around in this black abyss once filled with a set of smiles reduced to nothing but dead silence. in every room was like that dead silence, not a single one dared to make noise and not a single one had any source of living... well most of them, one had a door sign that read "Izuku Midoriya" belonging to someone who has been robbed of childlike glee. you open a door to see a muscular and handsome teenager who is floating in a meditative stance with his eyelids shut tight. it seems he is not paying attention but that is farther from the truth. he deemsa almost everything a waste of time, that might makes right and decides all.
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7:40 AM
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For once there was an alarming sound (it was an alarm clock) that made the floating, silent person open his eyes and read "7:40 AM" "Hmm" he mumbled as he started getting ready for his day at Aldera Middle School by gathering his essentials that were spread across on his table. the two things Midoriya treats seriously is his training and (his meditative stance helps with this.) his quirk analysis journals (he writes in it so he is able to read a situation faster and handle it better without having to resort to physical experience but memory) are something to behold of easily rivalling people with analysis quirks and he has written a number of them (currently at no13.) after packing journal no.13 he made his way to the shower to wash his hair (he has a-lot of hair so I just had to point it out) and clean his body. Midoriya made it to the kitchen to make his favourite food which is Katsudon, he ate in a hurry and put on his uniform and grabbed his bag and left to Aldera with hopefully no Distractions... but one can only hope so.
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8:20 AM
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While ignoring the lustful stares from women as he walked to his school, a crowd caught his view.
"RRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH"
A giant villain stood on railways on top of a bridge where he was causing a scene, there were pro heroes trying to handle the situation but not doing so easily but that was fair since they did not have the best quirks for this operation but in the end they would manage. It caught the attention of Izuku and gave him the urge to pull out his notebook to start writing in it assessing the situation and what could be done along with fighting styles and quirks as you watch heroes like death-arms and Kamui woods try to handle the situation while backdraft was just creating a safety line for the bystanders which Midoriya deemed to be useless attempt to play hero but did not want to point anything out. "Anybody know why this guy decided to go berserk in the middle of the city?" "he was stealing some purses and got cornered so he had no other choice." "wow with a power like that he is just a petty thief. how typical" two bystanders said which Izuku added to his notes "illegal quirk usage during rush hour! and theft resulting in bodily injury. You are the incarnation of Evil!" Izuku could not help but scoff at his "Overdramatic Line" for crimes as simple and as minute as that but a crime is a crime, but still it was a bit much but decided to keep quiet as he tried to read The wood Hero and what move he would use. Kamui pulled his arm back and tiny branches sprouted off and the 6ft giant knew this move but It would not work in his favor
"BINDING LACQUERE CHAINS PRISON!" Kamui woods said enthusiastically just to promote his move
'binding Lacquere chains prison.' Midoriya said in his mind unenthusiastically since he knew he would not be the one to gain the glory
"CANYON CANNON" A large 20 meter woman appeared out of no where and drop kicked the giant villain knocking him out effectively while surprising everyone par Midoriya since he sensed her running towards the situation "Today marks the day of my debut! Hi everyone I'm Mount lady~ and its a pleasure to make your ass-quaintance~" the new heroine says pointing her rear end to the bystanders as a means to gain popularity and followers. Midoriya but couldn't help but grumble at the heroine for using her body to gain popularity just for her own good. Checking the time it reads 8:35 AM 'spent longer here then I thought' he finished with his journal and made his way to aldera.
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ALDERA MIDDLE SCHOOL
8:40 AM
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'5 minutes early. Good' he opened the door to his classroom and saw that people were already there. The room got suddenly colder for everyone else when the door opened as they noticed Izuku Midoriya walk in, not paying attention or giving anyone else a glance. his classmates all looked in slight fear some worst then others as they recalled the incident a couple weeks ago. All his classmates learned that you do not fuck with Midoriya.
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Flashback Start.
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it was currently lunchtime Midoriya was sitting by himself in silence with his eyes closed and arms crossed In order to drown out the noise that came from everybody else, just waiting till the bell rings and he can go to class and go home. he was ignoring all the gossip from the girls about him, his physique and his looks. all the girls were in love with him and he knew, he just did not want to confront them since it was a waste of his time and they were leaving him alone and he would treat them the same way as they treated him. some random girl decided to bring up the courage and confront the handsome devil (she was just hitting on him in hopes she would slither into his heart and gain a powerful, hot boyfriend who would protect her) and talk to him. the table she was at looked at her with curiosity as she was going to confront Midoriya when no-one else tried to.
"Hey~ its Midoriya right? Izuku Midoriya~" she said in a flirty and slightly seductive tone hoping he would be needy for love. but how wrong she was as he opened his eyes and gave a cold glare which should give anyone the memo of 'leave me be,' the teen flinched at the cold glare and become the centre of attention but kept pushing on him in hopes she would win him over to her side and only hers. some girls got jealous and gossiped about her. "Hey! no need to be so cold cutie~ just want to know you a little bit more handsome~" she said in a much more seductive tone as she was getting more touchy and even touched his chest. all the girls were extremely jealous and were pouting about the girl who was trying to steal their dream boy.
The Lunch Hall was now cold, freezingly cold. as one boy was now emanating traits of bloodlust, discipline and focus. everyone froze at the sudden change of atmosphere and looked to the source only to see Izuku Midoriya with a larger scowl on his face and now stood up looking directly at his target (which was the ignorant girl) with the intent to kill. she was frozen in fear, all those traits and emotions were directed at her! she couldn't even move, breathe, blink hell! Think! she was only trying to find the words to use to beg for forgiveness in hopes she would be spared the death penalty. Midoriya grabbed the girl by her hair and lifted her up to eye level to make sure she got the message and chose his words "I have no time for weaklings like you, who need to rely on others to get the job done. Might makes Right and decides all."
the entire lunch hall was still in shock due to fear. while the girl was taking it the worst since it was directed straight at her! Midoriya dropped the girl and she fell on her rear end still in frozen in fear, some people fell on there butt due to fear. this would serve as a permanent reminder to not fuck with Midoriya.
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Flashback end.
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2:15 PM
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it was getting close to the end of the day, as the teacher walked in carrying a small stack of papers, walking over to his podium. "all right then everyone its your last year at Aldera and now you have to decide where you want to go for your future... But why does that matter. Your all going to the hero course!" the entire class erupted into cheers (par Midoriya) with everyone showing off there quirks in excitement of there future as pro heroes but Izuku knew only a tiny handful of his 'classmates' had much of a chance of going to be official pro's. "yes, yes, I know you all have impressive quirks but no quirk usage at school!" the students ignored his demand and kept on using them until a loud bang echoed through the room and the halls outside gaining the attention of everyone to look at the catalyst of the noise "Oi teach! don't lump me in with these rejects, the extra's will be lucky enough to make it as a sidekick to a D tier hero. I'll be the only one to make it to the Top!" a loud and extremely arrogant voice rang through everyone's ears as it was shown to be Katsuki Bakugou, a blonde with spiky hair and red eyes who had a massive superiority complex who had yet to back it up. well to Izuku at least.
"YOU DONT JUST CALL US REJECTS WE ARE IN THE SAME CLASS BAKUGOU" most of the class reprimanded Bakugou for being his old and arrogant self "OH SHUT UP EXTRA'S ILL TAKE YOU ALL ON IN A FIGHT AND WIN EASILY" The blonde said along with his ego. "Bakugou Katsuki, you do have an impressive quirk, and I see your planning to go into UA, is that right?" the class was in awe that someone was planning to go to UA "UA! THAT INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL" "it has a 0.2 acceptance rate" "he might be able to do it because of that explosion quirk" the class gossiped at Bakugou for his plans "THATS RIGHT EXTRA'S ILL BE THE FIRST IN ALDERA TO GET TO UA. ILL BE THE ONE TO SURPASS ALL MIGHT AND BECOME THE RICHEST HERO OF ALL TIME" Bakugou said in his cocky, overconfident tone. "It says here that Midoriya? Midoriya Izuku is choosing to go to UA as well." the class was silent as ever learning the fact that the most feared guy in Aldera is planning to go to UA as well. Bakugou was fuming in anger that someone else was going to UA along with him "YOU USELESS DEKU WHAT DO YOU PLAN ON DOING GOING TO UA YOU QUIRKLESS SHIT!" Katsuki screamed out in rage at the calm and focused boy who simply responded in the most basic way possible "is there any issue? why cant I go to UA but you can?" Izuku replied to Bakugou's Quirkist comment with calmness and rationality
"ENOUGH. MIDORIYA DONT ANTAGONISE HIM, Bakugou be silent." the teacher responded to both of the boys as Bakugou was still fuming in anger just waiting for the day to be over so he can put the 'Quirkless Nerd' in his place, while Midoriya was just waiting peacefully until the day was over.
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3:15 PM
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The bell had just rang and the day was over, everyone was packing there bags and ready to leave while Midoriya was looking through his journal analysis for the future No.13 just to put all the notes he written in the morning to memory. once he was done he packed his bag by putting all his school items and his journal but before he could put his journal in he was intercepted by Bakugou and Two of his Lackies that tagged along with him "OI DEKU, DID YOU NOT HEAR ME, I SAID FOR YOU TO NOT GO TO UA YOU USELESS FUCK" the blonde screamed out as his two lackies make two insignificant comments that did not mean anything to him " Yeah you may be big and muscular but you are still Quirkless which makes you weak and pathetic." "Yeah you green gorilla." Midoriya paid no attention to any of them since he was waiting for the right moment to show off his immense power, but for now he just had to make it past 10 months until the entrance exam and demonstrate to everyone.
A zipper sound was heard and caught the attention of Midoriya and what he saw was Bakugou holding his No.13 Journal in his hand and laughed "THE HELL IS THIS DEKU ARE YOU REALLY GETTING SO DESPERATE IN ORDER TO GET TO UA. YOU HAVE TO STALK PEOPLE AND LEARN ABOUT THEM? YOU ARE SUCH A USELESS FREAK, DEKU" he puts the journal in between his hands and let off an explosion, which gave the journal some large burn marks. This did bother Midoriya in the end but gave no reaction or satisfaction to Bakugou, even when he throws it out the window into the koi pond he gives no reaction or movement. This pissed Bakugou off that no matter what he did, Izuku would not care in the slightest "YOU IGNORING ME DEKU, YOU THINK YOUR BETTER THEN ME YOU DEFENSELESS BITCH!" the green haired teen gave no response other then a glare, that one action caused Bakugou to attack with his quirk "AAAAAAGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH" Bakugou used his quirk to attack Izuku at point blank which surprised his two lackies but they smirked at the thought of the 'Quirkless boy on the floor crying his eyes out in pain'.
when the smoke cleared it revealed Midoriya in a slightly burned school uniform but without any physical injuries, he didn't even move or flinch or blinked. Midoriya just shook it off like it was nothing "SEEMS YOUR NOT AS WEAK AS A STICK YOU QUIRKLESS WEAKLING, BUT YOUR STILL A BUG I CAN EASILY SMASH." Bakugou scowled but went towards the door and said a sentence that even surprised the green head "you know, there is a way of getting a quirk. GO TAKE A SWAN DIVE OFF THE ROOF AND PRAY FOR A QUIRK IN YOUR NEXT LIFE" that sentence caught Midoriya off guard which caused there to be a slow build up of anger but quickly got smothered as he reminded himself of the entrance exam in 10 months time and that bickering about Bakugou now would be a waste of time. He quickly grabbed his bag and made his way outside to grab his notebook before it was completely destroyed.
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Outside Aldera Middle School
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'he caught me off guard with that sentence telling me to kill myself, I knew he was not a good person but he is just a villain at this point, who used his quirk illegally to cause harm along with being Quirkist and telling someone to kill themself. when the right moment comes ill show him who I really am and beat him while breaking his pride and ego' he kept on walking and thinking to himself deciding on what to do next "Sorry Kid, nothing personal I just need an extra skinsuit!" a being made out of sludge and smelled like a sewer appeared behind Izuku . The slime villain hoping the kid was defenceless and weak but how wrong he was.
with a simple wave of Izuku's hand the villain was pushed back several meters using wind pressure "Why you little BRAT!" the villain lunged at the teen but a orange flash appeared in the teen's eyes and the villain was pulverized leaving holes in its body and pushed back again "HOW ARE YOU SO STRONG BRA-" the villain did not get to finish his sentence when he heard a metal clanging behind him, when he turned around he was filled with dread...
"FEAR NOT CITIZEN. HOPE HAS ARRIVED. BECAUSE I AM HERE." Izuku immediately recognized the voice of what hero this was. It was the number one hero of Japan. The Symbol Of Peace.
ALL MIGHT.
All right that is the first chapter done and if I'm being honest it was more harder then I thought. but then again its my first chapter and first story so its to be expected. ill try and release as soon as I can, so maybe ill get a chapter done every 3 days if they are as long as this one and they might be delayed due to how weird can be to new story creators but in given time they wont be delayed.
for the next chapter it will be the sludge villain incident along with a talk with all might so it might be the same length or shorter or longer so the due date could be whenever, since as I said before I might drop this but I would rather not so. if you would want me to I could make the chapters shorter then this one, this was just my first go at making a chapter and it seems pretty well but my opinion on my story means absolutely nothing so I need other people to do it for me.
I would appreciate comments I will read them just to see your thoughts and what you would want and see if I can add it to my story (but probably not)
And what do you think of Izuku right now? do you think him having the same personality as Jiren suits him or no?
